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Hi everyone. Hope everyone is doing great in their lives. Starting a new story which I hope you all will like. As usual constructive criticism is welcomed. Thanks.

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Seth Karamchand jiska umar 35-36 saal tha woh shaam ke lagbhag 8 baje apne ghar pahuncha.Uska ghar sheher se thoda door bahot lamba chauda zameena par bana hua tha.Ghar kya woh raiso ka bungla tha, croro ka ghar.Ghar ke darwaze ke paas gaadiyon ke rakhne ka jagah tha aur uske saamne bada sa garden.Uska aese karobaar to gehne jewar ka tha magar iske alawa bhi side se dhandha tha jiske baare mein kewal uski biwi aur kuchh khaas log hi jaante the jo uss dhandhe se uske saath jude hue the.

Woh jab ghar pahuncha to ghar ke saamne ek fortuner dikhai diya.Uske saamne ghar ke darwaze ke paas ek Jaguar aur uske aage ek BMW tha jo uska khud ka tha.Khud ka bole to khareeda to usi ka hua tha magar chalati thi uski biwi.Kabhi BMW to kabhi Jaguar uski biwi aese hi jo dil mein aata usi mein ghumti thi.

Fortuner ka number dekh kar woh samajh gaya ki woh kiska gaadi hai.Khair uske ghar ke saamne jo road bana hua tha woh itna chauda tha ki do gaadi aa jaa sake aur saath hi iss hisaab se bana hua tha ki gaadi ghumana na pade.Matlab oval shape ke tarah road bana hua tha jiska nukila side gate ke taraf tha.

Itna raees hone ke baawjud bhi woh kanjus tha.Itna kanjus ki usne driver bhi nahin rakha tha aur khud hi gaadi chala tha.Agar kanjusi kisi ek cheez mein nahin tha to woh tha uski biwi ke shauq pura karne mein.Aesa nahin tha ki woh khud se uske upar paise lutata ho.Uske paas itni himmat nahin thi ki apni biwi ko kisi cheez ke liye mana kar sake.Halanki uski biwi controlling ya dramebaaz nahin thi magar use kisi cheez ke liye na nukar pasand nahin tha aur woh iss mamle mein sakhti barapti thi aur Karamchand ka bhi uske saamne bolne ya bahes karne ka himmat nahin hota tha.

Woh gaadi se utar kar ghar ke ander living room mein pahuncha to sofe par usi ka umar ka ek lamba chauda aadmi sofe par araam se baaya haath sofe ke head rest par phailaye hue baitha cigarette pee raha tha.Uska umar 40 ke aas paas hi tha magar jahan Karamchand ka pet thoda nikla hua tha aur badan dheela tha wahin woh aadmi lamba chauda hone ke saath saath muscular bhi tha.Woh bahot hi fit nahin tha.Uska bhi pet nikla hua tha magar Karamchand jitna nahin.Upar se woh lagbhag 6 feet ka tha to uska thoda sa nikla pet samajh nahin aata tha.Karamchand 5 feet 8 inches ke aas paas hi tha.

Woh aadmi ka rang kaala tha.Woh blue jeans aur kaala shirt pehna hua tha.Shirt ka upar ka do button khula hua tha jisse uske seene ka baal dikh raha tha.Gale mein pehna chain uske seene tak latak raha tha.Baaye haath ke kalai mein bracelet pehna hua tha.

Woh usko araam se baitha cigarette peete hue dekh bola,"Are Raghu tum is waqt yahan kya kar raha hai?"

Yeh sunnkar Raghu uske taraf dekha magar isse pehle woh kuchh bolta ek aurat ki awaaz aayi,"Raghu ko maine bulaya hai".

Yeh sunnkar Karamchand aur Raghu dono ka nazar awaaz ke disha mein gaya.Woh awaaz seedhi ke taraf se aa raha tha.Jab dono ka nazar udhar pada to ek jawaan aur bahot hi khoobsurat aurat seedhi se utar rahi thi.Uski umar 30 ke aas paas lag rahi thi aur height 5'5" ke kareeb thi jo heel pehenkar 5'8" ho gayi thi.

Woh bhi Raghu ke shirt ke tarah kaala saree pehni huyi thi jo uske gore badan par achha lag raha tha.Usne ek chhota sa blouse pehna hua tha jisme uski cleavage kuchh hadd tak dikh rahi thi.Low waist saree hone aur saree ka anchal baaye taraf karke seedha baaye kandhe ke taraf karke pin karne ke kaaran uski pet aur nabhi saaf saaf dikh rahi thi.Uski pet pura sapaat tha, zara bhi charbi nahin thi aur pet ke beech mein naabhi se ek lamba sa belly button ring latak raha tha jo light mein chamak rahi thi.

Uski kamar patli thi magar uske upar uski chunchi aur neeche uski gaand badi thi jiske kaaran uski figure curvy thi.Motapa zara bhi nahin thi usme, bas chunchi aur gaand badi thi baaki jisam par zara bhi charbi nahin thi.Uski gale mein ek chain uski cleavage ke shuruaat tak latak rahi thi.Maang mein ek chhota sa sindur aur haath mein clutch bag tha.Woh kisi model se kam nahin lag rahi thi aur dono Karamchand aur Raghu apna nazar uss aurat se hata nahin paa rahe the.

Woh aurat jab utar kar unke paas aayi tab Karamchand usse puchha,"Garima tumne bulaya hai magar kyun? Woh bhi itni raat ko?"

Yeh sunnkar Garima uske taraf thoda gusse se dekhkar boli,"Isliye kyunki tumhe to kuchh yaad rehta hi nahin hai.Aur koi zyada raat nahin hua hai.8 hi baj rahe hain abhi."

Karamchand yeh sunnkar soch mein pad gaye aur yaad karne ka koshish karte hue puchha,"Mujhe yaad nahin rehta? Main kya bhul gaya Garima?"

Yeh sunnkar Garima waise hi gusse se use dekhti huyi boli,"Ab jab yaad nahin hai to chhoro.Ghar mein baith kar paise gino main baahar jaa rahi hoon".

Garima ka mood kharab dekh Karamchand pyaar se dubara puchha,"Are Garima kam se kam bolo to ki aakhir main kya bhul gaya aur uske liye tum abhi baahar kyun jaa rahi ho".

Garima use dekhkar gusse se boli,"Aaj kaun sa din hai?"

Yeh sunnkar Karamchand ek pal sochkar bola,"Aaj mangalwar hai.Kyun?".

Yeh sunnkar Garima waise hi gusse mein boli,"Exactly.Aaj char din ho gaye movie release hue aur kitne spoilers aa gaye hain internet par.Isliye main first day hi movie dekh leti hoon,lekin tumne iss baar sab gadbad kar diya"

Yeh sunnkar Karamchand ko dhyaan aaya ki Garima kya bolna chah rahi hai aur uske gusse ka kaaran kya hai.Woh baat ko sambhalne ke liye bola,"Ohh Garima.I am sorry,main bhul gaya tha.Chalo ab tum tayyar ho gayi to chalte hain."

Garima use gusse se dekhti huyi boli,"Koi zarurat nahin hai. Main Friday ko hi dekhne ke liye boli thi magar tumne bahana bana diya ki Friday ko kaam hai,Saturday ko le chaloge.Magar Saturday ko tum late se aaye aur ticket waste ho gaya.Kal bhi (Monday) tum late se aaye.Maine mann bana liya tha ki aaj jaise bhi movie dekhungi woh bhi tumhare bina.Woh to achha hua ki din mein main Raghu se baat kar rahi thi to pata chala ki woh aaj raat yehi movie dekhne ka plan kar raha tha aur usne mujhe saath chalne ke liye kaha.Ab main Raghu se waada kar chuki hoon to usi ke saath jaungi".

Yeh sunte hi ki Raghu ke saath uski khoobsurat aur jawaan biwi movie dekhne jaa rahi hai, woh bhi raat ke 9 baje wala show Karamchand thoda ghabda gaya.Woh Garima ka gussa dekhkar use mana karne ka soch bhi nahin sakta tha to woh kuchh aur sochkar sang sang bola,"Par Garima itni raat ka plan kyun banayi ho? Shaam mein bhi to jaa sakti thi".

Yeh sunte hi Garima gusse se boli,"Sirf tumhe hi kaam rehta hai kya?Baaki duniya nithalle baithe hain,hun? Raghu ko bhi kaam rehta hai.Shaam mein uske paas time nahin tha to raat ka plan banaya hai.Aur mujhe samajh nahin aa raha ki tumhe kya issue ho raha agar main raat ka show dekhun to?"

Karamchand yeh sunnkar pyaar se bola,"Are Garima raat ko safety ka issue rehta hai isliye bol raha hoon".

Garima ka gussa thoda shant ho chuka tha aur woh yeh sunnkar haste hue boli,"Haha safety issue? What nonsense!Peekar aaye ho kya? Yeh shaher hai,koi jungle nahin. Aur aese bhi apni gaadi se jaana aana hai, koi public transport to use karna nahin hai".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar thoda sharminda ho gaya.Use dhyaan aaya ki Garima ke saamne beqaar ka bahana chalne wala nahin hai phir bhi woh koshish kar raha tha ki Garima ko jaane se roke.Woh yeh sunnkar bola,"Haan phir bhi."

Garima yeh sunnkar irritate hokar puchhi,"phir bhi kya?"

Yeh sunnkar Raghu jo itni der se chup chap Garima ke bagal mein khada sab sunn raha tha woh kadak awaaz mein bola,"Ae seth kahe ko faltu ka baqwaas kar rela hai.Seedha seedha bolna ki tu nahin chahta teri biwi apun ke saath filam dekhne jaye".

Baat to sahi tha magar Karamchand yeh saaf saaf bol nahin sakta tha.Raghu ko to woh bol sakta tha magar Garima ke saamne bolne se use darr tha ki woh gussa na ho jaye.Woh na hi "haan" bol sakta tha aur na hi yeh bol sakta tha ki use Garima ka Raghu ke saath jaane mein koi issue nahin hai.Isliye woh baat ko ghuma kar bola,"Raghu main apni biwi se baat kar raha hoon, tum beech mein mat bolo".

Yeh sunnkar Raghu gussa ho gaya,"Ae seth tumhari biwi hai to saala tumko lekar jaana chahiye na ise.Saala tum isko filam dikha deta to itna drama nahin hota.Aur aese bhi apun ko shauq nahin tumhari biwi ko ghumane ka.Woh to apun pilan banayela tha aaj aur tumhari biwi bhi pilan banayeli thi to socha ki saath hi dekh lenge filam.Apun ko kya maalum ki tum dono ke beech kya drama chal rela hai."

Yeh sunnkar Garima phir se gussa hone lagi aur woh kabhi Raghu ko dekhti huyi uska baat sunnti to kabhi gusse se Karamchand ke taraf dekh rahi thi. Raghu ka yeh bolna ki use Garima ko ghumane ka koi shauq nahin hai Garima ke ego ko thoda hurt karta hai, magar woh iska zimmedaar apne pati ko maan rahi thi yeh sochkar ki Raghu aesa isliye bola kyunki uska pati bewajah ke drame kar raha tha.

Raghu Garima ko dekhkar bola,"Ae sethani,pehle apna gharelu drama niptao. Apun ko iss lafre mein nahin padne ka".

Ek to Garima apne pati Karamchand par pehle se hi gussa thi ki woh use movie dikhane ka waada karke bhul gaya tha,upar se abhi uska rok tok dekh uska aur mood kharab hone laga.

Woh gusse se apne pati ko dekhkar boli,"Off ho kya drama laga rakhe ho jaane waqt.Ek to tum bolkar bhi mujhe movie dikhane nahin le gaye aur upar se jab Raghu mujhe le ja raha hai to tum drama kar rahe ho."

Phir woh Raghu ke taraf dekhkar boli,"Aur tumse kitni baar kaha hai mujhe sethani mat kaha karo. Aesa lagta hai jaise main koi budhiya hun".

Yeh sunnkar Raghu hasne laga,"hahaha".Raghu ko hasta dekh Garima use banawati gusse se dekhi to Raghu haste hue bola,"Achha theek hai nahin bolega apun.Lekin yeh apne seth ko bolo saala apun ka mood kharab nahin karne ke liye".

Garima yeh sunnkar apne pati ko dekhkar boli,"Dekho bewajah ka hum dono ka mood kharab mat karo.Mujhe pata hai tum dono ke beech nahin banta hai lekin yeh tum dono ki aapas ki baat hai.Iske liye mera mood kharab mat karo. Abhi yeh mujhe movie dikhane le jaa raha hai aur main ja rahi hoon.That's it. Abhi ek word bhi tumhare munh se nikla to mujhse bura koi nahin hoga".

Karamchand yeh sunte hi chup ho gaya. Garima use ek nazar gusse se dekhi aur phir Raghu ke taraf dekhkar boli,"Chalo Raghu, nahin to late ho jayegi aur movie ka initial part miss ho jayegi".

Raghu yeh sunnkar bola,"Chalo sethani".

Yeh sunnkar Garima Raghu ko gusse se dekhi to Raghu has diya,"hahaha".

Garima usko hasta dekh boli,"Phir? Ab tum bhi mera mood kharab mat karo.".

Raghu hasta hua bola,"Achha theek hai ab nahin bolenga. Chalo".

Yeh sunnkar Garima Raghu ka baanh pakadti huyi boli,chalo" aur dono darwaze ke taraf chal diye.

Karamchand yeh sab chup chap dekh raha tha. Use khud par gussa aa raha tha ki woh kyun Garima ko film dikhana bhool gaya. Woh dono ko jaate hue dekhne laga. Uski biwi jo kuchh second pehle uske saamne khadi usi ke height ki lag rahi thi aur uske aankhon mein dekhti huyi baat kar rahi thi woh Raghu ke bagal mein usse lagbhag 4-5 inches chhoti lag rahi thi. Chalte waqt uski badi gaand hil rahi thi aur saree gaand par tight bandhe hone ke kaaran gaand ka pura shape pata chal raha tha. Uske upar uski peeth backless blouse mein lagbhag puri nangi thi jo gori hone ke kaaran roshni mein chamak rahi thi.

Kuchh seconds tak Karamchand apni biwi ko dekhta raha phir jaise hi Raghu darwaze ke baye taraf ghuma apna fortuner ke taraf jaane ke liye to Garima uski baanh pakdi boli,"Jaguar mein chalte hain".

Karamchand yeh sab dekh raha tha. Agle pal woh Garima ko Raghu ke taraf chabi badhate hue dekha. Garima Raghu ko chabi deti huyi boli,"Yeh lo".

Raghu Garima ke haath se chabi liya aur gaadi ke dusre taraf jaakar Garima ke liye darwaza khol diya. Garima Raghu ke taraf muskurati huyi dekhi aur boli,"Thank you".

Raghu phir driver seat ke taraf aakar gaadi mein baith gaya aur gaadi wahan se chali gayi. Karamchand yeh sab dekhne ke baad sofe par baithne ke liye ghuma ki tabhi uska nazar ghar ki naukrani par pada jo khud darwaze ke taraf dekh rahi thi.

Karamchand usko dekhkar bola,"Kya dekh rahi ho? Jao chai banao".

Karamchand ka awaaz sunte hi naukrani chaunkkar uske taraf dekhi aur uska baat sunte hi hadbada kar "ji saheb" bolkar kitchen ke taraf chali gayi. Karamchand phir sofe par baith gaya aur newspaper lekar padhne laga.

Lagbhag 5 minute baad uski naukrani chai lekar aayi aur chai table par rakhkar boli,"Saheb chai".

Karamchand akhbar padhte hue bina naukrani ke taraf dekhe "hmm" karke akhbar padhte raha. Kuchh seconds baad woh chai lene ke liye akhbar se nazar hatakar table ke taraf haath badhaya to dekha ki naukrani wahin khadi thi.

Karamchand usse puchha,"Ab kya hua? Yahan khadi kyun ho?"

Naukrani ghabrati huyi usse boli,"Ji saheb puchhna tha ki khane mein kya banau"

Yeh sunnkar Karamchand thoda gusse mein bola,"Are to yeh Garima se puchhna tha na. Woh jaa rahi thi to use ghur ghur kar dekh rahi thi to yeh puchhne ka khyaal nahin aaya?"

Naukrani ghabrati huyi phir boli,"Saheb memsaahab se puchha tha maine. Woh boli ki woh baahar mein hi khana khayegi. Aapke liye aapse puchh kar kuchh bana du".

Yeh sunnkar Karamchand chai ki chuski lekar bola,"Theek hai. Jo bhi mann kare bana do".

Naukrani sir hilati huyi "ji saheb" bolkar wahan se chali gayi. Kuchh minute baad Karamchand chai peekar upar apne kamre mein chala gaya. Naukrani usko upar jaate dekh dheere se boli,"Khadus kahin ka. Biwi ke saamne munh nahin khulta hai aur mere upar robb dikhata hai,hunh".

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Karamchand raat ko khaana khane ke baad balcony mein peene baitha tha. Thodi der peene ke baad woh Garima ko phone lagaya magar woh nahin uthai. Karamchand time dekha to 10:40 baj rahe the. Woh samajh gaya ki woh movie dekhne mein busy hogi. Thoda peene ke baad woh kamre mein jaakar news dekhne laga. Lagbhag ek ghanta news dekhne ke baad woh Garima ko phone lagaya to woh nahin uthai. Karamchand phir time dekha to 11:35 baj rahe the. Woh phir channel change karne laga.

Kuchh seconds baad Garima ka message aaya,"Is there anything important?".

Karamchand reply kiya,"No,nothing important".

Iske baad Karamchand type kar raha tha,"Just wanted to know when you will be back" ki tabhi Garima reply ki,"Then stop bothering me and let me enjoy the movie".

Karamchand yeh padhne ke baad apna message ko edit karne laga,"Sorry, just wanted to know when you will be back" aur phir send kar diya.

Karamchand reply ke liye wait kar raha tha magar message grey hi reh gaya.Karamchand kuchh der baad phir message dekha to woh grey hi tha. Woh phir news dekhne laga.Beech beech mein woh message dekhta magar woh grey hi tha. Lagbhag 12 baje use neend aane laga aur woh so gaya.

Karamchand ka neend subah 7:30 baje khula. Woh bistar par apne bagal mein dekha to uski biwi nahin thi. Yeh dekhte hi woh ghabra gaya aur apna mobile dekha. Uske uski biwi ka message the jise dekhkar use thoda raahat mehsus hua.

Woh message par click kiya aur padhne laga,"after watching the movie and having dinner. Now please stop bothering me. Mera mood aate waqt aese hi kharab kar chuke ho ab baar baar phone karke aur kharab mat karo. Go to sleep. GN".

Yeh padhne ke baad woh hadbada kar utha aur neeche gaya. Neeche gaya to use naukrani ka awaaz sunai diya "Good morning saheb".

Karamchand naukrani ka awaaz ignore karke darwaze ke paas gaya to use Jaguar car wahan dikhai diya magar Raghu ka fortuner dikhai nahin diya. Yeh dekhte hi use thoda raahat mila magar phir kuchh sochkar woh waapas upar gaya aur dusre room mein kholkar dekha to woh khali tha. Woh baaki ke do room mein bhi dekha magar woh dono bhi khali tha.

Thak kar woh apne kamre mein jaakar Garima ko call lagaya magar koi response nahin mila. Woh bathroom chala gaya aur brush karke waapas neeche gaya aur table se akhbaar uthaya hi tha ki use kuchh dhyaan aaya aur woh uthkar living room ke peeche wale hisse mein gaya.

Udhar gym tha jo pura sheeshe se ghera hua tha. Woh gym ke nazdeek pahuncha to use Garima tread mill par daudti huyi dikhai di. Yeh dekhkar use thoda raahat mila. Woh gym ka darwaza kholkar ander gaya to gaana baj raha tha. Phir uska nazar ek side par rakhe hue ek table par gaya jahan Garima ka mobile rakha hua tha. Karamchand samajh gaya ki Garima uska call receive kyun nahin ki.

Woh uske mobile ke taraf dekhne ke baad Garima ke taraf waapas dekha to use treadmill ke saamne aaine se uske taraf hi dekhte hue paya. Karamchand use dekhkar muskuraya aur jor se "Good Morning" wish kiya jiske jawaab mein Garima bhi daudti huyi use wish ki.

Karamchand Garima ko ek nazar dekha. Woh gym leggings aur ek sports bra peheni huyi thi. Uss sports bra mein uski chunchiyan pahaad ke jaisi uthi huyi thi aur leggings mein uski gaand ki dono bhago ka shape saaf saaf pata chal rahi thi.Sirf gaand ki shape hi nahin dono gaand ke bhag ke beech ki daraar bhi saaf saaf pata chal rahi thi. Daudne se uss leggings mein uski gaand ki dono bhaag hil rahi thi.

Karamchand Garima ke jism ko dekhne ke baad aaine mein uske chehre par dekh kar muskuraya aur phir waapas jaane wala tha ki Garima use ishara karke apne paas bulayi. Karamchand uske paas gaya to woh daudti huyi boli,"Kya baat hai aaj gym mein?Tabiyat theek hai to? Ya subah subah pee liye ho?"

Karamchand yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"Are nahin darling kaisi baat kar rahi ho. Tumko dekhne aaya tha. Kal to tumko bas thodi der ke liye hi dekha tha".

Garima daudti huyi boli,"Hmm. Ab aa gaye ho to thodi exercise bhi kar lo. Pet kitna nikal gaya hai tumhara. Health par bilkul bhi dhyaan nahin dete ho. Abhi se buddhe lagne lage ho".

Phir Garima apne bagal mein lage ek aur treadmill ke taraf ishara karti huyi boli,"Chalo shuru ho jao".

Karamchand ka mann to nahin tha magar woh Garima ko phir se naraz nahin karna chahta tha isliye chup chap treadmill ke taraf chala gaya. Woh treadmill par chadhkar use on karne laga to Garima phir bolne lagi,"Itne pyaar se maine yeh gym banwaya tha, treadmill bhi do lagaya taaki hum dono saath gym kar sake magar tumhe meri baat ki kadar to chhoro apne health ki khud chinta nahin rehti hai".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar kuchh nahin bola bas treadmill shuru karke daudne laga. Garima bhi daudna jaari rakhi. Lagbhag ek minute hote hote woh hanfne laga. Usko hanfta dekh Garima boli,"speed kam kar lo. Shuru mein thodi mushqil hogi but aadat lag jaane par sab theek hoga phir tez kar sakte ho".

Garima yeh boli hi thi ki Karamchand treadmill ka speed kam karke utar gaya aur woh treadmill ko switch off kar diya. Garima yeh dekhkar Karamchand me taraf narazgi se dekhi.

Karamchand Garima ka expression dekhkar bola,"Mujhe walk par jaana hai. Logo se milna hai. Yahan bandh kamre mein mujhse exercise nahin hoga".

Garima daudti huyi boli,"Bahane banana bandh karo. Shaadi ke 5 saal ho gaye hain magar phir bhi bahane aese bana rahe ho jaise main samjhungi nahin. Park pahunchne mein 5 minute lagta hai yahan se aur aane mein 5 minute. 10 minute walk karne se kuchh nahin hone wala".

Garima aage boli,"10 minute walk karte ho aur ek ghante baithkar retired uncles ke saath gappe ladate ho. Gappe lada lada ke gol gappe jaise hote ja rahe ho. Khair tumhari marzi. Main to bol bol kar thak chuki hoon. Meri sunte kahan ho".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar bola,"Garima main kam se kam thoda walk to karta hi hoon. Jitna mujhse hota hai main karta hoon. Aur raha baat gappe ladane ka to main to kaam ki baat karta hoon. Idhar udhar ki altu faltu ki baatein nahin karta. Politics, business, stock market yeh sab topics par discussion chalta hai."

Garima yeh sunnkar daudti huyi boli,"Theek hai theek hai. Jo marzi karo. Ab jao aur mujhe workout karne do".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"Ok darling. Enjoy your workout".

Garima daudti huyi boli,"Yes I do and I will". Karamchand yeh sunnkar wahan se chala gaya. Woh table se akhbaar uthakar park ke taraf chala gaya. Ek ghante baad jab woh waapas aakar bedroom mein gaya to bathroom se paani ka awaaz aa raha tha. Woh samajh gaya ki Garima naha rahi thi. Lagbhag 20 minute baad woh bathroom se nikli. Uski baal mein towel lapeta hua tha aur woh ek robe pehni huyi thi. Use dekhkar Karamchand muskuraya to woh bhi muskura di aur jaakar apni dressing table ke paas baith gayi. Wahin Karamchand bathroom mein nahane chala gaya.

Woh lagbhag 15 minute baad nahakar aaya to Garima aaine ke paas baithi apni baal dry kar rahi thi. Karamchand tayyar hokar neeche nashta karne chala gaya. Uske jaane ke lagbhag 10 minute baad Garima neeche gayi. Woh ek salwar kameez pehni huyi thi. Gehre gale ki kameez mein uski cleavage dikh rahi thi. Kameez tight hone ke kaaran uski curvy figure aur badi chunchiyon ka shape achhe se pata chal raha tha. Dono pati patni uske baad nashta karne lage aur nashta ke baad Karamchand office chala gaya.

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Lagbhag 10 din beet chuke the jab Garima movie dekhne Raghu ke saath gayi thi. Iske beech dono ke beech phone par baat chit aur chatting chalti rehti thi magar mulaqat nahin hua tha.



Karamchand raat mein ghar aaya aur chai peekar kamre mein gaya to uski biwi Garima ke balcony se hasne ki awaaz aa rahi thi. Karamchand balcony ke darwaze ke paas jaakar dekha to Garima baithi kisi se phone par baat kar rahi thi aur saath hi beer ki chuski le rahi thi. Woh yeh dekh hi raha tha ki Garima ki nazar uske taraf gayi. Karamchand use dekhkar haath uthakar dheere se hello bola to Garima bhi haath uthakar reply dekar baat karne mein lagi rahi. Woh wireless earphone use kar rahi thi aur woh mobile table par rakhi huyi thi.



Karamchand waapas chala aaya aur phir bathroom mein nahane chala gaya. Woh naha kar kapde pehenkar bed par baitha hi tha ki Garima balcony se aayi aur uske saamne khadi hokar puchhi,"tumhare paas Raghu ke paise hai?"



Yeh sunnkar Karamchand uski taraf dekha aur muskurate hue bola,"Garima ab yeh sab kya hai? Tum yeh sab mein kyun.. "



Isse pehle ki woh pura bolta woh sakhti se boli,"Ab batein mat banao. Jo puchha hai uska jawaab do".



Karamchand yeh sunnkar bola,"Haan, mera matlab nahin. Uska paisa mere paas nahin hai".



Garima yeh sunnkar sakhti se boli,"Haan ya naa, sach sach batao".



Karamchand Garima ko dekhkar muskurate hue bola,"Darling tum yeh sab mein kyun pad rahi ho. Yeh mere aur Raghu ke beech ki baat hai. Tum please... "



Isse pehle ki Karamchand pura bolta, Garima beech mein bol padi," Yeh tumhare aur uske beech ki baat hai to tum uska call receive kyun nahin kar rahe ho? Haan? Use paise ki zarurat hai aur ek to tum paise de nahin rahe ho aur uska phone bhi receive nahin kar rahe ho. Itni baar tumhe call karne ke baad last mein mujhe call karke puchha tumhare baare mein. Woh bhi mujhe involve karna nahin chahta tha magar maine hi insist kiya ki agar koi important baat hai to mujhe bata de main tumko bata dungi. Jaante ho kitna gusse mein tha woh".



Karamchand yeh sunnkar Garima ka haath pakad kar bola,"Darling tum bhi uss gunde ki baaton mein kyun aa rahi ho. Uska paisa nahin hai mere paas. Sachi. Tum uske wajah se apna mood kyun kharab kar rahi ho".



Garima yeh sunnkar sakhti se boli,"Uske wajah se ya tumhare wajah se. Agar tum usse baat kar liye hote to mujhe woh call nahin karta aur main involved nahin hoti. Ab phone karke usse baat karo, abhi".



Karamchand yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"Darling main kar lunga baat. Tum ab iski chinta chhoro. Tumko pareshan dekhkar mujhe achha.."



Karamchand itna hu bola tha ki Garima bed ke paas table par rakhe uske mobile ke taraf gayi aur Karamchand yeh dekhte hue haare hue swar mein baat ko pura kiya,"nahin lagta".



Garima uska phone laakar usko deti huyi sakhti se boli,"Now".



Karamchand phone lekar Raghu ko call kiya. Dusre taraf se Raghu phone receive karke bola,"Kyun be seth, itna der se call receive kahe ko nahin kar rela tha? Saala apun ka paisa maarne ka chakkar mein hai? Aesa sapne mein bhi nahin sochne ka kya?"



Garima Karamchand ke paas hi khadi thi to use thodi bahot Raghu ki baatein sunai de raha tha.



Karamchand yeh sunnkar bola,"Are Raghu kyun itna gussa kar rahe ho. Maine tumhara paisa kabhi maara hai jo iss baar marunga".



Raghu yeh sunnkar bola,"Abe apun ka paisa maarne ka to himmat tere mein hai bhi nahin, magar saala jaan bujhkar tu paisa dene mein late kar rela hai taaki apun ka paisa se bhi kuchh kamao kar le. Saala pichhla teen baar se aesa hich kar rela hai. Late se apun ka paisa de rela hai. Apun isse pehle kuchh nahin bola magar iss baar apun ko paise ki zarurat hai. Sharafat se paisa de de kal apun ko".



Karamchand yeh sunnkar pyaar se bola,"Are Raghu abhi pura paisa mila kahan hai. Agli baar jo paisa milega usse tum apna hissa le lena".



Raghu yeh sunnkar bhadak gaya,"Abe seth tere ko sunai nahin diyela. Apun ko paisa ka zarurat hai kal aur tu bol rela hai agli baar ka wasuli mein lene ke liye. Saala tere se jitna sharafat se pesh aata hai apun utna hich sar par chadh kar nachta hai tu. Zyada drama karenga to tere saath kaam nahin karenga apun. Apun apne baap jaisa nahin hai".



Yeh sunnkar Karamchand bhi bhadak gaya,"Ja ja bahot dekhe tere jaise. Dhamki kisko deta hai. Tere se aadha paisa mein tere jaise bahot aa jayega kaam karne ke liye".



Raghu yeh sunnkar gusse mein bola,"Abe seth apun ko kisi se compare nahin karne ka. Apun jaanta hai apun kya cheez hai. Chup chap kal paisa de aur uske baad apun ka aur tera raasta alag. Aur saala kal paisa nahin diya to tera gaand tod dega apun."



Yeh akhiri baat sunnkar Karamchand thoda ghabra gaya. Raghu yeh bolkar phone rakh diya. Karamchand bhi phone bistar par rakh diya aur thoda ghabrate hue Garima ke taraf dekha jo use gusse se dekh rahi thi.



Garima sab baat sunn rahi thi. Yahan tak ki Raghu ka aakhiri baat jab woh Karamchand ka gaand todne ka baat bola. Woh Karamchand ko dekhkar gusse mein sakhti se puchhi,"Yeh kya tha? Tum to bol rahe the ki uske paise nahin hain tumhare paas. Mujhse bhi jhooth bol rahe the tum"



Karamchand yeh sunnkar Garima ka haath pakad ke use apne bagal mein baithate hue bola,"Are darling tum kyun gussa ho rahi ho. Sach mein uske paise mere paas nahin hai. Jo paise milne wale the uska 10% hi uska hissa hai aur ab tak sirf 80% hi mila hai."



Garima yeh sunnkar boli,"To iss hisaab se 8%,matlab 80% ka 10% uska hissa hua ya nahin? Wahi to woh maang raha hai magar tum uske paise dene ke bajaye bahane bana rahe ho. Kaam banane ke jagah aur bigad diye. Uske hisse ka paisa tum de dete to kya bigad jaata? Haan?"



Karamchand safai dete hue bola,"Garima maine usse yehi to kaha ki baaki ke paise jab milenge to woh apna hissa rakh lega. Kuchh dino ki hi to baat hai, magar baat samajhna to chhoro, kaise badtameezi se baat kar raha tha mujhse. Uss saandh gunde ke mota dimagh mein kuchh ghusta hi nahin hai upar se badtameezi karta hai. Jaane do, uske jaise bahot gunde milenge kaam karne ke liye. Tumko yeh sab ki chinta karne ki zarurat nahin hai."



Garima yeh sunnkar boli,"Achha? Woh badtameezi kar raha tha to tum kya kar rahe the? Kisi ke bhi paise waqt par nahin doge to woh tumhari aarti nahin utarega. Use paise ki zarurat kal hai to woh kuchh dino ka intezar kaise karega?"



Karamchand ke paas iska jawaab nahin tha to woh chup raha. Usko chup dekh Garima aage boli,"Aur rahi baat uske jaise gunde milne ki to best of luck. Woh jaisa bhi hai humare jaan pehchan ka hai aur usulo wala hai. Zara main bhi to janu aakhir kaun sa aadmi hai jisse tum Raghu ka kaam karwaoge?"



Yeh sunnkar Karamchand thoda soch mein pad gaya magar Garima ke saamne confidence dikhane ke liye kuchh seconds baad hi bola,"Are mil jayenge. Kami thode hi hai uske jaise gunde ki".



Garima phir se boli,"Achha? To batao. Main bhi to jaanu ki tumhari nazar mein kaun aesa gunda hai jo bharosemand ho, humare saath sharafat se pesh aaye,imaandar aur usulo wala ho. Jaante ho aese kisi gunde ko".



Garima "gunde" shabd ko taunt karti huyi Karamchand se boli.



Karamchand yeh sunnkar soch mein pad gaya. Garima usko dekhkar boli,"Khair kaam to tum bigad hi chuke ho. Ab chup chap Raghu ke paisa kal de dena. Main nahin chahti ki woh yahan aakar hungama kare. Aesa woh karna nahin chahega magar use paise ki zarurat hai aur upar se tumne uska mood bhi kharab kar diya hai. Agar uske hungame se bhi tumko fark nahin padne wala hai to yeh soch lo ki phone rakhne se pehle usne kya kaha tha".



Karamchand ko dhyaan aaya ki Raghu ka uska gaand tod dene wala baat Garima sunn li thi. Use thodi sharmindgi mehus ho rahi thi ki uski padhi likhi, khoobsurat, jawaan aur modern biwi Raghu ka ganda baat sunn li thi.



Garima uske bagal se uthti huyi boli,"Aur kisi cheez ka nahin kam se kam apna hi khyaal karo. Main neeche jaa rahi hoon dinner karne. 5 minute mein tum bhi aa jaana".Yeh bolkar woh chali gayi.



Agle din Karamchand ko kaam se dusre shaher jana tha. Woh subah packing kar raha tha ki tabhi Garima neeche gym se workout karke kamre mein aayi aur usko packing karta dekh puchhi,"Yeh kya kar rahe ho? Kahan bhaag rahe ho? Yeh kya bewkoofi hai thode se paise ke wajah se bhaag rahe ho".



Yeh sunnkar Karamchand bola,"Garima main bhaag nahin raha. Kaam se jaa raha hoon".



Garima yeh sunnkar puchhi,"Abhi?to phir Raghu ke paise kab doge?"



Karamchand yeh sunnkar uske taraf dekhkar bola,"De dunga Garima. Tum bhi na. Biwi meri ho aur side uss Raghu ka le rahi ho".



Yeh sunte hi Garima gusse se Karamchand ke taraf dekhi. Garima ka expression dekhte hi Karamchand ko ehsaas ho gaya ki woh kuchh zyada hi bol gaya. Garima gusse se sakht lehje mein boli,"Kisi ki side nahin le rahi main. Jo sahi hai woh bol rahi hoon. Tum bina paise diye chale jaoge to woh yahan aakar hungama karega aur main yeh sab nahin chahti".



Karamchand yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"Relax Garima. Woh tumhare saamne hungama nahin karega khaskar jab main nahin rahunga tab. Main rehta to woh drama karta".



Garima phir sakhti se boli,"Main kuchh nahin sunna chahti. Chup chap jaate waqt uske paise dekar yeh jhamela khatam karo".



Karamchand yeh sunnkar bola,"Garima main waapas aakar de dunga"



Garima phir usse puchhi,"Bye the way tum jaa kahan rahe ho?"



Karamchand waapas packing karte hue bola,"Delhi".



Garima usse puchhi,"aur aana kab hai?"



Karamchand usse bola,"Aaj hi raat mein aa jaunga Garima. Isliye to bol raha hoon ki aakar de dunga"



Yeh sunte hi Garima ka expression phir change ho gaya. Woh sakhti se boli,"Woh raat tak intezaar karne wala nahin hai. Use din mein hi paise ka zarurat hai. Chup chap jaate waqt uske paise dekar yeh jhamela khatam karo. Main ab aur bahane sunna nahin chahti. Pata nahin tumhe kya ho gaya hai. Thode se paise ke liye itna jhamela khada kar diye ho. Kanjusi ki bhi hadd hoti hai".



Yeh sunnkar Karamchand hara hua sa Garima ko dekhne laga. Garima yeh bolkar bathroom mein chali gayi. Aadhe ghante baad woh naha kar waapas aayi to Karamchand kamre mein nahin tha. Woh dressing table par baithkar make up aur hair dry karne lagi. Phir woh ek saree pehenkar tayyar ho gayi aur aaine ke saamne khud ko achhe se dekhkar confirm karne lagi ki woh achhi lag rahi hai ki tabhi use gadi ki awaaz sunai diya. Woh gaadi ka awaaz sunnkar andaaza laga rahi thi ki woh kaun hoga. Woh waapas se daye baaye ghumkar aaine mein khud ko dekhne lagi.

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Kuchh second baad Garima ko neeche se chilla chilli ki awaaz sunai diya to woh boli,"Offo subah subah yehi hona baaki tha". Woh yeh bolkar neeche gayi aur seedhiyon se utar rahi thi ki tabhi Raghu jo sofe par haath phailaye baitha tha woh use dekhkar bola,"Aao sethani aao, tum bhi dekho ki tumhara pati saala kitna bada dhokhebaaz hai. Saala apun ka paisa dene ke wajah se bhaag rela hai".

Garima Raghu ka baat sunti huyi chup chap seedhiyon se utar rahi thi. Karamchand chup chap dining table par baitha naashta kar raha tha. Raghu apna baat jaari rakha,"Saala tumse itna purana jaan pehchan nahin hota to abhi saala pakka tumhara gaand tod deta".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar turant bola,"Raghu yeh shareefon ka ghar hai. Tameez se baat karo. Yahan apna tapori wala gaali mat do".

Raghu yeh sunnkar haste hue bola,"Saala kya joke maar rela hai. Saala shareef aur tu?"

Isse pehle ki Karamchand jawaab mein kuchh bolta Garima dining table ke paas jaakar usse puchhi,"Tum paise lekar neeche nahin aaye".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar Garima se bola,"Are de to diye iske paise. Dekho table par rakha hua hai bag mein".

Garima sofe ke saamne table par rakhe bag ke taraf dekhkar Raghu se boli,"Raghu tumhare paise to mil gaye. Ab jo ho gaya use bhool jao. Baat ko badhane se kya fayeda".

Raghu yeh sunnkar bola,"Saala yeh tumhara pati apun ko chillar samjhela hai kya? 2 lakh 40 hazaar apun ka hissa banta hai aur yeh dedh lakh de rela hai apun ko. Aao sethani tum bhi dekh lo nahin to saala apun hich badnaam ho jayega ki apun gundagardi kar rela hai. Saala apun ko apna hich paisa ke liye jhamela karna pad rela hai"

Garima yeh sunnkar gusse se Karamchand ke taraf dekhi. Karamchand Garima ko expression dekhkar bola,"Are baaki ke paise kal de dunga na. Abhi itna se kaam to chala hi sakta hai."

Raghu yeh sunnkar bola,"Abe seth apun ka kitna se kaam chalenga woh apun samjhega. Tere se apun apna hissa maang rela hai chup chap woh de."

Phir woh Garima ko dekhkar bola,"Saala se jitna pyaar se pesh aa rela hai utna hich drama kar rela hai. Iske jagah dusra koi hota to abhi tak munh tod diyela hota itna drama karne pad".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar bola,"Abe dhamkata kisko hai, tera gundagardi se.... "

Garima yeh sunnkar Karamchand ko beech mein hi sakhti se boli,"Kyun baat ko badha rahe ho? Woh to apna hissa hi maang raha hai na. Abhi ke abhi baaki ke 90 hazaar do Raghu ko aur yeh jhamela khatam karo".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar Garima ko pyaar se bola,"Darling main baat ko badha raha hoon ya yeh. Sunn nahin rahi kaise gundagardi kar raha hai, mujhe dhamka raha hai".

Garima yeh sunnkar gusse wali expression se boli,"Dhamka nahin raha hai bata raha hai ki tumhari itni izzat karta hai isliye bas apna haq maang raha hai. Aur yeh kya gundagardi kar raha hai? Tumhara collar pakda hai ya tumhe peet raha hai?"

Yeh sunnkar Raghu bola,"Saala wahich baaki hai. Wahich karna padenga"

Garima yeh sunnkar Raghu ke taraf dekhkar narazgi jatati huyi boli,"Raghu please".

Raghu yeh sunnkar chup ho gaya.

Garima Karamchand ko sakhti se boli,"Abhi ke abhi baaki 90 hazaar laakar Raghu ko do aur baat khatam karo".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar bola,"Garima mujhe late ho jayegi. Flight bhi pakadna hai".

Garima yeh sunnkar gusse se boli,"Mujhe batao paise kahan rakhe ho. Main laati hoon".

Karamchand phir se hara hua sa Garima ko bola,"Kaan idhar karo".

Garima yeh sunnkar uske taraf kaan ki to Karamchand use bola ki paise kahan rakhe hai usne. Garima yeh sunnkar boli,"Bewajah ka baat badhaye bina bhi yeh ho sakta tha na".

Karamchand bina kuchh bole waapas nashta karne laga. Garima Raghu ke taraf dekhkar boli,"Raghu main laakar deti hoon baaki ke paise. Tab tak tum breakfast kar lo".

Raghu jo sofe par baitha cigarette pee raha tha woh yeh sunnkar bola,"Apun ke paas time nahin hai abhi. Ek kaam se jaana hai".

Garima yeh sunnkar boli,"Theek hai main pack karwa deti hoon".

Phir Garima apni naukrani ko boli,"Shanta Raghu ke liye breakfast pack kar dena to".

Yeh bolkar Garima upar jaane lagi to Raghu bola,"Yeh sab karke koi fayeda nahin sethani. Apun ka mood bahot kharab ho chukela hai".

Garima yeh sunnkar seedhi par se hi uske taraf dekhkar boli,"Shut up. Mere saamne yeh drama nahin chalega".

Raghu yeh sunnkar sofe par phailkar baithe hue cigarette ka kash lagaakar Garima ko upar se neeche dekhne laga. Garima bhi kuchh seconds waise hi khadi rahi aur phir boli,"Main paise lekar aati hoon".

Yeh bolkar woh upar jaane lagi. Raghu cigarette peete hue Garima ki gaand dekhne laga. Thodi der baad Garima paise lekar neeche utri to Karamchand nashta kar chuka tha aur chai pee raha tha.

Garima Raghu ke paas jaakar use paise deti huyi boli,"Yeh lo gin lo. Maine gine nahin hai".

Yeh sunnkar Raghu uski haath se paise lete hue bola,"Tum ginti to apun ginta nahin. Magar saala yeh seth ka ab bharosa nahin hai".

Garima yeh sunnkar Raghu ko dekhkar apni aankhein badi karti huyi boli,"Raghu ab note ki gaddi mein kya gadbad ho sakti hai. Tum bhi na".

Phir woh boli,"Tum gino main breakfast karne ja rahi hoon. Tum kuchh nahin khaoge?".

Raghu yeh sunnkar paise ginte hue Garima ke taraf dekhe bina "na" mein sir hilakar bola,"Nahin".

Garima yeh sunnkar kuchh seconds usko paise ginte dekhi aur phir wahan se chali gayi aur breakfast karne lagi. Kuchh der mein Shanta breakfast pack karke Garima ke paas layi to Garima Raghu ke taraf ishara karti huyi boli,"Raghu ko de do".

Shanta Raghu ke taraf jaane hi wali thi ki Garima Juice ke jug se ek glass juice bharti huyi boli,"Ek minute. Yeh bhi le jao".

Shanta breakfast aur juice ko lekar Raghu ke taraf jaane lagi to Karamchand dheere se bola,"Garima itni khatirdaari karne ki kya zarurat hai".

Garima yeh sunnkar dheere se hi magar sakhti se boli,"Are ghar aaya hua mehmaan hai. Kya kuchh khane ke liye puchh bhi nahin sakti. Tum bhi na hadd karte ho. Ab subah subah mera mood kharab mat karo".

Uske baad Raghu ke paas Shanta breakfast lekar gayi to Raghu jor se bola,"Ae sethani yeh sabse kuchh nahin hone wala. Ab apun ka rasta alag hai. Yeh dhokhebaaz seth ke saath apun kaam nahin karenga".

Garima table par baithi huyi muskurakar boli,"To isse juice ka kya lena dena? Paise to mil gaye na, ab gussa shaant karo aur juice piyo".

Raghu yeh sunnkar apna mobile mein dekhkar bola,"Haan mil giyela itna drama ke baad. Lekin iska matlab yeh nahin ki apun seth ke saath kaam karenga".

Yeh bolkar Raghu mobile ko kaan mein laga liya to Garima kuchh nahin boli. Iss beech Karamchand chai peekar uth gaya aur Garima ke gaal par kiss karke bola,"Bye darling. Take care" aur chala gaya. Jab Karamchand Garima ke gaal par kiss kar raha tha to Raghu ka nazar Garima ke taraf hi tha. Garima ek nazar Raghu ke taraf dekhne ke baad Karamchand ko dekhkar muskurakar jawaab mein boli,"Bye.You too take care".

Karamchand ke jane ke baad Raghu phone disconnect kar diya. Tab tak Garima bhi breakfast kar chuki thi. Raghu phone disconnect karke uthne laga to Garima uske taraf dekhti huyi boli,"Juice".

Raghu yeh dekhkar muskurate hue bola,"Kya baat hai sethani bahot khyaal kar reli ho mera aaj. Saala ek taraf woh seth apun ka paisa maarne mein lagela hai aur dusri taraf sethani apun ka khaatir kar reli hai. Kahin seth ke kehne par zeher to nahin mila diyeli ho juice mein".

Garima yeh sunnkar banawati gusse se boli,"Shut up."

Yeh bolkar Garima dining table se uthi to Raghu hasne laga,"Hahaha".

Garima jawaab mein boli,"Bol to aese rahe ho jaise isse pehle kabhi khaane peene ke liye maine puchha hi nahin hai. Mere pati aur apne jhagre ke beech mein mujhe mat ghaseeto".

Garima itne mein sofe ke paas pahunchi aur woh glass uthakar juice ka ek sip lekar boli,"Ab khush?" aur yeh bolkar woh Raghu ke taraf glass badha di.

Raghu Garima ke haath se glass lekar uski aankhon mein dekha aur phir ek nazar uski jism par daalkar gatagat juice peene laga to Garima boli,"Are araam se baith kar to piyo. Yeh kaise pee rahe ho?"

Raghu juice peekar apna munh saaf karte hue bola,"Itna time nahin hai abhi apun ke paas. Saala tumhara pati aese hich paisa latka kar subah ka time waste kar diyela hai apun ka. Chalta hai apun".

Garima Raghu ko juice peene ke baad haath se munh saaf karta dekh apni sir hilane lagi aur phir mann hi mann boli,"Eeww kabhi sudharne wala nahin hai ye".

Raghu jaane laga to Garima ki nazar table par rakhe breakfast ke pack par pada to woh use uthati huyi boli,"Raghu yeh breakfast to lete hue jao" aur yeh bolkar woh tezi se darwaze ke paas jaakar use breakfast deti huyi boli,"Itni bhi kya jaldi hai. Breakfast to lete hue jao".

Raghu yeh sunnkar Garima ke taraf dekha aur phir uske haath se breakfast lekar bola,"Saala ek taraf woh seth hai jo apun ko dekhne nahin mangta hai aur ek taraf uski biwi sethani hai jo pyar se juice pila reli ha aur breakfast de reli hai. Saala dono ke beech zameen aasmaan ka antar hai".

Garima yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Are to tum koi anjaan ho kya aur rahi baat Karam se tumhare jhagre ki to woh tum dono ke beech ka baat hai. Uske kaaran tum mere liye anjaan nahin ho jaoge aur please kitni baar kaha hai mujhe sethani mat bola karo. It sounds so old fashioned".

Raghu yeh sunnkar bola,"Achha theek hai nahin bolega. Iske liye itna angrezi kahe ko jhaar reli ho".

Garima yeh sunnkar muskura di.

Garima ko muskurate hue dekh Raghu usko upar se neeche dekhne laga to Garima usse ek ada se puchhi,"Kya dekh rahe ho? Achhi nahin lag rahi kya aaj?"

Raghu yeh sunnkar bola,"Are nahin bahot achhi lag reli ho. Wahich to apun dekhkar soch rela hai" aur itna bolne ke baad Raghu Garima ke taraf haath badhakar hawa mein haath upar se neeche karte hue aage bola,"Tum saala itna khoobsurat. Sir se lekar paon tak pura apsara lagti ho,ek dum heroine aur dil ki bhi achhi ho"

Garima yeh sunti huyi muskura rahi thi.

Phir Raghu aage bolna jaari rakha,"aur kahan saala woh tondu khadus". Yeh sunte hi Garima apni munh kholkar chaunkne ka expression di aur phir banawti gusse se Raghu ke taraf dekhkar boli,"Shut up. Meri tareef ke saath uska burai karna zaruri tha kya? Jaisa bhi hai mera husband hai woh"

Raghu haste hue bola,"Hahaha are wahich to apun ko samajh nahin aata hai ki tumhari jaisi itni khoobsurat aur achhi biwi iss khadus ko kaise mil giyela".

Garima yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"Good question.Agli baar Karam se milna to puchh lena. Theek hai? ".

Raghu yeh sunnkar haskar bola," Hahaha. Achha chalta hai apun. Late ho rela hai. Breakfast ke liye Thank you" aur phir chala gaya.

Garima usko muskurati huyi gaadi mein baithte hue dekhi aur jab woh baithne laga to woh haath wave karke "Bye" bolkar ghar mein gaand matkati huyi chali gayi. Raghu gaadi mein baithkar Garima ki gaand dekhne laga aur Garima ke ghar mein ghusne ke baad darwaza bandh karne ke liye ghumi to Raghu ko khud ki taraf dekhte paakar haathon se ishara ki ki kya hua. Raghu usko dekhkar muskurate hue "naa" mein sir hilaya to Garima muskurati huyi apni haathon ko hilakar use "bye" ki to Raghu bhi haath hilakar "bye" karke gaadi start karke chala gaya. Garima gate par khadi huyi kuchh second tak gaadi ko dekhti rahi phir darwaza bandh kar di.

[seansean007]

Hi Sean,

A very long time. I hope you are doing fine.
I thought I would find you on Anita Singh's story, continuing further story about how we moved so far in the story from hariyas bed to birthday party with 5 people and Anita Singh the only one. I hope you will continue that story and i am sincerely hoping for that.


Now onto this story,
The start is fresh but tbh it is a bit so and so as the real action is yet to start. But considering the three updates it is clear who is actress and actress of the story. Tbh Sean I am yet to feel the seansean touch in this story, it is possible that it is too early to ask for or maybe not seeing what type of stories you've written before and in what depth you have gone to explain the scenarios. Anyway, garima looks absolutely stunning and Raghu is the exact hero we are familiar with from your previous stories. It is going smooth as it should and As i have already said that I completely trust you for giving us what we want to read and looking forward to.

Thank you for coming back and many congratulations for this new story.

Happy new year as well!!

Thanks for the feedback. Really appreciate it. Can you please be more clear about the story being so and so and what is missing in the story or writing so far? The readers perspective is also important and it may help me understand if there is something I have missed. Thanks.

[seansean007]

Hi Sean,

It's great to see that you are back..... But it seems like this story is going to be different from Anita because garima is so fucking rich that she is never gonna let someone like Hariya ever touch her, also she is a hothead and has attitude whereas Anita was kind hearted so it would make very difficult for some poor low class guy to woo her.....
But again it's a new story and a new character....

All the best for the story

Thanks for the analysis of the story and the character. This kind of feedback where the readers share their point of view of the character and the story is really helpful to the writer in understanding whether the reader's comprehension of the story and the character is exactly as the writer intended to show. Thanks again!!

[seansean007]

Karamchand aur Raghu ke beech jhamela ko 3-4 din beet chuke the. Ek din Karamchand kaam se jaldi ghar aa gaya. Woh lagbhag 5 baje ghar pahuncha. Ghar pahunchkar thoda der sofa par baithkar araam kiya aur dining table par rakhe paani ke bottle se paani peekar upar apne kamre mein chala gaya.

Kamre mein jab woh pahuncha to Garima wahaan nahin thi. Karamchand ko laga ki woh gym mein hogi kyunki uski dono gaadiyaan baahar parked thi. Woh thoda der kamre mein baith kar nahane chala gaya. Naha kar woh neeche gym ke paas gaya to gym khali tha.

Woh upar waapas jaakar dusre kamro mein dekha jahan woh kabhi kabhi apne mood ke hisaab se rehti thi. Woh sabhi kamro mein dekha magar woh nahin thi. Dopahar ke iss waqt naukrani Shanta neeche apne kamre mein 2 ghante araam karti thi aur jab tak kuchh urgent na ho, na hi Garima aur kabhi kabhi agar Karamchand is waqt ghar par rahe dono use disturb nahin karte the.

Garima ko ghar par na paakar Karamchand thode soch mein pad gaya aur apne kamre mein jaa kar ek bell bajaya. Kuchh second baad woh bell dubara bajakar kamre ke baahar seedhi ke paas khada tha ki tabhi Shanta kitchen ke peeche se ek kamre se hadbada kar nikli seedhiyon ke taraf aane lagi.

Woh dining table tak pahunchi hi thi ki Karamchand usse puchha,"Shanta Garima kahin gayi hai kya? Kahin dikhai nahin de rahi hai"

Shanta wahin khadi hokar jawaab di,"Nahin saahab maine to memsaahab ko kahin jaate hue dekha nahin"

Karamchane yeh sunnkar puchha,"Tum kamre mein thi to kaise dekhti. Gaadi ke aane jaane ka awaaz suni ya nahin?"

Karamchand Garima ki gaadi baahar dekh chuka tha phir bhi yeh sawaal yeh soch kar puchha ki shayad uski biwi Raghu ke saath uske gaadi mein kahin ghumne chali gayi hogi.

Shanta yeh sunnkar thodi sochkar boli,"Haan saahab abhi thodi der pehle suna maine"

Karamchand sang sang bola,"Are woh main aaya thoda der pehle. Usse pehle koi gaadi ke aane jaane ka awaaz suni ya nahin".

Shanta phir sochlar boli,"Nahin saahab usse pehle to maine to koi gaadi ke aane jaane ka awaaz nahin suna"

Karamchand yeh sunnkar puchha,"Tum earphone laga kar to nahin thi mere aane se pehle?"

Shanta turant boli,"nahin saahab main earphone laga kar nahin thi. Agar koi gaadi aata jaata to sunai deta".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar bola,"Achha theek hai. Pata nahin Garima kahan gayab ho gayi, ajeeb baat hai".

Yeh bolkar Karamchand waapas jaane ke liye ghuma to Shanta boli,"Saahab iss waqt memsaahab kabhi kabhi chhat par rehti hai. Shayad chhat par ho memsaahab".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar bola,"Are haan. Garima kabhi kabhi shaam mein chhat par baithti hai. Theek hai tum jao".

Shanta yeh sunnkar puchhi,"Saahab chai ya coffee bana du kya?"

Karamchand yeh sunnkar bola,"Nahin abhi nahin. Tum jaakar araam karo, main chhat par dekhta hoon".

Shanta yeh sunnkar sir sehmati mein hilati huyi boli,"Theek hai saahab".Karamchand bolkar wahan se chala gaya aur Karamchand ko jaata dekh Shanta bhi apne kamre mein chali gayi.

Karamchand chhat par gaya to chhat ka darwaza bandh tha aur udhar se light music ki awaaz aa rahi thi. Woh darwaza ko khola to khul gaya. Darwaza bas aese hi laga hua tha, locked nahin tha.

Darwaza khol kar woh chhat par gaya to dekha ki darwaze ke daaye taraf swimming pool ke paas Garima ek poolside lounger par leti huyi thi. Uski chehre par facial laga hua tha aur ankhon par cucumber slice rakha hua tha. Woh ek thigh high robe pehni huyi thi jisme uski gori taang halke dhoop mein chamak rahi thi.

Lounger ke paas ek chhota sa table rakha hua tha jispar Garima ki mobile, airpod, ek beer ka can aur ash tray rakha hua tha. Beer ka can khula hua tha aur ash tray mein cigarette ka ek bud tha. Ashtray ke bagal mein ek cigarette ka packet aur lighter rakha hua tha.

Karamchand yeh sab dekhne ke baad aasmaan ke taraf dekhne laga. Garmi ka din tha magar aas paas pura khula aur ped paudha hone ke kaaran thandi hawa beh rahi thi. Suraj ki halki dhoop aur saath mein hawa achha lag raha tha. Chhat par music system tha jispar halka music baj raha tha. Kul dekha jaye to mahaul bahot hi sukun bhara tha.

Karamchand waapas Garima ke taraf dekha aur use disturb kiye bina table par rakha beer can uthaya to dekh ki usme thoda beer abhi bhi baaki tha. Woh use uthakar chup chap swimming pool ke paas jaakar apna payjama ko upar karke pool ke kinare paani mein pair latka kar baith gaya.

Woh thodi der baitha raha uske baad use awaaz sunai diya,"Karam tum kab aaye? Kya baat hai aaj bahot jaldi aa gaye?"

Karamchand yeh sunnkar peeche ghumkar dekha to Garima apni dono aankhon se cucumber ka slice hatakar use dekh rahi thi.

Karamchand jawaab diya,"Hi darling. Bas thodi der pehle hi aaya. Woh aaj kuchh important kaam nahin tha aur mann bhi nahin ho raha tha to socha ghar hi chala jaun. Aakar dekha tum neeche nahin thi to samajh gaya tum upar hogi to upar aa gaya"

Garima yeh sunnkar puchhi,"Hmm. Tabiyat to theek hai tumhara?"

Karamchand yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"Ohh yes darling, I am absolutely fine."

Garima yeh sunnkar boli,"Hmm." phir woh complaint wali tone mein boli,"Aese tumne mera beer kyun uthaya? Jaakar bar se dusra nahin le sakte the? Haan?"

Karamchand yeh sunnkar bola,"Ohh I am sorry darling. Mujhe laga tum aur nahin piyogi. Ruko main tumhare liye dusra laa deta hoon"

Yeh bolkar Karamchand uthne hi wala tha ki Garima boli,"Rehne do koi zarurat nahin hai. Abhi mujhe nahin peena hai".

Karamchand waapas relax hokar baithte hue bola,"Ok darling".

Karamchand yeh bola hi tha ki Garima waapas cucumber ko apni aankhon par rakhkar relax karne lagi.

Thodi der baad Karamchand ka dhyaan peeche gaya to dekha Garima uthkar chhat ke dusre side bane ek ghar ke taraf jaane lagi. Thodi der baad woh baahar aayi to uski chehre se facial saaf ho chuki thi. Uski haath mein ek towel tha. Karamchand ka nazar uski biwi ke taraf hi tha.

Garima aakar towel ko lounger ke headrest ke taraf rakhi aur phir swimming pool yaani Karamchand ke taraf ghumkar apni robe ka lace kholne lagi. Robe ka lace kholkar woh use bhi lounger ke headrest le taraf rakh di. Karamchand apni khoobsurat, modern aur jawaan biwi ko ab sirf bikini pehne dekh raha tha. Bikini mein uski lagbhag aadhi chunchiyan baahar thi aur pahad ke jaisi uthi huyi thi.

Agle pal Garima pool ke stair se pool mein chali gayi aur swimming karne lagi. Karamchand use swimming karte hue dekhne laga. Thodi der swimming ke baad woh pool ke kinare jahan Karamchand baitha hua tha wahan aakar boli,"Karam can you please prepare and get my hookah from the bar? and also please get my skincare cream from the spa".

Karamchand muskurate hue bola,"Sure darling. Anything else?"

Garima muskurati huyi boli,"Nothing else. Haan tumko beer peena ho to beer le lena."

Karamchand muskurate hue bola,"Tumhare liye bhi le lunga ek can".

Garima yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"No mujhe abhi nahin peena hai. I will just take a sip or two from yours. Now please go"

Karamchand uthkar chala gaya wahin Garima waapas swim karne lagi. Kuchh der baad Karamchand ek haath mein Garima ka hookah aur dusre haath mein uski skincare cream aur ek beer ka can lekar aaya.

Usko dekhkar Garima swim karti huyi pool ke kinare aakar boli,"Cream ko table par rakh do and bring that hookah here".

Karamchand hookah lekar pool ke kinare gaya aur hookah ko rakhkar baithkar beer can khola to Garima boli,"Mujhe thoda peene do".

Karamchand beer ka can Garima ko de diya. Woh do sip lekar use waapas de di. Kuchh seconds baad woh hookah ko inhale karke Karamchand ke taraf dhuaan exhale kar di. Karamchand yeh dekhkar haath se dhyaan bhagate hue bola,"Offo Garima tum bhi na".

Garima yeh sunnkar khilkhilane lagi," hehehe". Phir woh ek baar aur hookah peekar dhuan dusri taraf chhodkar Karamchand se boli,"Karam why don't you also join in the pool. Change and get in the pool. Saath mein swim aur relax karne mein mazaa aayega".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar beer ka ek sip lekar bola,"Nahin Garima main aakar naha chuka hoon".

Yeh sunnkar Garima use gusse se dekhi. Garima ka expression badalte dekh Karamchand thoda ghabra gaya. Isse pehle ki woh kuchh bolta Garima gusse wali expression ae boli,"Toh? Nahane wale log swimming nahin karte kya?"

Karamchand safai dete hue pyaar se bola,"Darling mera matlab tha ki main to abhi abhi nahaya hoon. Phir paani mein kya jaana".

Garima yeh sunnkar gusse se boli,"What nonsense! Garmi ka mausam hai aur garmi mein thoda der swimming kar loge to kya hoga. Aur swimming is not taking bath okay? Swimming is an exercise, a recreational activity which helps in keeping fit and relaxing"

Karamchand chup chap beer ka sip liye Garima ka baat sunn raha tha. Garima aage boli,"Pata nahin exercise chahe kisi bhi form mein ho usse tum kyun bhagte ho. Ek dum health ka khyaal nahin rehta hai tumhe."

Karamchand baat ko khatam karne ke liye swim karne ke liye "haan" kehne ka soch hi raha tha ki tabhi Garima aage boli,"Khair tumhari marzi. Meri koi bhi baat nahin mante ho tum bhale hi tumhare fayeda ka baat ho".

Garima yeh bolkar hookah peene lagi to Karamchand bola,"Achha darling main abhi change karke aata hoon phir saath...."

Karamchand itna bola hi tha ki tabhi Garima hookah ka dhuaan chhor kar Karamchand ka baat khatam hone se pehle boli,"Ab koi zarurat nahin hai. Mera mood kharab kar diye tum". Garima yeh bolkar waapas swim karne lagi. Karamchand chup chap baitha beer peeta raha.

Kuchh seconds baad Garima waapas akar phir se hookah peene lagi. Teen chaar baar woh hookah peene ke baad thodi swimming aur karke woh

pool se nikal gayi. Karamchand Garima ko dekhne laga. Badan mein paani lagne se uski gori chikni badan bahot khoobsurat lag rahi thi.

Garima puri bikini model lag rahi thi. Karamchand side se Garima ko dekh raha tha. Uski saamne ki taraf pahaad jaisi ubhri chunchiyan, uske neeche pura sapaat pet aur uske neeche pichhe ke taraf ubhri huyi badi gaand jo bikini Bottom mein aadhi hi dhanki huyi thi.

Woh towel lekar apna badan ponchhi aur baal mein towel bandh kar Karamchand ke taraf dekh kar boli,"Karam please meri body par cream laga do na and also bring that hookah here".

Karamchand muskurate hue bola,"Sure darling" aur yeh bolkar woh beer ka akhiri sip lekar hookah uthakar Garima ke bagal wale table par rakh diya. Tab tak Garima bikini mein hi waapas inclined lounge par let gayi thi aur apna mobile check karne lagi. Woh phir airpods nikalkar kaan mein lagati huyi boli,"Karam start with my legs please"

Karamchand lounge par hi Garima ke pair ke paas baith gaya aur cream lekar uski dayi pair par lagane laga. Garima apni airpods kaan mein lagane ke baad mobile lekar kuchh type ki aur phir mobile table par rakhkar hookah ka pipe pakad kar ek baar hookah peekar dhuaan chhori. Karamchand ka nazar mobile par pada to screen par call ka frame tha aur Raghu likha hua tha.

Agle pal Garima muskurati huyi boli,"Hello Raghu."

Udhar se kuchh awaaz aane ke baad Garima muskurati huyi boli,"Bas aese hi. Baithi huyi thi to sochi ki thoda baat kar lun. Tum kya kar rahe ho?"

[seansean007]

Looks like it's building up to an intense story, this is unlike you're previous one Anita in many ways but will give this some more time.

Thank you for the feedback. Really appreciate it. Readers involvement really makes the story lively and more fun, especially when they share their understanding of the characters and the story in general. Thanks again.

[seansean007]

What an excellent update! Absolutely thrilling and sizzling story!Your romantic writing is full of sensuality.

Why post the same comment everywhere?

[seansean007]

Garima phir hookah peekar dhuaan chhorti huyi kuchh sunne ke baad ek ada se boli,"Shut up. Achha mood mein phone kar rahi hoon, mera mood kharab mat karo".

Karamchand Garima ki pair mein cream lagate hue use narazgi se dekhkar uski phone ke taraf ishara kiya to Garima apni mobile ke taraf dekh kar ishare se puch hi ki kya hua aur phir hookah smoke karke dhuaan chhorke phone mein boli,"Ok sunao".

Karamchand agle pal dheere se bola,"Garima tum uss Raghu.... ". Karamchand itna bola hi tha ki Garima apni honthon par ungli rakhkar gusse se use dekhti huyi chup rehne ka ishara ki. Garima ka ishara dekhte hi Karamchand chup ho gaya aur uski pair mein cream lagate raha.

Agle pal woh khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe Raghu tum bhi na, hehehe". Karamchand apni biwi ko hasta hua dekhkar chup chap uski pair mein cream laga raha tha. Garima phir se hookah smoke karti huyi baat sunne lagi aur Karamchand ke taraf dekhkar apni baayi pair ke taraf aankhon se ishara ki. Agle pal Karamchand apne haath mein cream lekar Garima ki baayi pair mein lagane laga.

Woh dekha ki uski biwi ke chehre par ab khushi thi. Woh muskurati huyi phir se hookah smoke karke khilkhilane lagi,"hehehe".Woh muskurati huyi Karamchand ko dekhi aur phir uske taraf hookah ke pipe karke ishare se puchhi ki kya woh bhi smoke karega.

Karamchand na mein sir hilaya to woh phir se smoke karke phone mein kuchh sunnkar jawaab mein boli,"achha theek hai, baad mein baat karte hain. Bye, take care".

Woh yeh bolkar muskurati huyi phone disconnect kar di. Karamchand yeh dekhkar bola,"Darling us gunde se baat karne ki kya zarurat thi. Tumhe pata hai uska mere saath jhamela hua hai".

Garima muskurati huyi boli,"Come on Karam. Be a man. Tumhara usse jhamela hua hai to mujhe beech mein kyun ghaseet rahe ho. Yeh tum dono ki aapas ki baat hai. Aur aesa kaun sa bada jhamela ho gaya ki baat cheet hi bandh ho jaye. Tum bhi na. Mera pair ho gaya ab please meri abs par cream laga do". Garima yeh bolkar hookah peene lagi.

Karamchand thoda aage khisak kar Garima ki thighs ke paas baith gaya aur uski pet par cream girakar use Garima ki sapaat chikni pet par malne laga aur malte hue bola,"Garima main tumhe beech mein ghaseet nahin raha bas bol raha hoon ki uss gunde se ab baat karne se kya hoga?"

Garima yeh sunnkar Karamchand ko gusse se dekhne lagi. Woh ek pal ke liye use gusse se dekhne ke baad boli,"Ab main kisse baat karun ya na karun yeh bhi tumse puchhna padega kya? Haan?"

Karamchand yeh sunnkar muskurate hue pyaar se bola,"Nahin darling. Maine aesa kab kaha. You are a free woman. Tumhara jisse marzi baat karo,jahan marzi ghumo, jo marzi karo. Main to bas iss gunde ke baare mein bol raha tha kyunki use to baat karne ki tameez bhi nahin hai. Tum suni nahin kaise uss din mujhe gandi gaali de raha tha".

Garima yeh sunnkar hookah peekar dhuaan chhodne ke baad boli,"To woh kaun nahin deta hai aaj kal. Uske paise nahin doge to gusse mein to bolega hi woh."

Garima aage boli,"Come on Karam behave like a man. Raghu ka tumse jhamela hua to woh to nahin bola mujhe ki uska tumhare saath jhamela hua hai to woh mujhse baat nahin karega. Yeh tum dono ke aapas ki baat hai aur ise waisa hi rehne do. Please don't drag me in between"

Yeh bolkar Garima hookah ka pipe rakhkar pyaar se Karamchand ke chin ko pakad ke boli,"You are my sweet husband, so keep being one. Itna achha relax karne ke mood mein hoon, please don't spoil the fun."

Phir woh lounger par ghumkar pet ke bal soti huyi boli,"Ab please meri back par cream lagao. Agar lagane ka mann nahin hai to yeh bhi bol do magar faltu ka baat karke mera mood kharab mat karo"

Karamchand yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"Nahin darling main laga deta hoon."

Garima pet ke bal letkar peeche gardan ghuma kar Karamchand ko dekhkar boli,"Good boy" aur phir gardan side mein karke apne sir ke neeche dono haath rakhkar uspar sir rakhkar aankh bandh kar li. Karamchand Garima ki peeth par cream lagane ke baad uski dono pair mein lagaya aur phir uski badi naram gaand ka woh bhag jo bikini Bottom se baahar thi uss par lagane laga. Karamchand apni biwi ki naram badi se gaand ko hilte hue dekhne laga. Woh cream lagaakar jab uss par cream mal raha tha to uski badi gaand hil rahi thi. Karamchand thoda der cream lagaya to Garima aankh bandh ki huyi hi boli,"Thank you sweet hubby. Tum jaa sakte ho ab".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar chhat se chala gaya. Lagbhag dedh ghante baad Garima ek robe pehni huyi bedroom mein aayi jahan Karamchand baitha hua news dekh raha tha. Karamchand usko dekhkar muskuraya to Garima bhi usko dekhkar muskurati huyi bed par chadh gayi. Garima upar chhat par hi shower karke apni baal dry karke dusra robe pehen kar neeche aayi thi isliye use aur kuchh karne ki zarurat nahin padi aur woh chup chap bed par chadh gayi.

Karamchand Garima ke mangne se pehle hi uske taraf tv ka remote badhaya to Garima muskurati huyi boli,"Thank you". Garima phir ek series lagayi aur dono pati patni ek ghanta yeh dekhne ke baad neeche dinner karne chale gaye.

[seansean007]

Jaan hi leloge kya ab.....
Muahhhh....
Love you dil se for your amazing writing...
Superb....

Thanks a lot.

[seansean007]

If I could be honest here, I am yet to move on from the Anita Singh story. I don't know what is the reason to not continue it and starting a new story. You may have your own reasons and that is understandable. As much as you want our participation in reviewing your updates, the same goes to us that we expect the same thing from you. I'm not saying that you had not delivered what you are and still capable of in Anita Singh story. It is the exact reason why i feel something is missing in this story. 


About this story what I think about this as of now but I could be wrong as well.

Say what you can but I feel there is something in garima which she feels about the Raghu. We can see her attitude, her rich and lavish lifestyle through her dressing and by talking style. But what it is that which makes her want to talk to Raghu even when she knows that he is Gunda and not of her status? He talks like a ruffian, stays like a ruffian and acts like a ruffian, as we had seen in previous updates that how Raghu wiped out the remains of juice from his mouth by his bare hands and how garima responded to that.

We can clearly figure out about Raghu and the strata he comes from and the same about garima by reading that small scenario. Garima has an attitude but is it really true so that she has a good heart? Or she is attracted to raghu's attitude, his masochism and his daring attitude?

Only the time will tell if garima lowers her standards and becomes the woman we have seen in your previous story and we will be able to find Anita in her or Garima stays where she is and raises the standard of Raghu to accept him as a whole. 



Other thing

Please Sean, it's a  request from your sincere reader and admirer to start Anita, to let us read her journey, the dance with those 5 raunchy males and her gangbang with them. Let us have pleasure to read Anita and hariya, Anita and jeetu, Anita and her two yaars "Raghu and dilavar.'

Thanks for the feedback. Appreciate it.

[seansean007]

Kuchh dino baad Garima apne pati Karamchand ke saath ek movie dekhne gayi. Woh dono jaise hi multiplex pahunche to Garima car se utar gayi aur Karamchand car park karne chala gaya.

Woh jab car park karke waapas aa raha tha to thodi duri se hi Garima ke taraf dekhkar bola,"Yeh saala yahan kya kar raha hai".

Woh aur koi nahin Raghu tha aur Garima usse muskurati huyi baatein kar rahi thi. Karamchand udhar ja hi raha tha ki Garima apni mobile Raghu ko di aur khud dusre taraf jaakar ek pose di aur Raghu uska photo click kar liya. Karamchand thodi duri par hi tha ki use Garima ki awaaz sunai di,"are aur click karo na. Pata nahin kaun si achhi aaye". Yeh sunnkar Raghu aur bhi pics lene laga.

Raghu jeans aur shirt pehna hua tha. Shirt ke upar ka do button khula hua tha aur gale mein chain latka hua tha. Uske haathon mein bhi mota chain ka bracelet tha. Dekhne se koi bhi samajh sakta tha ki woh gunda hai.

Garima jaisi khoobsurat aur modern aurat ko uske saath baat karte hue aur phir usse photo click karwate hue kuchh log use dekh rahe the. Kuchh mard Raghu se jal bhi rahe the ki use itni khoobsurat aurat ke saath baat karne aur photo khinchne ka mauqa mil raha hai.

Garima ko inn sabse kuchh farq nahin pad raha tha. Woh notice kar chuki thi ki kuchh log uski taraf hi dekh rahe hain magar use kuchh farq nahin pad raha tha.

Karamchand jab udhar pahuncha to Garima boli,"Ek last pic". Raghu uska last pic click kiya to Garima udhar aakar boli,"Chalo chalo nahin to late ho jayega".

Raghu yeh sunnkar bola,"Lo kar lo baat. Khud hich modeling karne mein lageli thi aur ab hadbada reli hai"

Garima yeh sunnkar boli,"Are to main Karam ka wait kar rahi thi. Khadi hokar wait karne se achha hai ki kuchh pics hi le liya jaye. Hehehe. Ab chalo bhi".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar dheere se bola,"Garima yeh yahan kya kar raha hai?"

Garima yeh sunnkar chalti huyi boli,"Wahi jo humlog kar rahe hain. Movie dekhne aaya hai aur kya".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar chalte hue bola,"Ajeeb baat hai. Ise abhi hi aana tha".

Raghu peeche se sunnkar bola,"Ae seth kahe ko.. "

Isse pehle Raghu pura bolta Garima bolne lagi,"Are kaisi ajeeb baat kar rahe ho. Log kya ab tumhari marzi se kahin aana jaana karenge. Iska mann hua movie dekhne ka to aa gaya"

Phir Garima muskukar boli,"and guess what hum teeno ka seat ek saath hi hai".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar chaunk kar bola,"are yeh kaise ho gaya?"

Uska reaction dekhkar Garima gusse wali expression se sakhti se boli,"Ab mujhe kya pata? Ticket to tumhi ne liya hai na? Ab se ticket inquiry karke lena ki humare aas paas kaun baithega. What nonsense! Pata nahin Raghu se tum itna kyun chidhte ho. Yeh chup chap hai aur tum sawaal par sawaal kiye ja rahe ho. Movie dikhane laye ho ya quiz show mein. Haan? "

Karamchand yeh sunnkar jawaab dene wala tha ki Garima gusse se uske taraf dekhkar boli,"Ab chup bhi karoge? Jo bhi bolna hai baad mein bolna. Movie shuru hone se pehle mera mood kharab mat karo."

Karamchand yeh sunnkar chup ho gaya. Use bhi khyaal aaya ki iss waqt apni biwi se bahes karne ka koi fayeda nahin hai aur khaaskar itne logo ke beech.

Teeno popcorn lekar cinema hall ke ander pahunche. Karamchand aage aage chal raha tha. Uske theek peeche Garima chal rahi thi aur uske peeche Raghu. Karamchand apne row mein jaakar dekha to teen seat khali the. Woh samajh gaya wahi teeno unke seats hai. Woh aage jaakar beech wali seat par baithna chahta tha.

Woh jaakar beech wali seat par baith gaya to Garima usse boli,"Are hum dono kahan baithenge? Next seat par jao".

Karamchand mana karke Garima ko gussa nahin karna chahta tha to woh agle seat par baith gaya. Uske bagal mein Garima baith gayi aur uske bagal mein Raghu baith gaya.

Movie dekhne ka dauran Karamchand chup chap screen par dekh raha tha. Wahin Raghu Garima ki kaan mein ek do baar kuchh bola aur uske baad dono ke beech isi tarah se kabhi kabhi baat cheet hoti rahi. Karamchand ek do baar un dono ke taraf dekha aur bina kuchh bole waapas screen par dekhne laga.

Isi tarah Raghu ek baar Garima ki kaan mein kuchh bola to woh bina awaaz kiye hasne lagi aur iss chakkar mein uski haath se popcorn girkar uski cleavage mein atak gayi. Yeh dekhkar Garima ki munh se "oops" nikal gayi aur woh muskurane lagi.

Karamchand yeh dekh raha tha. Agle pal Garima muskurati huyi Karamchand ke taraf dekhi to Karamchand muskurakar use dekhkar waapas screen ke taraf dekhne laga. Phir woh Raghu ke taraf dekhi jo uski cleavage hi dekh raha tha. Phir woh chup chap apni cleavage se popcorn nikalne ke liye haath badhayi hi thi ki tabhi woh dekhi ki Raghu ki moti khurduri ungliyan wahan pahunch gayi. Raghu uski cleavage se popcorn nikala to Garima use dekhne lagi.

Raghu popcorn nikal kar apne munh ke taraf badhaya aur Garima ko dekhte hue kha gaya. Garima yeh dekhkar apni ankhein badi karke use dekhkar elbow se use maarkar dheere se boli,"Yeh kya tha?"

Raghu muskurate hue bola,"Ab woh gir giyela tha to tum to khaati nahin use, ab bhale hi woh itna chikna jagah mein girela tha. Isliye apun hich kha giyela".

Raghu yeh bolkar use dekhkar munh chalate hue popcorn khane laga. Garima apni sir hilati huyi chup chap movie dekhne lagi.

Agle pal Garima ki kaan mein phir Raghu ka awaaz aaya,"saala popcorn kismat wala hai. Zameen mein girne se bach giyela".

Garima yeh sunnkar Raghu ke taraf dekhi aur kohni se halka maarti huyi dheere se boli,"Shut up".

Pure movie ke dauran Raghu aur Garima movie dekhte hue isi tarah se ek dusre se baat karte rahe wahin Karamchand chup chap movie dekhne mein laga tha.

Beech mein interval ke waqt Raghu washroom gaya to Garima Karamchand ko apni pics dikhati huyi puchhi,"Karam dekho to meri pics aur batao to kaun pic sabse achhi lag rahi hai".

Karamchand Garima ko ek baar gussa kar chuka tha aur use sabhi pics mein Garima achhi hi lag rahi thi to woh use khush karne ke liye bola,"Darling tum sabhi pics mein achhi lag rahi ho".

Yeh sunnkar Garima uske taraf gusse wali expression se dekhne lagi aur boli,"Tumse to puchhna hi beqaar hai. Pics mein farq nahin kar sakte. Main puchh rahi hoon sabse achhi pic kaun hai aur tum bol rahe sabhi achhi hai. What the hell! Chhoro".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar chup ho gaya. Woh uthkar washroom jaane laga aur Garima se pucha"Main washroom jaa raha hoon. Aate waqt kuchh lekar aau kya?"

Garima apni pics dekhti huyi boli,"Nahin kuchh nahin".

Thodi der baad jab Karamchand waapas aaya to dekha ki Garima Raghu aur uske seat ke beech ka hand rest ke taraf jhuki huyi thi aur Raghu bhi udhar hi jhuka hua tha jisse dono ka sir bahot kareeb tha. Karamchand jab seat par pahuncha to dekha ki Garima Raghu ko apni mobile mein khud ki pics dikha rahi thi. Woh wahi pics the jo Raghu ne click kiye the aur jo Garima kuchh der pehle Karamchand ko dikha rahi thi.

Garima Karamchand ke taraf dekhi nahin aur Raghu ko apni ek pic dikhati huyi puchhi,"Yeh wali kaisi lag rahi hai. Mujhe to pose achha nahin lag raha hai"

Raghu jawaab mein bola,"Are theek to lag rela hai. Itna achha lag reli ho phir bhi nakhra kar reli ho".

Garima Raghu ko dekhkar boli,"Nahin mujhe yeh utna achha nahin lag raha hai. Pose achha nahin hai".

Phir woh slide karke do teen pic dekhi aur ek pic dekhkar boli,"Haan yeh thoda theek lag raha hai.Tumhe kaisa lag raha hai?"

Raghu pic ko dekhkar bola,"Haan isme bhi achhi lag reli ho".

Garima yeh sunnkar boli,"Tumhe to sabhi pic achhi lag rahi hai. Bolo na yeh kaisi lag rahi hai?"

Karamchand yeh sab Garima ke taraf dekhte hue sunn raha tha. Agle pal movie phir se start ho gayi.

Garima aur Karamchand ka dhyaan screen ke taraf chala gaya. Garima screen ke taraf dekhi to Raghu dheere se Garima ki kaan mein bola,"Uss photo mein tumhari aage aur pichhe ki pahaad ka shape achhe se pata chal rela hai".

Karamchand ka bhi dhyaan Garima ke taraf gaya magar woh sunn nahin paya ki Raghu uski biwi se kya bola. Garima yeh sunnkar Raghu ke taraf dekhi aur dheere se boli,"Shut up. Yehi dekh rahe the kya meri pic mein? Haan? "

Agle pal ek aesa scene aaya ki sabka dhyaan screen par chala gaya. Raghu screen par dekhte hue dheere se Garima ki kaan mein bola,"Ab jo dikh rela hai wahich dekhega na apun."

Garima yeh sunnkar apni elbow Raghu ko maarti huyi boli,"Shut up" aur phir uske taraf dekhkar boli,"Achhi lag rahi hoon na us pic mein? Status mein yehi laga leti hoon. It's better than other pics" aur yeh bolkar Garima status lagai to Raghu phir se kaan mein bola,"Haan achha hai. Iss mein aage aur peeche dono achha lag rela hai"

Garima yeh sunnkar Raghu ke taraf dekhi aur dono ki ankhein ek pal ke liye mili. Garima phir bina kuchh bole wapas screen ke taraf dekhne lagi.

Movie khatam hone ke baad Raghu apne raaste chala gaya aur Garima Karamchand ke saath dinner karke ghar chali aayi. Garima Raghu ko bhi saath dinner karne ke liye boli magar usko koi kaam tha to woh chala gaya.

Ghar aane par Garima bahot khush lag rahi thi. Uska mood Karamchand bigadna nahin chahta tha isliye Raghu se uski jo baat chit chal rahi thi movie dekhte waqt ya Raghu ka yun saath movie dekhne ko lekar woh Garima se kuchh kehna nahin chah raha tha.

[seansean007]

A great comeback seanbro hope you have been fine in all these days, your new story is promising and hopefully would contain new characters as well...but I request you please complete or simultaneously update ANITA Singh,bcz that is the story that set you apart from all other writers. And that story deserves to be completed, you can continue this story as per your wish but kindly update that story too. Bcz ANITA is your masterpiece and any artist won't like his masterpiece to be incomplete.

Thank you for the feedback. I won't leave that story incomplete. I have every intention to complete that story, but in the meantime do enjoy this story. Let me know whether or not this story is good enough, without comparing it to Anita Singh. 
Thanks a lot.

[seansean007]

Garima movie dekhkar ghar aane ke baad ek thigh high robe pehni bed par takiya par back rakhkar ek novel padh rahi thi. Kitab uske chehre ke saamne tha ki tabhi use apni pair par ek haath mehsus hua. Garima chup chap novel padhti rahi. Kuchh seconds tak uski dayi pair par ek haath phisalte raha phir woh haath uski pair ko thoda upar uthaya aur agle pal use apni pair par ek honth mehsus hua. Garima chup chap novel padhti rahi.

Woh honth dheere dheere uski pair se uski ghutne tak badhne lagi aur phir ghutne tak pahunchne ke baad woh haath uski dayi pair ko neeche rakh diya. Agle pal woh haath uski bayi pair ko uthakar waise hi chumne laga magar iss baar jaise hi honth ghutne tak pahuncha Garima ki bayi pair ko apne kandhe par rakhkar uski ghutne se upar bayi jangh par chumne laga.

Garima waise hi novel padhti huyi boli,"Karam kya kar rahe ho?"

Karamchand uski jangh ko chumte hue bola,"Pyaar kar raha hoon darling. Umm tumko pyaar kiye hue kitne din ho gaye".

Garima novel padhti huyi boli,"Kya baat hai aaj achanak mood ban gaya?".

Karamchand yeh sunnkar uski jangh ko chumte hue bola,"Umm darling mood to mera rehta hi hai, bas tumhara bhi achha mood dekhkar karta hoon. Aaj tum khush bhi ho aur bahot khoobsurat, I mean khoobsurat to roz hi lagti ho, 24/7, magar aaj tumhara mood achha lag raha hai isliye"

Garima yeh sunnkar "hmm" boli aur novel padhti huyi apni dayi pair ko Karamchand ke tango ke beech lejakar apni pair ke anguthe se Karamchand ke payjame ke upar se uske lund par phirane lagi aur boli,"Mera achha mood kharab mat kar dena".

Karamchand uski jangh ko chumte hue bola,"no darling nahin karunga. I will be a tiger today aarrrghhh".

Garima muskurati huyi novel padhti huyi Karamchand ke lund par payjama ke upar se apni pair ke angutha phirati huyi boli,"I don't want you to be a tiger, I want this little thing of yours to be a tiger. Don't disappoint me baby".

Karamchand chup chap Garima ki dayi jangh par munh lejakar use chumne laga. Garima agle pal boli,"By the way baby, did you check my latest post on Insta? If not then check it now and tell me how it is"

Karamchand jawaab mein bola,"nahin darling nahin dekha. I am sorry".

Garima uske lund par payjame ke upar se apni angutha phirati huyi boli,"Koi baat nahin baby. Now is the perfect time for it".

Phir woh Karamchand ka mobile bedside table se uthakar deti huyi boli,"Here check it now".

Karamchand uske haath se mobile liya aur Garima ki jangh ko chumte hue hi apna aankh mobile ke taraf karke uski Insta account mein jaa kar dekha. Jo latest post tha woh usi din ki pic thi jis din Karamchand chhat par swimming pool par Garima ki badan par cream lagaya tha.

Garima apni lounger par pet ke bal bikini pehni huyi leti thi aur selfie li thi. Selfie mein uski chehre ka thoda hissa, nangi peeth aur bikini bottom mein aadhi hi dhanki huyi uski badi gaand dikh rahi thi. Badan par cream lagne se halke dhoop mein uski gori badan chamak rahi thi.

Karamchand phir pic ke neeche Garima ka post dekha "Time to relax and feel little lazy (though I am not). Thanks to sweet hubby for applying cream all over my body and making it glow".

Garima novel padhti huyi hi Karamchand ke lund par apni pair ka angutha phira rahi thi. Karamchand phir neeche comments padhne laga. Zyadatar mard hi the jo comment kiye the. Karamchand scroll karke ikka dukka comments padhne laga.

"Looking sexy as hell"

"Sexy as usual"

Iske baad Garima ke tareef mein bahot saare comments the. Garima uske lund par angutha ragadti huyi puchhi,"How is the post baby?"

Karamchand jawaab mein bola,"You are looking very sexy darling"

Garima jawaab mein "Thank you sweet hubby" bolkar apni chehre ke saamne se novel hatakar use dekhti huyi boli,"Dekho maine tumhe credit bhi diya hai cream lagane ke liye"

Karamchand yeh sunnkar Garima ke taraf dekhkar uski jangh ko chumkar bola,"Thank you darling".

Garima muskurati huyi uske lund par angutha ragadti huyi boli,"and guess what? people are jealous of you for being my sweet husband"

Karamchand ka lund dheere dheere khada ho raha tha. Woh Garima ka baat sunnkar muskurakar scroll karte karte neeche ek comment padha.

"Lucky bastard your husband" jiske reply mein likha tha, "Pakka gandu hoga, ganduon ko hi itni garam maal milti hai"

Yeh dekhkar Karamchand ka chehre se muskaan ghayab ho gaya. Garima yeh dekhkar uske lund par angutha ragadti huyi puchhi,"Kya hua baby, tumhara neeche wala cheez khush lag raha hai aur tumhare chehre se muskurahat ghayab ho gayi? You are not happy that people are jealous of you?"

Karamchand yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"Nahin darling aesi baat nahin hai. I am happy" aur yeh bolkar woh sochne laga ki Garima ne woh comment dekha to nahin hai. Woh yeh soch hi raha tha ki Garima muskurati huyi boli,"Yes, I can feel your happiness on my toe hehehe".

Karamchand ko aage comment padhne ka mann nahin hua. Woh mobile rakhkar Garima ki upper thigh par kiss karne laga aur dheere dheere upar tak badhne laga. Garima yeh dekhkar Karamchand ke lund par se apni pair hata li aur apni dono tango ko modkar phaila di.

Yeh dekhkar Karamchand muskurate hue upar Garima ke taraf dekha to woh muskurati huyi boli,"Meow meow"

Karamchand bhi muskurakar "arrrrrghhhh" kiya to Garima hasti huyi boli,"Hehehe my dear tiger, first be a good hubby and prepare me then I will see how much of a tiger you really are".

Yeh bolkar Garima novel ko table pat rakhkar bistar par let gayi aur apni tange modkar phailakar Karamchand ko dekhi. Karamchand ke liye Garima ka yun dekhna hi kaafi tha yeh samajhne ke liye ki use kya karna hai.

Karamchand apna haath Garima ke robe ke ander ghusa kar uski panty nikalna chaha to Garima kuchh response nahin dekar boli,"Not now baby. You first make me happy and prepare me".

Karamchand Garima ki robe ke samne wale hisse ko dono taraf phaila diya aur phir uski chut ke saamne panty dekha. Panty dekhkar woh chut ke saamne wale hisse ko side karke uski chut ko nangi kar diya.

Apni biwi ki puri chikni aur gori chut jiske beech pink colour tha usko dekhkar Karamchand ka lund khada hone laga. Woh apna munh aage karke use chumne laga aur phir zabaan nikal kar chaatne laga. Garima aankh bandh kar ke boli,"That's it my sweet hubby. Be a good boy and make me happy".

Karamchand dheere dheere apni biwi ki chut chaatne laga. Thoda der chut chatne ke baad Garima thodi bhari saans mein boli,"idhar aao".

Karamchand Garima ke badan ke upar se hi uske kareeb gaya to Garima boli,"munh kholo".

Karamchand apna munh khola to Garima uske munh mein thuk kar boli,"use this to warm my pussy".

Karamchand waapas neeche jaakar woh thuk ko Garima ki chut par daalkar chatne laga. Lagbhag 20 minute tak woh uski choot chaat ta raha. Garima ki saans tez ho chuki thi aur ab woh Karamchand ka baal pakad kar apni choot ki taraf uska munh daba rahi thi.

Thodi der aur chhatne ke baad woh bhaari saans mein boli,"that's it, be a good hubby and keep licking my pussy". Kuchh der aur Karamchand uski choot chaatte raha aur Garima waise hi badbadati rahi.

Karamchand ke liye Garima ka yun badbadane aur bistar par machalna bardaasht karne se baahar ho raha tha. Uska lund pura khada hokar akad raha tha aur use darr tha kahin Garima ko chodne se pehle hi uska paani na nikal jaye.

Woh Garima ka choot chaatna bandh karke apna pant kholne laga. Apni choot se zabaan hatte hi Garima aankh kholti huyi gusse mein boli,"What the hell! Who asked you to stop?"

Karamchand pant kholkar apna lund haath mein lekar uski choot ke taraf badhte hue bola,"Garima dekho mera kya haalat ho gaya hai. Let us enjoy together"

Karamchand yeh bolkar apna lund pakde Garima ki choot ke paas aakar uski choot ke taraf dekhkar lund choot mein daalne ke liye kamar aage badhane hi wala tha ki tabhi Garima apni dayi pair uske chhati par rakh di jiske kaaran Karamchand aage nahin badh paya.

[seansean007]

This last update was really something. It could turn out to be an epic cuck or dominating female story. There is a very interesting dynamic between Garima and Karam. She is taunting him... Asking him not to disappoint... Spitting in his mouth... She effectively has a leash on him. He doesn't look like he has any spine. The last comment on the insta post, did it excite him more than anger him? I thought it did.

Thank you for the feedback and analysing the episode. Appreciate it.

[seansean007]

Thank you for responding, I'm enjoying this story and i never compared this story to anita bcz everything has a class of its own..we waited the day when we'll get to read your amazing skill and here you are. It's like a wish come true...

Thank you.

[seansean007]

Superbly amazing....
Love the way you describe slow seduction...
Amazing.....
Thanks for writing.....

Thanks.

[seansean007]

It's good to see that atleast we are about to see some action in this story.....  But I am eagerly waiting for the point when Low class people would start approaching and seducing Garima..... All the best.....

Thanks