24-12-2022, 07:35 PM
The way you give update appears to be real doesn't feel like a story. It appears that you are narrating some real incident happenings in 3rd person perspective. By the way the update was short but super. Expecting to see following thing in the future
1. Feeling of love and more respect for ravi in Monisha heart
2. Both Ravi and Manisha come close to each other drifting arun apart.
3. Pang of jealousy and pain in arun's heart seeing Ravi and manisha getting together
4. In social get together and functions manisha and ravi completely accepts each other as happy husband and wife and acts like a good newly married couple no more hard feelings for arun in manisha mind (just sympathy)
5. Physical intimacy happens between these two newly married couples (let's keep arun totally unaware what's happening behind the curtain)
6.fully transformation of manisha from loyal arun wife to naught ravi mistress
7.Arun witness their physical intimacy unaware of Ravi and manisha
8.arun land up in pain where as manisha and ravi enjoying at peak heaven.
9. Arun become cuck unknowingly by the fate of nature or his decision..?
All this are from my point of view author has the best colour to picture the story.
1. Feeling of love and more respect for ravi in Monisha heart
2. Both Ravi and Manisha come close to each other drifting arun apart.
3. Pang of jealousy and pain in arun's heart seeing Ravi and manisha getting together
4. In social get together and functions manisha and ravi completely accepts each other as happy husband and wife and acts like a good newly married couple no more hard feelings for arun in manisha mind (just sympathy)
5. Physical intimacy happens between these two newly married couples (let's keep arun totally unaware what's happening behind the curtain)
6.fully transformation of manisha from loyal arun wife to naught ravi mistress
7.Arun witness their physical intimacy unaware of Ravi and manisha
8.arun land up in pain where as manisha and ravi enjoying at peak heaven.
9. Arun become cuck unknowingly by the fate of nature or his decision..?
All this are from my point of view author has the best colour to picture the story.