Incest கடனால் கை மாறிய காயத்ரி

[Vandanavishnu0007a]

Great disappointment, after reading this story for 28 pages. no story upto now, simply title, oruthi nadika pona idathula oruthan death ,(athu actinga nu kuda theriala),, onume ilatha story la 40 characters.. vanthana vishnu story starting lam nala than irukom but poga poga , starting la iruntha mari than irukum, oru story um story ilama mokaya oditu irukum, ithula ella postlayum en story read panunga nu thread vera. 

ennai pol oruvan, ammavin kama ol ,, ipo ithu,, elame story ilama scene vachi kathai pothu,, yarulam story aim panni read panurengalo avangaluku time waste simply,

sorry for the inconvenience nanba.. 

u all very well know that i am the best title winner for "mokkai writer" in our group.. becz i also know that there wont be any story in my story.. only i use the scenes nanba.. 

but thank u so much for ur great review.. and the keen observation regarding all my stories.. and style and way of my writing.. 

u r the best commenter nanba.. that i accept it

really today only i am very happy that u r the real viewer of the story

and one small change in ur connent pls nanba

"ennai pol oruvan" is not my story.. that author is very great writer in our site.. 

i think u r mentioning "enakkul oruvan" 

anyway thank u so much for ur excellent comments and indirect encouragements nanba

i am really happy and impressed with ur thoughts and idea nanba

thank u thank u .. thank u so much nanba