05-05-2019, 01:02 PM
Your narration is really good and even before reading the size of the content itself gives more satisfaction.
wonderful...!
very small suggestion..! the conversation dialogues really ads more kick... like "bitch...". Instead narrating as a third person let the characters speak, let them put all possible erotic words to explain their fucking session. Let them feed him every day as bed coffee, allow him to lick their pussy before he leaves the house...
Your story is superb..! Regular and big updates keeps us happy..! I am sure you value the readers very much with your updates. Once again thank you.
wonderful...!
very small suggestion..! the conversation dialogues really ads more kick... like "bitch...". Instead narrating as a third person let the characters speak, let them put all possible erotic words to explain their fucking session. Let them feed him every day as bed coffee, allow him to lick their pussy before he leaves the house...
Your story is superb..! Regular and big updates keeps us happy..! I am sure you value the readers very much with your updates. Once again thank you.
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