09-04-2019, 07:13 PM
(07-04-2019, 05:31 AM)RajAg Wrote: Hi, read ur story today... believe me no words to say any thing. Jis tarah se har ek scene ko detail me with feeling and logically correct tarike se apne present kiya h, its just super. I want to say a few things..
Karishma ko office me only uncle se hi exploit hona chahiye since ki story ka base hi waisa hai, rich bussinessman n his personal secy. 2ndly, karishma jis upper level post me h, un halat me koi lower grade employee ke sath uska relation mis match hoga story ke plot ke according for atleast current part of story ke. Uncle ke cabin ya puri floor ko other employee ke liye no entry ho jaye to undo ko aur space mil jayega play krne ke liye. Uncle ab ghar nai ja sakte to unke pasand ke dress unki cabin me karishma pahan sakti h if koi aur na dekh paye use to. Use their restroom also.(at least ek scene ban sakta h). Karishma n uncle ka sx scene jitna late hoga utna hi excitment continously maintain rahega story me. Unke bech sx acts kai sare scenes me split kiya ja sakta h hr bar ek step forward towards full sex. Rest to jo suspense wala part h story me usko abhi tak, apne open nai kiya h puri tarah se. Gopal ka border me kya hoga age chal kr wo b dekhne layak hoga. Dekhte h ki uncle jo story ke abhi tak ke hero hai, karishma ko pane ke baad end tak me positive role me rahte hai ya negative role me. My personal feeling ki wo story me age chal kr karishma ka sath denge n jo dosti ki h uska dhyan denge may be at the worse tym of kharishma's life.
Pls ignore if es msg me kuch unnecessary points ho to n thanks for sharing this story..keep writing dear.
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Main ek sex doll bani..https://xossipy.com/thread-2030.html
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Main ek sex doll bani..https://xossipy.com/thread-2030.html
uncle ne banai meri movie(bdsm).. https://xossipy.com/thread-40694.html