Adultery MOHINI (Erotic Horror)

[Dark Soul]

Thanks Dark soul.. You liked my story upobhog (bengali version)

Lekin main bengali aur hindi same to same nahi rakhta. Bahut changes karta hoo. Isliye story ek tarah se alag hi hota hai. Aapko ek baat poochna thaa... Aap ko meri stories acchi lagti hai isliye thanks. Lekin ek baat batao... Jab aapko meri bengali version itni pasand aayi toh wahan aapne positive koi feedback kyun nahi diya? Ek writer hamesha chahta hai ke unke readers ko agar story accha lag raha ho toh feedback de.... Lekin tab aapne kuch nahi bola aur ab aap is story ko compare kar rahe ho. Yeh toh sahi nahi hai bhai. Aap agar kharab mein feedback dete ho toh acchey lagne par bhi feedback do.

Dont mind..... Sab ka apna apna style hai. Sath jurey rahiye

Lekin bahut readers ko yeh Mohini acchi lag rahi hai isliye thanks friends

First of all, Saadar Pranaam..

Second thing bhai, am not comparing. I'm no one to "Compare". I don't want to.

Actually, after reading Pervert, i had decided long back that I won't comment on your stories ever; it was so full of nasty things.

By that time i was  already reading your other 2 Bengali stories.. Nishir daak was one of them. Have to say that you really did a good job with those two stories. Then came Upobhog; it was good too. But now this... Hindi version, except the sex part, there's nothing much to make readers (some) connect with it. (Though there's not much changes). Feels like little bit of injustice is happening with this story (version). Guys who haven't read or not able to read the Bengali version would certainly and definitely love the Hindi version.  Undoubtedly, you have a good hand in writing in Bengali.

Now, it's up to you..how you take this..

I'm not a critic.; definitely not yours.

Thank You