Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute

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Last thing first..... Yes we are interested in an epilogue. yes my imagination are already running in different directions to figure out what would have happened next..... but unfortunately i am not a good writer . so i cant build a good narrative around ,my imaginations or plots. and why any other powerful writer ? you can do it yourself. u have already invested so much in the story , u know the characters , their minds, their thought processes better than anyone else .  u can start a new sequel in the new year. this is just a suggestion !!. 

Kavita had no option after her lust was exposed, fine.... but to whom ?  to her consciousness . she spoke to her consciousness that night. ( BTW even i was always puzzled as to why she went on pills after inviting Prem if her motive was to get pregnant, it was contradictory)  my submission is why she couldn't have had this dialogue in bangalore much before, we all speak to our consciousness regularly... thats what makes us take decisions and reflect upon our actions. we don't need a serene surroundings with the Himalayas in the backdrop everytime. she had all the time for self introspection . 

I would have liked u to answer to  my queries point no 1 and 3. but that choice is urs. i obviously cannot complain after the dedication and commitment u have shown to finish adhering to ur timelines. I still believe there shud have been a Manu's POV , afterall he is the central character along Kavita in this story. 

Maybe u set the expectations bar so high that the climax ( atleast to me ) feels a bit of a let down .....

Yes yes Please Manasi we readers deserve it a big time....You yourself are exceptional writer why wait for someone else. Please listen to your avid e
Readers....please don't disappoint....