Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute

[manasi]

Great Narration and in-depth phycological analysis as always. 

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Life is not only about one own self and one's own sense of guilt. Its also about the other people around u , ur loved ones. Two nuggets which Guruji said 
1. Apart from u and ur husband, 4 more lives are waiting for ur return. u have no right to punish them further
2. You have done mistakes but life does not and should not end with a few mistakes. 


Manasi, i have been very attached to this sequel as i have mentioned earlier also. and hence i have written what i felt. Maybe u left the loose ends loose intentionally . who know's maybe we will have a sequel to this sequel. like now days we have season 2.

@ Jeevanantham
@ sangram24

You people are amazing!

When I decided to write the unfinished story of Indiansubmale, I had to struggle to find out the motive of Kavita and also match with the incidents as described by Indiansubmale. Things were required to be accepted by readers. My tribute was addressed for a serious section of readers who thinks beyond sex. Human relationship and specially relationship between husband and wife, two persons connected with emotions without sex are always complicated.    Normally at some point, tragedy strikes.

Indiansubmale had concluded the finishing. At the most we can play round about to arrive at finishing point.  There could be different approaches to reach the finishing point. Most of the incidents as happened with Kavita aftermath are taken from real life. I preferred to create two amazing characters Jaya and Guruji mainly to open up life from different perspective. Here Jaya is still not fully matured, Guruji is ultimate. His views on life is for the life whereas Jaya is bubbling with youthfulness of a young woman.

 Even before disclosing abortion, Guruji had made Kavita spend her time with destitute children. It is absolutely impossible for Jaya and specially Guruji not to follow Kavita after they have religiously followed her. In chapter 27.2 Manu is discovered with his two grown up children. If you connect this fact with original of Indiansubmale, where he describes Manu as successful at the age of 40 when he writes his story. Looking at Manu's obsession for Kavita at the end of original chapter 26, Manu would be around 33 years age, things should be pretty clear to readers for extrapolation.

Sharing your shameful secret with your husband only and sharing the same secret with your husband when it is no more secret are quite different. For me it appeared, Kavita had no option but to vacate once her lust was exposed. Neither Jaya nor Guruji talked about lust even though they were well aware of the fact. Even Guruji left it for Kavita to disclose everything to Manu. Also a well maintained asylum closely keep an eye on the inmates.

So, what you feel the loose ends, I feel are ends with definite conclusion.

Yes, I could have ended with an epilogue. I left the blank for a romantic saga may be harnessed by a powerful writer in future. Are you really interested in a fixed epilogue? I preferred your imagination to grow in multi-directional romance.