Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute

[sangram24]

First of all..... Superb narration and building of the plot, Manasi..... Hats off to u.... I again say, this is by far the best story going now on this forum.

I would refrain to pass a judgment on any characters as of now atleast till end of chap 34. the point is not who is more guilty and whos less... the idea is to figure out the motive behind her actions. See had she been an out and out cruel, manipulative, mean , diabolical lady with zero regards for the institution of marriage then that shud have been the end of it. ( as we see in some stories in this forum)  what piques our interest, our curiosity ( and also the writer's as in Manasi)  is her mixed behaviour. the dual nature of her character . which is why he chose to write this sequel and put an honest and elaborate explanation without deviating from the original. and so far it has been spot on. 

as i said i wont judge any characters as of now but still i am thinking that when a list of guilty ppl are being drawn out why is it only Kavita or Prem ? why not Manu ? He knew about his inadequacies , what did he do about them for 4 long years? At Haridwar he confessed to Jaya that he failed in his duties as a husband and coz of him she could not attain motherhood. Then what did he do about it ? i agree to some suggestions like IVF / Surrogacy, etc.... but why the onus of figuring  out the solution lies only with Kavita and  not Manu ? Didnt Manu knew that his mother and MIL r pestering Kavita for a grandchild ? why couldn't he stand up for his wife and save her the embarrassment and tell them that he has a problem and not her ? 

Again as i said i am not saying Kavita is clean and not at fault, but then lets just listen her out and i am sure Dr Jaya will have a lot of questions for her after her narrative.