[manasi]

Hi Manasi,

It is not look to me like a revenge of Manu it is more like a treatment of jaya to extract the truth from kavita and I am missing some points here what exposed outside world about kavita and Manu and prem relationship? after the bang incident. Kavita and manu parents reaction was a puzzle to me. Did they know about everything. I am hoping to get the answers from the future updates.

Thanks for the update.  :) :)  :) 

 The last update is big but the update contains most of it was imagination of kavita, it disappointed me.

Thanks for your valuable review.

There existed two threats for their relationship to get exposed.

Puja & Aslam and Arun. Specially Puja & Aslam being friends of Manu, other close friends would come to know. Information could travel from person to person. Arun had earlier setback on his advancement on Kavita. He could definitely be a source of information.

I did not elaborate in details considering that  post rappe exposure to their parents were obvious for following reasons.

1.  My ultimate aim is to search for motive of Kavita.

2.  I was interested only to portray the lonely life of Kavita and her mental turmoil.

Definitely, their parents had no prior information about their relationship. Post rapped, Kavita had cut off all communications to either parents. Earlier, she was only keeping either parents informed. Manu's parents lost track of him. His phone was switched off and Kavita was not lifting. Possibly, they contacted office to be informed about his resignation. Obviously, they would contact Kavita's parents. Being alerted, her parents may have visited anxiously and met Arun for being informed. Gathering additional information was not difficult.

With regard to Manu's parents, security officer may have contacted them on missing diary. Even security officer may have contacted Kavita's parents also.

So, propagation of information, I don't think was difficult.

There is no scope for me to explain above in my future chapters and thought it may be appropriate to clarify at this stage. I would be happy to clarify any other doubts, if the same is not addressed in future updates.


Now, question remains, how parents react knowing their children have done grave wrongdoings / mistakes / sins. It's difficult to predict the immediate reactions of parents. I predicted this way. It could very well be different. Nature of emotional outbursts may change with time.



I agree, I have crossed the limit on Kavita's hallucination. It had a purpose which would be clear in future updates. Only, I could make it short!


Thanks.