[manasi]

It seems you cannot handle the crux of the original story - Now you are watering it down to "sweetness" - No cuckolding, no "master" no "hotwife" no humiliation. No derived pleasure from being a emasculated cuckold (as the original author wanted it"

Unnecessary Characters like Dr Preethi.

I am sorry, the reason original story captured people attention is because "It is against the norm" it is simple (no unnecessary interaction with external characters) if any thing they are to establish for the stories sake (Neighbor boy, the store owner, the couple (aslam and pooja)

Where is threesome with Gowri, Prem and Kavitha --

I am sorry -- it seems the heat that original author produced cannot be sustained by you

@ kittepo

I understands the reason for your dis-satisfaction. It is absolutely all right.

In the very beginning, I mentioned to search for motive of Kavita. Quite possible, I have made serious judgmental errors. My hypothesis would be totally clear only at chapter 35. We all can sit down and find out character aberration from the original.

For the time being I am presenting a few incidents for you to justify Kavita's behaviour.

1.   Prem fucked Kavi on 11th day of arrival. Prem continued fucking Kavi. Manu was forced in sissy dressing

2.   Kavi shifted to Prem on 33rd day. They started living as husband-wife. Manu was lleft for dressing as per his choice.

    Manu stopped interacting with Kavi

3.    53rd day Gowri made 1st visit. Kavi behaved like house wife shifting back to Manu without leaving any trace. She took Manu for outing

4.   60 th day Gowri visited 2nd time. Manu was forced in sissy dressing again. Kavi displayed Manu as cuckold. Kavi dressed as slut and engaged at threesome. They went for outing leaving Manu behind.

5.    74 th day Gowri made 4th visit. Kavi back into housewife dress

Can you present a hypothesis justifying Kavi character connecting all the above scenes? Specially justifying 3rd and 4th scene.

I will eagerly wait for your hypothesis.