Adultery Neighbour Co-worker

[Armaan.K]

Good. But I would have liked it more if it didn't happen so early. I would have loved if she eventually went back to her house and then inviting him to her place. Maybe I little more game, a little more frustration, a little more uncertainty, a little more affection, etc, would have lifted the story to another level. Anyways I don't know how the writer is planning his story forward.
I enjoyed how the inner battle of protagonist while dealing with a helpless girl was narrated. Looking forward.

Thank you for the tip man. I have left a lot of stories in middle, either unsure about how to progress or due to lack of time.


This is first story that I will actually complete. I want to write stories involving "Loveable Idiot" with external mean character as main male character.