Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute
(13-10-2020, 04:44 PM)kittepo Wrote: Manasi, you are probably starting to go into the rabbit hole like other authors who tried to finish this story. All 26th chapters were told from only one persons view -- that is why this story was so captivating. We don't know the motives of any other characters other than what the author/Manu imagined to be. Hope you can correct yourself

My tribute is more to unearth other characters and their motives rather than Manu. I had written the last chapter first. I could not find a better option to arrive at the anti-climax other than switching over to Kavita POV. May be round way approach could have been better. Excuse me for my lack of imagination and experience.

Rabbit hole, yes. You readers are best judge. I am marching ahead against time for year end finish. I look forward for real assessment on finish of this tribute.

Please continue reading the original story along with this tribute.
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RE: The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute - by manasi - 17-10-2020, 12:23 PM
33.1 - by manasi - 23-11-2020, 07:01 AM
33.2 - by manasi - 25-11-2020, 06:22 AM
33.3 revised 26-11-2020 - by manasi - 27-11-2020, 11:13 AM
33.4 final - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:26 AM
after chap 33 - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:46 AM
RE: after chap 33 - by kamdev99008 - 29-11-2020, 10:28 AM
34.1 - by manasi - 08-12-2020, 09:32 PM
34.2 - by manasi - 09-12-2020, 09:36 PM
34.3 - by manasi - 10-12-2020, 10:03 PM
34.4 - by manasi - 11-12-2020, 08:30 PM
34.5 - by manasi - 12-12-2020, 09:45 PM
RE: 34.5 - by kamdev99008 - 13-12-2020, 01:42 AM
34.6 - by manasi - 14-12-2020, 09:46 AM
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34.8 - by manasi - 17-12-2020, 09:50 AM
34.9 - by manasi - 18-12-2020, 06:48 AM
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