Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute

[manasi]

Great..... Great efforts to connect this sequal with original past scenario......
Your presentation of this update is superb....
My only suggestion is to make manu more alive.... Pregnancy is only a wakeup call.... All other incidents remembered by manu in this episode, are also have an importance when redefining kavita and manu's marital relationship (if any?)

Prem never have a major participation... He done everything for kavita...  On her clear instructions and involvement

Keep it up
Waiting eagerly for next

Sir,

I will add 100 odd pages to the original of 300+ pages. I may not spend much time with Manu.
Thank you for your inspiration.