Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute

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I liked manasi's way of thinking. Manasi does not want to change characters or character behavior bechause original writer already explained character explicitly.

My suggestion is to, next writer should follow the flow of original writer thinking. Because the way original writer wrote the story, it became famous story in the xossip/ xossipy. Most entertained story in the xossipy. New writer also should think like indiansubmale, so that original story audience get interest in this story.

Few of them tried to extend this story but they distracted from the original theme. When I see any story extended by new writer and new writer change the original theme, then go to another way, the whole story got messed up.

I think if a writer wants to continue a famous story, new writer thinking style should be same with original writer thinking style.  Then the story becomes full of hot and entertainment

I don't think this sequel will go that way. The author has clearly stated at the beginning 5here won't be any more humiliation or sex. If the sissy cuckold angle comes then there will be extreme humiliation which is unexpected. Probably this sequel will be a nonerotic conclusion where manu will get justice.