Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute
Great..... Great efforts to connect this sequal with original past scenario......
Your presentation of this update is superb....
My only suggestion is to make manu more alive.... Pregnancy is only a wakeup call.... All other incidents remembered by manu in this episode, are also have an importance when redefining kavita and manu's marital relationship (if any?)

Prem never have a major participation... He done everything for kavita... On her clear instructions and involvement

Keep it up
Waiting eagerly for next
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RE: The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute - by kamdev99008 - 03-10-2020, 07:07 PM
33.1 - by manasi - 23-11-2020, 07:01 AM
33.2 - by manasi - 25-11-2020, 06:22 AM
33.3 revised 26-11-2020 - by manasi - 27-11-2020, 11:13 AM
33.4 final - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:26 AM
after chap 33 - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:46 AM
RE: after chap 33 - by kamdev99008 - 29-11-2020, 10:28 AM
34.1 - by manasi - 08-12-2020, 09:32 PM
34.2 - by manasi - 09-12-2020, 09:36 PM
34.3 - by manasi - 10-12-2020, 10:03 PM
34.4 - by manasi - 11-12-2020, 08:30 PM
34.5 - by manasi - 12-12-2020, 09:45 PM
RE: 34.5 - by kamdev99008 - 13-12-2020, 01:42 AM
34.6 - by manasi - 14-12-2020, 09:46 AM
34.7 - by manasi - 15-12-2020, 07:21 PM
34.8 - by manasi - 17-12-2020, 09:50 AM
34.9 - by manasi - 18-12-2020, 06:48 AM
35.1 - by manasi - 26-12-2020, 06:57 PM
35.2 - by manasi - 30-12-2020, 09:09 AM



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