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This story was written many years back, Indian readers weren't familiar with the words cuckold or wimp back then, that's why the author avoided the use of those words, as he might have thought that readers won't understand them or maybe he himself didn't understand it as we Indians generally have limited vocabulary strength. other writers tried to end the story their way, Mansi will do it her way and doesn't matter whether she turns it into an erotic thriller with manu getting his revenge it will always be a one-sided ending like the other one totally opposite to the flavor of this kind of story and then some other writer will again start a sequel. This type of erotica, though a complete fiction never turns the husband revengeful and always ends with him accepting it and often fathering the children born from this illicit relationship. As I wrote in my previous post that this kind of erotic works was probably created by black people to humiliate whites so in the west, these stories mostly end with the bull winning and the defeated hubby accepting. The original author was smart since it was a copy of western stories he stayed away from ending it or maybe he lost interest (as I stated in my previous post),   whatever the reason was it was just a time pass for him with zero percent reality. These are not that kind of stories that end up in revenge on wife or bull or a divorce or wife coming back to husband or husband moving on after avenging his humiliation and the kind of ending these type of stories usually have ( acceptance of the defeated husband) won't be appreciated by readers. One writer in the Bengali section wrote a similar kind of story ( though the plot was entirely different) but he was smart enough to shift the plot to the UK where a big dark muscular gangster took away an extraordinarily beautiful Bengali wife from her husband. It ended with the conservative wife turning into a sex addict slut and the husband accepting it and agreeing to raise the bastard baby born and the gangster planning to use the wife as a high-class escort for his clients. Most readers rejected it with some even abusing the writer, but he stated that it is a cuckold story and it will end this way.
Since it is a total fiction it is always difficult for the writer to give the right conclusion and also for the readers to digest it. This type of erotica never originated India, it is not an Indian creation so Indians do not have the maturity to absorb this.    That's why I suggested not to waste time behind this fake story and instead create something original.