Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute

[manasi]

Hi Manasi
I happened to read the story (the original and later the 2 developed ones)
I am waiting eagerly how you are going ahead with your version. 
Anyway I like your decent descriptions, views and the "2 sentences of your description where I changed the colour" is the most fitting one, even I also had enough of Manu's humiliation.
But in my view it is also one of the reasons that the story got so many followers, critics and so on as most are empathizing with Manu to some extent and made the story a success. Even someone openly admitted as his also the similar case and he accepted his wife's domination blaw..blaw..
All the best, try to start a bit early if possible.

I could not follow your "2 sentences of your description where I changed the colour". There are something missing. If possible, kindly clarify. I dont visit the forum regularly and must have missed some important points.

@Man4u90036

I do remember both the incidents and they will be addressed.

breville1 was good in expression and devlepment of the story. his logical conclusion was fantastic. However, I find him shying away explaining the motive of Kavita. Though this may be attributable, to some extent, to amethyst1982. Unfortunately, breville1 continued from from the reins of amethyst1982.

Thank you all for participation.