20-07-2020, 11:11 PM
Beeville look good as a Seperate part, but it miissed the continuity that what might have happened after the evening of the said 2 weeks where she appeared with navel ring
These 2 incidents..
1. Immediate fuck after the AC, she did not stop him
2. When manu called gauri again, prem beating him in front of kavitha, she had sex to cool him and then when she returned to manu he spit on her.... following Friday she teased him and made him stand in women's clothes in front of gauri too without prior announcement, looks like to ashame him for that spit...
Surely the following situation would have been worse, the author stopped at a point where manu was still on his own terms and wants to reconcile without succumbing.
If not dor the continuity, Beeville looks good without leaving any void to point out.
Hope you start with that navel ring drama...
These 2 incidents..
1. Immediate fuck after the AC, she did not stop him
2. When manu called gauri again, prem beating him in front of kavitha, she had sex to cool him and then when she returned to manu he spit on her.... following Friday she teased him and made him stand in women's clothes in front of gauri too without prior announcement, looks like to ashame him for that spit...
Surely the following situation would have been worse, the author stopped at a point where manu was still on his own terms and wants to reconcile without succumbing.
If not dor the continuity, Beeville looks good without leaving any void to point out.
Hope you start with that navel ring drama...