Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute
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Real reason the story got attention of all is because of the complex nature of each characters. Each character are colorful in their nature. Hopefully you will continue with that complexity rather than making it black and white. where all failed in continuing the story is to make it black and white. Hope you understand what I mean.
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RE: The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute - by kittepo - 20-07-2020, 06:05 PM
33.1 - by manasi - 23-11-2020, 07:01 AM
33.2 - by manasi - 25-11-2020, 06:22 AM
33.3 revised 26-11-2020 - by manasi - 27-11-2020, 11:13 AM
33.4 final - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:26 AM
after chap 33 - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:46 AM
RE: after chap 33 - by kamdev99008 - 29-11-2020, 10:28 AM
34.1 - by manasi - 08-12-2020, 09:32 PM
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RE: 34.5 - by kamdev99008 - 13-12-2020, 01:42 AM
34.6 - by manasi - 14-12-2020, 09:46 AM
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