06-07-2020, 09:50 PM
Hello Writer,
Look, don't get me wrong and also it's not that am ain't appreciating your hard work; but to be frank and honest on a personal level, some scenes in this story are really too obscene and insensitive. Especially, having daadi maa in coma and dadaji and bahu indulged in sex in front of her, etc. etc.
Some moral; sensitive boundaries should be maintained.
That's all.
Other than that, the story and your writing is super. Keep going.
1) Fucked My Big Titty Aunty
2) Mom - The Bitch!
3) नदी का रहस्य
Look, don't get me wrong and also it's not that am ain't appreciating your hard work; but to be frank and honest on a personal level, some scenes in this story are really too obscene and insensitive. Especially, having daadi maa in coma and dadaji and bahu indulged in sex in front of her, etc. etc.
Some moral; sensitive boundaries should be maintained.
That's all.
Other than that, the story and your writing is super. Keep going.
1) Fucked My Big Titty Aunty
2) Mom - The Bitch!
3) नदी का रहस्य
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