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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)
Update 65

rahul sukanya ko shantana dete hue bolta hai
rahul : tum dukhi mat ho sukanya koi na koi rasta me awasya nikal luga

aise hii sab bhojan karte hai or rahul bahar so jata hai ek dari bicha kar or dono maa beti ander kamre me so jati hai .

Ab aaagge

Raat me bahar ek khatiya bichakar so raha hota hai
tabi aadhi raat ke samay ko rahul ke pass ata hai 
or rahul ke mathe ko chumkar bolta hai 

shaks : rahul mujhe vishwas tha ki tum mayavi lok jarur aaoge 
mein ne tumara mayavi lok me pata nahi kitni sadiyo se intzaar Kiya hai 

shaks ( rahul ke chehre ko hath me lekar ) : mujhe visvaas tha ki tumara punar janam jaroor hoga yeh mayavilok ki dharti sukhi dharti  aaj tumare dubara ane se khil utegi 

shaks ( rahul ka vo manmohak pyara sa chehre dekhte hue us shaks ke asu aa jate hai ) : rahul kitne sadiyo se mein tume dubara dekhne ke kiye tarasi hu 
magar rahul yeh ek mayavi lok hai yaha har kuch maya hai jisko tume shamajh na hoga mujhe pura visvaas hai ki tum jo Rohan or Sunaina ke baare me janne yaha aae ho vo tum jaan paoge 

or dubara se vo shaks rahul ke chehre par ek kiss karke gayab ho jata hai 

tabi rahul ki aakh khul jati hai.

rahul chora taraf dekhne lagta hai magar rahul ko koi dekhai nahi deta

rahul ( mann me ) : khon tha yaha kya koi mujh se baat kar raha tha abhi kya koi mujhe janta hai yaha 

rahul man me sochte hue  :  aae nahi mera koi vegan hoga 

fir rahul ko apna chehra thoda gila lagta hai 
Rahul ( mann me hairani se  ) : yeh mera chehra gila kese ho gaya kya kisi ne mujhe kiss kiya hai 

yeh sab sochte hue rahul dubara neend ki aaghos mein chala jata hai 

subha rahul ki awaaz ek surilee awaaz se khulti hai 
jo ek madur aawaaz me bhagwan Shiv ki puja kar rahi hoti hai yeh or koi nahi sukanya thi jo mahadev ki puja kar rahi thi
Sukanya ke ghar ke bagal me hii ek mandir tha yaha sukanya hamesha mahadev ki puja karti thi magar rahul ka pata nahi kya mann hua

rahul bhi jaldi se naha donkar tyaar hota hai  or us mandir ki taraf chal drta hai 
jaise hii rahul mandir me apna per rakhta hai vaise hii anek ko ghantiya mandir ki bazane lagti hai jisse puja karte huee mandir ke pujari bhi hairan hojate hai sath sukanya jo mahadev ki puja kar rahi thi uski puje se man hatkar rahul ki taraf chala jata hai.

Jo bhi logh mandir mein puja kar rahe the aise ghantiya bajne se jab hairan ho jate hai 
jabki rahul bhi hairan tha ki yeh sab kya ho raha hai 

jaise hii rahul mandir ki seedi chadne lagta hai vaise vaise mandir ke Dipak me jalne lagte hai or vaha ke Dipak ka ujala us mandir ki sundarta ko or bada deta hai vo mandir aise chamakne lagta hai jaise koi divya prakash chamak raha ho 
yeh divya prakash door door tak chamak raha tha 

jaise hii rahul sab seedi Chad jata hai vaise vaha ka pujari rahul ke pass akar rahul se bolta hai 

pujari : tum khon ho putra 

rahul pehle pujari ko pranam karta hai or fir unka ashirvaad lekar bolta hai 

rahul : pujari jii mera naam rahul hai or mein ne yaha se surilee awaz suno to me yaha a gaya 

pujari pehle rahul ko dhyaan se dekhta hai fir bolta hai 

pujari ( rahul ko ghoorte hue ) : mein ne pahle to tume yaha nahi dekha or tumare pehnabe de aisa lagta hai ki tum mayavi lok ke nahi ho

tabi piche se sukanya aati hai rahul ke is mandir me kadam rakhne se sukanya ke bhi chehre ka Tezz bohot jyada bad gaya tha 
sukanya pujari se bolti 

sukanya : pujari baba yeh is lok se nahi dharti lok se aya hai 
Jo hume dristi ke atyachar se mukt kar bana chahata hai 

pujari rahul ko goor kar : yeh ek manushye hai 

sukanya : ha pujari baba hai to yeh ek manushya 

pujari : to tum dharti lok se mayavilok kese aa gae kya tum bhi mayavi vidhya jante ho 

rahul Sheetal mann se : nahi pujari jii mein koi mayavi vidhya nahi janta or fir rahul pujari ko puri baat bata deta hai jis ko sunkar pujari bhi hairan ho jate hai ( bas yeh nahi batata ki usko mata parvati ne yaha bheza hai kiu mata parvati ne rahul ko is bare me batane se mana kiya tha ) 

pujari : to tum Rohan or Sunaina ke baare mein yaha yaha janne aae ho 
or isse iksha ( desire ) ne tume yaha bhez diya 

pujari : vaise khon shaks tha jisne tume yaha bheza yaha ana kisi shadaran shaks ke liye mana hai 

rahul sehazta se bolta hai : pujari jii mein yeh to nahi janta ki mujhe kis ne yaha bheza hai. 
or maya se to mera door door tak ka nata nahi hai or mein yaha ke baare mein bhi kuch nahi janta 

pujari : putra tum yaha ke baare mein nahi jante fir bhi yaha aa gae or dristi jaise shaktishali mayavi ko marne ki bhi sochi hai.  Tum pata hai bina maya ke to tume yaha ka ek bacha bhi mar dega 

Rahul : pujari jii marna or marna yeh to upar vale ke hath mein hai hum ya aap yeh nahi bata sakte ki khon kisko mar sakta hai or khon mar sakta hai 

fir rahul ko dhyaan se dekhte hai or fir mushkurate hue bolte hai 

pujari  : achi baat hai tum baate achi kar lete ho putra 
aao yaha aarti ho rahi hai tum bhi isme bhag lo or prasad khakar hii yaha se jana 

tabi sukanya bolti hai bade pyaar se  : pujari baba yeh yaha ki rani se milna chahate hai aap to har subha aarti ke baad rani ke pass jakar unko mahadev ka prasad dete hai jo aap kiu na rahul ko bhi sath lejakar unko rani se milva de 

pujari mushkurakar : kiu nahi beti hum jarur rahul ko rani se milvaege 

is mandir me aakar rahul ka mann bilkul Sheetal ho gaya tha na koi tention na koi vichaar magar or bhi bohot kuch tha is mandir me jo  rahul ka nahi pata tha 

fir dheere dheere mandir kar prakash dheere dheere lupt hone lag jata hai or fir kahi gayab ho jata hai.

or fir rahul aarti me bhag lekar mahadev ki aarti sunta hai or fir prasad khakar pujari ke sath rani ke mehal me chal deta hai 

or vahi sukanya apne ghar chali jati hai .

raste me pujari rahul se bolta hai : putra tume dekhkar pata nahi mujhe aisa lagta hai ki tume mere purvaj jante hai 

rahul : pata nahi pujari ji magar me to is mayavi lok me pehli baar aya hue or ha yeh ho sakta hai ki aapke purvaj dharti lok me aae ho to jarur dekha ho sakta hai magar yeh bhi shambhav nahi kiuki aap hii mujhe itne bade hai to us time mera janam bhi shambhav nahi hoga 
haa punar janam jaror ho sakta hai jab apke purvaaj mujhe jante hoge 

pujari ji mushkurate hue  :  haa yeh ho sakta hai kiuki hamara bhootkal hii hamare vartman ka nirman karta hai or hamare varman kaal se hii bhavisya kaal ka nirman hota hai.

iase hii baat karte hue  rahul mahel pohoch jata hai 

tabi jaise hii rahul aage badte hai ke sanik rahulbko rok deta hai 

senik : aare yaha kaha ghusa jaa raha hai tuze pata nahi ki yeh raaj mehal hai yaha aise hii koi nahi aa sakta 

tabi pujari baba : senik yeh hamare sath hai isko ane do 

fir senik kuch nahi bolta kiuki yeh pujari mandir ki puja karne ke sath sath yaha ke raaj guru bhi the 

senik pujari ko pranam karke rahul ko ander jane dete hai.

Jaise hii pujari ji rani ke kaksh me pohochte hai 
rani unko dekhe hii pranam karti hai.

rani : raaj guru Keshri ko sumitra ka praman 

Keshri :  sada khuss raho putri 

sumitra ki nazar jaise hii rahul par parti hai vaise hii muskurate hue bolti hai 

sumitra : aao rahul yaha ashan ghiren ( baitho ) 

rahul shocked hokar : apko kese pata ki mera naam rahul hai 

hairaan to raaj guru Keshri bhi the magar fir raaj guru Keshri mushkurate hue bolte hai 

keshri : putra rahul yeh ek rani ke sath sath ek rishi kanya bhi hai is bajase unko rajya me khon hai  or khon kis uddeshya se unse milne aya hai vo sab janti hai 

rahul hairani se : aisa hai kya 

or fir rahul or raaj guru Keshri rani sumitra ke kamre me ek ashan par baith jate hai

sumitra halki mushkurahat ke sath : to tum Rohan or Sunaina ki pram katha sunne aae ho 

rahul : jii rani 

sumitra : us khata ko jaane ke liye tume pehle dristi ka vadh karna hoga or jiska bharosa tum pehle hii sukanya ko dila chuke ho 

rahul : magar mein dristi ko kese maar sakta hue  or mein to dristi kya is mayavi lok ke baare mein bhi kisi ko nahi janta 

sumitra ke chehre par ek alag hii Tezz tha yeh ek maya thi ya kuch or iska janna abhi baki tha  :  yeh to tumne pata hona chahiye ki tum dristi ko kese maroge kiuki dristi ko marne ka bharosa tumne sukanya ko dilaya hai or rahi janne ke baat to me is mayavi lok ke baare mein jo bhi pata hai vo mein tume bata deti hue
kiuki jabse mera janam hue hai tabse mein jitna jaan pai yeh mein bata deti hue to dhyaan se suno.


Sumitra : suna hai is lok mein Rohan or unki patni Sunaina ka shashan ya bhi kheh sakte ho ki unka raaz chalta tha jinhone anek rajyo ko milakar is mayavi lok ka nirman kiya tha har kiuki un rajyo par kisi na kisi rajyo par koi na koi dusman hamla kar deta tha or us rajya ki praja or us hamle me bohot nukhsan hota or vo rajya bhi kisi na kisi dushman ke hamle se dheere dheere kamjor ho jata tha or dusman is fyda uthakar us rajya or us Raja se cheen lete 

isse rajao mein bohot khof tha is bajase sab rajao ne ek nirnay kiya ki hum sab rajkumar Rohan ke pass jaege us samay Rohan ek rajkumar the kiuki unka rajya ek bohot Vishal tha or taqatvaar bhi jispar koi dushman hamla karne se pehle hazaar baar sochta tha 
sab raja rohan ke pass jakar apne rajya ki katha sunai 

to Rohan ne bola ( sab rajao se ) : mein tumari koi madad nahi kar sakta kiuki tum hamare rajya se alag ho kiuki agar mei ek rajya ki raksha karuga to tumara koi dushman dusare rajya par hamla kar dega agar dusare rajyako bachauha to koi teesre rajya par humla kar dega 
aise mein tumari madad kis prakar kar pauga 

tabi ek raja ne bola : rajkumar koi to upay hoga  jisse hum sab is hamle se bhi bach jae or humare rajya ki praja bhi is hamle se bachi rahe 

rohan ( mushkurakar ) : iska ek upay hai ki mei saare rajyo ko milakar ek lok ka nirman kary or us par hamare pita ka shashan rahe jisse hamari saari sena is lok ki seema par tehnaat ho gaegi 

Rohan ki yeh baat sunkar sab raja or rani khuss ho gaye 

tabi Rohan ne kaha : magar isme ek shamasya hai 

Tabi ek rani boli : kaise samasya 

Rohan : itni vishal sena or lok ka nirman karne itna ashan nahi hoga kiuki uske liye aap sab ko meri adhinta shuikaar (mere adhin rehna ) karna hogi kiuki itni vishal sena ko raksha ke liye mujhe anek rajyo se kar bhi vasoolna hoga or aap mere pita ki agya ka palan karte hue aap sukhi purvak apna raaj chalate rahege 

thodi khusar phusar karne ke baad saab raja or rani ne haa bol diya 

uske baad kisi bhi dushman ka itna sahas nahi hua ki anek rajyo se bana yeh mayavi lok par koi hamla kar sake 
or is lok ke raja rohan ke pita the jo ban mein Rohan ban gaya 
sab khusi khusi apna rajya chalate or  jis rajya par koi musibat aati to Rohan us rajya ki har tarah se  madad karta or mayavi lok ki janta bhi or anek raja aise maharaaj pakar dhanya ho gaye the 
aise hii din beethne lage or sab hasi khusi reh rahe the 

Fir ek din aise khatna ghati ki jisne sab kuch uzad diya 
pata chala kisi Rohan or Sunaina ek pahari se khud gaye or kisi or pata nahi chala ki vo kaha gaye 
rohan ki mout se sab raja or unki phanta bohot dukhi thi 
tabi

Kisi ne hamare lok par hamla kar diya 
to sab raja or raniyo ne milkar mayavi lok ki raksha karte rahe is aash me ki Rohan or Sunaina vapis jaroor aaege

bina maharaaj ke mayavi lok ki sena kab tak tik har hamle se ladte rahe 

aise hiii kuch saal bit gaye 

tabi ek hamla hua or us hamle me mayavi lok ki halat bohot kharab hone lagi mayavilok ki sena mein hahakar machne laga 
tabi ek ladki ne aakar apni shaktiyo se mayavi lok ki raksha ki 

Or  us ladki ne  aakar sabhi rajao se kaha 

Ladki ( sab rajao se ) : mein tumare maharaaj rohan ki badi bhan dayna hue or rohan kisi karye hetu bahar gaye hai or jab tak rohan nahi aa jata unhone mujhe is mayavi lok ka karya bhar shamalne ko kaha hai 

tabi ek raja bola : hum kese maan le ki tum Rohan ki badi bhan ho  kya pata  hamare maharaaj rohan ki anupasti me yaha hamla karne aaeho 

fir dayna ne rohan ki badi bhan hone ke kuch saboot diye jisse yeh vishwas ho gaya ki yeh dayna rohan ki badi bhan hai 
fir dyna rohan ke absence me  mayavilok ka karya bhar shamalne lagi 

or koi bhi mayavilok par hamla karta dyna us shaks ko jaad sahit khatam kar deti 

kiuki dyna mein na koi daya tha na koi achi bhawna 

is time dyna is lok ki maharani hai or dristi uska sena pati 
Magar dristi ne har rajyo ki ladkiyo par buri nazar rakhni chalu kar di 
or jo ladki usko pasand aati or us ladki se sath balatkaar kar leta ya usse shadi kar leta 
To ek din sabhi raja or rani iski suchana dene maharani dyna ke pass pohoch magar dyna ne ek na suni or kaha. Jabardasti shaadi karna or balatkar karna koi paap nahi hota yeh bolkar sab rajao ko vaha se bhez diya 

rahul dyna ka naam sunkar chock gaya tha 

or uski kahani or shaktiya ka varnan sunkar bhi hairan tha 

rahul ( mann me) : to kya dyna sach me  rohan ki badi bhan hai  prerna ne to kaha tha ki dyna rohan se shadi karna chahati thi 
Ye kaise ho sakta hai agar dyna rohan ki badi bhan hai to vo rohan se shadi kese kar sakti hai 

RAHUL

tabi ek aawaaz aae jisse sunkar rahul fir hairaan ho gaya 
rahul ne piche palat kar dekha 
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