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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)
Update 55

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Prerna : yeh to mujhe nahi pata baba yeh atma mani rohan ( mahakaal ) ne divya ko kiu di.
Magar baba iske charo taraf om naam ke chakra kese bane hai.

Vahi dyna apni kali shaktiyo ko use karne lagti hai 

Ab aagee..........

Kaal : yeh atma mani anek kali shaktiyo se paripurn hai.
Isliye yeh om naam hii is atma mani ko bahar ane se rokh rahe hai.

Prerna : mein kuch shamji nahi baba

Kaal : tume pata hai pure akash ganga ( universe ) mein sirf andhkar hii andhkar phela hua hai.

Prerna : yeh to mujhe pata hai baba

Kaal : to yeh bhi pata hoga ki pure universe ko sirf om naam hii control karta hai.
Aaj tak scientist bhi pata nahi laga paye kiu 
Magar unhone bhi universe me om naam ki awaaz suni hai 
Kiuki yeh itna jyada shaktishali naam hai ki isne pure universe ko or pure andhkar ki kali shaktiyo ko apne ander samet rakha hai.
Is karan saari mahakali shaktiya tantra mantra mahadev or mata parvati se hii utpan hote hai or ant mein hii unni me shama jate hai 
Isliye mahadev ko om naam se pukara jata hai.
Or isse ke karan ek mantra bana om namah shivaye 
Or om naam apne aap mein itna shaktishali hai ki jiska koi ant nahi vahi to anant hai.

Prerna : mujhe jyada kuch shamaj nahi aya baba par itna shamaj aa gaya ki is atma mani ko om naam ke chakra se band kar rakha hai jisse iska koi galat istemal nahi kar sake 
Magar mahakaal ne yeh itni badi shakti divya ko kiu di.

Kaal : yahi to mujhe shamaj nahi aa raha hai.
Ki mahakaal ne yeh shakti divya ko kiu di.

Vahi

Dyna apni shakti se payal par vaar karti hai 
Magar rahul bech mein aa jata hai jisse vo vaar rahul ke sine par lagta hai 
Or vo vaar rahul ke ander shamahit ho jata hai 
Magar rahul ko jyada kuch nahi hota.
Kiu yeh bhi sala nahi pata 
Or yeh dekh ruchi & nisha gusse mein us dyna par tut parti hai.

Ruchi ( nisha se ) : nisha isne hamare bhaiya par vaar karne ki kosis ki hai aaj hum isko nahi chorege tu is dayan ke leg pakar or mein iski chutiya pakarti hue.
Or dono ruchi & nisha dyna ko pakar kar gira deti hai.
 Ruchi ( dyna ke baal pakarte hue ) : tu moti saand jaise lambe balo wali aunty hamare rahul bhaiya ko humse cheen legi.
Ab hum tere yeh baal tuzse cheen lege.

Ruchi ( chillate hue ) : yeh baal mujhe dede saand wali aunty.
Hum isse medikior or pedikior karege.

Dyna ( chillate hue =): nahi  mein yeh baal tuze nahi dugi 
Yeh baal hii to har dayan ka shingar hota hai.
Haar dayan ke aakho ka tar hota hai.
Nahi yeh baal me tum ko nahi dugi.

Or dyna ruchi & nisha par apni shaktiyo se bohot vaar karti hai.
Magar saare vaar ruchi & nisha mein samahit ho jate hai or unko kuch bhi nahi hota or na hii koi farak padta hai.

Yeh dekh dyna ke sath sab logh shocked ho jate hai.

Fir dyna anek kali shaktiyo ka use karti hai magar sab kali shaktiya ruchi & nisha me samahit ho jati hai.

Fir bhi nisha & ruchi ko koi farak nahi padta.

Kaal yeh dekh kar hakka bakka reh jata hai.

Kaal ( prerna se ) : is ruchi & nisha par koi bhi kali shaktiyo ka asar kiu nahi ho raha 

Prerna : baba yeh mera roop hai or mujhe mahadev ne yeh vardan diya tha ki koi bhi kali shaktiyo mera kuch nahi bigar payegi 
Isi karan aaj tak mere bhai aasur raj or kamasur or kutrasur mujhe mar nahi paye.
Or mujhe apne hii kamre mein band kar diya tha.

Prerna ki baat sunkar kaal sab shamaj jata hai.

Kaal : ab mujhe shamaj a gaya ki mahakaal ne yeh atma mani divya ko kiu di thi.

Prerna : kiu baba

Kaal : kiuki divya bhi tumara hii to roop hai jiske karan atma mani ki kali shaktiya chahe jitni kosis kar le par divya ka kuch nahi bigar payegi 
Or na hii divya par un kali shaktiyo ka koi asar hoga.

Or sanam & payal or sonali sunaina ka roop hai jiske pass sachai , prem or samarpan ki bhawna ki shaktiya hai 
Jiske karan kali shaktiya in sab par hawi hona chahati hai.
Kiuki jana sachai or prem hota hai vaha kali shaktiyao ka koi kaam nahi hota.
Or kali shaktiya hamesha un logo par bijaya prapt karna chahati hai jo sonam , payal or sonali ki tarha pavitra or pawan ho.

Isse karan sonam par yeh kali shaktiya kuch time ke liye hawi ho gae thi magar puri tarha se nahi ho pai.
Kiuki sunaina ke pass bhi kuch vardan ko anat pyaar ka sagar hai 
Jiske karan kali shaktiyo ki yeh kosis safal nahi ho paye.
Magar yeh dibba agar sonam ke pass raha to yeh jarur koi na koi rasta doond legi sonam par hawi hone ka 
Isliye hume yeh dibba kisi aise ko dena hoga jo iski raksha or suraksha kar sake or yeh kali shaktiya uspar kabi hawi na ho sake.

Prerna : phele to kabi nahi hua ki vo atma mani sonam par hawi ho sake.

Kaal : vo isliye kiuki vo atma mani activate nahi thi jab or rakshas ke sampark me ane ke baad yeh atma mani activate ho gai hai jo is om naam ke chakra se bahar nikalna chahati hai.
Or apne malikk me shamahit hona chahati hai.
Isse karan is atma mani ne is dyna ko azad kar diya yeh soch kar ki vo dayan atma mani ko azad kar sake is om chakra se.

Magar yeh atma mani har vo prayas karegi jisse vo azad hokar rahul me jald se jald samahit ho sake 

Prerna : fir hum kya kare hum is dibbe ko ruchi & nisha ko dede.

Kaal : nahi yeh bohot natkhat or sehtan hai yeh abhi itni badi shakti ki jimmadaari utane ke kabil nahi hai.

Prerna : sonia kesi rahegi yeh bhi to mera hi roop hai 

Kaal : yeh abhi in sab shaktiyo se anjan hai 
Isliye vo shaktiya sonia ko bewakoof bana kar azar ho sakti hai.
Isliye kisi shamjdaar ko hii yeh shaktiyo shamal kar rakhni hogi 
Jab tak rahul shaksham nahi ho jata is shakti ko apne ander shamahit karne ke liye.
Kiuki iski aawaz bhi abhi rahul ko itna pareshan kar rahi hai.
Iska matlab yehi hai ki abhi rahul is shakti ke liye shaksham nahi hai.
Or yeh dibba payal & sonali or sonam koi bhi nahi rakh sakta.
Prerna : kya hum yeh dibba seema aunty ya rani aunty ko de sakye hai
Jo shamajdaar bhi hai.

Kaal : kaise baat kar rahi jo prerna tumne dekha nahi kya yeh logj is shakti ko sparsh bhi nahi kar sakte.

Prerna : fir to bas divya hii bachi hai is dibbe ko shamalne ke liye magar vo to coma me hai.

Kaal : magar hum is dibbe ko divya ke ander surakshit to rakh hii sakte hai 

Prerna : vo kaise baba


Kaal : vo mein tume baad mein batauga.

Vahi 

Dyna ( mann me ) : ab mujhe is dibbe ko hii prapt karke koi naya rasta doond na hoga.

Or dyna us dibbe ki taraf jane lagti hai.

Kaal ( ruchi & nisha se ) : us dyna ko is dibbe ke pass bhi mat jane dena ruchi & nisha

Nisha dyna ka per ( leg ) chorkar pata pat dyna ke gaal par thappad ki barsat kar deti hai.

Nisha ( gusse me ) : tu nahi sudarne wali kutte ki doom kabi seedhi nahi hoti.
Fir us dibbe ke pass jana chahati hai.
Matlab to dubara us dibbe ke jariye mere bhai ko marna chahati hai.

Ruchi (gusse me ) : is dayan ko to hum aaj chullu bhar pani me duba dege.

Nisha : nahi ruchi aaj mein isko nahi chorne wali bohot dino se mere hand par ghujli ho rani hai.

Nisha ( ruchi se ) : ruchi tu iske baal kaske pakar kar rakhiyo mein abhi aai.

Ruchi : nisha tu kaha ja rahi hai.

Nisha : ruchi bas me abhi aae.

Dyna ( ruchi se ) : mujhe chor de ruchi
Mein tuze sabse shaktishali  bana dugi.

Ruchi is baat par hasne lagti hai.

Ruchi ( haste hue ) : tu mujhse to jeet nahi pa rahi hai or tu mujhe sabse shaktishali banaegi.

Sharam kar dyna sharam kar 

Vahi 
Nisha bohot saare mote dande lekar aa jati hai.

Nisha ( sonali se ) : didi yeh lo danda or uda dalo is dayan ki khopri.

Nisha fir payal se 

Nisha : payal didi kapre ki tarha dho dalo is dayan ko

Nisha fir sonam or sonia se

Nisha ( dono se ) : aaj hum isko batayege ki humne kitni shakti hai 
Aaj is dayan ko kali mata yaad dila dege.

Or sab ek ek mota danda le leti hai.

Fir nisha ( rahul se ) : bhaiya agar aap bhi behti ganga mein hath dona chahate ho to yeh lo dand phor do dusman ka sir 

Vahi sab dyna ke samne danda lekar has rahi hoti hai

Or dyna ko to sab yamraj ki tarha haste hue dikai de rahe the.

Dyna ( mann me ) : bhagle dayan nahi to yeh tuze bina masale ke kha jaege.

Or dyna vaha se bhagne ki kosis karti hai.

Tabi

Ruchi dyna ko pakarte hue 

Ruchi ( dyna se ) : kaha bhag rahi ho medam abhi to party shuru hue hai.

Dyna ( darte hue ) : nahi mujhe nahi karni koi party mujhe yaha se jana hai.

Or iske age dyna kuch bol pati 
Sab danda lekar dyna par tut parte hai 
Or jamkar dhulai kar dete hai.

Nisha dyna ka collar apni taraf kheechte hue

Nisha ( darawni awaaz me ) : hamara bhai hamara pyaar hai.

Sab sister chokte hue 

Sonali : kya kaha tune nisha 

Nisha : are didi bhai wala pyaar 

Dubara nisha bohot darawani awaz me dyna se

Nisha : hamara bhai hamara pyaar hai or hum apne bhai ke rakhwali

Nisha rahul ko apni taraf kheechte hue 

Nisha ( dyna se ) : dubara dekhle mere pyare bhai ko agar tune dubara yaha nazar dali to mein teri chutiya kaat lugi saand jaise aunty.

Ruchi ( mann me ) : yeh nisha akele akele dailog mar rahi hai.
Mujhe bhi ek dailog marna hoga.

Ruchi bhi dyna ko apni taraf kheecte hue 

Ruchi ( dyna se apni hii english me ) : you dirty buffalo 
My brother is my lover 
Don't come again 
Nahi to dubara tuze maar maar kar tera muh suza dugi.

Fir kya sab 
Rahul ki sister ko dailog marne ka josh chad jata hai sab dyna ki collar kheech kheech kar apni hii language mein dyna ko basan dene lagti hai.

Ab last mein bas rahul hii bach jata hai.

Sab rahul ko dekhne lagti hai.

Rahul ( sab se ) : ab mein kya dailog maru

Sonali ( rahul se ) : kuch bhi maar le betu.

Rahul jaise hii dyna ki collor kheechta hai us bichari dyna ki collar hii fat jati hai 
Or rahul ke hath mein aa jati hai.

Rahul ( sonali se ) : sona didu ab is bichari ki collar bhi fat gai hai isko chor dete hai 
Or sab haa mein garden hela deti hai.

Or dyna vaha se jane lagti hai 

Dyna ( jate hue behad gusse me  ) : mein is bejati ko yaad rakhugi or tum sab ko dekh lugi 
Abhi mein me jaa rahi hu par jaldi hii vapas augi.

Tabi rahul ko pata nahi kya josh chadta hai 

Rahul ( dyna se gusse me ) : abhi fadi hai mein ne teri collar bad mein phad duga tuzko 
Dubara yaha dikai mat dena jaldi se 9 do 11 hokar yaha se kheesko


Sab rahul ki sister tezz tezz hasne lagti hai.

Or nisha & ruchi to has has kar lot pot ho jati hai.

Or dyna vaha se gusse me chali jati hai.

Nisha & ruchi ( behad hasi ke sath ) : waah waah waah hamare bhaiya bhi shayari kar lete hai.

Rahul : acha to tume lag raha tha ki mujhe shayari nahi aati 
Abhi rukh tum dono ko abhi batata hue.

Or rahul nisha & ruchi ko pakar kar gudgudi karne lagta hai.

Nisha & ruchi ( bohot haste hue ) : nahi bhaiya ab hasa nahi jata 
Ab stomuch dard ho raha hai.

Tab jakar rahul dono ko chorta hai.

Sonali ( prerna se ) : ab is dibbe ka kya karna hai.

Kaal ( sonali se ) : vo sab hum dekh lege tum sab ab apne ghar jao
Tumari mummy or bua pareshan ho rahi hogi.

Or sab haa mein garden hila deti hai.

Or jane lagti hai sonam or sonam ki mummy rani se milkar

Tabi
Seema vaha achanak se aa jati hai.

Or rahul ko dekhte hii apne gale laga leti hai.

Rahul ( seema se ) : pata hai seema maa jab tak mein apko ek baar dekh nahi leta mujhe kuch acha nahi lagta 
Itne kaam time me apse ek dil kar rista jud gaya hai.

Seema ( rahul se ) : mujhe bhi acha nahi lagta tere bina

Fir aise hii thodi pyaar bhari baat hoti hai rehti hai or fir rahul or uski sister sonam ke ghar se nikal jate hai.
Apne ghar ki taraf

Or fir prerna ( sonam se ) : sonam tume is dibba ko divya ke pass le jana hoga or is dibbe ko divya ke ander hi abhi surakshit rakhna hoga 

Sonam : par kese 

Kaal : sonam vo mein tume vahi bata duga

Sonam ( rani or seema se ) : maa mein bas abhi aae

Or sonam nikal jati hai us dibbe ko uttakar divya ke taraf.

Vahi 
Jo rahul ka dusara part tha vo divide hokar achanak se gayab ho gaya tha.
Vo desh 2 pohoch jata hai 
Or vaha ka katle aam dekhkar achambit ho jata hai 

( Yeh rahul ka dusara part hai bhai confuse mat hona  jo achanak se divide ho gaya tha rahul se )

Rahul ( mann me ) : me yaha kese pohocha or yeh ho kya raha hai yaha

Tabi 
Rahul ko sunaina ki dard bhari cheekh sunai deti hai or rahul ke ander jo mahakaal ki tasveer the vo jagrit hone lagti hai 
Or rahul ka pura sarir mahakaal me parivartit hone lagta hai 

Jis ke bajase rahul ko bohot dard ka samna karna padta hai.

Rahul dard se chillate hue 

Rahul ( dard se ) : yeh kya ho raha hai mere sath aaaahhh

Or rahul ka pura sarir blank ho jata hai 
Or rahul ko yeh pata nahi tha  ki yeh sab kiu or kese ho raha hai 

Or rahul dard ke karan apne ghutno ke bal baith jata hai.

Or rahul ka pura sarir mahakaal me parivartit ho jata hai 
Ab rahul kya kar raha hai kya nahi yeh rahul ko kuch bhi pata nahi hota.

Magar rohan ko pata tha ki rahul itni badi shakti prapt karne ke liye shaksham nahi hai 
Agar rahul abhi mahakaal me parivartit hua to uska sarir us maha shakti ko seh nahi payega or nast ho jaega 

Magar desh 2 ko bhi bachana jaruri tha 
Jo sirf rohan rahul ke jariye kar sakta tha kiuki rahul ki hii atma to rohan thi.
Vo sab kuch janti thi.

Magar rahul ko uska koi bhi abhas nahi tha.

Or rohan rahul ke sarir ko control karta hai 

Fir rohan apne mann me kalindi ko yaad karta hai.

Or kalindi yaha aa jata hai ( kalindi rajlok ka sena pati )
1.Life ke full maze 
2.Pyar ki had paar
3.Pyaarki ekanokhi kahani
                                                   
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