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Adultery Main , meri family aur mera gaon --by 123fuckeravi
Mai likhu kya ye story SB me ha bola to mai new thread chalu krti hu
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(08-10-2019, 09:19 AM)monikat Wrote: Mai likhu kya ye story SB me ha bola to mai new thread chalu krti hu

please do
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(08-10-2019, 11:09 AM)ShaifBD Wrote: please do

10 -15 comments and do bad mai new thread chalu kr dungi
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(08-10-2019, 11:59 AM)monikat Wrote: 10 -15 comments and do bad mai new thread chalu kr dungi

Plz dear start.. welcome
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#Monikat ji please aap jarur likhe kyoki ye kahani ki jaisi koi kahani hi nhi mili mujhe
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if u can reach expectation of this story u can continue write
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Maine aulrady dusra thread chalu kr diya hai
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Please continue writing
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Ab samajh mein aayaa iss story ko itne saare updates kyu hua hain... ek ek pal ko badi dhyaan se dil lagake likha hain iss writer ne... aisa likhnaa koi aasaan kaam nahi hain. Agar kisi ko iss story ko continue karna hain tho pehle usko ek yaa do baar nahi 300-400 baar sochna chahiye. Kyun ki... iss story ko jaldi jalidi nahi balki dheere dheere likhna hain. Warna sab pe bahut bhaari pad jaayega.
Ye sab mein iss story mein sirf aakhri 2 updates (avi aur bhgwaan ke beech sapne wala updates) hi padhke bataa raha hun.
Phir poora updates padhne waale doston ka feelings bhi ek baar sochna.(Please forgive for my hinglish if you find any mistakes in it. ;))
Okay guys...
Really, this story got great novelty in it. Please anyone who are willing to continue this, need that in them as well. Poora ka Poora. Otherwise, you are spoiling it for sure. MIND IT!

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Super story some body please continue
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Pl update
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Avi Bhai apki story bohot achhi hai aur abhi to bahut kuch baki hai story mein. So please story ko continue kijiye.
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Waiting for Avi bhai
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Ye story to xossip pe chal rahi thi Avi bhai ki aur eske 5 part complete ho gye the and part 6 running tha and 1300 + updates waha padh chuke hai kya xossip pe kaha se band hui usse aage bhi badegi ye story ka yaha copy paste ho raha tha .????
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Bhai bilkul begining se start ki hai story avi bhai
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Maine tumhari story padhi hai xossip pe or maine wha se story chodi thi jaha badi chachi avi ko komal ke sath pakad leti hai bhai jaldi jaldi updatr do
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Avi Bhai is not available in this forum...
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Still waiting ... from xossip to till now
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This story has been continued by: Sarkaar333

on this forum.

The link is given below:

https://xossipy.com/thread-35387.html
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Avi ki wait chod do uski death ho chuki hai
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