[Karthick]

update elam mass ah iruku ji...but characters increase agite irukumpodhu mindla elarayum picture pana mudiyala...
bhavani epdi iruppa..madhulai epdi irupa..girija epdi irupa..idhai ellam apo apo some photos pota inum kicka irukum

[Karthick]

Just my imagination

Sneha -> Girija
Tanya -> Bhavani
Poorna -> Madhulai

[AjitKumar]

Mohan is now too confused about his decision to send bavani for ladies tour. Its too late now as already enough damage in his life has been done. Good update. looking for more.

[shivakrishna123]

shufff ipo yena bhavani kovathula shyam kuda paduka pora aavan cock vikram aa vida perusa iuka poguthu so vikram aa vitutu shyam pinadi pundaiya thookitu sutha pora .. ana onu theriyala vikram bhavani aa suthama kadhalikala bhavani ku vikram nu naduvula sex aa thavafra vera onum nadakala ana bhavani vikram oda baby aa vangika ready aaita idhu yena logic nu theriyala .. apparam starting la irundhu na kekara question mohan ya story la iruka nu theriyala chumma feel pana mattum tha avan story la iruka ... author ae ungaluku mohan nu yaraiyavadhu pudikadha adha story la potu ivalo asinga padutharengala ... bhavani vikram matter therinjalum mohan onum pna poradhu ila .. thn sumith ya story la irukanae theriyala .. nenga yenamo sumith yemaradhu therinja ava yena pana poraloo theriala nu periya build up la kuduthenga story poradha patha sumith story ku thevaiyae ila nu thonudhu .. husband charcter ya nu yenaku ipo varaiku theriyala ... ivalo oru looser charcter cheap charcter waste useless charcter aa vera yentha story laium na pathathu ila ..

and finally indha story ku name aval avan purushan nu vachadhuku badhila unmaiyana manaivi oor thevidiya vaga mariya kadhai nu vachu irukalam ... starting la bhavni nala ponu vikram aa paklana ava husband ku dhrogam ae pana kmata nu sonenga ana ipo ava innoruthan kooda paduka pora ... shuff story la irundha interest aa pochu ji... kannetheevu mathiri innum yevlo nalaiku bhavani vikram relationship aa yaruku theriyama izhuthae poga porenga

[shivakrishna123]

Mohan is now too confused about his decision to send bavani for ladies tour. Its too late now as already enough damage in his life has been done. Good update. looking for more.

mohan character story la irukardhae asinga padavum yemaravum avamana padavum tha ji .. vena parunga last aa bhavani vikram kooda poga pora mohan avinash oda thaniya nika pora idha story end

[FMFM9]

mohan character story la irukardhae asinga padavum yemaravum avamana padavum tha ji .. vena parunga last aa bhavani vikram kooda poga pora mohan avinash oda thaniya nika pora idha story end

Ila. Husband is always thiyagi in hia story. Same thing here also

[Muthiah Sivaraman]

super update. please continue bro

[Ahimsai Arasan]

உங்கள் எழுத்து நடை உண்மையிலேயே வித்தியாசமாகவும் வியக்கும்படியும் இருக்கு. கதையை அருமையாக கொண்டு போறீங்க. வாழ்த்துக்கள்.

[Kartikjessie]

மற்ற ஆண்களை ஏறெடுத்து பார்க்காமல் தன்னுடன் மட்டும் உறவு வைத்து கொள்வதால் தான் பவனி தன்னுடைய குழந்தையை சுமக்க வேண்டும் என்று விரும்பினான் விக்ரம். இப்போ பவனி ஷாமுடன் நெருக்கமாக இருப்பதை கண்டால் என்ன செய்வான்.

[Santhosh Stanley]

Rocking man. Continue

[manigopal]

Just got a new laptop. Earlier one a bit old and could not be salvaged. Lost the back up of the story in the old laptop. Will only be able to see what has been written earlier in the thread in this site. Will be starting to write the next update from today. Pity is I had kept in the old laptop some other partly written stories which I had not decided to continue or not in the future. Now all that is lost.

good to start a #blog and keep posting all your backups

[Sakshi Priyan]

Interesting twist. Finally, Bavani has let shyam touch her. Lover, Husband, Vikram and now Shyam. Can Shyam woo Bavani with his charm and strength. Eager to see the next updates. Please update.

[Ananthukutty]

எந்த பொம்பளையோட கட்டுப்பாடும் அவள் மேல ஒரு ஆணின் கை படாத வரைக்கும் தான். அதுக்கப்புறம் அவள் நிலையில் அவள் இருக்க மாட்டாள். கல்யாண வீட்டில் மொட்டை மாடியில் பவானிக்கு இது தான் நடந்தது. அது வரைக்கும் கட்டுப்பாட்டுடன் இருந்தவள் விக்ரம் தொட்டதும் விழுந்து விட்டாள். இங்கும் அது தான் நடக்குமோ?

[King Kesavan]

please update

[xbiilove]

Any chance of an update today? Wish to know what happened next between shaam and bavani.

[Bala]

Update please

[shagabudeen]

update bro

[game40it]

I have written the next update to a certain extent. Would write more and post it tomorrow. Another distraction is that I am a big fan of Athletics and so I am not missing the Live telecast of the World Athletics Championship in Doha. That takes away a few hours but luckily it's only late at night and has only two more days to go.  ;)

[Nesamanikumar]

I have written the next update to a certain extent. Would write more and post it tomorrow. Another distraction is that I am a big fan of Athletics and so I am not missing the Live telecast of the World Athletics Championship in Doha. That takes away a few hours but luckily it's only late at night and has only two more days to go.  ;)

Please enjoy the games that you are passionate about. This story is not important like something for which you are big fan. Personal enjoyment and priorities are more important than anything else. Do not post something in a hurry. After the completion of the games in two days, you take another three days and try to give an update sometime Thursday or Friday next week.  :)

[Prabhas Rasigan]

இப்படி வாரத்துக்கு ரெண்டு சின்ன அப்டேட் கொடுக்காம ரெண்டு வாரத்துக்கு ஒரு முறை திருப்தியாக ஒரு பெரிய அப்டேட் கொடுங்க ப்ரோ, அது போதும். நல்லா டைம் எடுத்து எழுதுங்க.  நீங்க சொன்ன ஒரு மாசம் முடிய போகுது. பவனி டூர் ல இருந்து வந்ததும் கிளைமாக்ஸ் அப்புறம் கதை  முடிஞ்சிடும்   அதனால பொறுமையாக அப்டேட் பண்ணுங்க.  yr): :)