Misc. Erotica The Hunt - (A Wife's Adultery Love Story)

[Devilmaycry]

You are awesome

Thanks.

[Devilmaycry]

Damn bro what a writing what a naration . This story is turning out to be magnificient.  I have to  say you i cummed thrice reading these episodes damn so lit

:D :D :D

[Devilmaycry]

Never expected three updates in one day. you are AWESOME

Thank you.Their point of views needed to be told at a stretch. I could have stopped at the first update and write the next update a week later. But then rest of two posts would seem like some trickery to create twist about the emotions they felt.

[Devilmaycry]

I wish this saga will never be end....
What an energetic story.
Superb writing n imagination bro.
Keep updating

Thank you.After writingtthe posts I felt really dirty in my mind  :D    :D

[Theflash]

I liked the part where ashish was trying to humiliate rahul
And rahul pretending to be sorry for shilpa's behaviour
And in all these shilpa was getting annoyed, angry.

I love the story because of all the funny parts

[Biosys]

Let me  Know guys which part you guys liked the most in the updates and which part made you bored in the comments. 


1.I read the updates and I liked where Ashish was explaining Shilpa the hunting process. 
2.The ice-cream drop on the breasts were poorly written, cheap one, could have been much better. 
3.Also felt where Ashish explains Shilpa how he guessed her fantasies, the monologues there a bit lengthy and very one sided . Could have been better.

Really appretiate the time you have taken to write a marvelous story. 

I like the part Rahul is taking revenge on Shilpa for her deeds, what she has done to his mother, at the same time making her desperate. I am curious to know if Mahesh bite his own bullet through own son.

Shilpa is not a silly woman, she is a slut in control. She mange both Rahul and Ashish well separately, but together she fumble, could have been better if Shilpa has more space with both in separate.

I felt sometime Ashish is compared to a hulk or superhuman, but it's best to keep him more human with emotions. And believe Ashish is no Saint and he will get his rightful share on Shilpa.

[Dorabooji]

SUPERRRRRRRR STORYYYYYYYYY

[kamdev99008]

Update next dear

Waiting eagerly

[Biral]

Nice!!!!

[xboard1986]

Waiting

[Raja waqas]

Kr do update

[Sakshi Priyan]

Super story. Please continue

[Kunal singh]

A true writer . Great work dude

[Sarran Raj]

Awesome update dude. Good job

[Mottapayyan]

super update. please continue.

[Devilmaycry]

Thank you people for your generous comments, it means a lot. I will try to give a small update within next 2-3 days. It is festive season where I live so it's difficult for me to write the story at this time.Hope you guys and gals will understand.

[xboard1986]

Take ur time bro....
But return with a sexholic updates

[kamdev99008]

Thank you people for your generous comments, it means a lot. I will try to give a small update within next 2-3 days. It is festive season where I live so it's difficult for me to write the story at this time.Hope you guys and gals will understand.

Waiting eagerly dear

[xboard1986]

Waiting dear

[Sarran Raj]

Amazing story. loving each and every line