[Joseph Rayman]

Love this story for your writing

[Antichrist12]

Update was hot bro... But u used to give long updates

[Gopal Ratnam]

Very interesting

[Krish World]

Very nice update

[hottttestt]

Very well written. Rocking update

[Doom]

Excellent Story

[Shriya George]

AWESOME

[Sankamithira]

heartbeat goes up every time shilpa goes to Ashish house

[Biral]

Update it please!!

[olumannan]

updateeeeeeeeeee

[Devilmaycry]

Thank you "raj500265,hottttestt,Antichrist12,Arul Pragasam,Rockket Raja,Joseph Rayman,Gopal Ratnam,Krish World,Doom,Shriya George,Sankamithira,Biral,olumannan" for your comments and inputs and also all those people who are enjoying the story.

I got a feeling that this story is getting rejected by many cause it has elements of incest. Although Rahul is not blood related with Shilpa still there is a stigma  of social-incest (not sure if that's even a correct phrase) as he is her stepson. I didn't want to make it incest story truth to be told.I  just wanted to make things personal for every character, wanted to fill the plot with  high stakes .If I knew this gonna happen, I would have built the plot on adultery theme only. Let me know your views on this matter guys. 

[Biosys]

Buddy, nothing wrong in anything about sex. You are free to pen your ways of writing. Not to be concerned, there are many who like your style.  About incest, that not bad too, there are alot stories in this Xossipy incest as main theme. And don't mind as long you give regular updates. So enjoy your writing..!

[Ananthukutty]

The story is going great. Continue with it. Do not worry about the incest thing. It is part of the story. Everyone understand that.

[Antichrist12]

We'll ur story is a nice one. Already we are waiting for the update. Kindly continue

[Cupidangel]

BDevilmaycryThank you "raj500265,hottttestt,Antichrist12,Arul Pragasam,Rockket Raja,Joseph Rayman,Gopal Ratnam,Krish World,Doom,Shriya George,Sankamithira,Biral,olumannan" for your comments and inputs and also all those people who are enjoying the story.

I got a feeling that this story is getting rejected by many cause it has elements of incest. Although Rahul is not blood related with Shilpa still there is a stigma  of social-incest (not sure if that's even a correct phrase) as he is her stepson. I didn't want to make it incest story truth to be told.I  just wanted to make things personal for every character, wanted to fill the plot with  high stakes .If I knew this gonna happen, I would have built the plot on adultery theme only. Let me know your views on this matter guys. 




Sometimes the story gets boring not bcos of incest but bcos of too much unnecessary details and uninteresting conversations. The plot of the story is excellent and u r a wonderful writer . Pls keep the non sexual parts a bit less descriptive

[Theflash]

Just keep coming

[Hitterhot]

There's nothing going wrong bro.... This story is going good and you can continue this as how you feel the best... Give us a great story... That's all we need

[Theflash]

***what the fuck are you talking about? Asish did absolutely nothing. I did everything and enjoyed every bit of what I did to your bitch, Shilpa.


This line was the best

[kamdev99008]

don't get confused...............

story is developing..... very well.......

go on ..... and update next

[xboard1986]

Wow.. Amazing..
Waiting for next update