A Banana Muffin Saga
It's really long day with events and it's still not over yet... But brothel part tends to be boring if it's redirected now... Can bring bhuriya from somewhere else to story
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(30-08-2019, 11:32 AM)Mande Wrote: Wow! You are making it really erotic and setting up the plot for more fun! Keep rocking with your exquisite writing skills.


Thank you soo muucch!!!
As you rightly pointed; plot has be laid out in such a way that soon when we see activities happening, there will be proper justification on everyone's actions/reactions...

Very...very much appreciated...
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(31-08-2019, 01:46 PM)Bhikhumumbai Wrote: Oh No.... Where Ware You Bring This Story...??? I dident think Rider Appreciate This Idea... The Sluty rich Bitch Used By (  Sp Lower class People) is lso Ok. But In brothel I Think it's Lost Charm of Story.


Hiii...Thank you soo much for this feedback...
Please note, we had initially given the background set up of the main characters...Now, we are dwelling a bit in detail on each of their ulterior motives...We have not fallen to the category of succumbing Tanvi into a characterless person...She is a wife, mother and a career woman...not someone with less intellect to take meaningless actions...kindly be patient for the upcoming chapters to know more...
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(31-08-2019, 04:54 PM)listener098 Wrote: It's really long day with events and it's still not over yet... But brothel part tends to be boring if it's redirected now... Can bring bhuriya from somewhere else to story

Hello...

I am so thankful that you have been following this loooong episodes. And really appreciate your insightful feedback.-Thank you so much!!

Please be informed, we are very much close to round up the major characters to the plot and readers could find answers to most of their requests shortly. Of course, it has been a long day for Tanvi...however, I am sure, you would not be disappointed with what could happen tomorrow and over the next coming days...

Once again, appreciate your feedback...big time!
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Chapter-29

 
 
At the complex
 
Tanvi tried her level best to control her tears and miserable feelings as she reached the watchman who was impatiently waiting for her to return. Regardless her troubles and obnoxious situations at the Basti, Tanvi was unable to interpret why her nipples created such pain and her vagina was swarming from heat globules.
 
“Madamji, I was a bit concerned when you did not returned back earlier. So, I tried to call Dattu!” Rasool smiled and noticed her Dupatta was missing. However, he was more than pleased to get her splendidly wiggling breasts with more accuracy than earlier. His eyes also caught the two sharp points at her chest that amplified his curiosity further.
 
“Why Bhaiyya? You should not have troubled Dattu!” She was horrified at the thin possibility of Dattu and that burly man being acquaintance and both of them discussing about what just happened. Also, a parallel thought passed through her brain if Dattu knew about Sharda’s ‘line-of-work-at-basti’ or not.
 
“No problem Madamji, I think he is drunk and passed out somewhere! He did not pick my call. Hope you saw that Sharda?” Rasool tried his best to continue the conversation to keep the hot woman near to him for a bit longer.
 
“Ooo yes…Thank you soo much Bhaiyya! Sorry it is late, otherwise, I would have offered you a coffee!” Tanvi wanted to escape as hastily as possible. Rasool locked the gate and accompanied Tanvi towards her home by walking alongside her.
 
“No problem Madamji, I was so much worried when you went alone and if you were not returning in next five minutes, I was about to walk over to Basti!” Rasool expressed his concern.
 
“Ooh…Thank you so much Rasool Bhaiyya!” I should not have gone there at this time of the night” She also agreed.
 
“Why Madamji? Anything happened there??” His voice carried more anxiety than before.
 
“Well, nothing specific…but, those people in there…not nice…NOT at all!” Words just blurted out from her lips with some stress
 
“Madamji, that was the exact reason why I was so much worried! A lovely woman like you...In fact, the most good looking woman in this complex walking into that low class Basti at this time of the night would automatically attract unwanted interests! You could have avoided it!” Rasool explained the logic.
 
“Yes Bhaiyya…I agree going to Basti at this time was a wrong decision…But, please…I am not beautiful as you stated! I am just a normal female” Tanvi’s cunt puked a chunk of liquid right the moment she heard Rasool’s appreciative words…But kept her emotions in check.
 
“Madamji…What are you saying? You actually are ‘the’ most beautiful woman here! In fact, everyone wants to be friends with you…have you not noticed it yet? Everyone talks about you only!” Rasool blurted when he got the chance.
 
“Whaaaat??? Bhaiyya, I am a nobody okay…Just living my normal life…If anyone wants to be friends with me, I should know that also right? I cannot go and reach out to every person by myself and request them!” Tanvi blushed heavily and her vagina seeped out more with the knowledge of the fact that by ‘everyone’ Rasool meant all the ‘male population’. She felt better from the two terrifying experiences for the day.
 
“Madamji, all I can say is, it’s not even men, most of the women also talks about you…okay!”
 
“But Bhaiyya, what are these people discussing? I hope nothing bad about me!”
 
“Arrey Madamji, how can one say a bad word about you? No-no…everyone know how nice a person you are, and also how beautiful too…Most of them discuss about how much attention you do to maintain your health and beauty!”
 
“Ooh okay ok, I understand. It’s because I do my running around the garden and people pass comments, right?” They reached the parking lot and her house entrance. Both stood for a moment to complete their dialogue. Tanvi wanted to know more about the topics of discussions about her and Rasool wanted to get sloshed more and more of the hot woman’s body while she stood in close proximity.
 
“Madamji, there are things that I can tell you straight and there are some other things, which I cannot...You know?” He paused and looked into her face as if she could read what he was trying to convey.
 
“Well…You are a good person Rasool Bhaiyya…and I do follow what you are telling me. You know what? Right now, time is so late…And I owe you a coffee now for this favor! So, why don’t you tell me “all the things” about me when we have that coffee?” Tanvi gave one alluring smile to the gleeful looking watchman who just realized he had actually scored a remarkable point with this hot woman. His brain started working on overdrive about how the coffee drinking should go!
 
Tanvi left him and once inside her house’s safety, she let out a long gasp and heaved with relief!
 
Once inside the toilet, she checked her breasts carefully and to her distress filled horror, she found dark red marks and swelling all over the large fair expanse of her two breast meat. The mirror reflected her, the hand and finger imprints of the dirty man all over the entire area of her both breasts where he kneaded and pinched during those few moments of leverage.
 
 
 
Same time at Khurram’s house
 
“Khurramji…were your serious earlier?” Safiya and Khurram were seated on their dining table and were having their dinner. Being alone at home, they had a habit of having late dinners.
 
“About what Begum?” Khurram acted dumb, though he knew very well what his wife meant.
 
“About…You know well what I mean!” Safiya watched her husband’s face intently.
 
“You mean…about not having any more session for the night?” He did not returned her gaze, but his tone was playful.
 
“Session-session-session!!! All that you have in mind recently is about sessions!! Yaaa-alllaah! Help this man!!!” Safiya was indeed a bit stressed out.
 
“Khurramji, I can only tell you one thing…we know very well what happened last time when you went into that mode! And you ensured me and all others got involved into the web! We stopped all that due to the very same reason! So please, let us not restart it all over again…And that too with such a nice family!...Please, let us continue our peaceful life…If you really have some urges, let us continue gym workouts…But, please do not push it further!” Safiya looked almost sorrowful and about to cry.
 
“Begum!” The voice of her husband was menacingly cold.
“Begum! I don’t want my wife to re-dictate my life in this plate once again!! What happened last time was not because of me…It just happened because one characterless person could not use brain to take rational decision!!! So, do not E-V-E-R blame me for that incident!!!” Safiya could not meet her husband’s ice-cold eyes. She fell silent immediately till they continued their dinner in silence. Only thing that disturbed her was her puckered hole that was constantly throbbing from the pounding that it received…from the kind of pain she felt, she was so sure that he might have cause some blisters over her anal ring! However, as she found Khurram in offensive mode, she finished her dinner quickly and walked out to kitchen. 
 
 
 
Later that night at Tanvi’s house:
 
Tanvi couldn't get sleep properly. Once she freshened up, she took one more glass of wine to get her body to relax. However, it added more heat and made her more restless instead allowing her to relax.
 
“Why the heck did I go to that damned Basti?” 
 
“And why the fuck did I volunteered to explore that damned Protima's house? Shitttt...This could be the biggest mistake that I ever did in my life!!!...Eeessssh…and it was a worthless brothel for God'sake!!!”
 
“Oh-Gaaaaawd...I am the only one to blame for all this crap happening around me...No one else! Why am I trying to find fault with Sanju? If I had behaved like a normal person, none of these things would have happened!”
 
“To top everything, today I let myself voluntarily expose to an old man who considers me as his daughter...Oooggaawd!!!” 
 
“But, I saw him looking at my naked breasts like if he was about to grab and gulp them inside his wife mouth!! Why was he looking into my nakedness with such intensity? His mouth was gaped as if he was captiavated with my breasts!!!”
 
“Oh-God! Please help me!!!”
 
“Gosh...He would have chewed my nipples if I had not covered my nakedity! Would it be the same way how Sanju sucks me?? Or would it be like a panther leaping over its prey and ransacking the meat with all its power??” Her hand moved over and clasped her crotch and fondled the wetness seeping out.
 
“Fffffuuuccck...What am I thinking? And that too about a man who might have been so embarrassed from my mistake!! God…please forgive me!”
 
“Who was that wretched man that I allowed to molest? Shit...I can still feel his hard hand groping over my breasts!” Tanvi’s second hand slowly massaged the aching areas of her breasts.
 
"There is no way I am going to return back that shit-hole in my life!" Her decision was solid.
 
"But then, what should I be doing with Khurramji?" Another large question loomed over her clouded mind.
 
"Shit…And now, Sanjoth has turned 360 degrees...Am I to be blamed for all what happened between us? Did I pushed him to stray?? Or was it me who actually made all this happen??? Oooh my good God...please bring him back soon...I can't take this anymore!!" With tears filling inside her closed eyes, one of her hand still caressed her paining breasts and other one that was dug deep between her groin continued pacifying her quavering vagina, as she slept.
 
 
 
Later that night at Khurram’s house:
 
Khurram was not asleep yet! His visual nerve-system continued his review of Tanvi's accidental exposure and his cock throbbed dreadfully hard while his wife slept on his side.
 
His brain continued projecting those unforgettable moments again and again. Each time Tanvi’s red colored nipples and the pinkish orange areolas zoomed in front of his eyes, his tongue slurped his own saliva as if he was devouring her breasts right there on his bed! Her pitch black armpit hair's musk still remained inside his nostrils and tormented his cock further more. He stole a quick look at his wife to see if she was in any form ready for one final session. As he found her facing away from him and the way she covered herself with bedsheet confirmed that she will not be willing to stretch-out her legs one more time. With frustration building up inside his chest, he closed his eyes once again to replay the accident inside his brain.
 
Safiya on the other hand was very much awake! She was able to guess very clearly that her husband was not asleep yet. And she was also sure that if she gave an indication of herself being awake, he would force her into one more sex session, to which she did not had the energy to comply...On top of it, she also knew what all he would do to her while he kept Tanvi in his mind's eye! With all these thoughts, she drifted back to few years when they both used to be in an open relationship as a couple who allowed additional partners into their life. Her body shuddered at the remembrance of the sour outcomes of their straying activites. However, deep inside her heart, something pinched telling her repetedly that their existing peaceful lifestyle was about to get deranged!
 
"Why is Khurramji so much obsessed with that sweet girl? Ya-,.'...what all could be the outcomes if something really happens?" Safiya's body shook from the thought of what all happened previously and what all could happen again! She was sleeping, but not peacefully. Her mind continued to play out their earlier escapades where it included Upendra, his wife Maahi and Mehtaji with his wife. 
 
Safiya's body started sweating as her brain brought forth a glimpse of Mehta's wife Komal, who was no more now! 
 
Safiya woke up with a start! 
 
She looked ay her husband, who was sleeping naked and to her horror, she found his enlarged shaft standing erect and pulsing with each of his breath. 
 
The thing that destroyed her life!
 
The thing that destroyed many lives!!
 
The thing that was now hell bound to destroy a young couple's life!!!
 
The more she watched his groin, the more she felt to vomit as anger boiled inside. However, with bittersweet emotions, she lay down once again and tried her best to divert her thoughts and to get some sleep…
 
 
 
Next morning at Tanvi’s house:
 
 
"Huh! Hello...Hello!!" Tanvi's opened her eyes as her hand fetched the cellphone next to her and expected to hear her husband's apologetic voice. Instead, she found it was Sylvie.
 
"Hi Tanviji, haven't you woke up yet? It's almost 9:30am!"
 
"Ooh Hii Sylvie, thank you so much for the wake up call...Today kids taking holiday, we all slept!" She kept the real reasons to herself.
 
"Ooh that’s soo nice...so kids are also joining?" There was a pinch of despondence in her voice.
 
"Hmm…yess...they are actually super excited to get this unexpected holiday!" Though she caught Sylvie's miffed up tone, she ignored it.
 
"Okay ok Tanviji...I'd be more than happy to meet your kids...What about you meet me at Racer's Plaza around 11 or 12? Would that be okay with you?"
 
"Racers Plaza...hmm...that's a bit far from here right? Let me catch you at City Center Mall? Do you drive?"
 
"Ooh yes...of course I do...I shall meet you there then! Byeeee!!!" She heard Sylvie's excitement and got busy for breakfast and then dress up.
 
Sylvie was impatient till she saw Tanvi getting down from an Uber taxi. The moment she saw Tanvi, her heart leapt! Her dream Godess looked stunning even in such a simple dress!
 
Tanvi did not notice Sylvie as she did not expected Sylvie to be standing outside the mall. Tanvi had a pink vertical striped top reaching till knees and with short arm displaying her fair arms from biceps; it had a v-shaped neck showing off a bit skin from her chest...the cleavage was normal for Tanvi, but not for any third person…as her breasts were accentuated by the sports bra which kept her mummeries pushed together to create a stunning look. Below, she had a semi black jean that hugged her legs and created a sensuous figure without her being so aware of her own looks.
 
"Hi Tanviji!!!" And excited Sylvie walked briskly towards the family.
 
Tanvi and kids were startled by the sudden voice of the young woman who ran towards them. Tanvi had to suppress her astonishment when she saw a beautiful young woman running at her and kids wearing a mid thigh length denim skirt with long waxed legs and a tight sleeveless tee shirt showing lot of naked skin of her navel with a matching white sneakers on her feet.
 
"Sylvie looks like my kid's elder sister!" Tanvi thought as she returned the hug from Sylvie.
 
"Hi Tanviji...Hope these two are your angels!!!" Sylvie shrieked with beaming excitement.
 
"Bachalog...this is Sylvie Didi! Sylvie...my children!!" Tanvi made the introductions and walked into the mall together. From the corner of her eyes, she found youngsters and men gawking at them... especially at Sylvie with her beautiful and long legs and her seductive navel undulating and exposed to their viewing pleasure.
 
"Tanviji, what say if we go to Racer's Plaza? I can drive you all there!" Sylvie asked the whole family and the response from kids were instantaneous.
 
"Yesssss...Mamma, let's go to Racer's Plazaa!!!" Reaction from her kids were lightning quick!
 
"Hahahah...Well...if that's what you want, it's okay for me...But remember, afterwards you will finish your homework first thing once you reach home okay?" She smiled but made sure her tone was serious.
 
"Ooukkaaay Mammma...Thank you Sylvie Didiii" 
 
"Hahahah...Oukay let's go then!" Sylvie took them to the parking lot and drove towards the Racer's Plaza that was almost 45 minutes driving from their place. During the car ride, they all made some small talks and kids became hyper excited about the game arena at Racer's Mall.
 
Once they reached Racer's Mall, Sylvie took them for a quick lunch and then moved on the gaming area. Tanvi gasped when she saw the area...In fact, it was the second time that she reached this place. Previously, it was with Sanjoth and he allowed just half hour for the family to explore. This time, it was different…She was there to spend time!
 
“Tanvji...Can we leave the kids to the play area team for sometime as now their tummy is also full and could enjoy themselves? We can go for some window shopping in the meanwhile?” Sylvie’s tone was very tentative as she was not sure what could be Tanvi’s reaction.
 
“Hmm…I think it is okay Sylvie…This place is safe for the kids to play and there are enough staff to take care of the children!” Tanvi looked positive.
 
“Oh yes…don’t worry Tanviji…My friend’s elder sister is the manager of this play area. Let’s go and inform her so that she could give special attention to our kids!” Tanvi looked at Sylvie with warmth filling inside her towards the young woman. Once that was agreed, they took the kids to the play area and met Sylvie’s friend’s elder sister. She was more than happy to see Sylvie and then she watched Tanvi with admiration and agreed to take care of her kids for some time.
 
“Tanviji…Can we go?” Sylvie asked politely at Tanvi who was watching the kids entering the play area and disappearing between the bunch of other children who was excitedly screaming and yelling.
 
“Huh! Yes…Sure! And Sylvie…Please call me Tanvi…I told you before also!” Tanvi made a face while they started walking through the mall’s passageway.
 
“Hmm…Tanviji…I will okay…I still cannot believe that you came with me to spend time! I am just taking it all in!” 
 
“Whaat? Common Sylvie, you are still continuing the same topic…I am actually very much embarrassed to be with you after what happened in your shop! I have no idea why I behaved so idiotically…Sooo sorry okay!”
 
“Oh! My! God! Tanviji…What are you saying? Do you have any idea what you did to my brain that day?? I think…I have honestly lost my mind after that day!”
 
“Hahahah…Stooop it Sylvie…You are really making me nervous!”
 
“Oohh…okay…In that case, let’s do something to cool you down! Let’s go for some shopping…What do you say?”
 
“Sure Sylvie…That’s why we are here for!”
 
“Tanviji…Can we get something for you from a new showroom opened here? Or do you want to go for Brands??”
 
“Anything you say Madam…For a moment I forgot that I was with fashionista! Hahah!” Tanvi teased.
 
“Yiiiiikes! Me? Fashionista?? Hhahahhahah…okay I will agree to it, only if you agree to go for my selection! Deal?” Sylvie sounded playful.
 
“Of course…anything you say Madam Gucci!” Tanvi continued the playful tone as they reached the showroom. Once inside, Tanvi realized that it was the biggest showroom of women wear that she had ever been to. Later she found out that, Racer’s Plaza was in fact the most prominent place for all kinds of women wear and the kid’s play area was made in such elaborate manner to provide ample time and room for women to do their respective shopping in the mini mall.
 
“Tanviji! could you please try this?” Tanvi turned her head to see an excited Sylvie who was holding a two-piece dress towards her.
 
“Hmm…why don’t we just see this place first? And maybe buy from somewhere else?” Tanvi was not sure of such quick activities.
 
“Hmmm…Tanviji, relax…I will not let you be uncomfortable…this showroom is the best one all around in this city and I wanted to bring you here since the day we met!”
 
“Accha baba…okay ok, I will try…give me” Tanvi made a mock angry face at Sylvie and walked to the changing room with the dress. 
 
Once inside and after removing what she had, she pulled the bottom from the set that Sylvie gave her. Though she did not see it at first, once she wore it through her legs and fixed to her hips, she actually saw the erotic appeal of the skirt! It was a mid-thigh length Boho-Banjaran embroidered style wraparound type short skirt with some tribal crafted tassel fringes hanging around. Main color of the skirt was black and then multi-colored work all over it. Though being a skirt, it was also a sort of wrap-around, and the main knot joining right in front and between her legs. Tanvi had to take a moment to recognize her own legs! Her hairless legs and extremely fair colored skin made the skirt look more exotic that it actually was!
 
Considering her legs for a moment, she wore the top!
Tanvi was unable to believe how she was transformed in less than a minute with just a simple dress make-over!. It was just a simple sleeveless yellow colored top that exposed ample cleavage but not in a vulgar way. The only problem she felt was her armpit hair…She decided to take care of it shortly. Once done, she was ready to display herself! As she double checked once again, her bra was not showing outside much and the skirt was decent enough to look indecent! She felt thrilled as she opened the dressing room door and walked out.
 
“Ouuh myyy God!!! Tanvijiiiii…I don’t know what to tell you! I am sure you are the most gorgeous creature in this whole mall right now!!!”
 
“St--Stoop it Sylvie! You are making me too conscious! Shall I go and change? I liked this dress very much! Thaaaank you!”
 
“What do you mean change? Oooh nooo Madamji! You are wearing this here…now…and walking out! We are going to spend today in this special dress!!!” Sylvie gave a naughty meaningful look to a horrified Tanvi!
 
“Whaaatt??? Noo waay…no way! I cannot wear this! I mean, I used to wear it during my college days! Not even in college I wore such skirts! Nooway Sylvie…I will pack it to home and wear it there!”
 
“Oh Tanviji…You already agreed listening to me! Remember? So no escape…heheh” She paused and continued “Tanviji…You look simply brilliant in this…I am not pushing you for anything…But, in this mall, there will be hardly a person who could recognize you…In addition, you are not walking alone…We are going out together and for a great coffee time in the food court! You know…actually I just want to see the reaction of the people when they settle their eyes on you! Please…please…be my celebrity for the day!” Sylvie made a mock cry.
 
“Oooh God Sylvie…You are tooooo much! I am no celebrity!” Even though Tanvi muttered those words, she walked into the dressing room and took the dress that she wore earlier and walking out again. She found one of the salesgirl talking with Sylvie and then to her delight, she found the salesgirl’s eyes sparkling and widening with disbelieve as she saw her walking towards them.
 
“Wow…Madam! You look incredible in this skirt and top…I think this was in fact made with you in mind!” The reaction from salesgirl was immediate!
 
“Hahahah…I told you so!” Came another comment from a smiling Sylvie.
 
“Thank you both of you…where can I pay?” Tanvi tried to be polite.
 
“Well, Madam, there is one more thing to this set, I think you left it inside the room…please wait, let me get it for you!” Without waiting for an answer, the salesgirl ran and returned back with a long length neck scarf. 
 
“Oh…you know, I don’t like scarf over my tummy!” Tanvi explained her detest thinking that it was to cover her hips and thighs.
 
“Madam, it is not for your stomach, let me wear it for you!” With that comment, the salesgirl went behind her and tied the scarf to her neck in a soothingly relaxed way.
 
“Oh Wow! This makes the look complete!” Tanvi blushed at the comment from Sylvie and she found the woman at the counter intently watching and admiring her.
 
“Look there Madam, you will see the difference! Tanvi heard the salesgirl’s comments and looked at the mirror and got lost for a moment at her own sight!
 
Tanvi looked scantily clad at first look, but then one would notice the mix of elegance and lusciousness mixed at same proportion to a dress and cladded over a woman who was an embodiment of exquisite tenderness!
 
 

“Let’s go!” Tanvi couldn’t believe it was her own voice that spoke out loud while walking out of the showroom with fortitude written all over her face!
 
A transfixed Sylvie followed hurriedly to reach with the confidently walking woman at whom men and women around were already taking second and third glances!

"Oh My! I shouldn't be telling you this...but...YOU ARE A SUPER HOT BABE!!!" Sylvie couldn't contain her excitement.

"Hahahahh...Thank you soo much Sylvie, honestly I never though in my dreams that I would wear such a dress outside...And think about wearing in a Mall! Oh My God! I feel so objectified! And exposed!!"

"Tanviji...please relax! I am walking with you right? And uufff...look at that woman!" Sylvie pointed her to an elderly woman who was carrying few bags of her purchases and stood stupefied watching Tanvi. 

"Smile at her Tanviji...Just give one of your alluring smile without showing your teeth!"

"Whaat?? Do I smile that way? Ooh my goodness!" Eventhough she said that, Tanvi placed a twitch to her lips and nodded at the classy looking elderly woman who in fact gave them a warm smile back as if comrade to comrade.

"Can we go to your 'special' coffee then?"

"Hhahaha...okay ok Tanviji...come now!" Sylvie pulled her hand and took her to the escalator leading to upper floor food court.

Once at the food court, Sylvie located one of the coffee shop that stood right where the up and down escalators emerged. It was once she sat on her seat that Tanvi realized that her seat gave great view to the rest of the food court seats and also the people flocking in and going out would definitely be able to get a full view of herself!

"May I sit there please?" Tanvi asked to Sylvie who was already placing the order.

"What? Oooh no no...Noo-way! I want you to sit there only! That's why I selected this shop for coffee!"

"Mmm...okay then!" Tanvi replied and took a moment to glance around. She found few families around and kids making noises while eating food. Then her glance fell back to the young woman sitting adjacent to her. Tanvi tried to avoid direct staring at Sylvie and instead peeked surreptitiously using one corner of her eye. Sylvie sat with her legs crossed. Her long waxed legs so inviting and the way she chatted gave a soothing feeling to Tanvi immediately. Her face was round, with a set of captivating lips...she remembered how it tasted! Sylvie's sleeveless top had it's first two buttons unhooked in front...If anyone stood next to her, would provide an astonishing amount of cleavage and breast view. To Tanvi's surprise, her eyes located and conveyed the fact that sylvie was not wearing any bra inside..."She was bare and buck naked in public!!!" Tanvi's nipples throbbed same time.

"How long have you been here Tanviji?" A question from Sylvie brought her back to the food court.

"Ouh..It's almost to be a year now"

With admiration filled look on her eyes, Sylvie asked "So, do you find this place comfortable than your previous one?"

"Hmm...well, we do luv this new house...better than previous!"

"And your new neighbors?" The question from Sylvie was spontaneous.

"Ah-uh...Well...They all seems to be very helpful...And...Nice too!" Somehow, Tanvi completed her comment.

"Oh look...our coffee is here!! Yummmm!!" Sylvie made happy face as she got gifted with her coffee.

"Thank you Sylvie...You are the best!!!" Tanvi complimented and she though she moaned with satisfaction once she leaned back into the comfortable softness of her chair. She found Sylvie leaning backwards and with the action, her breast skin came into view as it got exposed more through the opened up buttons. Though she knew she had to turn her eyes away to avoid bad situations, her brain would not let go. The round shape of the slightly exposed breast was enchantingly captivating and Tanvi sipped her coffee without moving her eyes away. 

It was right at the same time, Sylvie turned her head and found Tanvi seemingly lost in the view of her exposed skin. Before  even they both realized, their eyes met and Tanvi's head fell forward with embarrassment of getting caught.

"Tanviji...I saw you! It is alright...!" A teasing smile came into Sylvie's face.

"So-Sorry Sylvie...I did not meant to be rude! It was just...just that I noticed you are not wearing anything inside and it seemed so brave of you!"

"Oh God! Tanviji...If this mall would allow, I would just go all bare right in front of you! Right here!!" Sylvie teased to an embarrassed looking Tanvi.

Tanvi did not replied to that and instead took a sip frothier coffee and leaned back. While doing so, she removed and uncrossed her legs. Sylvie noticed that as she uncrossed her legs, the split of the skirt being at the middle, a lot of Tanvi's inner thighs got visible. To concur what she saw, she found a man who just reached up in the escalator gawking into the gap between Tanvi's uncrossed legs!

Though she got shocked at first, Sylvie got excited immediately.

"You know what Tanviji? As this being our first outing, I want to make it memorable...to you...for me...and to a ton of strangers who would benefit!"

"Hmmm...What do you have in mind Sylvie?" A cautious question came out of Tanvi's lips.

"Well...If you have not noticed yet, your fabulous thighs are at public display...No no...don't cross it...relax and don't make any sudden movements!" Sylvie reassured a tensed looking Tanvi who suddenly became super conscious about her exposure.

"Now, turn to your left a little and cross your left leg over to your right thigh! Make it slow as if you are just getting more comfortable!"

Tanvi felt her heartbeat throbbing faster and faster by each passing second. Within fraction of seconds, the sexual arousal that she felt deep inside had surfaced and that too with a force that she could not fathom. She felt her panty getting soaked immediately.

"Slowly Tanviji!" Sylvie guided the exotic beauty to perform for her.

"Okay ok...Now lift your left leg up and cross it over to your right thigh...And keep that skirt relaxed...Do not push it down or sideways...let that skirt take it's natural plunge!"

Tanvi felt sweat beads forming all over face and blood rush heating up her body. She knew how much of her left thigh was exposed now. To her amused embarrassment, men and women walking by was taking good look at her both legs and she noticed few surprised and shocked faces once they located the amount of thigh that was kept open to their viewing pleasure!

As she took a moment to look back at Sylvie, her cunt creamed right there as she found the young woman had opened up two more of her front buttons and her dark colored right nipple was visible to her...only to her eyes!

"Why don't you spread and unspread right now?" The question from Sylvie took the gaze from her nipple to her face. And to Tanvi's surprise, Sylvie was pointing to someone across them and Tanvi looked at the angle that Sylvie directed.

"Oh Gaaaawdd!!!" Tanvi's brain screamed as she found the same classy old woman sitting opposite and smiling at them, at her!
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Nice bro
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NIce update...
Also the description of the character and the thoughts the characters bring to this story is awesome.... Nice writing ...Continue with your nice work
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Hey, nice updates from the last few days, esp the way it has progressed wrt Khurram ji, his Wife's parallel story and Sanjoth not being so naive anymore. I am particularly not so thrilled with her becoming so cheap, slum slut and part with Sylvia, but that's my personal choice may be.
Cool, keep it up man!. And can we see Samjith coming home anytime soon, make him kinda cuckold... or a real swap with their neighbors.
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(02-09-2019, 07:08 AM)Renjith Wrote: Nice bro


Thank you soo much!!
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(02-09-2019, 07:20 AM)preethi15 Wrote: NIce update...
Also the description of the character and the thoughts the characters bring to this story is awesome.... Nice writing ...Continue with your nice work


Really appreciate your kind comments. Shall try the next episode tomorrow...Even I am feeling a bit delayed...
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(03-09-2019, 01:16 AM)asceticant Wrote: Hey, nice updates from the last few days, esp the way it has progressed wrt Khurram ji, his Wife's parallel story and Sanjoth not being so naive anymore. I am particularly not so thrilled with her becoming so cheap, slum slut and part with Sylvia, but that's my personal choice may be.
Cool, keep it up man!. And can we see Samjith coming home anytime soon, make him kinda cuckold... or a real swap with their neighbors.


Hiii, Thank you soo much...
Trying to speed up a bit...We had opened up many arcs for Tanvi to explore, Khurramji still remains the person to be watched-out! Regarding the backdrop of what happened with Safiya long time back also needs to be explained - in due time! On the brothel arc, we are still at the initial phase, we are yet to see if it would develop or if it would not...but there is no way Tanvi would fall into a characterless pit. Also, we will see Sanjoth returning home and the following events...possible exciting I hope...(we also need to keep a tab on Abhijeet's passion...)
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A Clandestine Prosecution
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(03-09-2019, 03:07 AM)YLTS Wrote: Hiii, Thank you soo much...
Trying to speed up a bit...We had opened up many arcs for Tanvi to explore, Khurramji still remains the person to be watched-out! Regarding the backdrop of what happened with Safiya long time back also needs to be explained - in due time! On the brothel arc, we are still at the initial phase, we are yet to see if it would develop or if it would not...but there is no way Tanvi would fall into a characterless pit. Also, we will see Sanjoth returning home and the following events...possible exciting I hope...(we also need to keep a tab on Abhijeet's passion...)

Haha forgot Abhijeet all together, last time I remember, he mentioned to her about his Photography skills, that'd be interesting to see :D. By the way, are you a male or female and how much time do you spend on it on a daily basis, it must be difficult managing your daily life routines whilst writing this story, your each update is just long enough and your english is prolific as well, so you must be someone who is erudite :D. (y)  And it would also be interesting to know how did you get inspire to write this story with peculiar characters like Khurram Ji, Safiyaji etc & have you written any other threads before may be on some other site?
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Very well written, Detailed description makes your story very erotic and interesting..one thing is missing nowadays that is length of update give big updates......
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(03-09-2019, 11:29 PM)furihard Wrote: Very well written, Detailed description makes your story very erotic and interesting..one thing is missing nowadays that is length of update give big updates......

very much in accordance with this statement. Very well described and highly erotic.... well done!
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when we can have next update???
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Waiting fr the next update. Its been too long now!
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Delayed updates spoil the flow... Hoping an update soon
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Plz update buddy
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(03-09-2019, 03:27 PM)asceticant Wrote: Haha forgot Abhijeet all together, last time I remember, he mentioned to her about his Photography skills, that'd be interesting to see :D. By the way, are you a male or female and how much time do you spend on it on a daily basis, it must be difficult managing your daily life routines whilst writing this story, your each update is just long enough and your english is prolific as well, so you must be someone who is erudite :D. (y)  And it would also be interesting to know how did you get inspire to write this story with peculiar characters like Khurram Ji, Safiyaji etc & have you written any other threads before may be on some other site?
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Hii,

Sorry, had to be away a bit...
There was few concerns about who I was during my last story in Xossip "A Wife's Predicament". Let this concern remain itself as it is...And yes, giving long updates do consume longer engagement. 

I am so thankful for your nice compliments...but seriously I do know there are too many gifted writers in this forum that we all admire and I do look up to...

Previous story was inspired from some personal experiences...And this one also have lots of personal elements attached to it...Due to which the character development is taking so much time...

Thank yuuu!
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