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28-08-2019, 09:31 AM
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sandhiya changed after her husband got injured, thought same case would happen to bhavani in the story climax.
but with current bhavani mindset, if anything happens like that she use that has an excuse and tell mohan that leads to her affair.
Mohan love towards Avnish can even change, if he knows bhavani bearing someone baby. He might think Bhavani cheater her from the beginning, and even Avnish could be someone else child.
Below options can be ruled out:
1) Bhavani wants divorce or going with Vikram.her action cause bad reputation for her family, her child development and her sister marriage
2)Mohan becomes cuckold, because he never one. Can't make him like that
3)Mohan accept the open relationship, he don't like other take his property.
Mohan decision will be based at what point of time he knows about it
1) before pregnancy
2) after pregnancy
3) whether bhavani wants to live with him/vikram
4) whether his social circle (family, sumitha) knows about the affair
5) Avnish who he wants to take care of him if divorce (mohan/bhavani)
Lots of options for Bhavani and mohan to forge their life. But definitely their life would not be smooth.
Divorce is not the first go to option for both.
patching their relationship and building the trust is heck of a job.
Too many things can change in the story, predicting the story end is not possible. Like bhavani character change, mostly no-one thought she would turn-out to this point.
Who knows bhavani may start to love mohan, and vikram develop feeling for sumitha...
like author mentioned don't waste time and asking about the story end.
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Idhaiyae tha muna nanum Sona Appa yellarum yen pa story aa Ivalo serious aa pakra nu ketutu IPO yellarum na sonadhaiyae soldrenga hahahaha...
For all you simple aa onu soldra... Thapu panatha oruthar nu yarum Ila Bhavani um appadi tha Mohan fulla satisfaction Pani irundha avaluku Vikram oda theva irundhu irukadhu may be starting laiyae Vikram aa avoid Pani irukalam...
So Adhu Mohan oda mistake and second thing antha mistake la Bhavani Ku pangu iruku Mohan avala satisfaction panala nu Ava Mohan ku starting laiyae soli irundha adha sari panika yevlo vazhi iruku like yoga exercises medicine nu Mohan adhula yedhaavdhu ona pani irupan so Bhavani um thapu Pani iruka...
Thn Vikram avana nambi bahavnai poradhu ndradhu rope Mela nadakara Mathiri kandipa slip agumm... Ivalo days yella girls aium verum sex toy aa patha Vikram just Bhavani aka thirundhita na adha accept panika mudiyathu...
And last aa oru story epo fullfil agum na yellarum avanga Pana thapuku punishment anubavikara apo tha...
Mohan Avan thapuku punishment anubavuchita Bhavani Vikram kooda sex vachikita
BT bhavani pandradhu thapu Ila dhorgam adhuku Ava punishment anubavikanum and Ava IPO panitu irukardhu yevlo periya thapu nu realise pananum... And Bhavani last episode la idhu varaikum paiyana pirinchadhu Ila IPO piriyardhae kastama iruku nu Sona.. adhula irundhu avaluku Avinash Mela iruka pasam theiryuthu... Ava wife aa thapu panalum Amma va thapu Pana Mata nu nenaikara...
Ava ipo panitu irukardhu yevlo periya thapu Vikram Sona poiya nambi yevlo yemanthu poi iruka nu theirnja Ava anubavikara vendhanaiyae periya punishment aa irukum and Bhavani thani aal Ila appadi Vikram kooda pora na Adhu Ava Appa Amma tangachi oda marriage nu yellathaium badhikum Adhu reality aa irukadhu...
Bhavani Ava Pana thapa realise pandra apo romba feel panuva... Adha Vida periya punishment Vera irukadhu may be adha Vida peirya punishment irundhalum irukalam
And finally Vikram ....
Vikram Ivalo days aa girls aa veruma sex toys aa pathuta ... So sudden aa Avan change aaita Nala life Ku pora na Adhu avalo correct aa irukadhu.. he just have to realise and have to feel for this ... Avan panitu iruka Ivalo thapuku Avan punishment anubavicha tha sari aa irukum adhuku Bhavani kooda Avan Sera kudadhu...
Intha Mathiri yellarum Pana mistakes oda consequences aa avanga realise Pani antha consequences oda vazhaara Mathiri finish ana tha Adhu oru realistic and a gud story aa irukum...
Papom author antha Mathiri oru realistic climax aa kuduparu nu nambara ... Papom...
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A kind note to the author... You have played well in the sex base ...now everyone wants to know what will be tha climax and how everyone was going to flow over their emotions.. so please give more emotional and mind changing episodes of the characters than the sex episode..
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28-08-2019, 12:22 PM
(This post was last modified: 28-08-2019, 12:33 PM by AjitKumar. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Grow up Guys please don't put all your imagination and ideas here.
What the fuck is happening.
The author knows how to take this forward and what kind of climax that would best suit to this story.
This is fantasy story of him. Why are you all putting your brains into it. If you think you have more ideas, go and write a story on your own.
Author has already told that this story will take one more month to complete.
Don't irritate the majority of the readers.
Don't take your own conclusions and create unnecessary arguments here.
Please keep reading and enjoy.
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Waiting for the next round. Please continue
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Keep continue.. different modulation..
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Ivanungale ippadithaan. Aduthavanga kadhaiya korai solrathu, advise panrathu, olunga kondu poga vidaama torture panrathu. Kirukku payalunga. You continue in your own way. Ignore all these bloody ideas, suggestions etc.
Unga plan ennavo adhaye continue pannunga. Think about majority who are supporting you.
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I have tried something new in the husband's point of view narrative in the coming update. I tried to show his thoughts flitting between full unconscious sleep and semi conscious wakefulness where he is confused if he is in a state of dream or he is actually partly conscious. I am not sure how well it has come out in Tamil. I have also written part of the round 2 between Bavani and Vikram. I can't go any further tonight but hope to complete it and post it tomorrow night. Once again thanks for all your comments. My request, please do not say any hurtful things to anyone posting their comments. It merely shows their involvement in the story. I am however going according to my plan. Otherwise I would not be able to take it to the conclusion I have in mind for the story if I were to deviate much.
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My request, please don't disclose anything about upcoming episodes and climax it kills the thrill in waiting and reading.
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Nan idha thaan sonnen, purushan kalyaana veetla iruntha mathiri pathi mayakathula irukkum bothu ithu nadakkanum. Ivanga pesurathu, moan ellam thelivaa kekkanum, especially bhavani thitrathu Vikram kulanthai venum nu solrathu. Thannoda pondatti ippadu oru bitch a nu mohan feel pannanum.avanoda weakness teriyanum.
Appuram avan mindla intha pechu moan kettu kite irukkanum. Avan nimmadi poganum. Appuram ithellam ketta kanavu Pola nu vitranum. Anal avan weakness avanukku puriyanum. He should do something for it.
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Super. Thrill is going to start for us. Doubt and confusion to start for Mohan.
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Next day Vikram should meet them with Avinash and girja. Mohan should ask him did he come to hotel in the night by any chance. His fear and doubt should go. But whatever he saw should make him think about his inability and what if it happens in real. At home bhavani should start express her disappointment slowly. That should drive him restless. It will turn more thrilling and interesting. Waiting eagerly for next update.
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So purushan part is going to be even more interesting. Waiting for your update
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Interesting. Please continue.
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Purushan nilamai
Mayakkama kalakkama, manadinil kulappama, valkayil nadukkama
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