Fantasy அவன், அவள், புருஷன் (Completed - நிறைவு)

[shivakrishna]

Bro again sex aa romba length aa sex episode pogathenga bro....

Bhavani IPO complete aa change aaita inimae Ava Mohan kooda vazha mudiyathu pesama Inga oru accident la Mohan aa kola panitu Vikram and bhavani aa sethu vachirunga.....

[shivakrishna]

Mohan character story starting la irundhu oru looser ... Un useful husband and unwanted character aa tha iruku better Mohan death nu story aa move panalam

[shivakrishna]

Bhavani IPO full slut aa Marita .... inimae Ava Nala wife aa iruka mudiyathu.... Vikram Mela Ivalo love iruku na Bhavani Ku IPO Mohan Mela love Ila nu artham ... Intha ponungalae ippadi tha avangalukaga kasta pada oruthan ana avanga innoruthan kooda enjoy panuvanga ...

Anyway again Mohan ku theiryama Vikram bhavani sex ..

Adhu therinja visiyam tha story la yedhaavdhu change konduvanga bro Bhavani mandapam la irundhu veetuku vandha apparam onumae twist ilam

Mohan ku yedhuvum theiryama innum yevlo days iruka mudium.....

Logic venum nu solala logic ae suthama ilama iruku ....

Onu Mohan ku theriyanum Ila sumith Ku theriyanum
..... Rendumae ilama innum yevlo days Mohan ku theiryama Vikram bhavani sex and Mohan aa Vikram tease panitu Vikram bhavani sex nu move pandradhu ..
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Ana onu Mohan character total failure Mathiri iruku.... I think purushan character nenga vaikamalae irundhu irukalam antha character irundhu oru useum ilatha Mathiri gha iurku..

Ipadiyae climax varaikum Mohan aa oru useless Character aavaevachu finish Pana porengala...

Already new story plot idea iruku nu sonengaala bro adha konjam start panungala idha sekarama finish panitu same character same story line ...

Mohan ku theriyaama Vikram bhavani sex idha mattum yevlo days padikaradhu..

Mohan manikara Mathiri irundhalum oru Mura Ila sometimes Bhavani thapu Pani iruka nu therinja manichiduvan ippadi thapu panitae iruka nnu theirnja apparam Mohan manikara Mathiri pona comedy aaidum

So sekaram aa idhu Mohan ku theiryara Mathiri kondu ponga....

[xbiilove]

Sorry to say, very disappointing update.
The expectation of this episode was very huge, considering vikram is going to tie the knot.
I also thought bhavani should experience a surprising nearly real wedding feel as some of the beautiful points mentioned by xossipyenjoy. May be you want to reject all his ideas upfront. Like he said, a wedding setup, blessing of girija etc would have made this more realistic and enjoyable. While entering the first night room, she should feel like a wife of vikram and that feel would bring vikram more close to her heart. But, this turned out again yet another episode like a prostitute entering the room. The morning incidents were also not interesting as they were doing more of dog fuck which is not needed then.

[adangamaru]

@shivakrishna bro, yen thirumba thirumba theinji pona tape recorder maathiri sonnathaye sollikittu irukkinga. neenga solratha thaan ethayum author kekkala illa, appuram yen. avarukku sex part eluthurathu mattum thaan romba ishtam pola. adhanaala thaan oru chinna circle ullaye eluthunathaye eluthikittu irukkar. ithu avaroda karpanai kadha, avaroda karpanai boundary avlothaan nu nenachikkinga. viruppam illenna vera kadhai padinga. kadhaikkaa panjam. naan munna sonna maathri, indha katha mudinja pinbu ivlo pesinathukku romba feel pannuvinga.

[Bigil]

average update

[NityaSakti]

வந்ததுல மொக்க அப்டேட் இதான், வேற என்ன சொல்ல

[Aunty Veriyan]

ஆ ஊ நா அவன் நக்குறான், இவ சப்புறா வேற என்னடா இருக்கு.
எப்படா அவளோட புண்டை, குண்டியில சுன்னிய விட்டு கிழிக்க போறான். இந்த மாதிரி தேவிடியா எல்லாம் கதற கதற ஓக்கணும்.  ஒரு தடவ ஓத்தா அவ செக்ஸ் கு கெஞ்சனும். பார்க்கலாம் இந்த தடவை அவன் அப்படி ஓக்குறானு. 
ராத்திரி அவ புருஷன இவை புண்டைய நக்க விடு. அவன் அதுக்கு தான் லாயக்கு. வேற ஒரு மயிருக்கும் லாயக்கில்லை

[Renjith]

Expectation more on ur story bro
Take next level

[KevinSkywalker]

story doesn't have the initial fresh feel.
repeated encounter with different places.
now this sex episode will go for 4-5 update, which does not add any value in moving forward the storyline.

only traction in the story is bhavani not guilty anymore, feels she is doing the right thing.

like detective, Sumitha become a useless character.

mohan character becoming very boring, easily get fooled.

[KevinSkywalker]

@game40it please try to provide a link in the first page to all the future update.
so many comments which are not related to the story.
like a spawn they keep posting it.
it is public forum, anyone can post their views i fully agreed to that.

please start a separate thread and post all ur idea and video and discuss about the story there. or message the author how you want the story to proceed

[fuckandforget]

In this episode, bhavani says that she is not doing anything wrong. She is giving all pleasures to mohan and in turn not getting anything from him. She is right on her side to have a partner from whom he can obtain all the required pleasures. She has only sympathy for mohan for his inability and she is not guilty anymore.

Unofficially, she is going to become wife of vikram. Considering her current mindset, she will not have same respect for mohan after becoming vikram wife. So, Please start vikram and bhavani to humiliate mohan on his size and physique and bring up more fear in him that vikram with his manliness will seduce his wife and take away from him. Let vikram make his slave bhavani to do everything that makes mohan more and more inferior. This will bring the initial thrill and get the story going in an interesting manner.

Mohan has become a weak character in the story and he can be used only for this purpose for now.

[manigopal]

Ithu en puthu kathai. Oru manaiviyin thavippu pol ithu naan munbu xossipil eluthiyathai re post seiyavillai. Ungal aatharavai kodungal.

antha kathaiyai re-post seyungal :D

[Bigil]

Any update today?

[xbiilove]

what happened next?

[game40it]

@game40it please try to provide a link in the first page to all the future update.
so many comments which are not related to the story.
like a spawn they keep posting it.
it is public forum, anyone can post their views i fully agreed to that.

please start a separate thread and post all ur idea and video and discuss about the story there. or message the author how you want the story to proceed

I don't know how to do that. Anyway I am considering speeding up the story and wrapping it up soon. That would be for the best and probably save a person's sanity. Would be able to post an update today or the latest by tomorrow.

[xbiilove]

I don't know how to do that. Anyway I am considering speeding up the story and wrapping it up soon. That would be for the best and probably save a person's sanity. Would be able to post an update today or the latest by tomorrow.

Hey dude,

I don't really understand why you want bother much about one single person who is over enthusiastic to know the climax of the story and pressurizing by adding same comments all over again and again. You know that this guy is someone who wants to kill the interest of the other readers and spoil the story long time now. I recommend you to block/ignore this guy and move forward. 
You know that there are thousands of others who read your story on a daily basis and only couple of them had commented it boring. you need not rush through and wrap up the story, just for those negative comments. I believe that, as an experienced writer, you know how to make the story more interesting going forward. 
Please ignore the negative comments and try to make the events/plot more interesting and thrilling. Take the ideas of readers, if you think that it would add some value to the story. 
Go with your original plan and make this story a long, thrilling one and something hard to forget. Wish this become the best ever and most read/liked story in the forum. Thanks again for engaging us with this wonderful story. You are a great writer and i don't want you to get carried away so easily.

[Murugan]

Update

[NityaSakti]

ஒரு லூசு பயலுக்காக, இவ்ளோ அழகா எழுதிக்கிட்டு இருக்க கதையை ஏன் நண்பா அவசரமா முடிக்கணும்? ஊர்ல இது மாதிரி நெறய திரியுது, இதெல்லாம் கண்டுக்காம நம்ம வேலைய செஞ்சிகிட்டே இருக்கணும். உனக்கு இவ்ளோ சப்போர்ட் இருக்கும் போது ஏன் திடுதிப்புனு கதையை முடிக்க போறேன்னு சொல்ற. தொடர்ந்து எழுது. இந்த கதைக்கு அமோக ஆதரவு இருக்கு . வாழ்த்துக்கள்

[adangamaru]

@game40it bro, yaarukagavum unga pathayai maatrikkathinga. neenga munnadi plan pannina maathiriye idha neenda adultery story ya kondu ponga. ungalukku thaan inga semma support irukkuthu. yaaro ondrirendu peru solratha ellam kandukkama eluthikitte irunga. intha kadhai neraya perukku pudichi irukku. adhanaala thaan ithuku aayiram views ku mela thinamum kedaikkuthu. ithu mathiri maththa kadhaigalukku kedaikkirathu illa. eppavume sila peru thappana comments pottu damage panna nenaippanga, avungala ellam free ya vudunga majority of audience voda expectation parthu neenga continue pannunga bro. thanks bro.