[Babab96]

Mein jese hi Rajeshwari ke room ke karib pahucha,  mujhe andar se payal ke chan chan ki aawaz aa rhi thi..

Main jese hi uske kamre me enter hua, Rajeshwari ne palatkar dekha, wo saj-dhaj kar apne kamre me hi tahal rahi thi, yaa kuchh soch rahi thi..

Usne hare rang ki saari pehni thi aur chehre par halka saa gussa tha..

Mene use dekha..usne apka muh ghuma liyaa..

Mein_ Kyaa hua meri jaan ko?..

Rajeshwari_ Agar me apki jaan hun to raat ko kaha the aap, jab me aswasth hone ke bawjud apka intejar kar rahi thi..

Mein_ Agar me raat ko apke pass aa jata to aap so nhi pati naa jaan..

Rajeshwari_ Abhi se bahane baazi..wo halka saa muskurai

Rajeshwari 



Mene baat ko ghumate huye, Kaha..

Me_ Aaj to aap kuch zyada hi taiyaar lag rahi hain.

Rajeshwari muskura kar mere saamne ruk gayi.



Rajeshwari_ Aur aapko kya lagta hai... wajah kya hai?

Me_ Mujhe kaise pata hoga?

Mene use chhedte huye ye kaha..

Rajeshwari_Achacha aap sab jante hai, aap hi to wajah hai..

Main ek pal ke liye chup ho gaya.

Me_ Rajeshwari ji...tum itna shaj dhaj kar mere samne aaogi to me tumhen chhod ke jaa nhi paunga..

Rajeshwari ne dheere se meri aankhon mein dekha.

Rajeshwari_ Me maafi chahti hun, Kal raat ko apki sewa me aa nhi payi, tabiyat theek naa hone ki wajah se.. Lakin mujhe apse ye ummeed thi ki aap jarur aayenge mera haal chaal lene ke liye..

Me_ koi baat nhi meri jaan..tum nhi aa payi, lakin agar mere sath tumhen jeewan bitana hai to meri iss tarah ki anupasthiti ki aadat dal lo..

Rajeshwari_ Achcha? to kiske sath the mere sainya raat ko..

Me_ mein tha!

Rajeshwari_  Bolo naa Jaan?

Me_ Chodo naa jaan, tum iss pal kaa aanand lo..

Rajeshwari meri bahon me aa gayi..



Me_ Itna openly tum meri bahon me aayengi?

Rajeshwari _Ab main tumse dil ki baat chhupana nahi chahti. Naa khud se, Naa tumse aur naa ho iss pariwar se..

Me_ Jaan, tum mujhse shaadi karne ki baat kah rahi ho?

Rajeshwari_ Haa..

Me_ Me, sirf tumhara nhi ho sakta, me Tumharey sath kai salon tak reh nhi paunga, hume dur rehna padega, bahut kuchh sunna aur sahna pad sakta hai, tumhen. Fir bhi..

Rajeshwari_ Sab jaanti hoon. Isi liye main tumse koi zabardasti nahi kar rhi. 

Main bas itna keh rahi hoon ki... mera dil ab tumhara hai, puri tarah se, me, mera dill, mera sharir, mera sab kuchh..

Main dheere se uske aur karib gyaa..

Me_ Aur agar main bhi wahi mehsoos karta hoon to?

Rajeshwari ki muskaan aur gehri ho gayi.

Rajeshwari_ To phir shayad hum dono ko kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi.

Kuch pal dono bilkul chup rahe.

Hum ak dusre ki sanshen mehsoos kar sakte the..

Tabhi Rajeshwari ne idhar udhar dekha aur kisi ki aahat  naa pakar mujhe chumna suru kia..


Ak achche aur lambe chumman ke baad..

Rajeshwari ne meri taraf dekha, phir dheere se nazrein jhuka li.

Wo abhi bhi meri baahon me thi..

Hum dono thodi der chup rahe.

Rajeshwari_ Jay... bas itna yaad rakhna, main tumhe kisi kasam ya majboori ki wajah se nhi chun rahi hun..

Tumhare aur mere bich jo Kuchh hua kal, usne mujhe puri tarah se tumhara bana dia hai..

Me_ Aur main bhi tumhen, tumhari Kasam ki wajah se nhi chun rha hun..

Rajeshwari_ Phir?

Me_ Tum meri patni banne yogya ho, Rajeshwari..

Mujhe ummeed hai, tum humesha aur har paristhiti me mere sath khadi rahogi..

Rajeshwari halki si muskura di.

Rajeshwari_ To phir aaj se ek baat pakki...Ab aap me apki patni hun, aur khud ko apke liye hi sambhal kar rakhungi..

Me_ Pakki baat.

Rajeshwari_ Lakin!

Me_ Lakin?

Rajeshwari kuch pal chup rahi, phir usne meri taraf dekhkar ek gehri saans li.

Rajeshwari_ Jay, tumse ek baat pehle hi keh dena chahti hoon... main tumhari zindagi mein akeli patni nahi banugi.

Me_ Matlab?

Rajeshwari_ Is ghar mein ek ladki hai.. jo tumhari pahli patni hogi..

Main hairani se uski taraf dekhta raha.

Me_ Kaun? aur kyun?

Rajeshwari_ Ishita Singh Chauhan. Vasundhara didi ki beti.

Me_ Me iski wajah nhi samjha Jaan.. Aakhir kyun, uske aur mere bich to koi prem sambandh bhi nhi hai, aur naa humari abhi tak koi baatchit huyi hai..

Rajeshwari_ Aap jaan jaoge jaan, dekho wo apka bahar intejar kar rahi hogi, jakar usse miliye to...

Me_ Theek hai, tum abhi bhi garam lag rahi ho, Sharir tap rha hai tumhara, jakar aaram karo..

Rajeshwari_ Theek hai..

Mene jaane se pahle Rajeshwari ko baho me bhara aur ak ghahra chumman liya aur uske pure badan ko masal kar uss per apna hak jataya..


Aur kuchh der baad waha se nikal kar bahar aangan me aaya to mene dekha sach mein Ishita akeli khadi thi, aur use dekh kar aisa lag rha tha ki wo kisi kaa intejar kar rahi hai..

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[Nihu123]

Nice update

[Babab96]

Nice update

Ok, keep continue on thread and like the post's..

[Lord Obunaga]

Best story. Bahot kam stories aisi hai jinhone mera dhyan apni taraf kheecha hai aur kuch 3-4 stories hai jinhe padhkar meri dilchaspi usme through the roof hui. 

Aapki story kamal ki hai aur aapse nivedan hai ise ant tak pahocha ke hi viram dijiyega. Is story ne mujhe aisa bandha ki mai kich aur kar nhi paya in 2 dino sirf aapki sotry starting se lekar ab tak padhi hai. Aur ab agle update ka intezaar hai. 

Isme ek pal bhi aisa nhi tha jab boriyat hui ho aur har ek cheez ki detailing aur characters ki personalities especially Jay urf Prithvi ki aur Sex ke waqt galiyo ka mishran ek alag hi utsah badhata hai. 

Aaj se mujhe apna permanent story reader samajhiye. Aapke agle update ka intazar rhega.

Finally, i must say that you have mastered the art of story telling.

Ab tak toh kamal ki sotry rhi hai asha hai aage bhi aisi hi rhegi lekin jab bhi mujhe lagega mai aapko honest aur fair review bhi dunga.

Keep going!

[Babab96]

Jese hi Ishita ne mujhe dekha wo turant meri aur chal kar aayi .....

Ishita ne meri taraf dekha. Uske chehre par halki si ghabrahat  aur ak shaant sa confidence tha.

Usne himmat dikhate huye mujhse puchaa .

Ishita_ Kyaa apko Rajeshwari mosi ne meri kasam ke baare mein bata diya hai?

Rajeshwari_ Nhi, Ishita. Lekin lakin tumhar mosi ne mujse kaha ki tum meri pahli biwi banogi. mene unse pucha kyun? lakin iss baat kaa jawab mujhe unse to nhi mila.

Ishita mere saamne khadi thi...

Ishita_ Jay, main apko ek baat bilkul saaf sabdo me batana chahta hun ki, Meri kasam thi ki jo aadmi Akele Jaswant ke un chhah aadmiyon ko akhaade mein haraayega, main usi se shaadi karungi.

Ye bolte huye wo mere aankhon me dekh rahi thi.

Me_ Ok, Ishita to aap mujhse kyaa chahti hai?

Ishita_ Aap akele wo vyakti hai jisne unn chhe logo ko haraya hai Akhade me, aur wo bhi meri aankhon ke samne..
Me apse shaadi karna chahti hun..

Me_ Sirf kasam ki wajah se tum kisi se bhi shaadi kar logi, Ishita?

Ishita_ Kisi se nhi Apse?

Me_ Tumhe lagta hai me ak uttam var hun tumhare liye?

Ishita_ Haa, aap ak sahi vyakti hai..

Me_ Achcha agar baad me yaa shaadi ke baad tumhe main pasand nahi aaya to?

Ishita ne bina jhijhak jawab diya.

Ishita_ Kisne kaha aap mujhe pasand nhi hai yaa pasand nhi aayenge..



Me_ To me tumhen pasand hun 

Ishita_ Haa..Aap mujhe pasand hai, aur sone per suhagan ye hai ki apko meri mosi ne khud ke liye chuna hai, aur unki choice uttam hi hai..

Iss liye mujhe apni choice per koi sandeh nhi hai..

Ye bolte huye, Ishita achanak merey pair chune lagi, Me chauk gyaa uski iss harkat se..



Tabhi waha Ishita ke mata pita bhi aa gye..

Ishita ke pitaji, Aanand Singh Chauhan


Ishita ki Maa, Vasundhara..


Me_ Utho Ishita, tum ye mat karo..abhi iski ki avashyakta nhi hai..

Ishita_ Mujhe bhi Ashirwad de dijiye aur apna lijiye, jese apne Rajeshwari mosi ko apnaya hai..



Wo apne ghutno ke bal baith gayi..



Ishita_ Jay, me apko chahne lagi hun, aap ne naa sirf meri kasam ke chalte mujhe jeeta hai, apne mera dill bhi jeeta hai..

Aanand_ Jay, hum bhi yahi chahte hai, ki Ishita tum se shaadi kare, aur ye tumhari patni bane..

Vasudhara_ Haa, Jay..Hum teeno kaa yahi faisla hai..

Mene Ishita ke kandho ko pakadte huye use uthaya..

Jese hi mene use uthaya, wo meri bahon me aa gayi..


Ishita_ Kyaa apne mujhe apna lia hai..

Me_ Ishita, me iss sawal kaa jawab dene se pahle, tumhare sath akele beth kar baatchit karna chahunga..

Ishita_ Ji

Me_ Ishita, Mera jeewan abhi suru hua hai, aur mujhe apni life me bahut kuchh karna hai, Bahut kuchh aisa hai jo me tumhe abhi nhi bata sakta..

Aur Bahut kuchh aisa hai jo karna hi mere jeewan kaa maksad hai..

Vasundhara_ Jay aap jakar Ishita se akele me baatchit kar sakte hai..

Aanand_Hume koi aapatti nhi hai, Damad ji..

Mene Ishita ki aankhon me dekha, tabhi Lakshya waha aa gya..

Uske hath me ak camera tha.. Lakshya Aanand aur Vasundhara kaa Chhota beta hai aur Ishita kaa bhai..

Lakshya_ Papa agar jijaji ne haa kar di ho to, ak family photo ho jaye aap logo ki..

Vasundhara_ Khinch lo bete, damad ji ki haa to ho hi jayegi..

Ishita ne masoomiyat se meri aur dekha..me bhi use mana nhi paya aur photo khichwa li..



Lakshya_ Jijaji app ke to expression hi gayab ho gaye hai..Aap to abhi se ghabra gye..

Aur wo ye bolte huye hasne laga..

Vasundhara_ Lakshya, Inhe tang mat karo, jao apka kaam karo..

Mein_ Aanand ji kyaa aap log sach me man bana chuke hai..

Aanand _ Haa, Jay. Hume koi aapatti nhi hai, hum sabhi iss baat se sahmat hai ki aa Rajeshwari aur Ishita, dono se shaadi karenge..

Aur agar In dono shaadi ke baad bhi, apne bhavishya me koi shaadi ki, to hume usse bhi koi aapatti nhi hogi. 

Ishita meri aur dekhtey huye..

Ishita_ Me papa ki baat se sehmat hun..aur apko vachan deti hun ki apki kisi baat ke liye apko naa tokungi naa rokungi..

Aanand_ Jay, Mard ki to kai biwiyaan hoti hi hai..Aur me janta hun, tumhara jo kiradar hai, wo kai ladkiyon ko tumhari aur khichega..aur ho sakta hai tum unse shaadi bhi karo..

Hum sab ne iss per raat bhar Chintan kiya hai aur hum sab iss baat ke liye sahmat hai..

Vasudhara_ Haa damad ji, hum sab ko iss baat se koi aapatti nhi hai, bas hum apni beti kaa Ghar baste huye dekhna chahte hai..

Aanand_ Jay, Mein ak pita ke roop me, apni beti ko salo tak kunwara nhi dekhna chahta..Kyuki tumhare alawa ye karne kaa sahas mujhe nhi lagta kisi aur me hai..

Me_ Aap to meri tarifo ke pul bandh rhe hai, Aanand Singh ji..

Aanand _ Chunki tum ak uttam var ho, sirf iss liye hum sab apni khushi se tumhe apna damad banana chahte hai, Jay..

Vasundhara_ Isi liye hum chahte hai, ki apke aur Ishita ke bich ak achcha rishta bane..

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[Lord Obunaga]

@Baba96 Could you please tell me from which app or site are you creating such fantastic pic. I am also preparing to start my writing journey and i needed some good photo making site but every other i tried disappointed me.

Could you please tell me the name of the site or app you use to create such sexy and precise images.

[Babab96]

Best story. Bahot kam stories aisi hai jinhone mera dhyan apni taraf kheecha hai aur kuch 3-4 stories hai jinhe padhkar meri dilchaspi usme through the roof hui. 

Aapki story kamal ki hai aur aapse nivedan hai ise ant tak pahocha ke hi viram dijiyega. Is story ne mujhe aisa bandha ki mai kich aur kar nhi paya in 2 dino sirf aapki sotry starting se lekar ab tak padhi hai. Aur ab agle update ka intezaar hai. 

Isme ek pal bhi aisa nhi tha jab boriyat hui ho aur har ek cheez ki detailing aur characters ki personalities especially Jay urf Prithvi ki aur Sex ke waqt galiyo ka mishran ek alag hi utsah badhata hai. 

Aaj se mujhe apna permanent story reader samajhiye. Aapke agle update ka intazar rhega.

Finally, i must say that you have mastered the art of story telling.

Ab tak toh kamal ki sotry rhi hai asha hai aage bhi aisi hi rhegi lekin jab bhi mujhe lagega mai aapko honest aur fair review bhi dunga.

Keep going!

Ok, I am glad to read your comments, keep stay in this thread long lasting..

[Babab96]

@Baba96 Could you please tell me from which app or site are you creating such fantastic pic. I am also preparing to start my writing journey and i needed some good photo making site but every other i tried disappointed me.

Could you please tell me the name of the site or app you use to create such sexy and precise images.

They all created through the chatgpt.. But it's takes too much time and demand to much specific commands to convert your thoughts in pics..

[Babab96]

Mein_ Agar aap log man bana hi chuke ho to, mein Ishita se akele me baat karna chahunga..

Vasundhara_ Jao, Ishita damad ji ko apne kamre me le jao, aur gate chaho to band kar lena, taki koi tumhen disturb naa kare..

Me_Aap logo ko itna bharosa hai ki aap hume band kamre me akele chodna chahte hai

Vasundhara_ Jo apki hai, use apke sath akele chodne me kesa sandeh..

Aanand_ Jay, hum tumhe apna damad Maan chuke hai, aur hume bharosa hai ki tum aaj nhi to kal, khud bhi, khud ko humara damad Maan loge..

Me_Iss bharose ke liye sukriya, Aanand Singh ji..

Aanand_ Hume Khushi hogi Jay, agar humari beti ke chehre per bhi wo khushi ho....jo Rajeshwari ke chahre per hai to..

Vasudhara_ Jay, me to tumhen apne damad ke roop me hi dekh rahi hun..

Aur isi bharose ke sath, Mein tumhen Ishita ke kamre me akele samay bitane ki anumati deti hun..

Jao Ishita, Jay ko apne sath le jao..

Ishita_ Ji maa..

Ishita mera ak hath pakad kar, mujhe apne sath apne room ki aur lekar chal di....

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[Babab96]

Hum dono Ishita ke room me pahuche, me jakar bed ke corner per beth gyaa, Ishita ne andar pahuchne ke baad gate lock kar diya..

Me use dekhkar muskuraya..Ishita mujhe dekhte huye..

Ishita_Khol dun?

Mein_ jesa theek lage, Ishita..

Wo muskurate huye Gaye ko lock chhod kar mere pass aakar beth gayi..

Hum dono bed per baith the, Ak dam relax....

Ishita bas mujhe dekhe jaa rahi thi..Fir usne apni chuppi todi..

Ishita_ Kahiye naa aap kyaa baat karna chahte hai?

Me_ Ishita tum meri pahli patni banogi, lakin aakhri nhi, ye soch kar tumhen kesa lag rha hai..

Ishita_ Mujhe khushi hai ki mosi ne mujhe khud se aage rakhne kaa faisla kiya hai..

Me_ Iss kasam ke bandhan ko agar chhod diya jaye to tum mere baare me kyaa sochti ho?

Ishita_ Sach kahu to jab apko pahli baar dekha to laga nhi ki aap ki umar kam hai, apko dekh kar dill me ghanti baji thi..

Aur wo ghanti bahut joro se bajne lagi, jab apne jane anjane meri kasam ko pura kar diyaa..

Me_ Achcha..

Ishita_ Haa, Jay mujhe khushi hai ki mera dulha wo hai, Jise dekh kar mere dill me bhi halchal huyi thi, aur meri aankhein jis per jakar ruk gayi thi.

Me_ Ishita me tum per kitna bharosa kar sakta hun??

Ishita_ Jitna aap chahe, me apse wada kar karti hun, ki apke aur mere bich ki baatein sirf hum dono ke beech hi rahegi..

Ab mujh per bharosa karna apka kaam hai..

Me_ Hmm



Ishita mujhe nihar rahi thi..

Me_ Tum mujhe aise nihar rahi ho, jese iss pal tum mujhme sama jaogi..

Ishita_ Me to yahi chahti hun.. Aakhir me bhi to kuchh salo se apne hone wale pati kaa intejar kar rahi hun..

Mene uski ankhon me dekha aur pada ki use isse pahle kabhi mohabbat nhi huyi thi..Ye ahsas uske liye bilkul Naya aur aanad may tha..

Mene uski aankhon me apne liye deewangi dekhi..

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[Babab96]

Me_ Ishita, tum kuchh puchhna chahogi..

Ishita_ Mujhe pata hai ki apki dusri patni to mosi Rajeshwari hi banegi, lakin kyaa aap iske baad bhi koi shaadi karenge...

Me_ Haa! Sambhavatah 

Ishita_ Aap hum dono se shaadi to karenge naa?

Me_Haa! Sambhavatah 

Ishita_ To kyaa aap hum dono se shaadi nhi karenge?

Me_ Ishita, tum dono bahut pyari ho..lakin me yaha iss wakt, tumharey aur mere bich jo ye anjana saa rishta hai, use ak disha dene aaya hun..

Ishita_ Apne jawab nhi diya ki aap hum dono se shaadi karenge yaa nhi?

Me_ Tum dono se shaadi karna mere liye kushi ki baat hogi, Ishita..Lakin kyaa tum?

Ishita_ Puchiye naa agar aap kuchh puchna chahte hai to?

Me_ Kyaa tum sirf apni Kasam ke chalte mujhse shaadi karna chahti ho?

Ishita_ Sach kahu to nhi, Me aap per mohit hun, aap iss age me bhi itne mature hai, itne takatwar hai, Pahalwan hai..

Apki har ak adaa ne mera dhyan apki aur khincha, lakin mene khud ko sambhale rakha tha...

Me_ Fir ye sabra kaa bandh tuta kese?

Ishita_ Apne jab un chhe pahalwan ko ronda, aur naa sirf ronda, unke sariro per wo ghav diye, jo mahino tak theek nhi honge aur salo tak unhen taklif denge....

Unn ghavo ne mujhe wo sukun diya, mere salo purane ghavo per malham lagaya..

Usi pal mere sabra kaa bandh tut gyaa aur me man hi man apki ho gayi..

Me apni antar aatma se apko apna pati maan chuki hun..

Ab agar aap ne mana kar bhi diya to me dobara shaadi nhi karungi..

Me_ Ishita, kahi ye ak affection to nhi, jo sirf kuchh din tak rhe..

Ishita_ Bilkul nhi, Aap bharosa kijiye..

Me_ mein tum per bharosa karta hun, ummeed hai tum wo bharosa bana kar rakhogi..

Ishita_ Me bilkul bana kar rakhungi apka bharosa..

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[Babab96]

Me_ Tum per bharosa karta hun Ishita aur tumhen apna ak sach batata hun..

Ishita_ Ji bataiye naa!

Me_ Ishita mujhe mere mata pita aur dadi bilkul pasand nhi karte



Me_ Wajah ke tumhen abhi bata nhi sakta, Kintu ak baat humesha dhyan rakhna, tumhe mujse shaadi karne ke baad..

Kabhi saas sasur yaa apne devaro kaa pyaar nhi milega...

Ishita_ Apka to milega naa..

Me_ Haa..

Ishita_ Bas to mere liye itna kaafi hoga.

Me_Mere jeevan ke kai maksad hai, Ishita. Mere jeewan ki raah aasan nhi hogi..

Kai mahino yaa salo tak me tumse mil nhi paunga..

Ishita_ Me, intejar karungi apka, aur sada apki rahungi..

Me_ Ishita, me mar bhi sakta hun.. ye sab karte huye..

Ishita_ Wese to Aisa kuchh hoga nhi, lakin agar aisa kuchh hua bhi, to me sada apki ho rahungi..

Me_Ishita, mere jeewan me kai mahilaye hongi, jinse mere sambhandh honge, aur jo mere bister me, mere neeche hongi..

Ishita_ Apki patni hone kaa sobhagya to hume hi milega naa, apke bachcho ki maa to hum hi banenge naa..

Me uss chij ke liye apko kabhi nhi rokungi..

Me_ Ishita, tum abhi mujh per mohit ho, iss liye bol rahi ho aisa..

Ishita_ Me iska jawab apke karib aakar dena chahti hun..Me apki bahon me aana chahti hun..

Me_ Aao Ishu...

Ishita_ Mujhe ye nick name achcha laga..

Me_ To aa jao Ishu..

Wo mere karib aa gayi....aur mene use baho me le liya..



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[Skb21]

Nice job abhi to purane update hi repeat ho rahe hain modified hoke khair agle update ka besabri se intjar rahega