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Good updates. Waiting for next. Which direction will story take it will be interesting.
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Awasome update, Please add pic and gif
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Awaiting for more updates today, want to know who all are going to honeymoon trip
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Woh toh Aditya ne confirm kar hi diya tha na - 4 people - Suhani, Aditya, Prachi and Samar
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Ohhh, I missed that line I guess, now it will be again Suhani and Samar will have honeymoon
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Any more updates for today coming?
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I am going to write now... but unsure if it will be complete to post. I can post something incomplete too. Next chapter is the airplane journey.
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Take your time but give big update
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Our update aayega Aaj rat
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Yes please btado ao we can decide aona h ya wait krna
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Aaj toh aur nahi aayega... I am exhuasted... bohot likh liya... mind is closed now. Maybe wont be able to write for the next 2-3 days, and next week is festival week, so we will see...
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Chapter 14
Flight kafi lambi thi, 8 ghante ki, main aaj se pehle itni lambi flight mein kabhi nahi baithi thi. Snacks aur Khane ke beech mein maine koshish kari ki main so jayu ya bahar dekh lu. Aditya aur mere beech jyada baat nahi ho rahi thi, par baad main Prachi Didi mujhse side se baat kar rahi thi.
Khair... jaise taise flight khatam hui, aur main abhi se kafi thaka hua mehsoos kar rahi thi. India ke hisaab se shaam ke 5 baj chuke they, par wahan shayad time thoda sa early tha.
Luggage collect karne ke baad hum chaaro saath mein khade they.
Jiju - Suhani... tum kafi tired lag rahi ho... all good?
Main - Haan Jiju... sab theek...
Jab bhi woh mujhse baat karte ya main unse baat karti, ajeeb sa lagta.
Prachi - Abhi bas thodi der mein hotel pahuch kar bas aaram kar lena.
Adi apni smile chhupate hue bola - Haan... aaj toh shayad kuch ho nahi payega... aaram hi karenge.
Main uska matlab samajh gayi... aaj raat... woh aur main...
Jiju - Mujhe toh kafi bhook lagi hai... plane ka khana itna bekar tha... hotel pahuch kar... thoda change karke pehle dinner kar le?
Main turant bol padi - Haan...
Aur Adi saath mein - Nahi... mera matlab hai ki Suhani kafi thak gayi hai na... toh room mein hi order kar lenge...
Prachi - Haan... tum log room mein hi order kar lena... aur jab time mile tab khaa lena...
Main - Room mein? Neeche restaurant hoga na... wahin kha lenge na...
Adi ko shayad mera yeh bolna acha nahi laga tha aur uska chehra utar gaya tha.
Prachi shayad situation ko samajh gayi - Jaise tum log theek samjho... room mein jakar decide kar lena...
Jiju - Yahan pahuch kar aise sochna jaise hum log yahan ho hi nahi. Tum log apna enjoy karna. Maine isliye apna room bhi bilkul alag floor par book karaya hai.
Adi - Nahi nahi Jiju... aisa kuch nahi...
Jiju - Aree, isme formality ki koi baat nahi hai. Waise bhi main toh kuch business ke kaam mein busy rehne wala hoon... mujhe kal ek flight lekar yahan se jaana hai... par Prachi hogi yahan...
Main ekdam se bol padi - Oh acha... toh fir hum Didi ko akela toh nahi chhodenge...
Adi - Haan... obviously...
Adi ne yeh kaha toh tha par uski aawaz thodi low lag rahi thi. Hum logo ne ek taxi kari aur hotel pahuche. Wahan hum dono couples apne apne room ki keys lekar alag alag floor par chale gaye. Hum log lift se pehle utre aur apne kamre ki taraf jaane lage. Yeh hotel shayad beach ke kafi paas tha, ya yahan swimming pool tha, kyunki mujhe apne hi floor par ek-do ladkiyan sirf Bikini mein bedhadak ghoomti dikhayi di. Maine gaur kiya ki Adi ki nazar bhi ek pal ke liye unki taraf gayi thi. I mean... yeh completely normal tha, kaun apne aap ko 2 piece bikini mein ek gori ladki ko dekhne se rok paata.
Ham apne kamre ke bahar pahuche aur Adi ne card scan karke kamra khola. Adi andar ghusa aur main uske peeche peeche. Maine ek do kadam kamre mein aage liye aur mere peeche darwaza click hone ki aawaz aayi.
Main palat bhi nahi paayi thi ki Adi ne mujhe achanak se peeche se zor se jakad liya, apni baahein mere kandhe par lapet-te hue.
Adi - Ohhh... Suhaaani...
Unka muh meri gardan par aa gaya aur wahan kiss karne laga. Mere muh se bas surprise ki ek chhoti si ahhh nikli, par woh shayad unhone suni nahi. Woh meri gardan par kiss karte rahe aur aage badate hue kamre mein andar le gaye. Wahan hum dono ekdam se bistar par neeche gire aur main palti. Adi ne mere upar aate hue mujhe hug kar liya aur unke honth jaakar mere honthon se mil gaye, meri saanson ko rokte hue.
Unke haath ekdam se peeche se mere sweater aur top ke andar ghus kar meri skin ko mehsoos karne lage they. Meri kamar, meri peeth, mere bra ke hook tak pahuch gaye, is beech mujhe kas ke pakde hue kiss karte hue. Meri skin par unke touch ne poore shareer mein ek halchal si macha di, aur mere haath bhi pagal hote hue unke baalon mein ghoomne lage. Aur hum dono ke honth ek doosre se alag nahi ho rahe they.
Woh mera top utaarne ki koshish kar rahe they, par woh kahin atak raha tha. Unka ek haath bahar nikla aur neeche meri ass par aa ruka, jeans ke upar se use dabata hua. Unka muh bhi mere muh se alag hota hua mere top ke upar se mere boobs ko choosne lage. Adi ke andar ek hadbadi thi, ek betaabi, jaise woh kabse apne aap ko yeh karne se roke hua ho.
Achanak se unke daant top ke upar se mere boobs ki sensitive skin se takraye, aur main apni saans rokte hue bed par thoda sa uth gayi, meri peeth bilkul tirchi ho gayi - Uhhhnnn... Adi....
Adi bechain hota hua mere upar aa chuka tha, apne neeche has hissa mere shareer se ragadte hue.
Adi - Suhaaniii.... mmmm.... tum itni hot ho... ufff....
Main - Ahhhnnn... Adiii... ruko na...
Adi - Come on baby... ab rukne ke liye mat kaho... Mmmmm...
Adi ne fir se mere honthon ko chooma, uske haath jaise meri tshirt faadne ko betaab ho rahe they.
Tabhi kamre ke phone par ring bajne lagi... tring tring... tring tring... Adi ne kuch pal mujh par focus banane ki koshish kari, par ghanti baje jaa rahi thi. Woh frustrated hota hua mujhse alag hua aur phone ko uthaya.
Doosri taraf se kisi ladki ki aawaz mujhe halki halki sunai de rahi thi. Main gehri saansein lete hue abhi bhi palag par seedhi leti hui chhat ki taraf dekh rahi thi. Andar ki aag... ek bhook... jo ekdam se jag gayi thi, dheere dheere abhi bhi sulag rahi thi, par saath hi jaane kyun ek relief bhi tha ki sab beech mein hi ruk gaya, pata nahi kyun.
Adi - Nahi... nahi... it's ok. Haan... hum aate hai...
Adi ne zor se phone patak kar neeche rakha aur frustration mein apna chehra zor se masla.
Maine dheere se pucha - Kiska phone tha?
Adi - Didi ka... dinner ka plan pooch rahi thi...
Main uth kar palang par baith gayi - Fir... aapne kya kaha?
Adi - Hmmm... hum aate hain thodi der mein... par pehle... jo beech mein reh gaya tha... use toh poora...
Adi fir se meri taraf lapka aur meri side mein baithte hue mera chehra pakad kar mere gaal ko apne daanton se halka sa kaanta.
Adi - Ufff... kitni soft ho tum baby...
Mujhe uska mujhe baby bulana acha nahi lag raha tha - Adi... ruko na... abhi neeche chalte hain... baad mein... aaj raat ko...
Adi - Kya yaar... apni hi biwi ko pyaar nahi kar paa raha hoon main!
Main uski frustration par halke se hasi - Adi... aap subah nayahe bhi nahi they... kafi smell aa rahi hai... please aap ek baar naha lo... aur fir neeche se wapas aa kar... uske baad toh...
Adi - Uske baad toh poori tarah tumhe nahi chhodunga...
Adi ne apne haath meri chest par rakhte hue mere boobs ko halke se dabane shuru kar diya. Sab kuch bina mujhse pooche, bina kuch kahe.
Main - Uhhhhnnn... Adi... ufff... nahi... ummm... aap nahane jayo please...
Adi - You are such a mood spoiler! Acha theek hai... aisa karo... tum neeche chali jayo aur jaldi se Didi aur Jiju ke saath jaldi se order place kar do... main bas naha kar aata hoon... fir wapas aakar hame koi disturb nahi karega.
Adi mujhe ek aakhri baar honthon par kiss karte hue khada hua aur apne kapde wahin room mein mere saamne utaarne laga. Meri saans abhi bhi thodi bhaari thi aur main use kapde utaarte dekh rahi thi. Shirt... jeans... fir andar ki banyan... aur fir aakhir mein uska underwear bhi. Sab kuch kuch palon mein utar gaya tha.
Andar uska lund aadha khada hua tha, thoda sa teda... us par nazar padte hi maine aankhen neeche kar li. Aur Adi apne lund ko halka sa stroke karte hue mere theek saamne aakar khada ho gaya.
Adi ne halke se mere baal stroke kare - Suhani...
Maine apni nazrein fer li - Hmmm....
Adi - Kya hua... dekho na ise... kaise tadap raha hai tumhare liye...
Adi ki is frankness se mujhe ajeeb sa lag raha tha par woh ab mera pati tha aur uske liye shayad yeh koi badi baat nahi thi.
Main - Adi... jayo na... jaldi se naha kar aayo... main neeche jaati hoon...
Main khadi hi ho rahi thi ki Adi ne meri kalai pakad li - Dekho na ise ek baar... hold karo na... you will like it... I will like it...
Mere gaal sharam se laal ho rahe they - Adi... please... abhi nahi...
Adi ne meri ass par halke sa haath maara - Such a tease... ek baar muh mein le logi toh kya problem hogi...
Maine ekdam se chaunkte hue kaha - Muh mein! Nahi... yuck...
Adi - Don't tell me tumne kabhi blowjob nahi kiya?
Maine kisi tarah Adi se nazrein milayi aur sharmate hue apna sar naa mein hilaya.
Adi - Oh god Suhani! You don't know what you are missing...
Maine apni kalai Adi ke haath se chhudai - Main neeche jaa rahi hoon... aap jaldi se aa jaana...
Main jaldi se kamre ke darwaze ki taraf pahuchi aur bina apne aap ko mirror mein dekhe ya peeche palte bas kamre se bahar nikal gayi. Mera dil bas zor se dhadak raha tha.
Bahar maine darwaza band karte hue door se tek lagayi hi thi ki mere saamne se ek kaale ladko ka group nikla.
Un mein se ek meri taraf dekhte hue bola - Hey Babe! What's up, all good?
Uski nazrein mere seene ki taraf thi aur mujhe realize hua ki main itni jaldi kamre se bahar aa gayi ki apne kapde bhi sahi karna bhool gayi thi. Maine jaldi se apne top ko adjust kiya.
Main - Yeah... all good...
Kaala aadmi - Cool... see you later pretty girl...
Woh aadmi mujhe ghoorta hua aage nikal gaya aur main ghabrate aur sharmate hue wahin darwaze ke bahar khadi reh gayi thi.
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Great update.. waiting eagerly for next update and quick escalation
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Jabardast story.. keep it up