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Fantasy BANNA KI JAWANI - Complete storyRunning

(18-10-2026, 01:05 PM)Gabbar2020 Wrote:  Dear Babab 

Please do not post picture’s upfront as story loses suspense. One need to keep suspense and create anticipation so readers wait for updates. 

Also when you post story in between pictures, site does not show as a new post.

Request you delete pictures now and post updates along with pictures as and when you are ready with story. Then readers will comment and like the update and the ratings will improve.

Sahi bola dear main bhi kai baar bol chuka hun ki pictures story ke sath sath add Karo pahle nahi but bhai ko baat jamti hi nahi
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Ok, Will try this..
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Thread Rating ?????
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(19-10-2026, 05:08 PM)Babab96 Wrote:  Thread Rating ?????

Great. As you post story as a new update, then people can read, comment and rate. Then rating will go up. Now they cannot post comments and rate as you are posting the story in between pictures.
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(19-10-2026, 05:27 PM)Gabbar2020 Wrote:  Great. As you post story as a new update, then people can read, comment and rate. Then rating will go up. Now they cannot post comments and rate as you are posting the story in between pictures.

Thread rating is above, just go and give them 5 star, just I did. thread rating will improve automatically..

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I think the writer is zilddi, he is not happy with the response of readers..
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Rohan thread rating kaa option uper ki side right hand side me hai, waha wo rating chahta hai, comments me nhi..
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Bhai jitni mast ye story hai update dene ka tarika utna hi bekar hai.
Ek update ke baad uske next update ki jagah aage ka update de rakha hai iss tarah update aate hue bhi next update ke liye long wait karna padta hai. Abhi tak Charulata ka update hi pura nahi kiya.
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You all get update today...
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Thank you Jay Thakur, your the one, who able to understand my thoughts..
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Jab me aur Charulata uske room ki aur chal kar jaa rhe the..

Charulata_ Jay tumne meri ankhon ke samne un teeno bhi Diya ki chhinkhe nikal di, unhe itni der tak lagatar choda phir bhi tum thake nhi..

Me_ Agar me thak jata meri jaan to wo kese hota jo tere aur mere bich hona hai..

Charulata ne muskurate huye mere hath ko apne dono hatho se pakad liya bade pyar se aur kuchh hi palo me hum uske room me the...

Me bed ke pass jaakar khada ho gyaa, Charulata ne gate ke pass ruk kar pahle get band kiya aur phir badi hi kamuk ada ke sath mere pass aayi aur apna ak hath mere kandhe per aur dusra meri kamar per rakh diya..

Charulata_ Jay, mujhe pata hai ki tumharey liye kisi bhi aaurat ko chodna badi aam baat hai..lakin mere liye aaj kaa din bahut khas hai..

Meine uske dono chuttad ko apni hatheliyon se dabaya aur bolaa..

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Me_ Charulata, tum mere liye khas ho, iss ghar ki har ak chut ak taraf aur tum ak taraf..

Charulata_ Aisa kyun Jay..

Me_ Kyuki tumme wo baat hai, Tumhare jism me wo baat hai ki tum mujhe khush kar sako..auro ko to me khush karta hun..

Charulata_ Achcha..

Me_ Kyaa tum jeewan bhar ke liye meri jaan banne ko taiyar ho..

Ye kahte huye mene use apni baho me bhar liya aur ak dam karib khinch liyaa..
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Wo lagatar meri aankhon me dekh rahi thi aur meri jaban se nikali baaton ko meri aankhon ke jawab se tol rahi thi ki me kitna sach bol rha hun..

Mene use thoda aur karib kia, uske hoton ke karib aaya..

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Me_ Charulata mujhe mere jeewan me ak aisi wafadar aaurat chahiye kisi bhi parishtiti me mujhse daga naa kare, mere jeewan me wo mere liye Rani, Daasi aur Raand. 

Kuch bhi banne ko taiyar ho. kisi bhi pal.. jise mere dusri aurato ko raand ki tarah chodne se koi jalan naa ho..

Sab kuchh janne aur dekhne ke baad bhi wo kisi aur mard ke bistar me naa jaye, usse aakarshak naa ho..

Charulata_ Jay wese to tum mujhe umar me kaafi chhote ho lakin, tumhara ye jo pyar karne kaa tarika hai, usne hi mere andar aag laga di hai..

Me tumhen vachan deti hun ki iss pal se me sirf tumhari hun..
Aur bolte huye usne mujhe kiss kiyaa..

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Uske hothon me ak alag hi ras tha, ak salon purani pyas kaa maja tha..

Uske aur mere bich ye chumman ak rishte ko aage bada rha tha, mere liye charulata bahut khas thi..

Uska meri tarah hona, mere liye kaam karna bahut jaruri tha, tabhi me iss pariwar ka har ak chut ko chodne me safal ho pata..

Me_ Charulata, Me chahta hun ki tum mere Lund ko aise pyar karo aise pyar karo ki tumharey andar jag rhe mere prati pyar ko me mehsus kar saku..

Me bed per Beth gyaa aur wo jamin per beth gayi..

Mera ak hath uske chehre per tha, aur uski aankhon me, mere liye beintaha pyar tha..

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Fir uske khud mere Lund ko Meri pant se bahar nikala, uske karib gayi.. 

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kamre mein sirf chhat ke pankhe ki dhimi gunj sunai de rahi thi—ek sust, bar-bar doharai jaane wali aawaz, jo vahan chhai gahri khamoshi ko aur bhi gehra kar rahi thi. charulata bistar ke kinare baithi thi..

Mere Lund ki lambai aur motai ko nihar rahi thi..

Me puri tarah relaxed, bed ke kinare betha tha..

Par ek ajeeb si kashish ke sath. mera ek haath Charulata ke sir per tha.

Jab Charulata mere Lund ko chum rahi thi to mere lund me bijali ki gati se blood dod rha tha..

Me bade shant bhaav se Charulata ko dekh rha tha, mere honthon par ek halki si muskan thi..

Udhar Charulata kaa chehra shanta aur khamosh tha, mera lund jo apne pure charam per pahuch chuka tha, ye charulata ke liye ak nimantran tha, jise sweekar karne ke liye charulata puri tarah taiyar thi.

charulta ka haath apne aap aage badha; uski ungaliyan mere Lund par thi...


Charulata_ Jay ye lund itna lamba aur mota hai, ki ise jo bhi ak baar andar legi, wo dobara ise andar lene ko khud aatur rahegi..

Uske ungliyo mere Lund se hote huye mere goto tak gaye, aur wo pade pyar se unhen bhi sahlane lagi..

Fir dhire se usne apne muh me lund ko liya aur lund ke upari hisse ko chuma..

Fir apne muh se lund kaa topa nikal kar boli..

Charulata_ Jaan agar mere daant lage tumharey iss Vishal lund per, to mujhe batana..

Mene 20 saal se aisa Kuch nhi kiya hai..

Me_ Charulata tum chuso, jese chus sakti ho..

Mene, Charulata per koi dabav nahin dala, na hi koi disha di. meri ungaliyan bus uske baalon mein uljhi rahin, jaise koi sahara de rahi hon.

Charulata ne apni jeebh se sab kuch tatolna shuru kiya. usne jad se lekar sire tak ek lambi, gili lakeer khinchi, aur phir apni jeebh ko mere ling ke samvedansheel upari hisse (korona) ke charon or ghumaya.


Wo mere Lund ke tope se khel rahi thi.. me uski iss harkat se sihar utha, mere poore shareer mein ek kampan daud gai. 

Charulata ne lund ke sire ko halke se chata, jaise koi billi ka baccha shararat kar raha ho. 

aakhirkar, usne mere Lund ko apne munh mein le liya. sirf mere Lund kaa upari hissa hi charu ke munh mein puri tarah sama paya..

Charu ki jeebh par ek chikna aur bhari ehsaas tha. usne apne honthon ko lund ke charon or kas liya aur dhire-dhire chusne lagi.

Is dabav se mere gale se ek gahri karah nikali. aur Charu ke baalon meri ungli me aur tight pakad liya..

Mera lund kafi mota tha. Charu ko mahsoos ho raha tha ki use andar lene ke liye uske munh ke kone khinch rahe he, Charu ne apna sir upar-niche kiya, jisse mera lund ek inch aur andar chala gaya. usne apni jeebh ko mere ling ke nichle hisse par laga rakha tha, aur upar ki or aate hue jor se dabaya. yah ragad ekdum sahi thi—geeli aur garm.

Mein_ "bilkul aise hi," 


Mene dhimi aur anand se bhari awaz mein kaha

Mein_ "tumhara munh... uf, yah ekdum mast hai."

is tarif ne charulata ko aur utsahit kar diya. wah lund ko aur andar lena chahti thi, mano use pura nigal jana chahti ho. usne apne jabde aur gale ko dheela chhoda aur use aur gahrai tak le gai. jab wah lund uske gale ke pichle hisse se takraya, to wah ruk gai...


Abhi tak mere Lund ko itna andar lene ki himmat kisi ne nhi dikhai thi..

Charulata apna pura samarpan mujhe dikha rahi thi..

Charu ne apni naak se saans lee aur khud ko us sthiti ke anukul hone diya. 

Lund bahut bada tha. ek bhara-pura, bhari ehsas—jo apne aap mein ek alag hi tarah ka anand tha. 

Charu ne lund ko ak jhatke me bahar nikala, lambi lambi saanse li..aur phir lund ko pahle ki tarah andar ke liya..

Charu ne apne gaalon ko andar ki or khincha aur peeche hatte hue jor se chusa. isse ek aisa shaktishali vacuum (khinchav) bana ki meri saansein ukhad gai aur meri pith khud naa khud piche ki aur mood gayi aur me bed per leta gyaa..

Charulata ki ek lay ban gai thi. koi jaldbaji ya hadbadi nahin, balki ek dhimi, sadhi hui aur puri tallinta ke saath ki jaane wali harkat.


Wo apna 200% de rahi thi mujhe khush karne ke liye..

Mere dono hath uske sir per the aur me uske muh me lund diye jaa rha tha.....

Mere liye ye ahsas naya aur bahut sukhmay tha..

lambe aur gahre stroke se charu ka munh puri tarah bhar jata, jiske baad wah kaskar chooste hue peeche hat jati..

Uska ek haath mere ling ke nichle hisse par kaam kar raha tha—ek chikni aur ghumavdar harkat ke sath. uski lar ne lund ko puri tarah geela kar diya tha, jisse yah puri prakriya ekdum sahaj aur aasan ho gai thi.

kamre ki aawazen badal gain. pankhe ki gunj ke beech ab uske munh se nikalne wali geeli, laybaddh aawazen sunai de rahi thin. uski tez aur ukhadi hui sanson ke sath, munh se chusne ki ek dhimi awaaz mil rahi thi. 

hawa mein sex ki mahak bhar gai thi—ek nashili aur madhosh kar dene wali khushbu.

uska apna shareer bhi pratikriya de raha tha. uski taangon ke beech ek gahri, tees bhari bechaini mahsoos ho rahi thi. uske nipple sakht ho gaye the aur bra ke kapde se ragad kha rahe the.....


Charulata lund ko muh se bahar nikal kar..

Charulata_ Jay tumne to mere nipple sakht kar diye bina kuch kiya aur meri chut me halchal bhi macha di..

Itna kah kar wi dobara lund ko chusne lagi..

Uske chusne ke tarike se ek aisi ragad mujhe mehsoos ho rahi thi jo mujhe pagal kar rahi thi. 

Idhar charulata apni chut me gilapan mahsoos kar sakti thi, jo uski jaanghon ke bhitari hisse par fail raha tha. use yah sukh dena, apne aap mein hi use bahut uttejit kar raha tha.

 Mera sir peeche ki or jhuka hua tha, mein bed per leta hua tha...,
aankhen kaskar band, aur chadar ko itni zor se pakad rakha tha ki meri ungaliyon ke por safed pad gaye thi..

kyunki ye ahsas kisi chut ke andar gehrai se lund utarne se bhi alag tha..

Aur ye bahut hi tivra tha.  wo lagatar muh me lund ko andar bahar kar rahi thi, aur mujhe deep throats de rahi thi..

Charulata ki harkato ne mujhe besudh kar diya, mere sath ye pahli baar ho rha tha...

Charulata ne apna munh hataya, to uske nichle honth aur mere ling ke sire ke beech lar ki ek patli lakeer ban gai, jo kuch pal baad toot gai. 

Charu ne meri aur dekha, me upar ki aur utha aur humari aankhein mili
Charulata ki saansein tez aur ukhadi hui thin. 

Idhar meri aankhen gahri thin, aur iss ahsas se meri putliyan puri tarah fail gai thin. me puri tarah se behaal lag raha tha.

Charulata_"tumhara bahut bada hai Jay.." 


Charulata ne bhari awaaz mein fusfusaya.

Mene apni hatheli se Charu ke sir ko sahlaya..

Charulata_bahut mota bhi hai, mujhe bahut acha lagta hai jab tumhara ye lund mere munh mein hota hai"

Mere seene se ek aisi awaaz nikli jo koi shabd to nahin thi, par bahut kuch kah rahi thi. 


Mene apne kulhon ko upar ki or dhakela, jaise koi khamosh guhar laga raha ho. 

Charulata turant samaj gayi ki me chahta hu, wo aur lund chuse, usne mera ishara samajh liya aur lund phir se apne munh mein le liya, is baar aur bhi gahrai se. usne use apne gale ke bhitar liya, aur uske gale ki manspeshiyan uske ling ke sire ko kaskar jakadane lagin. 

Me tadap utha, mere gale se ek dabi hui, betaab awaaz nikli.

Mein_"charulta, main bus pahunchne hi wala hun," 


Mene kamuk aawaj me kaha...aur apne haath se uske sir ko aur neeche ki or dabaya. 

Wo karib 30 minutes se mujhe itna aanad de rahi thi ki me mantra mugdha ho gyaa tha..

Mein_"main bus jhadne wala hun." 

Charulata aur chhav se chusne lagi. mere kano me jese hi ye sabd pade me turant hosh me aa gya..

Mene khud ko sambhala aur charulata ko dekhne laga.. uski aur meri aankhein mili..

Jab me use wo sab karte dekh rha tha, to uski aankhon me ak aur adhbudh khushi thi..

Mene usse kaha..

Mein_ Jaan tum bahut chus chuki ab band karo, aur aao meri god me betho..

Usne bilkul wahi Kiya.. mere Lund ko bahar nikala chuma aur meri god me aakar beth gayi..

Uski saanse tez thi, uska muh laar se bhara hua tha..usme khud ko uski saree se saaf kiyaa..

Aur mere bilkul karib aakar beth gayi..

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Charulata_ Kesa laga meri jaan ko..kyaa me tumhen auro se hat kar kushi de payi..

Mein_ Haa charu tum mujhe uss ahsas tak le gayi, jaha tak mujhe tumharey alawa koi nhi le gayi..

Agar tum kuchh der aur karti rahti to me 5 minutes me andar tumhare muh me hi jhad jata, wo ahsas itna achcha tha..

Charulata_ to tum khud ho mujhse..

Mein_ Haa meri Jaan

Charulata_ Ye sun kar me bhi khush hun..

Mein_ Chalo aao tumhari pyash bujaye..

Charulata_ Jay, me tumse kuchh kahna chahti hun..

Mein_ Kyaa..

Charulata_ Me apne pati ke alawa kisi se sambhog nhi kar sakti, ye mera saadi se purv kaa khud se vachan hai..isi liye itne salo tak me khud ko rok kar rakh payi..

Mein_ To phir aaj kyaa hua?

Charulata_ Tumhari mardana takat aur lund ko dekh kar me pighal gayi hun..

Mein_ To tum kyaa chahti ho..

Charulata_ Mene tumhen jo sukh diya, usme khush ho jao..me bas itna chahti hun, sambhog nhi so sakta...

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Excellent update  Namaskar
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Maine ak duvidha me tha, kintu Charulata ko apna banana chahta tha, pata nhi kyun per meri Antara Ataraatma mujse bol rahi thi ki..

Ye bandi mere jeevan me bahut kaam aane wali hai..ye mere liye kuchh bhi kar gujregi..

Maine apne bade aur samajdar hone kaa parichay diya, aur iss parishti ko apne dhang se sambhala..

Maine kuch der uski taraf dekha aur phir shaant swar mein kaha—

Main (Jay): Charulata, main tumhari bees saalon se chali aa rahi is tapasya ko todne ke bajaay tumhe ek aisa raasta dena chahta hoon, jisse tumhara apne aap se kiya hua vaada bhi apni jagah bana rahe aur hum dono ke rishte ko bhi ek naam mil sake.

Woh meri baat sunkar thodi asahaj ho gayi. Uski aankhon mein kai sawaal the.

Charulata: Woh kaise, Jay? Tum aakhir kehna kya chahte ho?

Main: Main jaanta hoon ki tumne apne liye ek maryada tay ki hai. Tum chahti ho ki tumhare jeevan mein sharirik sambandh sirf tumhare pati ke saath hi hon. Main tumhari is pratigya ka apmaan nahi karna chahta. Main chahta hoon ki tumhare mann mein jo bhi darr aur asmanjas hai, woh door ho jaaye.

Woh meri taraf dekhne lagi. Shayad abhi bhi use meri baat ka poora arth samajh nahi aaya tha.

Maine aage kaha—

Main: Charulata, ek baat batao. Kya tumhare paas koi aisa mangalsutra aur sindoor hai, jiska tumne abhi tak upyog nahi kiya ho? Jo tumne khud khareeda ho aur kisi doosre vyakti ne tumhe uphaar mein na diya ho?

Woh kuch pal tak mujhe dekhti rahi.

Charulata: Haan, Jay. Mere paas aisa mangalsutra aur sindoor hai. Lekin tum yeh sab kyun poochh rahe ho?

Maine uski aankhon mein dekhte hue kaha—

Main: Charulata, tum chaaho toh woh dono mujhe bech do.

Yeh sunkar woh aur ulajh gayi.

Charulata: Tumhare mann mein kya hai, Jay? Tum sindoor aur mangalsutra kyun khareedna chahte ho? Mujhe saaf-saaf batao.

Maine uski uljhan ko aur badhana theek nahi samjha. Main uske saamne thoda aur spasht hokar baitha aur uska haath apne haath mein lekar kaha—

Main: Charulata, main tumse Gandharva Vivaah karna chahta hoon.

Woh ekdam shaant ho gayi.

Kuch pal ke liye kamre mein aisi khamoshi chha gayi, jismein sirf hamari saanson ki aawaaz sunai de rahi thi. Usne meri aankhon mein dekha, jaise mere shabdon ke peeche chhupe bhaavon ko samajhne ki koshish kar rahi ho.

Maine uska haath thaame hue apni baat poori ki—

Main: Main tumhe kuch palon ki khushi dekar tumhari zindagi se chale jaana nahi chahta. Main chahta hoon ki tumhare mann mein mere liye jo bhi bhaavnayein hain, unhe ek sammaanajanak pehchaan mile. Main tumhe apni patni ke roop mein sweekaar karna chahta hoon. 

Duniya ki najar me chahe hum pati patni naa ho, lakin mere liye tum sada meri pahli patni rahogi..

tum khud ko mujhe lagbhag sop chuki ho, ab inn vicharo ko bhadha naa banne do..

Charulata_ Lakin Jay! me saadi suda hun!

Mein_ Tum saadi suda thi jaan lakin tum uss shaadi ko salo pahle tod chuki ho..

Charulata_ Haa wo to hai lakin!

Main: Charulata, main chahta hoon ki humara rishta vishwas, nishtha aur saath nibhane ke sankalp par khada ho. Agar tum bhi apni ichchha se mujhe apna jeevansaathi sweekaar karti ho, toh hum aaj ek-doosre ke saamne apne rishte ka sankalp le sakte hain. Main tumhare vachan ko todna nahi chahta aur na hi tumhe kisi faisle ke liye majboor karna chahta hoon.

Meri baatein sunkar Charulata ki aankhein nam ho gayi. Uske chehre par dheere-dheere ek aisi muskaan ubharne lagi, jismein rahat bhi thi aur khushi bhi.

Charulata: Jay, mujhe laga tha ki kahin tum mera bhog karke mujhe chhod toh nahi doge. Mujhe darr tha ki kahin meri bhaavnayein hi mere liye pachhtaave ka kaaran na ban jaayein. 

Woh kuch pal ruki aur phir meri taraf dekhkar boli—

Charulata: Lekin tum toh mujhe apni zindagi mein jagah de rahe ho. Tum mujhe sirf apne paas nahi rakhna chahte, balki mujhe apna banana chahte ho. Tumne mere mann ka woh darr door kar diya, jise shayad main kabhi tumhare saamne khulkar keh bhi nahi paati.

Maine dheere se kaha—

Main: Charulata, kisi ka vishwas paana aasaan nahi hota. Aur jab koi apna vishwas humein saunp deta hai, toh uski raksha karna hamari zimmedaari ban jaati hai.

Woh muskuraayi aur boli—

Charulata: Jay, agar tumhare mann mein sachmuch yahi bhaavna hai, toh main bhi is rishte ko poore mann se sweekaar karti hoon. Main chahti hoon ki aaj ka yeh faisla sirf ek rasam bankar na reh jaaye, balki aisa sankalp bane jise hum dono hamesha yaad rakhein.

 1. Naye kapde aur vivaah ki taiyaari

Humne tay kiya ki pehle khud ko vyavasthit karenge aur phir shaant mann se apne is faisle ko ek roop denge.

Kuch samay baad hum dono sath me bathroom mein gaye aur humne ak sath nange hokar snaan kiya..

Phir bahar aaye charulata ne nayi saare aur naye undergarments aur Naya blouse, peticoat pahna..

Mere paas us samay badalne ke liye kapde nahi the. Charulata ne apni almaari se ek bilkul nayi lungi nikaali aur meri taraf badha di.

Charulata: Jay, filhaal tum ise pehen lo. Yeh bilkul nayi hai.

Mein: Ye tumhare pass kyaa kar rahi hai..

Charulata: Ye me nikaro ke liye layi thi, shirt aur loongi..dene ke liye..ye ak jod bach gyaa tha, sabko batne ke baad iss liye apni almari me patak diya tha..

me uss shirt aur loongi ko pahna...

Charulata ne mujhe dekha toh uske chehre par halki-si hansi aa gayi.

Charulata: Tumhe pata hai, Jay? Maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki meri zindagi ka itna mahatvapoorna din itni saadgi se shuru hoga. aur wo bhi raat me..

Main: Shayad kuch yaadein isliye khaas ban jaati hain, kyunki unmein dikhaave se zyada sachchai hoti hai.

Woh muskuraakar mere paas aakar khadi ho gayi.

Humne sindoor aur mangalsutra apne saamne rakh diye. Woh dono cheezein pehle saadharan-si thi, lekin us samay hamare liye unka arth badal chuka tha. Ab woh hamare faisle, hamari bhaavnayein aur ek-doosre ke prati zimmedaari ke prateek banne ja rahe the.

Gandharva Vivaah ka sankalp

Maine Charulata ki taraf dekha.

Main: Charulata, main chahta hoon ki hum yeh sab apni poori ichchha aur samajh ke saath karein. Agar tumhare mann mein koi bhi sandeh hai, toh tum mujhe bata sakti ho. Aaj tumhari sahmati aur tumhari khushi mere liye sabse zyada maayne rakhti hai.

Usne bina kisi jhijhak ke mera haath thaam liya.

Charulata: Jay, main apni ichchha se tumhare saath yeh sankalp le rahi hoon. Main chahti hoon ki tum mujhe hamesha usi sammaan se dekho, jis sammaan ke saath aaj tumne meri bhaavnao ko samjha hai.

Maine uska haath apne dono haathon mein lekar kaha—

Main: Main tumhare vishwas ki raksha karne ka vachan deta hoon. Main chahta hoon ki hamare beech koi rishta chhal ya dabaav par nahi, balki sachchai aur aapsi sammaan par tika ho. Sukh ho ya kathin samay, hum ek-doosre ki baat sunenge aur apne rishte ko imaandaari se nibhaane ki koshish karenge.

Charulata ki aankhon mein khushi jhalak rahi thi.

Usne bhi apna sankalp dohraaya—

Charulata: Main bhi is rishte ko sachche mann se sweekaar karti hoon, Jay. Main chahti hoon ki hamara saath sirf aaj ki bhaavnaon tak seemit na rahe. Hum ek-doosre ki zindagi mein vishwas, sammaan aur sukoon ka kaaran banein.

Me tumhen vachan deti hun Jay ki me sada tumhari parchhai ban kar rahungi, sada tumhari aagyaa kaa palan karungi..

Tumhe sada sukh dungi..

Tumhari kisi bhi biwi yaa premika yaa kisi bhi aaurat se jalungi nhi..aur naa hi unse irsha karungi..

Unhe samman dungi..

Mein aaj aur iss wakt se apna jiwan tumharey liye samarpit karti hun Jay..

Uske baad maine sindoor uthaya.

Charulata mere saamne shaant bhaav se khadi thi. Maine uski sahmati se uski maang mein sindoor lagaaya.

Uski aankhein kuch pal ke liye band ho gayin. Jab usne aankhein kholi, toh uske chehre par ek komal muskaan thi. Usne apna haath uthaakar maang ko halke se chhua, jaise us pal ko apne bheetar sanjokar rakhna chahti ho.

Phir maine mangalsutra uthaya aur uske gale mein pehna diya.

Charulata ne use dono haathon se chhua. Uske chehre par khushi ke saath ek gehri bhaavukta bhi thi.

Wo 20 salo se saadi suda hokar bhi vidhwa ki tarah ji rahi thi, aaj uske jiwan me saadisuda aur sobhagyawati hone kaa avsar dobara aaya tha..

Charulata: Jay, aaj tumne mujhe wo Khushi di hai, jiski me ummeed bhi nhi kar sakti thi..tumne mujhe puri tarah se apna bana liya hai..

Maine muskuraakar jawaab diya—

Main: Aur main chahta hoon ki tumhe yeh ehsaas sirf aaj nahi, balki har us din ho jab tum mere saath raho.

Woh muskuraayi aur kuch pal tak mangalsutra ko apni ungliyon se chhooti rahi. Uske liye yeh sirf ek aabhushan nahi tha, balki us faisle ki yaad thi jise usne apni ichchha se sweekaar kiya tha.

Sone ki anguthi — mere prem ki nishaani

Mere paas sone ki ek anguthi thi. jo me apne anghute me pahanta tha, bilkul simple si, gol anguthi..

Main use apni taraf se Charulata ko ek yaadgaar nishaani ke roop mein dena chahta tha.

Maine anguthi nikaalkar uski hatheli par rakh di.

Main: Charulata, yeh meri taraf se tumhare liye ek nishaani hai. Iski keemat iske sone mein nahi, balki us bhaavna mein hai jiske saath main tumhe yeh de raha hoon. Jab bhi tum ise dekhogi, mujhe yaad karne ke saath-saath aaj liye gaye hamare sankalp ko bhi yaad karna.

Charulata ne anguthi ko apni hatheli par dekha. Phir meri taraf dekhkar poochha—

Charulata: Jay, tum chahte ho ki main ise kahaan rakhun?

Maine uski taraf dekhte hue kaha—

Main: Jahaan tumhe yeh sabse zyada pyaari lage. Main chahta hoon ki yeh tumhare liye hamare rishte ki yaad bane.

Usne kuch der socha. Phir usne almira se ak patli sone ki chain nikali aur usmein anguthi daalkar chain apne gale mein pehen li.

Ab uske gale mein mangalsutra ke saath woh chain bhi thi, jismein meri di hui anguthi ek chhoti-si nishaani ki tarah chamak rahi thi.

Charulata ne use ungliyon se chhua aur muskuraakar boli—

Charulata: Ab yeh mere liye sirf ek anguthi nahi hai, Jay. ye mere mangalsutra ke saman hi hai..

Maine jawaab diya—

Main: mein to ab to tumhen koi aitraz nhi hai..

Charulata: Mein apne pati ko suhagrat wale din kese mana kar sakti hun..

Usne apna sir mere kandhe par tika diya. Main kuch pal chupchaap uske paas khada raha.

Fir me bed per aakar beth gyaa.. wo samne hi khadi thi bilkul ak suhagan ki tarah..

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Mein: Charulata tum khush nhi ho kyaa humare iss sambhandh se..

Charulata: Bahut khush hun Jaan, bas kuch soch rahi thi..

Me: Bas yahi ki Nirbhay mere sath kabhi jabarjasti naa karein warna me use kese samjhaungi..

Mein_ use me Sambhal lunga.. ab jara muskura bhi de meri Charulata..

Charu muskurate huye..
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Charulata_ Jaan me ab tumhen apne jalwe dikhati hun..

Mein_ Achacha..

Charulata ne apni saree utar ke side fenk di, ab wo bilkul maal lag rahi thi..

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Great going
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Bhai ji ho sakta hai aapko bura lage but aapne advance post kar ke fir delete kar dete ho fir gayab ho jate ho aap iss tarah story ko barbad kar de rahe ho fir ummid main jite ho bhai ji maine pahle bhi likha hai ki sirf iss story ke liye hi Maine yahan register Kiya hai so please story ko sequence ke hisab se hi post karo nahi to story ke prati jigyasa khatam ho jati hai or readers ka maja kirkira ho jata hai so please aapse request hai ki meri baton ka bura na mante huye story ko sahi tarike se aage badhao hum log besabri se intjar kar rahe hain aapke agle update ka
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(21-10-2026, 04:14 PM)Skb21 Wrote:  Bhai ji ho sakta hai aapko bura lage but aapne advance post kar ke fir delete kar dete ho fir gayab ho jate ho aap iss tarah story ko barbad kar de rahe ho fir ummid main jite ho bhai ji maine pahle bhi likha hai ki sirf iss story ke liye hi Maine yahan register Kiya hai so please story ko sequence ke hisab se hi post karo nahi to story ke prati jigyasa khatam ho jati hai or readers ka maja kirkira ho jata hai so please aapse request hai ki meri baton ka bura na mante huye story ko sahi tarike se aage badhao hum log besabri se intjar kar rahe hain aapke agle update ka

Ye dono post sequence ke according hi hai dost, aur jo hataye gaye hai, wo ab sequence me hi aage update honge..
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Not able to post the update due 403 forbidden error..
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Dear Tera_yaar24 kesi lagi story??
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