[AnkitaR]

Welcome back krish

[Rahulraj306]

story looks like tragic not an erotic except few episodes. krish should be hero but here desai do all the work. meera seems like slut sometimes. krish appear weak, timid and of unstable character. he makes so many mistakes and can't even take one dicision correctly. he is really pathetic. why desai is so much powerful and charismatic. it kills the flow of story. it looks like desai and Meera's story. now remove desai from story and bring fun that meera and krish both enjoy.

[Andy Smith]

A request to Krish , please make it properly erotic rather than only tragedic . When the 1st part came out the erotic tension from first chapter was what pulling the readers most . But in the specially last part the visible erotic part was gone , only sad tone and love tragedy and a timid character Krish . Its still a great story but i think the erotic tension part was quite invisible in the 3rd part specially in the last parts . So it would be a special request to krish

[29e5o.a7.9.]

Hi all. 
Sorry for keeping you and other readers waiting for so long. Life has been very busy with me. Couldn't help. And the wait will have to continue till December so that I can have a progress to show. Yes, I'm writing it. The part 4 is coming. As per my calculations it will have 20-30 chapters. I'm aiming to start in January, with weekly updates like my previous story. 
Thank you all, for commenting and showing love and support to my story. 
Love. Krish.

Welcome back King!

[Rahulraj306]

I don't think for chapter 4. this is happy ending and let it be. i commented earlier was because I didn't read ending. i read only upto what is in index. you need to update the index just it. your writing becoming emotional trauma and we come here for hot and erotic material. but as a reader once we start, we need to read it till the end. so in 4th chapter if you are going to write like this, please don't. it's my humble request.

[CoreMadness]

For a change instead of Krish trying to be cuck again and pushing Meera towards it, She would be the one willing to experiment and bring back Krish to that world. The story in her POV would be great for a change, that would be one way to write it and solve many questions on how she thinks....Her missing the old kink would be the best at this time because after everything that happened Krish going back to that life by himself is outright silly and nonsensical.

[amzad2004]

It is author's decision to write part 4 not reader"s decision. If anyone does not like it then he could ignore it. Do not read the part 4. We will read it.

[Demeter]

Suggestions …

Your decision to write a fourth and final chapter is of significant importance.

I am not sure whether you have already started writing or not, as I would like to share a few suggestions.
I would appreciate it if, in a review of the previous three chapters, a few questions could be answered.
In this context, it is crucial to focus on Meera’s perspective, as she alone is in a position to describe, for example, the events on the train in detail, particularly the incidents involving the army officer. 
Her first experience of anal sex with Mr. Das would be another aspect, as would some similar situations that were only mentioned in passing but not described in detail.

I suggest writing the fourth chapter alternately from the "POV of Krish and Meera". This would allow the emotions, thoughts, feelings, fears and joys of both protagonists to be portrayed accurately, 
thereby enabling an emotional connection with the reader.
In my opinion, this would lend the story greater dynamism and suspense and resonate on an emotional level with the reader.

In this sense
All the best

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Demeter

[Rahulraj306]

i just wish to say that make chapter 4 kinky and erotic.
don't bring desai back. instead make krish and meera explore cuckold world with different persons.
don't make it emotional drama.
as an author, last call is yours.

[AnkitaR]

I’ve really enjoyed the three parts so far, but I’d love to see a different dynamic in the next story. In all three parts, Meera has been involved with men who are her boss or otherwise financially and socially above her husband. It would be interesting to break away from that pattern.

Maybe Meera could encounter a man—or several men—who are sexually frustrated or deprived, rather than wealthy or powerful. The contrast could make the story feel fresh and explore a completely different kind of attraction and power dynamic. It doesn’t necessarily have to be about money or status at all; perhaps Meera simply finds herself drawn to someone unexpected.

I think taking Meera out of the usual “boss/rich powerful man” scenario could open up some really interesting possibilities for the next part.

[29e5o.a7.9.]

i just wish to say that make chapter 4 kinky and erotic.
don't bring desai back. instead make krish and meera explore cuckold world with different persons.
don't make it emotional drama.
as an author, last call is yours.

I absolutely agree with you on point of Desai, Rahulraj. Please don't bring Desai back! Hopefully his character is R.I.P moving forward and bringing him back really serves no purpose for the part 4.

[29e5o.a7.9.]

I’ve really enjoyed the three parts so far, but I’d love to see a different dynamic in the next story. In all three parts, Meera has been involved with men who are her boss or otherwise financially and socially above her husband. It would be interesting to break away from that pattern.

Maybe Meera could encounter a man—or several men—who are sexually frustrated or deprived, rather than wealthy or powerful. The contrast could make the story feel fresh and explore a completely different kind of attraction and power dynamic. It doesn’t necessarily have to be about money or status at all; perhaps Meera simply finds herself drawn to someone unexpected.

I think taking Meera out of the usual “boss/rich powerful man” scenario could open up some really interesting possibilities for the next part.

This right here! 100% Agree  

[29e5o.a7.9.]

Krish I had made this Photoshop for you 2 years back! But was not able to post on this thread for some reason...

Will give another shot here. Hope you like it ;)


This one depicting the way Meera got ready to attend the music concert with Piyush in her blue dress looking like absolute spectacle with belt to draw the attention to her voluptuous frame, wide hips and huge juggs ;)

I wonder what would've happened if Meera played along with the confusion and Desai was quiet to see if she considered spending night with Piyush... What ifs ;)

[29e5o.a7.9.]

Krish my sincere request to you! Ever since you wrote that bit where Meera would go to morning vegetable shopping with certain character called narender uncle. And he was so blatant and direct and funny. Loved the part where he confesses that his group wanted to have "workout" session with Meera.

Bro there where so many times I had visualized that shit was happening but never did. Seems you only teased us. But remember Krish (the character in the story) had got boner when Meera told this incident to him.

Can you please fulfill that arc for Meera pls! It was so light hearted and equally erotic to visualize Meera having "workout" session in apartment gym with some old fragile man.... to see if this old man is all talks or really has the stamina to keep up with the goddess.

And now that she's lactating, her boobs are now even more bigger!! I think the eroticism bar has raised by 10 million fold. Would love to see this fragile old man being breast fed by this goddess... Mild spilling from his mouth... Narender uncle and his gang of lewd oldies can get their calcium and protein requirement fulfilled by our Meera ;) What do you say??

 

[amzad2004]

Dear author pls do not include any old man encounters. Pls ignore all comments from sex reterded readers. Pls kind enough to advice them to go to mental hospital for mental treatment.

[Sagar s]

Krish my sincere request to you! Ever since you wrote that bit where Meera would go to morning vegetable shopping with certain character called narender uncle. And he was so blatant and direct and funny. Loved the part where he confesses that his group wanted to have "workout" session with Meera.

Bro there where so many times I had visualized that shit was happening but never did. Seems you only teased us. But remember Krish (the character in the story) had got boner when Meera told this incident to him.

Can you please fulfill that arc for Meera pls! It was so light hearted and equally erotic to visualize Meera having "workout" session in apartment gym with some old fragile man.... to see if this old man is all talks or really has the stamina to keep up with the goddess.

And now that she's lactating, her boobs are now even more bigger!! I think the eroticism bar has raised by 10 million fold. Would love to see this fragile old man being breast fed by this goddess... Mild spilling from his mouth... Narender uncle and his gang of lewd oldies can get their calcium and protein requirement fulfilled by our Meera ;) What do you say??

 

I agree but with not other old men,s only narendar uncle nd no one

[29e5o.a7.9.]

I agree but with not other old men,s only narendar uncle nd no one

Thank you for the support sagar bhai! Narender uncle's 5 min cameo role created such a big impact! Hopefully Krish bhai considers this fandom for the old man and has some plan in the upcoming chapter 4 ;)

 

[అన్నెపు]

Waiting for the next chapter

[123goat369]

No Disrespect to anyone here, but I think we have seen enough old men in the story. What we need is just kinky erotic stuff from both Krish and Meera side, also as someone mentioned need these stories From Meera perspective as well, if possible may be Krish is sleeping around and Meera is conflicted and she is Krish's place ..We want Krish and Meera to win at the end in a satisfied way rather than rushed ending like part 3.

Anything new should be NOT like emotional drama like part 3, more of casual way like part 1 and some of part 2. Their love emotion is very good but don't think we all can take it anymore.

Also all closures as I mentioned in my previous comments like Krish and Sheetal, Krish and Nikita, Train scene details, Meera first time stuff not doing with Krish but rather other men, like Anal , in car, in public park like with Armaan, first BJ with others and stuff so its more honest from her side and his side.

[amzad2004]

Readers should understand that Meera is not a whore or a gold digger. She loves krish more than anything. She did not have sex for her pleasure, she did for krish. She won't do it like whore. Author krish is not cheap sex story writer. So pls do not expect that Author krish will degraded the character of Meera. Meera will be involved with the only one character outside her marriage. One or two sex encounter may be included by author. We can only hope that this time author exclude the old man theme and include the young man theme. He must be younger than Meera. Author krish stated that the part 4 will have 20 to 30 chapters. So do not expect so many sex in part 4.