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Nice job updates ki speed bahut jyada dhimi ho gayi hai or jo pictures aap advance me dal rahe ho agar ho sake to update ke sath hi upload karo to jyada achchha lagega..... Waiting for next
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Bhai please update. You are an amazing writer
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Nice job waiting for next
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Nice job Padmavathi wala part jabardast laga or Rajeshwari wala bhi mast tha or Jeewan singh ji ke ghar ki baki ki ladies ko bhi Jai ki mardangi dekhne ka moka mile waiting for next
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Lgta hai parichay pahchan ka kaam lagbhag pura ho gaya hai bas baad walo ki tasveer dalna baki rah gaya hai lekin maine do baton par vishesh gaur kiya hai.
1- Jivan singh ji sari potiyon ke pati unse 9-12 saal bade hain or
2- kisi bhi chahe pata ho ya poti kisi ko koi Santan nahi hai..
Kahin aisa to nahi hai ki in sabhi ko Santan sukh Jay se hi milne wala ho
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Jeevan Singh_Jay tum sab se mil chuke ho, mere pariwar me lagbhag..
Me_ Lagbhag matlab, kyaa aur bhi log hai apke pariwar me..
Jeevan Singh_ Suryabhan ki teesri patni, uski 2 avivahit betiyaan, Suryabhan kaa sala aur uski biwi..
Yaha mojud nhi hai, Suryabhan ke sasur kaa swasth theek nhi hai, to wo waha gye huye hai..
Baki tum sab logo se mil liye ho..
Me_ Aakhirkar, introduction khatam hua Thakur Sahab..
Thakur sahab muskurate huye..
Jeevan Singh_ Haa Jay, wese to baki sab tumhe yahi milenge jab bhi tum aaoge..
Lakin Balram aur Ranvijay khas tor per tumse mukabla karne ke liye yaha aaye hai, apne pariwar ke sath..
Udaybhan tumhari Pratibha ko apni aankhon se dekhna chahta hai aur aajmana chahta hai, iss liye usne apne dono akhade ke majboot pahalwan salo ko bulaya hai..
Me_ Bilkul thakur sahab, ab aap aagya den to pahalwani kaa mukabla suru kia jaye..
Thakur sahab_ tum to bade utawale lag rhe ho jay..
Dadaji_ Thakur Sahab, Jay utawla nhi hai, bas wo jaldi se apne prudwandi ko hara ke free hona pasand karta hai..
Yaha wese bhi bahut se logo ko shak hai mere pote ko kabiliyat per, use wo bhi to sabit karna hai..
Jeevan Singh_ Bilkul sahi kaha apne pahalwan sahab..
Agar sab taiyar hai, Jay ko chuniti dene ke liye to mukabla suru kara jaye..
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............... Jeevan Singh ki Haveli ka Aangan ...............
Jeevan Singh ki haveli ka bada aangan aaj poori tarah akhade mein badal gaya tha.
Aangan ke ak side mein mitti ka bada kushti ka akhada bana hua tha, aur uske ak taraf aadhe Chand ke aakar me Jeevan Singh ke parivaar ke lagbhag sabhi sadasya mojud the..
jinse mera pehle introduction ho chuka tha.
Jeevan Singh apni jagah par gambhir hokar baithe the. Unke paas unki teenon patniyan—Shakuntala Devi, Devyani Devi aur Padmavati Devi—baithi thi.
Nirbhay, Chandrabhan, Udaybhan aur Suryabhan bhi saamne khade the.
Vasundhara, Mrinalini, Charvi, Rajeshwari aur Yashodhara apni-apni jagah se akhade ko dekh rahi thi.
Antara kaa pura pariwar mojud tha..
Ghar ke damad, bahuen, pote-potiyan, nati- Natiya sab ki nazar ab mujh par thi.
Dadaji Baldev Singh ek khatia par baithe the aur mere kapde unke paas rakhe hue the.
Unki nazar mujh per se ek pal ke liye bhi nahi hat rahi thi.
Me akhade ke kinare khada tha aur apne badan par mitti mal raha tha.
Mere chehre par na ghabrahat thi, na jaldbazi. me aaram se uss mitti ki malne kaa aanand le rha tha..
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Nirbhay_ Pehle Jay se hamare ghar ke kuchh jawaan ladke akhada aazmaayenge... ek-ek karke.
Udaybhan_ Haan... pehle beton se ladwa ke hi hi dekh lete hain ki Jay ki taiyari kitni gehri hai.
Jeevan Singh ne Meri taraf dekha.
Jeevan Singh_ Jay, taiyar ho?
Me_ Ji Thakur Sahab... main taiyar hoon.
Jeevan Singh_ Yaad rakhna... yahan koi dushmani nahi hai. Ye apne hi ghar ke bachche hain.
Me_ Ji. Main bhi ise sirf kushti hi samajhkar ladunga.
Nirbhay ne apne beton aur damado ki taraf dekha.
Nirbhay_ Kaun pehle aayega?
Thodi der ke liye sab chup rahe.
Phir bheed mein se Aditya Singh Solanki aage badha.
Aditya_ Agar aapki anumati ho Papa... toh main pehle Jay se ladna chahta hoon.
Nirbhay ne gardan hila di.
Nirbhay_ Jao Aditya.
Aditya gya, aur khud ko taiyar karke aa gya pahalwani ke liye..
Fir Aditya dheere-dheere akhade mein utar gaya.
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Chaaron ek saath Meri taraf daude.
Raghav_ Vikram, right!
Vikram turant mere daayein taraf se ghuma.
Ranveer baayein taraf se aaya.
Arjun seedha saamne se.
Mene ek hi pal mein unki positioning samajh li.
Me_ Achhi planning hai.
Arjun sabse pehle mujh tak pahucha.
Dono ne grip banai..
Isi waqt Ranveer ne peeche se mujh ko pakadne ki koshish ki.
Mene Arjun ki grip chhodi aur turant apna badan ghuma diya.
Ranveer ki pakad Mere kandhe tak hi pahunch paayi.
Mene Ranveer ka haath pakda.
Ek jhatka.
Ranveer aage ki taraf kheench gaya.
Mene uska balance use karte hue usse apne saamne kar liya.
Vikram bhi usi waqt pahunch gaya.
Mene Ranveer ko ek taraf dhakela aur Vikram ko rok diya.
Raghav_ Ab!
Raghav ne meri kamar par grip bana li.
Pehli baar mujh ko chaaron ka combined pressure mehsoos hua.
Mere pair mitti mein thode se ghase.
Udaybhan_ Is baar chaaron ne sahi coordination kiya hai.
Balram_ Jay ko ek jagah rok liya!
Jeevan Singh chupchaap dekhte rahe.
Jay ne ek gehri saans li.
Idhar dadaji bhi bethe huye, iss mast khel kaa aanand le rhe the, wo jante the, mere liye ye sab ak khel hai..
Me chahun to kuchh second me dharasai kar dun sab ko...
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