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Fantasy BANNA KI JAWANI - Complete storyRunning

Nice job updates ki speed bahut jyada dhimi ho gayi hai or jo pictures aap advance me dal rahe ho agar ho sake to update ke sath hi upload karo to jyada achchha lagega..... Waiting for next
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Bhai please update. You are an amazing writer
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(13-09-2026, 10:41 PM)ramumargaya Wrote:  Bhai please update. You are an amazing writer

Ok..
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Nice job waiting for next
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Suryabhan kaa sala aur Rekha kaa chhota bhai.. Ranbeer Singh chundawat 

Ranbeer 
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Ranbeer Singh ka Parivaar
1. Ranbeer Singh Chundawat 
Age: 40 saal
Relation: Suryabhan ka sala
Profession: Kisaan + damdaar akhaada pahalwan
Residence: Jeevan Singh ki haveli me hi rahta hai, apne pariwar ke sath..

Ranbeer Singh ek mazboot personality wala gaon ka aadmi hai.

 Uska main kaam kheti-badi hai, lekin uski doosri pehchaan akhaade ke pahalwan ke roop mein hai.

 Bachpan se hi kushti aur desi exercise karta aaya hai.

Uski physique naturally powerful hai—chauda chest, mazboot shoulders, strong arms aur athletic build.

Roz subah akhaade mein dand-baithak, kushti practice aur strength training karta hai. 

Kheti ke physical kaam ki wajah se bhi uski body fit aur powerful bani hui hai.

Nature se woh seedha, disciplined, protective aur family-oriented hai. 

Gusse mein sakht ho sakta hai, lekin apne parivaar ke liye bahut responsible hai.



Hansa
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2. Hansa
Age: 37 saal ke aas-paas
Relation: Ranbeer Singh ki wife

Hansa ek graceful, traditional aur practical rural woman ban gayi hai, lakin wo city me pali badi hai, graduate hai..

Aur ye uske pahnawe aur uske vyavhar me jhalakta hai

Uski personality shaant hai, lekin family matters mein apni baat clearly rakhti hai.

Woh ghar ko व्यवस्थित rakhne ke saath-saath kheti ke daily kaamon mein bhi Ranveer ka support karti hai. 

Jeevan Singh ke ghar ke bade parivaar ke saath rehne ki wajah se uski family mein achhi bonding hai.

Uska dressing style traditional but modern hai—generally saree, simple bindi aur traditional jewellery pahanti hai, lakin apne style me..

Personality mein simplicity aur maturity dono hain.



Vanshika 
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3. Vanshika Singh
Age: 19 saal
Relation: Ranbeer aur Hansa ki beti

Vanshika is family ki young aur lovely daughter hai. 

Woh sundar, confident aur smart personality wali ladki hai. 

Uska upbringing ek traditional rural environment ke sath sath city me hua hai, apne nana- nani ke yaha..

Rural me rahne ke chalte use ghar, kheti aur village life ki achhi understanding hai.

City me padai ke chalte wo city ke culture se bhi connect hai..

Saath hi woh apni age ke hisaab se modern thinking rakhti hai.

 Father ke akhaade ko bachpan se dekhti aayi hai, isliye Ranveer ki pahalwani aur discipline se kaafi influenced hai.

Vanshika ka nature friendly, confident aur family-loving hai.

 Apni maa Hansa ke close hai aur apne father Ranbeer ko respect karti hai.

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Nice job Padmavathi wala part jabardast laga or Rajeshwari wala bhi mast tha or Jeewan singh ji ke ghar ki baki ki ladies ko bhi Jai ki mardangi dekhne ka moka mile waiting for next
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Lgta hai parichay pahchan ka kaam lagbhag pura ho gaya hai bas baad walo ki tasveer dalna baki rah gaya hai lekin maine do baton par vishesh gaur kiya hai.

1- Jivan singh ji sari potiyon ke pati unse 9-12 saal bade hain or

2- kisi bhi chahe pata ho ya poti kisi ko koi Santan nahi hai..

Kahin aisa to nahi hai ki in sabhi ko Santan sukh Jay se hi milne wala ho

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(20-09-2026, 01:50 PM)Skb21 Wrote:  Lgta hai parichay pahchan ka kaam lagbhag pura ho gaya hai bas baad walo ki tasveer dalna baki rah gaya hai lekin maine do baton par vishesh gaur kiya hai.

1- Jivan singh ji sari potiyon ke pati unse 9-12 saal bade hain or

2- kisi bhi chahe pata ho ya poti kisi ko koi Santan nahi hai..

Kahin aisa to nahi hai ki in sabhi ko Santan sukh Jay se hi milne wala ho

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Iska jawab jaldi hi milega dost..
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Jeevan Singh_Jay tum sab se mil chuke ho, mere pariwar me lagbhag..

Me_ Lagbhag matlab, kyaa aur bhi log hai apke pariwar me..

Jeevan Singh_ Suryabhan ki teesri patni, uski 2 avivahit betiyaan, Suryabhan kaa sala aur uski biwi..

Yaha mojud nhi hai, Suryabhan ke sasur kaa swasth theek nhi hai, to wo waha gye huye hai..

Baki tum sab logo se mil liye ho..

Me_ Aakhirkar, introduction khatam hua Thakur Sahab..

Thakur sahab muskurate huye..

Jeevan Singh_ Haa Jay, wese to baki sab tumhe yahi milenge jab bhi tum aaoge..

Lakin Balram aur Ranvijay khas tor per tumse mukabla karne ke liye yaha aaye hai, apne pariwar ke sath..

Udaybhan tumhari Pratibha ko apni aankhon se dekhna chahta hai aur aajmana chahta hai, iss liye usne apne dono akhade ke majboot pahalwan salo ko bulaya hai..

Me_ Bilkul thakur sahab, ab aap aagya den to pahalwani kaa mukabla suru kia jaye..

Thakur sahab_ tum to bade utawale lag rhe ho jay..

Dadaji_ Thakur Sahab, Jay utawla nhi hai, bas wo jaldi se apne prudwandi ko hara ke free hona pasand karta hai..

Yaha wese bhi bahut se logo ko shak hai mere pote ko kabiliyat per, use wo bhi to sabit karna hai..

Jeevan Singh_ Bilkul sahi kaha apne pahalwan sahab..

Agar sab taiyar hai, Jay ko chuniti dene ke liye to mukabla suru kara jaye..
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Udaybhan_ Hum sab taiyar hai..

Nirbhay_ Haa, sab taiyar hai.. Udit jay ko langot do lakar..

Dadaji_ Jay apni langot sath lekar aaya hai Nirbhay, use bas jagah chahiye use bhandhne ki..

Nirbhay_ Udit jao, jay ko bathroom dikhao..

Me bathroom gya, pisab kia, langot bandha aur bathroom ke bahar aa gya..

Aakar kapde dadaji ko de diye..unhone apne pass rakh liye, wo ak khatia per bethe huye the..

Haveli kaa akhada..
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Me jakar aakahde ke pass khada ho gya, sab ki najre meri body per thi, kuchh ki to nighahe ho atak gayi thi, meri physic per..

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Nirbhay_ Kon jay se pahle mukabla karna chalega..

Ranveer_ Agar aap anumati de jija shree to me jana chahunga..

Nirbhay_Ranveer, Balram, Ranvijay tumhen to ladna hi hai jay se, lakin pahle bachchon ko apna jor aajma lene do..

me mitti mal rha tha apne sarir per..

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............... Jeevan Singh ki Haveli ka Aangan ...............

Jeevan Singh ki haveli ka bada aangan aaj poori tarah akhade mein badal gaya tha. 

Aangan ke ak side mein mitti ka bada kushti ka akhada bana hua tha, aur uske ak taraf aadhe Chand ke aakar me Jeevan Singh ke parivaar ke lagbhag sabhi sadasya mojud the..

 jinse mera pehle introduction ho chuka tha.

Jeevan Singh apni jagah par gambhir hokar baithe the. Unke paas unki teenon patniyan—Shakuntala Devi, Devyani Devi aur Padmavati Devi—baithi thi. 

Nirbhay, Chandrabhan, Udaybhan aur Suryabhan bhi saamne khade the.

Vasundhara, Mrinalini, Charvi, Rajeshwari aur Yashodhara apni-apni jagah se akhade ko dekh rahi thi. 

Antara kaa pura pariwar mojud tha..

Ghar ke damad, bahuen, pote-potiyan, nati- Natiya sab ki nazar ab mujh par thi.

Dadaji Baldev Singh ek khatia par baithe the aur mere kapde unke paas rakhe hue the. 

Unki nazar mujh per se ek pal ke liye bhi nahi hat rahi thi.

Me akhade ke kinare khada tha aur apne badan par mitti mal raha tha.

Mere chehre par na ghabrahat thi, na jaldbazi. me aaram se uss mitti ki malne kaa aanand le rha tha..

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Nirbhay_ Pehle Jay se hamare ghar ke kuchh jawaan ladke akhada aazmaayenge... ek-ek karke.

Udaybhan_ Haan... pehle beton se ladwa ke hi hi dekh lete hain ki Jay ki taiyari kitni gehri hai.

Jeevan Singh ne Meri taraf dekha.

Jeevan Singh_ Jay, taiyar ho?

Me_ Ji Thakur Sahab... main taiyar hoon.

Jeevan Singh_ Yaad rakhna... yahan koi dushmani nahi hai. Ye apne hi ghar ke bachche hain.

Me_ Ji. Main bhi ise sirf kushti hi samajhkar ladunga.

Nirbhay ne apne beton aur damado ki taraf dekha.

Nirbhay_ Kaun pehle aayega?

Thodi der ke liye sab chup rahe.

Phir bheed mein se Aditya Singh Solanki aage badha.

Aditya_ Agar aapki anumati ho Papa... toh main pehle Jay se ladna chahta hoon.

Nirbhay ne gardan hila di.

Nirbhay_ Jao Aditya.

Aditya gya, aur khud ko taiyar karke aa gya pahalwani ke liye..

Fir Aditya dheere-dheere akhade mein utar gaya.

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Aditya
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Aditya 35 saal ka tha aur uski body achchi kad kathi ki thi. 

Age me to wo mujse kaafi bada aur anubhavi tha. lakin kushti ke anubhav me, wo mere samne kachcha tha..

 Akhade ke bahar khade Udit, Uday aur Kartik bhi apne bade bhai ko dhyaan se dekh rahe the.

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Udit_ Bhaiya sambhal kar...

Aditya ne halka sa haath uthakar use chup kara diya.

Aditya_ Fikr mat kar.

Me aur Aditya aamne-saamne khade ho gaye.

Aangan mein achanak poori khamoshi chha gayi.

Dadaji ne khatia par baithe-baithe sirf ek baat kahi.

Dadaji_ Jay... pehla daav hamesha dimaag se aur yaad rhe ye abhyas hai, Aditya ko chaut naa aaye..

Me_ Ji Dadaji.

Aditya ne mujhko upar se neeche tak dekha. Mene bhi Aditya ki stance ko gaur se dekha.

Aditya_ Taiyar?

Me_ Jab aap kahen..

Nirbhay_ Shuru karo!

Hum dono pahalwan ek-doosre ki taraf badhe.

Aditya ne pehle meri kalai pakadne ki koshish ki, lekin mene turant apna haath kheenchkar uski grip se khud ko alag kar liya.

Aangan mein khade logon ke chehre par turant dhyaan aa gaya.

Balram Singh Shekhawat ne dheere se Ranvijay ki taraf dekha.

Balram_ Jay sirf mazboot nahi hai... reaction bhi bahut tez hai.

Ranvijay_ Haan... aur abhi usne apni asli speed dikhayi bhi nahi hai.
Rajeshwari chupchaap mujhe dekh rahi thi.

Uske chehre par pehli baar ek halki si umeed nazar aayi.

Jeevan Singh ne kuchh nahi kaha. Woh bas akhade ko dekhte rahe.
Aur phir Aditya ne dobara meri taraf kadam badhaya...

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Pehla mukabala ab sach mein shuru ho chuka tha.

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............... Aditya vs Jay ...............

Nirbhay_ Shuru karo!

Aditya ne turant apna stance neecha kiya aur meri taraf badha. 

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Uska iraada saaf tha—pehle meri grip ko parakhna aur phir apni taakat ka istemal karna.

Main bhi apna stance sambhalte hue uske saamne khada raha.

Me_ Aaiye, Aditya..

Aditya ne aage badhkar meri kalai pakadne ki koshish ki. Maine uski kalai ko side mein hata diya aur turant uske kandhe par apna haath jama diya.

Aditya ne zor lagakar mujhe peeche dhakelna chaha, lekin main apni jagah se hila tak nhi..

Akhade ke chaaron taraf khade logon ki nazrein dono par tik gayi.

Udit_ Bhaiya, zor se! puri takat laga do..

Aditya ne achanak apna grip badla aur meri kamar ki taraf haath le gaya. Main samajh gaya ki woh mujhe balance se bahar karne ki koshish kar raha hai.

Maine turant apna pair peeche kiya, uski pakad se nikal gaya aur uski baazu ko control mein le liya.

Aditya ne palatkar khud ko chhudaya.

Balram Singh Shekhawat_ Aditya ko jaldbazi nahi karni chahiye... Jay uski har movement padh raha hai.

Ranvijay Singh Rathore_ Haan. Jay, Aditya ko mauka hi nahi de raha.

Aditya phir se meri taraf badha. Is baar usne seedha meri kamar ko pakadne ki koshish ki.

Maine uska kandha rok kar apna wazan neeche kiya aur ek tez palat-dav se uska santulan bigaad diya.

Aditya mitti mein ghutne ke bal aa gaya, lekin turant uth khada hua.

Aangan mein halki si awaaz uthi.

Kuchh jawaan ladlke ek-doosre ki taraf dekhne lage.

Kartik_ Bhaiya ko sambhalna padega...

Uday_ Jay ki timing bahut tez hai.

Aditya ne baat sune bina phir se daav lagaya. Is baar maine uski pakad ko rok kar uski baazu ko apne control mein liya aur ek ghoomte hue daav se uska balance tod diya.

Aditya dobara mitti par aa gaya.

Lekin maine use zor se nahi patka. Jaise hi woh gira, maine turant grip chhod di aur peeche hat gaya.

Dadaji ke chehre par halki si muskaan aa gayi.

Dadaji_ Shabash Jay... taakat dikhaane se zyada zaroori hai control.

Me_ Ji Dadaji.

Aditya ne mitti jhaadi aur is baar uske chehre par pehle wali halki si muskaan nahi thi. Ab woh poori tarah serious ho chuka tha.

Aditya_ Ab dekhte hain, Jay... tum mujhe kitni der rok paate ho.

Me_ Aap poori koshish kijiye.

Aditya ne poori taakat ke saath meri taraf kadam badhaya.

Main uski taraf gaya aur dono ki grip takra gayi. Kuchh pal tak dono apni jagah par zor lagate rahe.

Aditya ki saans tez hone lagi, lekin meri position bilkul sthir thi.

Maine dheere se uski grip ko khola, uski baazu ko control kiya aur ek combination daav lagaya—pehle kandhe ka control, phir pair ka balance todte hue use mitti par le aaya.

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Aditya peeth ke bal girne se pehle hi palatne ki koshish karne laga.

Maine uska palatna rok diya aur use akhade ki mitti par control mein rakh liya.

Nirbhay_ Aditya! Sambhal!

Aditya ne poori koshish ki, lekin kuchh hi pal mein uski movement dheemi pad gayi.

Jeevan Singh chupchaap sab dekh rahe the. Unke chehre par hairani nahi, balki gehri dilchaspi thi.

Jeevan Singh_ Bas... Jay, Aditya ko chhod do.

Maine turant grip chhod di aur peeche hatkar khada ho gaya. wo jamin per gir gya..

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Aditya kuchh pal mitti par leta raha...

 phir uthkar mere saamne aa gaya..

Aditya_ Maanta hoon... main Jay ki me tumhare saamne tik nahi paaya.

Me_ Kushti mein haar-jeet hoti rehti hai, Aditya bhaiya.

Aditya ne meri taraf haath badhaya.

Aditya_ Tum sirf taakat se nahi... daav aur timing se ladte ho.

Maine uska haath pakad liya.

Me_ Aapne bhi poori koshish ki.

Nirbhay ne apne baaki beton ki taraf dekha.

Nirbhay_ Theek hai... Aditya ka mukabla ho gaya. Ab kaun Jay ke saamne utrega?

Udit apni jagah se aage badha. Uski aankhon mein ab pehle se zyada utsah tha.

Udit_ Ab meri baari hai, Pitaji.

Akhade ke chaaron taraf ek baar phir khamoshi chha gayi.

Dadaji ne meri taraf dekha... aur mene Udit ki taraf..

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............... Udit vs Jay ...............

Udit
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Udit dheere-dheere akhade mein utar aaya. 

Uski aankhon mein ab mazaak ya utsukta nahi thi. 

Woh khud ek trained pahalwan tha aur junior-level state champion reh chuka tha.

Udit ne mitti uthakar apne kandhon aur haathon par mal li.

Udit_ Jay... Aditya bhai ke sath jo hua, woh maine dekha hai. Lekin main tumhe itni aasani se mauka nahi dunga.

Me_ Mujhe bhi aasaan mukabala nahi chahiye, Udit Bhaiya..

Dadaji khatia par seedhe hokar baith gaye.

Dadaji_ Jay, Udit ka andaaz Aditya se alag hai. Iski speed aur timing par nazar rakhna.

Me_ Ji Dadaji.

Nirbhay_ Dono taiyar?

Udit_ Haan..

Me_ Ji.

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Nirbhay_ Shuru karo!

Udit ne is baar seedha attack nahi kiya.

 Woh akhade mein halka sa ghoomte hue meri movement dekhne laga.

Main bhi uski chaal samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha.

Kuchh pal tak dono sirf ek-doosre ko parakhte rahe.

Ranvijay Singh Rathore_ Ye wala mukabala pehle wale se alag hoga. Udit jaldbazi nahi kar raha.

Balram Singh Shekhawat_ Aur Jay bhi pehle daav ka intezar kar raha hai.
Achanak Udit ne meri taraf kadam badhaya aur meri baazu ko pakadne ki koshish ki.

Maine uski kalai rok li. Udit ne turant apni grip badli aur meri doosri taraf se pakadne ki koshish ki.

Main ek pal ke liye peeche hata, phir uski movement ke saath ghoom gaya.

Udit ne turant apna santulan sambhal liya.

Udit_ Achha... tumhari timing waqai tez hai.

Me_ Aap bhi kushti bhule nhi hai..

Udit ne dobara attack kiya. Is baar usne meri kamar ka control lene ki koshish ki.

Maine apna stance neecha kiya aur uski grip ko rok diya. 

Dono kuchh pal tak ek-doosre ko dhakelne ki koshish karte rahe.

Udit ki taakat kaafi thi. Woh mujhe apni taraf kheenchna chahta tha, lekin maine apna balance nahi tootne diya.

Phir maine achanak direction badli aur Udit ko apni grip se bahar nikalte hue side se control kiya.

Udit turant ghoomkar bach gaya.

Aangan mein khade logon ke chehre par ab aur zyada utsukta thi.

Nirbhay_ Shabash Udit! Dhyaan se!

Udit ne sir hilaya aur phir se mere saamne aa gaya.

Is baar woh bilkul shaant tha.

Udit_ Ab samjha... tumhe sirf taakat se nahi haraaya ja sakta.

Me_ Aur mujhe laga tha aap pehle hi samajh gaye the.

Udit halka sa muskuraya.

Udit_ Ab asli daav dekhna.

Udit ne achanak meri kalai pakdi aur mujhe apni taraf kheenchne ki koshish ki. 

Maine uski chaal ko follow karte hue apna kandha ghuma diya. Udit ka grip dheela pada.

Maine usi pal uski baazu ko control kiya aur ek tez palat-dav se uska balance bigaad diya.

Udit mitti mein ek ghutne par aa gaya.

Lekin woh turant uth khada hua.

Dadaji_ Jay... jaldi mat karna.

Me_ Ji.

Udit ne phir se attack kiya. Is baar usne mujhe seedha dhakelne ki koshish ki.

Main ek kadam peeche gaya, phir uski momentum ka istemal karte hue side mein nikal gaya.

Udit ka balance halka sa bigda.

Maine turant uski kamar ka control liya aur ek aur daav lagaya.

Udit mitti par aa gaya, lekin usne turant palatkar apni position bachane ki koshish ki.

Maine uski movement ko rokne ke bajay uske palatne ki direction ko follow kiya aur use dobara control mein le liya.

Udit ne kuchh pal tak poori koshish ki, lekin meri grip aur position se nikal nahi paaya.

Nirbhay_ Udit... bas!

Maine turant grip chhod di aur peeche hat gaya.

Udit uthkar baith gaya. 

Uski saans tez thi, lekin chehre par haar ki nirasha se zyada ek pahalwan wali tasleem thi.

Udit_ Jay... tumhari training sirf body ki nahi hai. Tum har daav ke baad turant agla daav soch lete ho.

Me_ Aap bhi bahut achhe pahalwan hain, Udit bhaiya.

Udit_ Main state level par lada hoon...

 lekin aaj mujhe samajh aa gaya ki tumhari training kis level ki hai.

Nirbhay ne Jay ko dekha, phir Udit ko.

Nirbhay_ Theek hai. Udit bhi Jay ke saamne tik nahi paaya.

Akhade ke bahar khade Uday aur Kartik ek-doosre ki taraf dekhne lage.

Kartik_ Ab meri baari ho sakti hai.

Uday_ Pehle main jaunga.

Kartik_ Bhai, aap mujhse bade ho... lekin Jay ke saamne pehle mujhe utarne do.

Nirbhay_ Ek-ek karke sabko mauka milega.

Udaybhan ab tak shaant khade sab dekh rahe the. Unhone Jay ko gaur se dekha.

Udaybhan_ Jay... ab tumhare saamne agla kaun aaye, ye tum batao.

Maine akhade ke bahar khade dono bhaiyon ki taraf dekha.

Me_ Jo bhi pehle aana chahe, main taiyar hoon.

Jeevan Singh ke chehre par halki si muskaan aa gayi.

Jeevan Singh_ Himmat achhi hai Jay mein... lekin ab dekhna hai ki iski himmat ke saamne hamare ghar ke kitne jawaan tik paate hain.

Rajeshwari chupchaap mujhe dekh rahi thi. 
Uski aankhon mein ab pehle wali chinta nahi thi.

Rajeshwari_ Jay waqai alag hai...

Aur tabhi Uday ek kadam aage badha.

Uday_ Jay... ab main aata hoon.

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............... Uday vs Jay .................

Uday
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Uday dheere-dheere akhade mein utara. Uska andaaz Aditya aur Udit dono se alag tha. Na zyada josh, na koi jaldbazi... bas shaant chehra aur poori tarah kendrit nazar.

Uday_ Jay, maine tumhare dono mukable dekhe hain. Tumhare daav tez hain... isliye main tumhe koi aasaan mauka nahi dunga..

Me_ Mujhe bhi aapse isi ki umeed hai, Uday bhaiya.

Uday ne mitti uthakar apne haathon par mal li.

Padmini apni jagah se chupchaap Uday ko dekh rahi thi. 

Meri najar Padmini per gayi, uske chehre ke bhaav bata rhe the, ki wo man hi man chahti thi ki uska pati jeet jaye..

Idhar, Udit aur Aditya bhi ab poore dhyaan se akhade ki taraf dekh rahe the.

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Nirbhay_ Taiyar ho dono?

Uday_ Haan.

Me_ Ji.

Nirbhay_ Shuru karo!

Uday ne turant attack nahi kiya. Woh dheere-dheere mere chaaron taraf movement karne laga. 

Main bhi apni position banaye uski chaal dekh raha tha.

Dadaji_ Jay... is baar धैर्य rakhna.

Me_ Ji Dadaji.

Achanak Uday ne aage badhkar meri baazu pakdi. 

Maine uski grip rok li. 

Uday ne turant doosre haath se mera kandha pakadne ki koshish ki.

Maine apna kandha ghuma kar uski pakad se bachne ki koshish ki, lekin Uday ne meri movement ko pehle hi bhaanp liya.

Uday ne meri kamar ka control lene ki koshish ki.

Main turant neeche baitha aur uski grip ke neeche se nikal gaya.

Ranvijay_ Wah! Uday ne Jay ko pehli baar rok diya.

Balram_ Uday ka sabse bada fayda uska shaant rehna hai.

Uday dobara meri taraf badha.

Is baar maine pehle hi uski kalai control mein le li. Uday ne turant grip badli aur meri baazu ko kheenchne laga.

Maine uske kheenchne ki direction ke saath kadam badhaya aur achanak side mein nikal gaya. Uday ka balance halka sa bigda.

Maine usi pal uski kamar ke paas control liya aur ek tez kandha-dav lagaya.

Uday ne turant apna pair jama liya aur mitti par girne se bach gaya.

Aangan mein khade logon se ek saath awaaz nikli.

Uday_ Achha daav tha.

Me_ Aapne bhi sambhal liya.

Uday halka sa muskuraya.

Uday_ Ab meri baari.

Uday ne achanak apni poori taakat laga kar mujhe peeche dhakelna shuru kiya.

 Main kuchh kadam peeche gaya, lekin apna santulan banaye rakha.

Uday ne mujhe pakadkar side mein modhne ki koshish ki.

Maine uski movement ke saath apna pair badla aur uske kandhe ko control karte hue uska balance tod diya.

Uday ek ghutne par aa gaya.

Lekin is baar bhi woh turant uth khada hua.

Nirbhay_ Shabash Uday! Dhyaan mat todna!

Uday ne gehri saans li aur phir meri taraf dekha.

Uday_ Jay... ab samajh aa raha hai ki tumhe kitni khas training di hai, tumharey dada ji ne..

Me_ Aur mujhe samajh aa raha hai ki aap itne shaant kyun rehte hain.

Uday_ Shaanti se ladne wala pahalwan aksar saamne wale ki jaldbazi ka intezar karta hai.

Me_ Toh phir aaj main jaldbazi nahi karunga.

Dono phir se grip mein aaye.

Kuchh pal tak dono ek-doosre ki position ko parakhte rahe.

Uday ne ek tez kheench-dav lagaya.

 Maine turant uska haath side kiya aur uski kamar ka control le liya.

Uday ne palatne ki koshish ki.

Maine uske palatne ki direction ko follow kiya aur apna balance banaye rakhte hue ek ghoomta hua daav lagaya.

Is baar Uday seedha mitti par aa gaya.

Maine turant uski position control mein le li. 

Uday ne kandha ghumakar nikalne ki koshish ki, lekin main uske har palatne ko rok raha tha.

Uday ne kuchh pal tak zor lagaya... phir apna haath mitti par rakhkar ruk gaya.

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Uday_ Bas... Me apni haar swikar karta hun..

Maine turant use chhod diya aur peeche hat gaya.

Uday dheere se uthkar khada hua. Usne mitti jhaadi aur mere paas aaya.

Uday_ Jay, tumhare saamne tikna aasaan nahi hai. Tumhare daav ek doosre se jude hue hain.

Me_ Aapne bhi mujhe kaafi der tak rok kar rakha, Uday.

Uday_ Lekin aakhir mein tumne meri chaal padh li.

Nirbhay ne apne bete ki taraf dekha aur phir Jay ki taraf.

Nirbhay_ Uday bhi Jay ke saamne haar gaya.

Akhade ke bahar Kartik ab tak chupchaap sab dekh raha tha. 

Usne dheere se apni langot theek ki aur akhade ki taraf kadam badhaya.

Kartik_ Pitaji... ab mujhe mauka dijiye.

Nirbhay_ Kartik, soch le. Ab tak Jay ne teen mukable jeete hain.

Kartik_ Isi liye toh jaana chahta hoon.

Kartik akhade mein utar aaya.

Jeevan Singh ne apni kursi se seedha hokar Kartik ko dekha.

Jeevan Singh_ Ja Kartik... dekhte hain tum apne bhaiyon se kya alag kar paate ho.

Kartik ne Jay ki taraf dekha.

Kartik_ Jay... taiyar ho?

Me_ Hamesha.

Dadaji ke chehre par phir wahi halka sa bharosa tha.

Dadaji_ Jay... chautha mukabala hai.

Dhyaan wahi rehna chahiye jo pehle mukable mein tha.

Me_ Ji Dadaji.

Aangan mein phir se khamoshi chha gayi.

Ab Kartik aur Me aamne-saamne khade the... aur Jeevan Singh ke poore parivaar ki nazar is chauthe mukable par tik chuki thi.
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............... Kartik vs Jay ...............

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Kartik dheere-dheere akhade ke beech mein aaya. 

Usne mitti uthakar apne kandhon aur haathon par mal li aur phir Jay ke saamne aakar khada ho gaya.

Kartik_ Jay, mere teenon bhaiyon ka mukabala maine dhyaan se dekha hai. Unki galtiyon se main seekh chuka hoon.

Me_ Toh phir aaj mujhe bhi kuchh naya dekhne ko milega.

Kartik_ Koshish poori rahegi.

Nirbhay_ Dono taiyar ho?

Me_ Ji.

Kartik_ Haan.

Nirbhay_ Shuru karo!

Kartik ne turant attack nahi kiya. Woh halka sa ghoomte hue Jay ki position ko parakhne laga. Jay bhi bilkul shaant khada raha.

Dadaji_ Jay... isko dhyaan se padhna. Ye pehle teenon se seekh kar aaya hai.

Me_ Ji Dadaji.

Kartik achanak aage badha aur meri kalai pakadne ki koshish ki. Mene apna haath hata liya. 

Kartik ne turant doosri taraf se grip banane ki koshish ki, lekin me phir side mein nikal gaya.

Kartik_ Tum har baar pehle hi kaise bach jaate ho?

Me_ Kyunki aapke kandhe aur pair pehle bata dete hain ki aap kya karne wale hain.

Kartik ek pal ke liye ruk gaya.

Ranvijay_ Jay Kartik ki body language padh raha hai.

Balram_ Haan... ye baat is ladke ko bahut aage le ja sakti hai.

Kartik ne is baar apni chaal badli. Woh seedha meri taraf badha aur meri kamar ka control lene ki koshish ki.

Mene turant apna stance neecha kiya aur Kartik ki grip ko rok diya.

Dono kuchh pal tak ek-doosre ko dhakelne ki koshish karte rahe.

Kartik ne achanak direction badli aur Mujhe side mein kheenchne ki koshish ki.

Mene uske saath hi apna pair badla aur Kartik ki movement ko follow karte hue uska balance bigaad diya.

Kartik ghutne ke bal mitti mein aa gaya.

Lekin woh turant uth gaya.

Kartik_ Ab samjha... tum seedha saamne se ladne ke bajay saamne wale ki taakat ko usi ke khilaaf istemal karte ho.

Me_ Pahalwani mein har baar sirf zor lagana zaroori nahi hota.

Kartik_ Ye baat sahi hai.

Kartik ne phir se attack kiya. Is baar uski timing pehle se behtar thi. Usne meri baazu ko pakadkar apni taraf kheench liya.

Me ek pal ke liye uski grip mein aa gaya.

Aangan mein maujood logon ke chehre par turant utsukta aa gayi.

Nirbhay_ Shabash Kartik! Grip mat chhodna!

Kartik ne mujhe control mein rakhne ki poori koshish ki.

Mene apna wazan neecha kiya, ek kadam side mein liya aur Kartik ki grip ke andar se apni baazu nikaal li.

Kartik ne turant palatkar mujhe pakadne ki koshish ki.

Lekin me usse pehle hi ghoom chuka tha.

Mene Kartik ki baazu ko control kiya aur ek tez palat-dav se uska balance tod diya.

Kartik mitti par aa gaya.

Mene turant uski position ko control mein le liya.

Kartik ne palatne ki koshish ki. Mene uski movement ke saath apni position badli aur use dobara mitti par rok diya.

Kartik ne kuchh pal aur zor lagaya... phir apna haath mitti par rakh diya.

Kartik_ Bas... me haar maan gaya.

Mene turant grip chhod di aur peeche hat gaya.

Kartik uthkar khada hua. Usne meri taraf dekha aur halka sa muskura diya.

Kartik_ Jay, tumhare saamne mere teenon bhaiyon ka haarna ab samajh aa raha hai.

Me_ Aapne bhi sabse zyada mujhe sochne par majboor kiya.

Kartik_ Lekin tum phir bhi mujhse ek kadam aage rahe.

Nirbhay ne gehri saans li..

Nirbhay_ Mere chaaron bete... Jay se sabke samne haar gye hai..

Udit_ Pitaji, Jay ki training waqai alag level ki hai..

Aditya_ Haan. Isne hum mein se kisi ko bhi apni poori taakat lagane ka mauka nahi diya.

Uday_ Har daav se pehle ye hamari movement samajh raha tha.

Kartik_ Aur jab mauka mila, turant daav badal diya.

Aangan mein ab mahaul badal chuka tha. Pehle jo log mujhe sirf ek 16 saal ka ladka samajhkar dekh rahe the, ab woh use ek trained pahalwan ki nazar se dekh rahe the.

Jeevan Singh ne mujhe gaur se dekha.

Jeevan Singh_ Chaar mukable... chaaron mein Jay ne apna zor nahi, apni samajh dikhayi hai.

Dadaji ne halka sa sir hilaaya.

Dadaji_ Maine ise hamesha yahi sikhaya hai, Thakur sahab... kushti mein saamne wale ko giraana aasaan hai, lekin uski chaal samajhna asli kala hai.

Nirbhay ne akhade ke doosre kone ki taraf dekha.

Nirbhay_ Abhi toh Jay ne sirf mere beton ka saamna kiya hai...

Uski nazar Ranbeer, Balram aur Ranvijay ki taraf gayi.

Nirbhay_ Ab dekhna hai ki ye jawaan pahalwan bade akhade walon ke saamne kya karta hai..

Ranbeer turant ek kadam aage badha.

Ranbeer_ Jijashree... agar anumati ho toh ab main Jay ke saamne utarna chahta hoon.

Jeevan Singh ne Ranbeer ki taraf dekha.

Jeevan Singh_ Jao Ranbeer... ab takkar kaa mukabla chalu hoga..

Ranbeer ne mitti ki taraf dekha, phir Meri taraf.

Ranbeer_ Jay... ab dekhte hain tumhari asli taiyari kitni hai.

Me_ Main taiyar hoon, Ranbeer Ji..

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............... Ranbeer vs Jay ...............

Ranbeer 
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Ranbeer ne akhade mein kadam rakha.
40 saal ka Ranbeer, Suryabhan ka sala aur Rekha ka chhota bhai hai..

Ranbeer ak takatwar aur Anubhavi pahalwan hai, uska Chauda seena, mazboot kandhe aur kasrat se bani hui body uski taakat ka saaf ehsaas kara rahi thi..

Ranbeer ek tagda pahalwan tha. Uski sabse badi khaasiyat sirf uski strength nahi, balki uski grip aur stamina thi. 

Woh lambe samay tak saamne wale ko pressure mein rakh sakta tha.

Hansa apni jagah se Ranbeer ko dekh rahi thi. 

Poonam aur Rekha bhi poori tarah akhade par nazar jamaye hue thi.

Rekha ke chehre par apne chhote bhai ko lekar garv saaf dikh raha tha..

Ranbeer ne jhukkar mitti uthayi aur apne haathon par mal li..

Ranbeer_ Jay, abhi tak maine tumhe sabke saath ladte hue dekha hai. 
Me tumse bachunga nhi seedha mukabala karunga.

Me_ Mujhe bhi seedha mukabala hi pasand hai, Ranbeer Ji..

Ranbeer halka sa muskuraya.

Ranbeer_ Toh phir taiyar raho.

Nirbhay_ Dono apni jagah lo.

Main aur Ranbeer akhade ke beech mein aa gaye.

Jeevan Singh ne haath uthaya.

Jeevan Singh_ Shuru karo.

Agla hi pal Ranbeer bijli ki tarah meri taraf badha.

Usne meri baazu pakadne ki koshish ki, lekin main ek kadam side mein hua.

 Ranbeer ne bina rukke apni direction badli aur meri kamar par control banane ki koshish ki.

Maine dono haathon se uski grip rok di.
Kuchh pal tak dono apni jagah par zor lagate rahe.

Ranbeer ki taakat sach mein zabardast thi.

Uske dhakke se mitti mein mere pair halka sa khisak gaye.

Ranbeer ne pressure aur badha diya.

Me_ Zor achha hai aapka.

Ranbeer_ Aur abhi poora zor lagaya bhi nahi hai.

Ranbeer ne achanak grip badli aur mujhe side mein kheenchne ki koshish ki.

Maine apna pair jama liya aur uski movement ke saath ghoom gaya.

Ranbeer ka balance ek pal ke liye bigda, lekin woh turant sambhal gaya.

Ranvijay Singh Rathore_ Shabash Ranbeer! Balance mat tootne dena!

Balram Singh Shekhawat_ Jay uski taakat ko usi par lagane ki koshish karega.

Ranbeer phir mere saamne aa gaya.

Is baar usne mujhe seedha pakad liya.

Dono ki grip mazboot thi.

Kuchh pal tak hum ek-doosre ko dhakel rahe the. 

Aangan mein khamoshi chha gayi..

Udit_ Ranbeer sach mein Jay ko kadi takkar de raha hai.

Aditya_ Is baar Jay ko bhi poori taakat lagani padegi.

Kartik aur Uday bhi bina palak jhapkaye akhade ki taraf dekh rahe the.

Ranveer bhi apne Mama ko dekh rha tha, Halaki Ranbeer, Ranveer ki sauteli maa kaa bhai hai, lakin Ranbeer aur Ranveer me sage Mama- Bhanje jesa pyar hai..

Kartik_ Ranbeer Mama ki grip bahut mazboot hai.

Uday_ Lekin Jay abhi bhi shaant hai.

Ranbeer ne mujhe aur peeche dhakelne ki koshish ki.

Maine uski grip ko dheere-dheere khola aur uski kalai ko control mein le liya.

Ranbeer ne turant haath kheench liya.

Ranbeer_ Achha...

Me_ Aap bhi bahut jaldi grip badal lete hain.

Ranbeer_ Pahalwan hoon. Itni aasani se grip nahi chhodta.

Ranbeer ne dobara attack kiya.

Is baar usne meri kamar pakad li aur apni poori body ka pressure lagate hue mujhe apni taraf kheench liya.

Maine apna stance neecha kiya.
Ranbeer ne mujhe rok liya.

Kuchh pal tak uska control bana raha.

Nirbhay_ Ranbeer! Isi tarah pakad banaye rakh!

Dadaji ne khatia se meri taraf dekha.

Dadaji_ Jay... jaldi mat kar. Uski movement dekh.

Main ek pal ke liye bilkul sthir raha.

Ranbeer ko laga ki usne mujhe poori tarah rok liya hai.

Usne apna pressure aur badha diya..

Lekin isi pal maine apna stance badla.

Maine uski grip ke andar apni position badli aur ek aisa daav lagaya jo maine ab tak kisi ko nahi dikhaya tha.

Ranbeer ko sambhalne ka mauka hi nahi mila.

Uski aankhen ek pal ke liye hairani se badi ho gayin.

Agale hi pal uska poora balance toot gaya aur woh ghutne ke bal mitti mein aa gaya.

Akhade ke bahar khade sab log ekdum chup ho gaye.

Aditya_ Ye... ye daav Jay ne pehle nahi dikhaya tha.

Kartik_ Hum chaaron ke saath ladte waqt bhi nahi.

Udit_ Toh Jay ne apni asli chaal chhupa rakhi thi?

Uday_ Lagta hai.

Ranbeer turant uth khada hua.

Usne apne ghutne se mitti jhaadi aur meri taraf dekha.

Uske chehre par hairani thi, lekin saath hi ek naya josh bhi aa gaya tha.

Ranbeer_ Ab samajh gaya... tumne hum sabko apne saare daav nahi dikhaye the.

Me_ Har mukabale mein har daav dikhana zaroori nahi hota, Ranbeer ji.

Ranbeer halka sa hasa.

Ranbeer_ Toh phir aaj poori kushti hogi.

Is baar Ranbeer aur tez ho gaya.

Woh lagataar grip badal raha tha.

Kabhi meri baazu pakadne ki koshish karta, kabhi kamar par control banata aur kabhi mujhe side se kheenchne ki koshish karta.

Uski speed aur strength dono zabardast thi.

Main bhi har baar uski movement ko read kar raha tha.

Lekin Ranbeer mujhe aasani se mauka nahi de raha tha.

Ek pal ke liye usne mujhe mazbooti se pakad liya.

Ranbeer_ Ab batao, Jay!

Usne poori taakat se mujhe kheenchne ki koshish ki.

Maine uski grip ke khilaaf zor lagane ke bajay apni body ko uski movement ke saath chhod diya.

Ranbeer ko laga ki uska daav safal ho gaya.

Lekin agle hi pal maine direction badli.

Maine uski movement ko usi ke khilaaf istemal kiya.

Ranbeer ka balance ekdum se bigad gaya.

Woh sambhalne ki koshish karta raha.

Lekin maine turant doosra daav laga diya.

Is baar Ranbeer ki aankhon mein sachchi hairani thi.

Ranbeer_ Ye bhi...?

Me_ Abhi toh kuchh daav aur baaki hain.

Hansa ki nazar mujh par tik gayi.

Poonam ne hairani se Rekha ki taraf dekha.

Poonam_ Rekha, Jay ne Aditya, Kartik, Udit aur Uday ke saath ladte waqt ye daav kyun nahi dikhaye?

Rekha ne dheere se jawab diya.

Rekha_ Shayad woh unhe sirf haraana chahta tha... apni poori kshamata dikhana nahi..

Akhade mein Ranbeer ne phir se stance liya.

Ranbeer_ Ab tumhe aasaan nahi jaane dunga.

Me_ Main bhi aasaan mukabale ke liye nahi aaya hoon.

Ranbeer ne poori speed ke saath attack kiya.

Is baar usne meri kamar par control banaya aur mujhe uthakar girane ki koshish ki.

Uski taakat itni thi ki mere pair ek pal ke liye mitti se halka sa uthe.

Aangan mein sabki saansen tham gayin.

Balram_ Ranbeer ne pakad liya!

Ranvijay_ Jay sambhal!

Lekin agle hi pal maine hawa mein hi apni body ka balance badla.

Ranbeer mujhe neeche girane wala tha, lekin maine uski grip ke andar se apna ek haath nikaala aur uski position badal di.

Ranbeer ko kuchh samajh aata, usse pehle hi main uski side mein aa chuka tha.

Maine ek tez daav lagaya.

Ranbeer ka balance poori tarah chala gaya.

Woh mitti par ja gira.

Lekin is baar main rukha nahi.

Ranbeer palatkar uthne ki koshish kar raha tha.

Maine uski movement ko pehle hi samajh liya aur uska rasta rok diya.

Kuchh hi pal mein Ranbeer meri pakad mein tha..

Usne poori taakat lagayi.

Lekin meri grip nahi tooti.

Ranbeer ne ek baar aur koshish ki.

Phir dheere-dheere uski resistance kam hone lagi.

Ranbeer ne mitti par haath rakha.

Ranbeer_ Bas...tum jeet gye Jay..

Maine turant grip chhod di aur peeche hat gaya.

Ranbeer kuchh pal tak wahi baitha raha.

Phir woh uthkar khada hua aur apne sarir se mitti jhaadne laga.

Uske chehre par haar ki niraasha se zyada mere daavon ko lekar hairani thi.

Ranbeer_ Jay... tumhare saamne meri strength aur speed dono kaam nahi aayi.

Me_ Aapne mujhe kaafi der tak rok kar rakha, Ranbeer ji. Ye aasaan mukabala nahi tha.

Ranbeer ne meri taraf dekha.

Ranbeer_ Lekin aakhir mein tumne woh daav dikhaye jo tumne mere chaaron bhanjon ke saamne chhupa liye the.

Usne Aditya, Kartik, Udit aur Uday ki taraf dekha.

Ranbeer_ Tum chaaron ko bhi ab samajh aa gaya hoga ki Jay ne tumse ladte waqt apni poori kushti dikhayi hi nahi thi.

Aditya chup raha.

Kartik ne bas haan mein sir hila diya.

Udit aur Uday bhi akhade ki taraf dekhte rahe.

Jeevan Singh ne gehri nazar se mujhe dekha.

Jeevan Singh_ Ab tak Jay ne hamare chaar poton aur Ranbeer ka saamna kiya... aur har baar bina gusse aur bina jaldbazi ke lada.

Dadaji_ Aur har mukabale mein isne apni asli chaal ka ek hissa chhupa kar rakha.

Nirbhay ne Balram aur Ranvijay ki taraf dekha.

Nirbhay_ Ab lagta hai Jay ko Balram aur Ranvijay ke saamne utaarne ka waqt aa gaya hai.

Balram dheere-dheere akhade ki taraf badha.

Balram_ Agar Jeevan Singh ji anumati dein... toh ab main Jay ke saamne utarna chahta hoon.

Ranvijay ne Balram ki taraf dekha.

Ranvijay_ Pehle Balram bhai... uske baad meri baari.

Jeevan Singh ne dono ko gambhir nazar se dekha.

Jeevan Singh_ Theek hai. Lekin yaad rakhna... Jay mehmaan hai. Kushti poori imaandari se hogi.

Balram_ Ji.

Main akhade ke beech mein khada tha.

Ranbeer ki haar ke baad mahaul pehle se bilkul alag tha.

Ab sabki nazar Balram par thi.

38 saal ka anubhavi heavyweight pahalwan Balram Singh Shekhawat dheere-dheere akhade mein utar raha tha.

Aur mujhe pata tha...

Ab tak ki kushti se agla mukabala alag hone wala tha.....

Wese to Ranbeer bhi ak tagda pahalwan tha, usne mujhe bahut achchhi takkar di..

Suryabhan_ Ranbeer tum bahut achcha lade bhai..

Tumne jay ko apne khas daav dikhane per majbur kia..

Ranbeer_ Jijaji, Jay hum sab ko soch se bahut aage hai..

Ye kisi ko bhi hara sakta hai..

Balram_ Abhi dekh lete hai, Ranbeer..

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............... Balram vs Jay ...............

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Balram Singh Shekhawat dheere-dheere akhade ke beech mein utare. 

38 saal ki umar mein Balram ak Anubhavi pahalwan hai, aur uski body ek trained heavyweight pahalwan jaisi hai.

Uska chehra shaant tha, lekin uski aankhon mein kai saalon ke kushti ke anubhav ki gehraai thi.

Kamini apni jagah se apne pati ko dekh rahi thi. 

Udaybhan, Meera, Kiran aur poora Solanki parivaar ab aur bhi dhyaan se akhade ki taraf dekh raha tha.

Balram ne mitti uthakar apne haathon aur kandhon par mal li. 

Phir mere saamne aakar khade ho gaye..

Balram_ Jay, tumne mere se pehle ghar ke kai jawaan ladkon ko hara diya hai.

Lekin mere saath tumhe sirf taakat nahi, technique ka bhi saamna karna padega.

Me_ Balram ji, isi liye toh aapke saamne ladne ka intezar tha.

Balram ke chehre par halki si muskaan aayi.

Balram_ Achha hai... pahalwan mein hausla hona zaroori hai.

Dadaji khatia se bole.

Dadaji_ Jay, Balram purane andaaz ka pahalwan hai. Iski grip aur balance ko halka mat samajhna.

Me_ Ji Dadaji..

Jeevan Singh_ Dono taiyar ho?

Balram_ Ji..

Me_ Ji.

Jeevan Singh_ Shuru karo!

Balram ne is baar pehla daav nahi lagaya. 

Woh bilkul shaant khade rahe aur Jay ki movement dekhte rahe.

Main bhi unki aankhon aur pairon ki movement par dhyaan de raha tha.

Kuchh pal tak dono ek-doosre ke chaaron taraf ghoomte rahe.

Ranvijay dheere se Udaybhan se bola.

Ranvijay_ Balram bhai saamne wale ko pehle thakate hain.

Udaybhan_ Aur Jay bhi kisi jaldi mein nahi hai.

Achanak Balram ne ek kadam aage badhaya aur Jay ki kalai pakad li.

Maine turant grip ko rokne ki koshish ki, lekin Balram ne apni doosri baazu se mera kandha control kar liya.

Pehli baar mujhe saamne wale ki grip mein sachchi heavyweight strength mehsoos hui.

Me_ Aapki pakad kaafi mazboot hai.

Balram_ Abhi toh pakad shuru hui hai.

Balram ne mujhe apni taraf kheenchne ki koshish ki. Maine apna stance neecha kiya aur pair jama liye.

Hum dono kuchh pal tak ek-doosre ko dhakelte rahe.

Aangan mein bilkul khamoshi thi.

Jeevan Singh ki nazar hum dono par thi.

Balram ne achanak grip badli aur Jay ko side mein kheenchne ki koshish ki.

Main uski direction ke saath ghoom gaya, lekin Balram ne turant apna pair badhakar mera rasta rok diya.

Main ek pal ke liye balance se bahar hua.
Akhade ke bahar se awaaz aayi.

Nirbhay_ Sambhal Jay!

Maine turant apna balance wapas liya aur Balram ki grip se nikal gaya.

Balram ne sir hilaaya.

Balram_ Achha bachav.

Me_ Aapka daav bhi achha tha.

Balram ne dobara attack kiya. Is baar unhone meri baazu ko pakadkar mujhe neeche kheenchne ki koshish ki.

Maine apni position neeche ki aur unki grip ke bahar nikalne ki koshish ki.

Balram ne turant apni grip badal di.

Dadaji_ Jay! Kandha dekho!

Maine turant Balram ke kandhe ki movement samjhi aur usi pal side mein nikal gaya.

Balram ka daav khaali gaya..

Maine unki baazu ko control mein liya aur ek tez palat-dav lagaya.

Balram ek ghutne par aa gaye, lekin turant uth khade hue.

Ranvijay_ Wah Balram Ji!

Balram ne mitti jhaadi aur meri taraf dekha..

Balram_ Ab samajh gaya... tumhe seedha daav lagakar rokna mushkil hai.

Me_ Aur mujhe samajh aa gaya ki aapko girana bhi aasaan nahi hai.

Balram_ Toh phir dekhte hain kiski baat sahi hoti hai.

Balram ne is baar apni speed badha di. Unhone meri grip ko pakda, kandha control kiya aur apna wazan istemal karte hue Jay ko peeche dhakelna shuru kiya.

Main peeche hata, lekin akhade ke kinare tak jaane se pehle apna stance jama liya.
Balram ne poori taakat lagayi.

Main kuchh pal tak unki strength ko rokta raha.

Phir maine achanak apni direction badli.

Balram ki momentum ko follow karte hue maine unka balance side mein tod diya.
Balram ka ek ghutna mitti mein laga.

Lekin woh turant palatkar khade ho gaye.

Aangan mein maujood sabhi log ab khade hokar mukabala dekh rahe the.
Rajeshwari ki nazar mujh par thi.

Dadaji ke chehre par halka sa garv tha.

Balram ne gehri saans li..

Balram_ Jay... ab tumhari baari nahi, meri baari hai.

Balram ne ek tez grip banayi aur Jay ko apni taraf kheench liya.

Maine uski grip ko todne ke liye apni position badli.

Balram ne turant counter kiya.

Kuchh pal ke liye dono ki grip ekdum mazboot bani rahi.

Phir mujhe unki body movement mein ek chhota sa gap dikha.

Maine usi pal unki baazu ko control kiya, apna pair sahi jagah jamaaya aur ek combination daav lagaya.

Balram ka balance poori tarah bigad gaya..

Maine unhe mitti par le aaya aur turant control position bana li.

Balram ne palatne ki poori koshish ki.

Lekin main unki har movement ke saath apni position badalta raha.

Kuchh pal baad Balram ne apna haath mitti par rakh diya.

Balram_ Bas...Jay me apni haa maanta hun...

Maine turant grip chhod di aur peeche hat gaya.

Aangan mein kuchh pal ke liye bilkul khamoshi rahi.

Phir Ranvijay ne zor se kaha.

Ranvijay_ Wah!

Balram dheere se khade hue. Unhone mitti jhaadi aur mere paas aaye.

Balram_ Jay, aaj bahut saalon baad kisi jawaan pahalwan ne mujhe itni baar apni chaal badalne par majboor kiya hai.

Me_ Aap bahut anubhavi pahalwan hain.

Aapse ladkar mujhe bhi bahut kuchh seekhne ko mila.

Balram ne mere kandhe par haath rakha.

Balram_ Tumhare andar taakat hai, lekin sabse badi baat ye hai ki tum apni taakat ko control karte ho. Isse kabhi khona mat..

Dadaji ne khatia par baithkar santosh se sir hilaaya.

Dadaji_ Isi baat ke liye toh maine ise saalon tak mitti mein ghisaya hai.

Jeevan Singh ne Balram ki taraf dekha.

Jeevan Singh_ Balram, tumne poori kushti imaandari se ladi.

Balram_ Jeevan Singh, Jay bhi poori izzat ke saath lada hai.

Ranvijay ab akhade ke kinare aa chuka tha.

Ranvijay_ Balram bhai... ab meri baari hai.

Balram ne muskurakar uski taraf dekha.

Balram_ Ja Ranvijay... ab dekhte hain tum Jay ko kitni der rok paate ho.

Ranvijay ne mitti uthayi aur apne haathon par mal li.

Ranvijay_ Jay... taiyar ho?

Me_ Ji..

Jeevan Singh_ Theek hai... ab Ranvijay aur Jay.

Poore aangan ki nazrein phir se akhade ke beech tik gayi.

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Ranvijay ne akhade ke beech pair jamaye aur Jay ne apni gardan halka sa ghumakar apni stance set ki..

Ranvijay_ Jay... main Balram bhai se thoda alag khelta hoon. Main rukne wala nahi hoon.

Me_ Aur main bhi aapko aasani se rukne nahi dunga.

Ranvijay_ Bas... yahi josh chahiye.

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Ranvijay ne achanak aage badhkar mere kandhon ko pakadne ki koshish ki.

Mene turant side step liya aur Ranvijay ki pakad se bach gaya.

Udaybhan_ Ranvijay! Pehle gati sambhal kar!

Balram_ Isko jaldi mein pakadne ki koshish mat kar... Jay movement bahut tez karta hai.

Ranvijay ne halka sa muskura kar dobara stance liya.

Ranvijay_ Samajh gaya, Balram bhai.

Is baar Ranvijay dheere-dheere circle karte hue Jay ke paas aaya.

Jay bhi uski movement ko dhyan se dekh raha tha.

Me_ Aap speed se pressure banana chahte ho... lekin main aapki direction dekh raha hoon.

Ranvijay_ Toh phir direction badal kar dekhte hain.

Ranvijay ne ekdum se apni direction badli aur Meri kamar par control banane ki koshish ki.

Mene apna balance neeche kiya aur dono ne kuch pal tak ek-doosre ko pakadkar position ke liye zor lagaya.

Aangan mein sabki nazrein hum dono par tik gayi.

Suryabhan_ Ranveer, dhyan se dekhna... Ranvijay mamaji pressure ke andar bhi movement nahi chhodte.

Ranveer_ Ji Papa.

Udit ne bhi gambhir hokar akhade ki taraf dekha.

Udit_ Jay ko Ranvijay ji ki speed ke saath unki stamina ko bhi handle karna padega.

Meenal_ Aur Ranvijay ji ko Jay ki timing se bachna padega.

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Ranvijay ne achanak mujhe ek taraf push karke apni position banayi aur turant angle badalne laga.

Jay ek pal ke liye peeche gaya, lekin agle hi pal usne apna pair jamaya.

Me_ Ab meri baari.

Mene Ranvijay ki movement ka wait kiya aur jaise hi Ranvijay dobara aage badha, Mene uski direction ko read karke side se control le liya.

Ranvijay_ Hmm...!

Ranvijay ne turant apna balance sambhala aur Jay ki pakad se nikal gaya.

Balram ke chehre par halka sa santosh tha.

Balram_ Bahut badhiya, Ranvijay. Pakad mein aate hi nikal gaya.

Main itni jaldi rukne wala nahi hoon, Balram bhai.

Mene muskurakar mitti apne haath par lagayi.

Me_ Aur main bhi abhi poori tarah se khela nahi hoon.

Jeevan Singh_ Bas... dono apna dhyan rakho. Kushti mein josh ke saath hosh bhi zaroori hai.

Ranvijay_ Ji Thakur Sahab..

Me_ Ji..

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Agla daur aur tez ho gaya.

Ranvijay apni speed aur stamina ka poora istemaal kar raha tha, jabki mene har movement ko padhkar apni position badal raha tha.

Kabhi Ranvijay pressure banata, kabhi me uska angle tod deta.

Arjun_ Wah... Ranvijay mamaji ne Jay ko kaafi der se engage karke rakha hai.

Udaybhan_ Haan. Ranvijay ki sabse badi taqat uska pace hai.

Kaveri_ Lekin Jay bilkul panic nahi kar raha.

Anamika_ Woh bas wait kar raha hai ki sahi moment kab aaye.

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Kuch pal baad Ranvijay ne ek baar phir mujhe par pressure banaya.

Mene is baar peeche hatne ke bajay uski movement ke saath angle change kiya.

Ranvijay ko ek pal ke liye apna balance adjust karna pada.

Mene wahi moment pakad liya aur controlled wrestling technique se Ranvijay ko mitti par le aaya.

Ranvijay ne turant uthne ki koshish ki. wo jor lagata rha, jhat patata rha, lakin meri pakad aur takat uss per majbut thi..

Mene use unnecessary force se rokne ke bajay position maintain ki...

Kuchh der jhatpatane ke baad dard se karhate huye Ranvijay ne apni haar maan li..
Uske hath pitate hi kuch seconds baad mene pakad chhod di.

Ranvijay uthkar khada hua aur gehri saans lene laga.

Poora aangan kuch pal ke liye bilkul shaant raha.

Phir Balram ne zor se kaha.

Balram_ Wah Jay! Ye thi timing!

Ranvijay ne meri taraf dekha aur hans diya.

Ranvijay_ Samajh gaya... meri speed se zyada tum meri movement padh rahe the.

Me_ Aap bahut strong aur fast ho. Agar main aapki movement na padhta, toh aap mujhe kaafi der tak pressure mein rakh sakte the.

Ranvijay_ Aur tumne pressure ke andar bhi apna balance nahi chhoda.

Udaybhan ke chehre par garv tha.

Udaybhan_ Ranvijay, haar-jeet se zyada zaroori ye hai ki tumne apna poora dam lagaya.

Ranvijay_ Ji Jijaji.

Ranvijay ne Jay ke paas aakar haath badhaya.

Ranvijay_ Jay... aaj se tumhare liye meri taraf se poora samman hai.

Me_ Aur meri taraf se bhi, Ranvijay ji.

 Aapke saath kushti karna mere liye bhi seekhne jaisa tha.

Dadaji Baldev Singh khatia se uthkar dheere-dheere akhade ke paas aaye.

Baldev Singh_ Jay... aaj tumne ek baat baar-baar sabit ki hai. Taqat se pehle timing, aur timing se pehle dimaag.

Me_ Ji Dadaji.

Jeevan Singh sabko dekhte hue bole.

Jeevan Singh_ Aaj mere ghar ke kai pehalwan Jay ke saamne utare... aur har ek ne apni poori kshamata dikhayi.

Jeevan Singh_ Lekin asli pariksha abhi baaki hai.

Poore aangan mein phir se sannata chha gaya.

Jay ne Jeevan Singh ki taraf dekha.

Me_Thakur sahab...ab kaun?

Jeevan Singh ne akhade ke doosre kone ki taraf dekha.

Jeevan Singh_ Ab dekhte hain... is ghar ka agla kaun pehalwan tumhare saamne aata hai.

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Dadaji ne mujhe ishara kia..

Dadaji ye ishara tab karte the, jab mujhe ak se adhik pahalwano se ladna hota tha..

Jeevan Singh_ Jay tumhare jeevan me ye moka kabhi bhi aa sakta hai, ki tumhe ak sath 6 yaa usse adhik pahalwano se ladna pade...

Iss liye me chahta hun ki tum, mere 4 poto se ak sath lado....

Dadaji_ Jay ke liye ye koi nayi baat nhi hai Thakur Sahab..

Jeevan Singh_ Bachcho!

Aur agle hi pal chaaron bhai akhade me utar gaye aur meri taraf badhe.

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Ranveer sabse pehle mujhe tak pahucha.

Ranveer_ Ab bachkar dikhao!

Ranveer ne seedha mujhe pakadne ki koshish ki.

Mene uski kalai pakdi.

Ek pal.

Bas ek pal ke liye Mene Ranveer ki aankhon mein dekha.

Phir—
Mene apna stance neecha kiya aur Ranveer ki movement ke saath uska balance bigaad diya.

Ranveer_ Arre—

Mene use kamar se pakda..

Dhaam! se gira dia..

Ranveer seedha mitti par ja gira.

Aangan mein zor ki awaaz goonj uthi.

Aakanksha_ Ranveer!

Ranveer kuch pal mitti par pada raha.

Phir uthkar baith gaya..

Ranveer_ Theek hoon!

Jay ne uski taraf dekha.

Me_ Ek.

Vikram ke chehre ki muskaan gayab ho gayi..

Vikram_ Itni jaldi?

Jay_ Aapki baari hai.

Vikram ne turant angle badla.

Woh merey peeche pahunchne ki koshish kar raha tha.

Mene uski movement notice kar li.

Vikram ne mere kandhe ko pakda.

Lekin Mene turant uski kamar ke paas grip bana li.

Vikram_ Ruko—

Mene use uthaya.

Poora Vikram hawa mein tha.

Vikram_ Arre!

Mene use control ke saath mitti par patak diya.

Dhaam!

Vikram kuch pal chup raha.

Udit_ Do!

Kartik_ Jay toh ek-ek karke nipta raha hai!

Raghav ne turant Vikram ki taraf dekha.

Raghav_ Vikram!

Vikram ne haath uthaya.

Vikram_ Main theek hoon.

Phir Raghav ki nazar Jay par tik gayi.

Raghav_ Ab meri baari.

Raghav dheere-dheere Meri taraf badha.

Is baar me bhi seedha uski taraf gaya.

Dono aamne-saamne aaye.

Raghav ne mujhko pakadne ki koshish ki.

Mene uski grip rok di.

Raghav ne apni poori taqat laga di.

Lekin me ek inch bhi nahi hila.

Raghav ke chehre par pehli baar hairani dikhi.

Me_ Aap physically strong hain.

Raghav_ Aur tum?

Mene halki si muskaan di.

Me_ Main kushti karta hoon.

Mene Raghav ki position badli.

Ek tez movement.

Raghav ka balance bigad gaya.

Mene use kamar se pakda aur zameen se utha liya.

Raghav_ Jay—

Dhaam!

Raghav bhi mitti par tha.

Chaaron taraf se awaaz uthi.

Balram_ Teesra!

Udaybhan ne chupchaap mujhe ko dekha.

Udaybhan_ Ye chaaron regular pehalwan nahi hain... aur Jay aur inki training ka farq saaf dikha raha hai.

Arjun ab tak chup tha.

Mene uski taraf dekha.

Dono ki nazrein mili.

Jay_ Ab aap.

Arjun ne dheere se stance liya.

Arjun_ Main jaanta hoon tum mujhse zyada trained ho.

Me_ Toh phir?

Arjun_ Isliye tumhe haraane nahi...
Arjun ne ek kadam aage badhaya.

Tumhe rokne aaya hoon.

Jay ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi.

Me_ Koshish kijiye.

Arjun ne mujhko pakda.

Mene grip break ki.

Arjun ne doosri taraf se control lene ki koshish ki.

Mene phir uska angle badal diya.

Arjun ne turant sambhalne ki koshish ki.

Lekin Mene usse bhi kamar se pakad liya.

Arjun_ Jay...

Mene use hawa mein utha liya.

Shalini_ Arjun!

Mene Arjun ko kuch pal hawa mein control kiya.

Phir— Dhaam!

Arjun mitti par tha.

Poora aangan chup.

Me seedha khada tha.

Mere saamne chaaron bhai alag-alag jagah mitti mein pade the.

Ranveer sabse pehle uthne laga.

Ranveer_ Ye aadmi hai ya pahad?

Vikram mitti jhaadte hue hans pada.

Vikram_ Ab samajh aa raha hai Dadaji ne ise kyun bulaya tha.

Raghav dheere se khada hua.

Raghav_ Akela ladna alag baat hai...

Usne Meri taraf dekha.

Raghav_ Chaaron ko ek saath ladna padega.

Arjun bhi uth gaya.

Arjun_ Haan.

Mene apni gardan ghumayi.

Me_ Toh ab tak aap log alag-alag aa rahe the.

Ranveer_ Ab nahi.

Vikram_ Ab chaaron saath.

Mene mitti apni hatheli par ragdi.

Me_ Theek hai.

Mene chaaron ko dekha.

Me_ Ab dekhte hain chaar log ek Jay ko kitni der rok sakte hain.

Jeevan Singh ke chehre par halki si muskaan aa gayi.

Jeevan Singh_ Dobara.

Raghav ne Ranveer ki taraf dekha.

Raghav_ Is baar coordination.

Vikram_ Jay ko ek jagah rokna hoga.

Arjun_ Aur koi bhi akela attack nahi karega.

Ranveer_ Samajh gaya.

Chaaron ne apni position badli.

Is baar mere saamne chaar nahi...ek team khadi thi.

Menne unhe dekha.

Me_ Achha.

Ek chhoti si muskaan mere chehre par aayi.

Me_ Ab maza aayega.

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Chaaron ek saath Meri taraf daude.

Aur Jay bhi unki taraf badh gaya.

Agla pal poore akhade ko hila dene wala tha.

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Chaaron ek saath Meri taraf daude.

Raghav_ Vikram, right!

Vikram turant mere daayein taraf se ghuma.

Ranveer baayein taraf se aaya.

Arjun seedha saamne se.

Mene ek hi pal mein unki positioning samajh li.

Me_ Achhi planning hai.

Arjun sabse pehle mujh tak pahucha.

Dono ne grip banai..

Isi waqt Ranveer ne peeche se mujh ko pakadne ki koshish ki.

Mene Arjun ki grip chhodi aur turant apna badan ghuma diya.

Ranveer ki pakad Mere kandhe tak hi pahunch paayi.

Mene Ranveer ka haath pakda.

Ek jhatka.

Ranveer aage ki taraf kheench gaya.

Mene uska balance use karte hue usse apne saamne kar liya.

Vikram bhi usi waqt pahunch gaya.

Mene Ranveer ko ek taraf dhakela aur Vikram ko rok diya.

Raghav_ Ab!

Raghav ne meri kamar par grip bana li.

Pehli baar mujh ko chaaron ka combined pressure mehsoos hua.

Mere pair mitti mein thode se ghase.

Udaybhan_ Is baar chaaron ne sahi coordination kiya hai.

Balram_ Jay ko ek jagah rok liya!

Jeevan Singh chupchaap dekhte rahe.
Jay ne ek gehri saans li.

Idhar dadaji bhi bethe huye, iss mast khel kaa aanand le rhe the, wo jante the, mere liye ye sab ak khel hai..

Me chahun to kuchh second me dharasai kar dun sab ko...

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