[Suvamani]

For the first time, I truly wish I were a poet… not because I want to write poetry, but because I wish I had the words to describe your story. Your story is so beautiful and profound that ordinary words simply don’t feel enough to do it justice.

[Sankamithira]

You could have killed that wimpy husband before ending the story making shipra completely owned by patode. The end felt incomplete without that.

[Umavictor32]

By the way... DID THE STORY ENDED OR WAS THIS END OF THIS UPDATE???

I DONT THINK STORY HAVE ENDED... OR AM I WRONG?

[Umavictor32]

What happened to toppo??
He is waiting for shipra?
Many questions left unanswered..
I dnt think this story ended

[Suvamani]

Bro I think that update was ended

[slammaster]

That was great it's definitely not the ending just the end of that chapter a new chapter will rise in again things are only getting more interesting

[slammaster]

Who's to say the narration is even over shipra pussy being the subject of focus and discussion concentration imagination all on her pussy how far how big how long sounds like a full escaped evaluation or investigation is in order to just imagine her in a vacation on a beach or resort what will. It take to break the little last ounce of woman left in her age mustered to summon and push his chest.. If but the condom leaves too much to the imagination thinking there might be more to the story take her out more stories like this.. Alsi I loved the pussy out legs open I'm a huge fan of pretty puffy plump swollen pussy lips folds libia and vkits big small I notice Spanish Colombian Indian has the best beautiful pussy I would enjoy a cam If that judt the act alone no hands or toys needed just pure pussy left open.legs up and down open wife and closed so to have a complete stranger holding her legs open enjoying her pussy is fucking great need more shipra avd that female office needs to meet avd kiss

[val.coutinho]

Excellent update Suraj..... I just hope this is not the end of the story..... I think it's the end of this chapter..... Cant wait to see what unfolds ahead for Shipra... Please update soon Suraj

[Umavictor32]

Who's to say the narration is even over shipra pussy being the subject of focus and discussion concentration imagination all on her pussy how far how big how long sounds like a full escaped evaluation or investigation is in order to just imagine her in a vacation on a beach or resort what will. It take to break the little last ounce of woman left in her age mustered to summon and push his chest.. If but the condom leaves too much to the imagination thinking there might be more to the story take her out more stories like this.. Alsi I loved the pussy out legs open I'm a huge fan of pretty puffy plump swollen pussy lips folds libia and vkits big small I notice Spanish Colombian Indian has the best beautiful pussy I would enjoy a cam If that judt the act alone no hands or toys needed just pure pussy left open.legs up and down open wife and closed so to have a complete stranger holding her legs open enjoying her pussy is fucking great need more shipra avd that female office needs to meet avd kiss

But...as a woman what i feel is, suraj has focussed more on shipra attitude and character change... Shipra had encounter with patode but her choice of words were in such a manner that she is helpless, she is not enjoying etc... But in this right from go she was  really enjoying the fuck... That too in the middle while saying what happen to namrata she gave a stop for her orgasm which i feel was master stroke...

When patode said one day he will make shipra husband cuck, shipra never stopped patode from saying no nor she revolted... Rather she said patode would have been cuck in front of tat old man... Earlier shipra would never have enjoyed all such talks... Now she started to accept and enjoy...

She reached to such a situation that if old man had used condoms she would have accepted it... So i cud focus more on character change of shipra than pussy change...

That's the beauty of this story... Of this update.. Narration is reader friendly..

IAM PRETTY SURE AND WISH WHAT SURAJ MENTIONED WUD BE END OF THE EPISODE AND NOT END OF THE STORY, BECAUSE PATODE HAD PROMISED TOPPO THAT HE WILL PRESENT HER TO HIM... 

Anyway we are waiting...

[penis.garlic]

He usually mention it as end of and then chapter name this time he mentioned as the end as readers we must respect his decision he might of thought to put an end to the story due to health conditions too.

Anyways thank you Suraj for the wonderful thriller story it has immense repeat value

[slammaster]

Let's not forget about Shrutika and her story arch I Sure the story Will continue

[Aslaan pala]

Need a spinoff on Rakhi's story....request

[slammaster]

I didn't mean pussy changing I mean her pussy open on display is one of my favourite things 
Sure she stayed well within character throughout the sexual acts but let's not forget this is the same Shipra who got drunk on her first night in the village and had some young kids stick his finger in her pussy while she was asleep and unaware because she was so drunk and also she almost let the kid have his way it wasn't for her friend stopping it so this isn't the first time something like this happened where someone had to stop it before it went too far one day someone won't be there to stop her and one day her pussy will get fucked 
So I do believe there is enough room to continue 
Her downfall a say a day as a prostitute or a stripper would fit her very well 


But...as a woman what i feel is, suraj has focussed more on shipra attitude and character change... Shipra had encounter with patode but her choice of words were in such a manner that she is helpless, she is not enjoying etc... But in this right from go she was  really enjoying the fuck... That too in the middle while saying what happen to namrata she gave a stop for her orgasm which i feel was master stroke...

When patode said one day he will make shipra husband cuck, shipra never stopped patode from saying no nor she revolted... Rather she said patode would have been cuck in front of tat old man... Earlier shipra would never have enjoyed all such talks... Now she started to accept and enjoy...

She reached to such a situation that if old man had used condoms she would have accepted it... So i cud focus more on character change of shipra than pussy change...

That's the beauty of this story... Of this update.. Narration is reader friendly..

IAM PRETTY SURE AND WISH WHAT SURAJ MENTIONED WUD BE END OF THE EPISODE AND NOT END OF THE STORY, BECAUSE PATODE HAD PROMISED TOPPO THAT HE WILL PRESENT HER TO HIM... 

Anyway we are waiting...

[penis.garlic]

Let's not forget about Shrutika and her story arch I Sure the story Will continue

Slammaster It's done bro

[Umavictor32]

What about toppo?

[ChandruDelighty]

I think story is at 70 percent.

Still many parts to come.

Investigation results.
Patode promise to Toppo
Alokk revenge against Patode/shipra
Alok reactions knowing about his wife
Shipra's future
Finale

If author ends now. It is going to be an in-complete wonderful story.

I guess Suraj will complete this story

[Chitrarassu]

I think story is at 70 percent.

Still many parts to come.

Investigation results.
Patode promise to Toppo
Alokk revenge against Patode/shipra
Alok reactions knowing about his wife
Shipra's future
Finale

If author ends now. It is going to be an in-complete wonderful story.

I guess Suraj will complete this story

Alok revenge???  Biggest Joke of year 

[ChandruDelighty]

Alokk revenge attempt may be.... He was planning something with Chetan.

[Urupudathavan]

Alokk revenge attempt may be.... He was planning something with Chetan.

Chetan himself will search some way to fuck shipra. How he will help this wimpy guy.

[ChandruDelighty]

Let's see.. Until Suraj comes up with next update.. Story is in hung state.
Don't know when he will be back..