Adultery Love Sex And War : Age Of Darkness

[Indgent]

hi harry , are u there ? This is an amazing story . please continue

[Parthibajeeva]

Sorry Harry.. we are disappointed..

[JohnS112]

Any update coming today

[Indgent]

harry , come back

[RCF]

He didn't even login for a month, this story is a dead end sadly and never expected it from Harry...Hopefully he is healthy and all is well.

~ RCF

[Demeter]

I am disappointed by many so-called authors and writers on this portal (as are many other readers who are also disappointed).
Many so-called authors arrived with great fanfare and proudly proclaimed that they were different from other authors. 
They write out of passion and are determined to finish their stories, and they do not want to stop writing until the stories they have started are complete!
The fact is that – apart from just a very few, who you can count on the fingers of one hand – nobody has kept their promise. 
They either disappeared without saying a word, or they suddenly stopped halfway through without giving a reason.

Harry sounded very serious and sincere. A man who keeps his word – that’s worth a great deal!
I must admit that I’m very disappointed, because his behaviour, unfortunately, doesn’t live up to what we expected of him.

I’ve still got so much to say, but what else could I add without casting him in an even worse light? I really do hope that nothing has happened to him and that he’s feeling well.
Perhaps he’ll come to his senses and remember his promise to continue the story and bring it to a conclusion.


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Demeter

[Parthibajeeva]

Missing this story a lot man. Especially sonarika and Hemant emotional sequences..

[riavikas]

Hi,

I think the author is stuck in something and it seems he has abandoned his first story.

Any other takers who would like to continue the story with same intensity, passion, thrill ???

[shashank13]

bro update waiting for hemants adventures

[riavikas]

Hi,

Any brother willing to finish the story

[Demeter]

Dear Friend,

We are not aware of what has happened or what the general circumstances are. We are very concerned that this might be a serious problem.
The story is of secondary importance. Please let us know that you are doing well, so that we know you are safe and healthy!

In this sense
All the best

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Demeter

[RageOfThunder1191]

This story was really good, wish the writer returns and finishes the story!

[RageOfThunder1191]

What I really liked about this story is the world building. The sad part was it was getting quiet interesting with the last chapters dwelving into the backstory of Hemant's past. It was getting quiet interesting and then the writer vanished. I hope he returns, Harry I hope you're alright. Wish one day you return and finish this incredible story!

[RageOfThunder1191]

I also wanna point out Harry's writing style has its own speciality. I love how much in detail he goes with this story. I recently learned there was indeed a Garuda Force that was formed in the years pointed in the story. Love the attention to detail. Really loved his "Cinematic Storytelling" approach!

[Demeter]

There’s still no sign of Harry; I’m really worried.
I hope he’s just so busy with his work that he doesn’t have time to reply or visit the portal at the moment.

Harry, please get in touch as soon as you can!

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Demeter

[RCF]

Harry hasn't visited this site since June this year. Hopefully he is doing well and just busy with life.

I will be away from this site for a while. Quality stories are missing since Harry left and some stories are getting attention but they are not of same league. Hopefully Krish, Harry, Game40it, Drubyu and Salir write some stories soon.  

~RCF

[Demeter]

I have read the story through again in its entirety and can confirm that I thoroughly enjoyed it.

It struck me that Sonarika behaves in the area like a naive, thoughtless person who is simply wandering about.
In my view, she flew to Delhi to be with her parents in order to create some distance between herself and the two men in her life (Hemant and Vikram), so that she could recover, clear her head and give serious thought to her future, enabling her to make clear-headed decisions.

... Instead, however, she continues to maintain contact with Vikram and his family. In recent days, she has even met up with Vikram himself and, ultimately, with members of his family as well. 
She has also shared photos of activities she has done with Vikram on social media platforms. Ultimately, she is so weak-willed that she almost ends up in bed with him again.
On the other hand, however, she shows no willingness to enquire about her husband – the father of her son – to ask how he is or to talk to him.
Yet she is still surprised by the bitterness and disappointment Hemant feels, and by the fact that he is increasingly distancing himself from her and seeking closeness with others.

Her current state of mind raises questions.

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I hope Harry is well and safe, and that he’ll be back soon...

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Demeter

[RageOfThunder1191]

I have read the story through again in its entirety and can confirm that I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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I hope Harry is well and safe, and that he’ll be back soon...

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Demeter

Loved your observation about the story. I recently joined this site and this story caught my attention for its wonderful structure and world building. I would like to share some of my opinions about it too.

Honestly, I don't think Sonarika is not that much "Leaning into" Vikram anymore. In a way, yes, she had surrendered herself but she has also shown restraints in recent times. I am guessing she is haunted by her choices. Like for example, in their earlier trysts, when Sonarika got close to Vikram, she would have nightmares about Hemant dieing and it made her act "protective" over him. 

Sonarika's feelings for Hemant is kind of a "Posessive" Love. She enjoys the feeling of Hemant initially acting submissive, when he was out of shape and was just a mere employee in Quadron. But I think she also craved Hemant who could dominate her. I mean the way she raged on Sandeep for hurting Hemant shows she is possessive and protective about him. She has never acted like that with Vikram. I am guessing from the story standpoint, she is the submissive one in her and Vikram's dynamic. She doesn't care or concern for Vikram as much as she does for Hemant. Even her slapping him after his London trip shows her love is more "posessive" in nature.

But that whole equation seems to be changing from the final chapters as she was experiencing a different Hemant. In a way, I think Hemant was the sanity in her life. And ironically it was Hemant's worst version that brought her sanity. She never experienced Michael King, so I am guessing her perspective will change and in a way her feelings will change about Hemant when his past is unravelled to her.

I am just curious about Sonarika and Meghna's feud though. It was getting interesting though, I really want to know the real history between them. Could Meghna really be Sonarika's older sister? Her father was pretty judgemental about Hemant in the early chapters but in the final ones he was opening up to him since knowing about his Garuda Force days? I really wonder whether Meghna is really Jagjeet's daughter or is there something else going on entirely.

[RageOfThunder1191]

I would also like to share something interesting I observed in this story.

I liked the way Sonarika's "closet Bisexual" nature was revealed in one of those last chapters. Like before her injury, she had an intimate encounter with another female. Could this also be another fuel to Meghna's revenge? After all Sonarika was aware about Meghna's bisexual nature , could Meghna be actually upset that Sonarika chose Reshma over her as her 'first time' which would further fuel her revenge towards her and her family. On a "what if" scenario, would Meghna have forgiven or forgotten about her revenge if Sonarika was more open to Meghna and they actually become romantically involved in that time?

I've been wondering about this since reading it. And just like Demeter, I hope Harry finishes this story. It is too good to be left incomplete!