[adipoopoo]

Update

[Paty@123]

We r hunger to have an update

[Rangushki]

Waiting for update

[Paty@123]

Update plz

[Paty@123]

Update please,or conclude

[Actressfapper]

Please read and enjoy my short stories

https://xossipy.com/thread-56487-post-5299959.html

[Paty@123]

This story has come into limelight after a long time, please continue

[sri7869]

Good story

[Kamuk Insaan]

Great storytelling!

[midir]

Does anyone have the pdf of this with all the pics and gifs?the pics and gifs of first few chapters won't load

[Lim99]

গল্প টা কি বাংলায় পাওয়া যাবে এভাবে পড়তে অসুবিধা হচ্ছে

[Krish World]

Excellent story, wish the author of the story continue this and complete.

[sumo34]

Rep +++++

[xboard1986]

Wow.. Amazing..
Waiting for next update

Again reading this master piece after many years ?

[xboard1986]

Undoubtedly the best in xossipy

[urb0nd]

nice story

[Rishabh1]

Conceptual depth of this story is on different dimension, you could call it a crash course on so many topics from physics to philosophy ..lol. Quality of writing is rich and top notch but hate to say it's word heavy i.e. for every single word a character utters there is a two line thought process explanation **, it was bit much! I was constantly looking for the quotes " " just to get on with the flow and see where the story is heading. I regret to say I did not read fully word-to-word for the reason above but was skimming to catch up with the plot. Such high quality writing is unusual for this forum, with bit of plot depth and amendments it could absolutely become publishing worthy as a crime thriller. Thank you for all your time invested in this, seriously this is a gem hiding in xossipy and hope you would come back and finish this story.