Adultery Love Sex And War : Age Of Darkness
(13-04-2026, 04:06 PM)Harry Jordan Wrote: I understand your observation....unfortunately time constraints is what limits me in my work plus this is not like the early chapters. We are moving in a very intricate part of the main plot. I am still trying to construct the "Mini" love story of Kirti and Hemant and how the Garud adventures came to an end so that this flashback draws a motivation factor and more intrigue in Sonarika's character regarding Hemant. The problem here is there is a lot of connection to some characters who were in the background to be finally revealed on how they came in Hemant's world. And I have to restrict that in a single chapter that is being worked. Its a real hectic of a work , but like I said to my readers. I will not sacrifice the story's quality to maintain my punctuality. If I start doing it on time and people start seeing the quality lower , I will be upset. 

I honestly don't know by when it will be ready. All I know is there is some crazy amount of action and "Spec Ops" stuff that will give an introductory opening to the world of Michael King and AZRAEL. And Kirti is an important part for that world to form.

So I understand what you mean , but unfortunately , the process is pretty hectic for now. But I assure you , every chapter will be quality material as the story unfolds on Hemant and Sonarika as they will walk their individual paths to acquire their justice!

Ok brother take your time
But not too much time?
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When will he the next update?
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Can we expect an update??
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It's tuesday !! Your day .. Can we expect an update??
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Come on man.. when ever I visited site for your update.. I got disappointed.. egarly waiting for your update..
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Expecting a update tonight..
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Is there a update tonight?
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Waiting for the update...
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It's tuesday man.. is there any chance of update...
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Harry bro.... Sorry to say this.. But the reality hits hard.. i think.. i don't know about others.. Our story had started to fade when there is a big gap between the updates.. I am sorry if that hurts..
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The biggest problem with Xossipy is that it has to contend with ‘viruses’, ignorance and half-finished-work, which significantly undermines its user-friendliness and reliability.
So far, this portal has mostly come off worse. Unfortunately!

Many authors and writers seek refuge in simply remaining silent in the face of everything their readers and their own fans say, letting it all wash over them.
And those who do eventually speak up come up with the most far-fetched excuses to justify this behaviour, at least in part.

In my view, such conduct is unethical and contrary to the rules.

This is not an accusation or criticism of any individual and should be understood as such. 
I would like to make it clear that this is merely a personal impression and an observation on my part.

But to each their own...

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1 turned to 2 then it turned to 3 now weekend 4 is empty with no updates. Wish I could leave this story here forever and move out. Sometimes its hard once your are vested in it. I understand every one has personal lives, responsibilities and timelines to meet. Hence it is very important to write and have a rough draft before starting the story so it can be fine tuned between the update to update and nothing more, Story of this scale writing it between updates will make people restless and lose interest. I now do not even remember some of the earlier updates of MK and Sonarika arc is another useless thread with her being awed by MK/HK arc every corner and turn. If she needs to gather her inspiration from him to grow then its not a personal growth.

Anyways, absence of writer and his updates made me move to other stories and I found few that are super consistent and much simpler plot and brilliant.

Harry, If you are planning to come one day, I suggest you write the whole story and come back when you are ready with update for week.

~RCF
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This "supernova!" was unable to escape its fate of being swallowed up by the black hole. 
It has thus faded into obscurity.
What a shame for Sonarika, Hemant, Michael King and the rest! We’d all grown so fond of them...

From now on, I’ll be following my friend ‘RCF’s’ lead and looking for other stories.
I wish the author, Harry, every success. Perhaps he’ll have a change of heart and pull himself together to continue the sequel weekly, as originally announced, or at all.

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Hello Harry,

It’s been very quiet around you for quite some time now.
It may be that you’re very busy and don’t have much time.
But it could also be that you’ve lost the desire to write and are therefore no longer interested in continuing the story.

There’s one thing, though, for which you should take a few minutes:
Let your readers and fans know what you’re planning and whether and how the story will continue!
We’re all eagerly awaiting that.

I wish you all the best and hope you’re having a lovely time.


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It was one of my favourite.. I hope it's not an another dead story!!
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Several weeks have now passed; a lot has happened since the last update, and there is still silence – no update. 
There are no signs that things are moving forward, that updates will be issued periodically (for example, every Saturday, weekly or fortnightly), or indeed any indication of what will happen next.

I have become (and I am convinced that this applies to many other readers as well) extremely cautious regarding the initial euphoria and the authors’ announcements. 
For more than ninety per cent of these announcements turn out, after a few weeks and a few chapters, to be empty claims. The initial euphoria gives way to sober reality, the announcements lose their meaning, and the story sinks into limbo.

My appeal to those who intend to write new stories or continue older ones in order to publish them here: 
You should complete your stories first and only then begin to publish them !... 
The result of such announcements is, in fact, more than unsatisfactory – it is simply poor ...

This appeal is not directed at any specific person, but at everyone !!!

* For the time being, this post represents my final statement on this story.


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Can we expect a update tomorrow?
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I AM BACK!

Belated Hello to all my fellow Readers.

  I know a lot of you were looking forward for the next part of this saga but things didn't go according to plan with me. For me it was partially good and partially terrible. The terrible part was obviously I couldn't update this story. The good part was I took a break thanks to a fellow friend who took me to a much needed social break to a camp with nature and the wilderness. It felt very invigorating and peaceful to never touch Social Media for weeks. It also gave me enough quiet and time for my mind to recharge and for me to completely heal from my irregular health. 

So with a new energy , I am back and this time I want to gift all my readers who enjoyed my story till now to give you a reward for this delay. 


I will be uploading Chapter 34 after this post. And I would like to point why this is unique. Chapter 34 and 35 will completely focus on Hemant's backstory and him stepping into becoming Michael King in the past. And Chapter 34 will be the first chapter in this story which will have "No Sex". Chapter 34 is heavily "Action Packed" , we will be seeing the early adventures of Hemant as a Garud Commando and a teaser to the next phase of his life. This chapter is special for me because we are finally revealing his origin. Who Hemant is and what is his origin. So expect a lot of action set pieces and badass fight scenes in this chapter.

And Chapter 35 will be given to you on Saturday without delay as I've completed that as well. But it will come with some spicy content involving our new temporary heroine in this phase of the story. 

So folks , brace yourself. BECAUSE The Longest Chapter in this story is coming online in an hour!!!  flamethrower


Enjoy the Spectacle.

        From Yours Truly

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                                                                                                                            CHAPTER 34

Nal nights were a different kind of battlefield.


At Nal Air Force Station, the heat of the day gave way to a deceptive calm. The desert cooled, the winds softened, and silence stretched across the runways like a held breath. But for the Garuda Task Force, nightfall didn’t mean rest—it meant vigilance.

Weeks had passed since their arrival.

Hemant and Dan had settled into a rhythm that felt almost unnatural. Days blurred into routine—perimeter checks, coordination drills, surveillance patterns. To an outsider, they looked like elite soldiers reduced to glorified security guards.

But that illusion didn’t last long. Twice already, the call had come. Once back in Jammu and Kashmir—another Mujahideen stronghold wiped out with surgical precision. And once deep in the northeast, where a Maoist insurgent camp had been dismantled before dawn even touched the jungle canopy. Two missions. Two successes. Zero noise.

They returned each time without celebration, slipping back into their roles at Nal like shadows returning to their corners. Tonight was no different. Hemant stood atop the watchtower, rifle slung across his shoulder, eyes scanning the base under dim floodlights. From this height, everything was visible—the runways stretching endlessly, the hangars resting in disciplined rows, the occasional movement of personnel below. It was quiet. Too quiet for most. Perfect for him.

He leaned slightly against the cold railing, letting the desert wind brush past him. His gaze moved methodically—entry points, blind spots, patrol routes. Every inch of the base was etched into his mind now.

And then—Movement. Not a threat. Something else. Near the far side of the base, a small group of cadets walked toward their quarters, their silhouettes faint against the low lighting. Hemant’s eyes lingered—not out of suspicion, but recognition.

She was there.

Kirthi Raghuvanshi

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Even at a distance, she stood out. There was a certain rhythm to her walk—confident, unhurried, almost detached from everything around her. The other cadets talked among themselves, but she seemed… centered. Focused.

Hemant exhaled slowly. There it was again. That pull. Subtle. Persistent. Uninvited. He didn’t like it. Or maybe… he didn’t trust it. He shifted his gaze away, forcing his attention back to the perimeter. A soldier couldn’t afford distractions. Especially not ones he didn’t fully understand. Footsteps approached from behind.

"Still scanning the same empty fence?" Dan’s voice came, casual as ever.

"Empty places are the ones that get you killed" Hemant didn’t turn. 

Dan leaned beside him, following his line of sight. It didn’t take long for him to notice.

"Oh" he smirked. 

"That empty space"

"Don’t start" Hemant gave him a look. 

"Too late" Dan chuckled. 

"You’ve been staring at that direction for the last five minutes"

A pause.

Then, softer—

"What’s really going on?"

That question lingered. Hemant stayed silent for a moment longer than usual. The kind of silence that wasn’t avoidance—but decision. Then he spoke.

"Her name’s Kirthi Raghuvanshi"

"You noticed the name too? This is serious" Dan raised an eyebrow. 

Hemant ignored the remark.

"I’m not… interested" he said, though even he didn’t sound convinced.

Dan didn’t push immediately. He just waited. And that was enough. Hemant’s grip tightened slightly on the railing.

"There was someone else" he said finally.

"Yeah?" Dan’s expression shifted. 

A long breath.

"Sanjana....Sanju"

The name carried weight.

"We were together before I joined" Hemant continued.

"It was… real. At least, I thought it was" 

He stared out into the darkness, but he wasn’t seeing the base anymore.

"Her parents didn’t approve. Said they didn’t want their daughter tied to a soldier"

A faint, humorless smile appeared. 

"Too risky. Too uncertain. One day I’d be gone, and she’d be left alone"

"That’s—" Dan’s jaw tightened. 

"They weren’t wrong" Hemant cut in calmly.

That stopped him.

"They were thinking about her future" Hemant went on. 

"Stability. Safety. A life partner for life....something my profession cannot guarantee" 

He gestured vaguely at the base, the uniform, the unspoken dangers.

"So you just walked away?” Dan asked.

"I ended it" Hemant nodded once. 

Silence settled between them.

"Doesn’t mean it didn’t cost anything" Hemant added quietly.

For the first time, there was something raw beneath his composed exterior. Dan looked at him, a mix of frustration and understanding crossing his face. 

"Still doesn’t make it right"

"No" Hemant admitted. 

"It doesn’t"

Another pause. The desert wind picked up slightly, brushing past them like a reminder that time never stood still.

"So what now?" Dan asked.

Hemant leaned back, eyes returning to the present.

"Now?" he said. 

"Nothing"

He shook his head lightly.

"I’m not looking for anything. Not anymore"

His voice was steady again. Controlled.

"I’ve got this life now. The missions. The unpredictability. The… clarity" 

A faint smirk returned. 

"It’s enough"

Dan studied him for a moment. Then he nudged his shoulder.

"Good" he said. 

"Because you’re stuck with me in that ‘adventurous life"

Hemant let out a small chuckle.

"Could be worse"

"Damn right it could" Dan grinned. 

He straightened up, stretching slightly before adding—

"You won’t be alone, you know. Not out there"

A beat.

"Or in here"

Hemant glanced at him. There was no joke in Dan’s expression this time. Just certainty. For a moment, the weight felt lighter.

"Yeah" Hemant said quietly. 

"I know"

Below them, the base remained calm. The cadets had disappeared into their quarters. The runways stood still under the night sky.


June 2nd, 2004 — THE MOUNTAINS OF BOGDANG, LADAKH


The wind howled like a warning no one was listening to. Perched on a rocky watchpoint, a JeM militant scanned the vast plateau below through his binoculars. Nothing moved. Just endless stone, snow, and silence. It was the kind of silence that made men careless.

Another militant approached, exchanging a few quiet words before turning back toward the hidden base carved into the heights above. Routine. Predictable. Safe. Or so they thought. Inside the base, dim lanterns flickered against rough stone walls. A group of heavily armed clerics knelt in prayer, their chants low and rhythmic. Nearby, others checked rifles, loaded magazines, prepared for a war they believed would come from the front. They never considered the shadows behind them. Outside, at the eastern edge, a still lake reflected the pale sky like glass. One militant stood guard near its banks, occasionally glancing back toward the base. Another called out to him from afar.

"All clear?"

The guard raised a hand, signaling affirmation. Everything secure. Everything under control. He turned back toward the lake. And the water moved. A hand burst through the surface—fast, violent, undeniable. Before the militant could react, a blade followed. A combat knife drove straight through his throat, silencing him instantly. No cry. No struggle. Just death. Commander Hemant Kumar emerged from the icy water like something born of it, breath controlled, eyes locked, movements precise. He lowered the lifeless body gently, letting it slip back toward the shore without a sound. His voice came through the comms, low and steady.

"Dan"

A pause.

"Watchpoints. Now"

Elsewhere, Lieutenant Dan Shankar was already in motion. Hidden beneath a grass-covered stealth suit, he moved like part of the terrain itself. Invisible. Patient. Deadly. He closed distance on the first lookout, suppressor raised.

Thwack

One shot. Clean. The body dropped before it even registered fear. Dan shifted instantly, repositioning. Another militant. Another breath.

Thwack

Gone. No alarms. No noise. Just surgical elimination. Within minutes, the outer eyes of the base were blind. Hemant and Dan converged at the main entrance, shadows aligning into purpose. Behind them, the rest of Delta Squad assembled, weapons ready, breathing steady. Hemant glanced once at Dan.

"Shock and awe"

No more needed to be said. Dan moved forward, planting charges along the reinforced entrance. His hands were quick, practiced. He stepped back, giving a sharp nod. The squad stacked behind Hemant. Weapons raised. He counted silently.

Three. Two. One—

The explosion tore through the silence.

The entrance blasted inward in a storm of debris and fire. Before the dust even settled, Hemant surged forward, rifle blazing. Delta Squad followed. The confined space erupted into chaos. Gunfire cracked through stone corridors, each shot deliberate, controlled. Militants scrambled, disoriented, their prayers turning into panic. But there was no time to recover. Hemant cleared corners with ruthless efficiency. Dan covered angles, dropping targets before they could even aim. One militant lunged from behind cover—Down. Another raised his weapon blindly—Down. Seven left. Then five. Then three. Then none. Within minutes, the base fell silent again. Only the echo of gunfire remained.

"Clear" Hemant lowered his weapon slightly, scanning. 

"Clear" Dan nodded. 

But something felt… off.

"Basement" Hemant said.

They moved down cautiously, boots echoing against the narrow steps. The air grew heavier. Stale. Suffocating. At the bottom, they found no armed resistance. Instead—Sacks. Dozens of them. Moving.

"What the hell…" Dan frowned. 

Hemant stepped forward, tension rising. He knelt and tore one open. And froze. Underneath the rough fabric was a girl. Young. Terrified. Bound. Alive.

"Dan—" His voice changed.

Urgency. Shock. They moved faster now, ripping open sack after sack. More girls. Dozens. Some barely teenagers. Some even younger. All restrained. All silent in fear. Dan’s hands shook slightly as he helped untie one. 

"My god...."

Hemant’s jaw tightened as he scanned them. Then he saw it. Marks. On their arms. Each one bore the same symbol—etched in blue ink. A grotesque design. Twisted. Almost ritualistic.

"What is that?" Dan pointed at it. 

Hemant stared at it longer.

"It’s a temporary mark!" he said quietly.

He looked closer. The shape. The pattern. Something sinister.

"Looks like…" Dan hesitated.

Hemant finished it.

"Satan"

The word hung heavy in the air. But that wasn’t the worst part. Hemant looked around again, sharper now.

"These aren’t all locals"

Dan followed his gaze. He was right. Different faces. Different features. Some clearly Indian. Others—East Asian. African. Even European. A cold realization settled in.

"This isn’t just a terror cell" Dan muttered.

Hemant stood slowly, his mind racing.

"No" he said.

"This is bigger"

Much bigger. He activated comms immediately.

"This is Delta Actual. We have multiple female hostages—repeat, multiple hostages. Require immediate medical extraction. Send ambulances, full support. Location secure"

Acknowledgment came through. But Hemant barely registered it. He turned and walked out of the base, stepping back into the open air. The mountains felt different now. Not silent. Watching. Dan followed him, catching up quickly. 

"What the hell is going on here, Hemant?"

Hemant didn’t answer immediately. His eyes scanned the horizon, as if searching for something beyond what was visible. Then he spoke. Low. Certain.

"I don’t know yet"

A pause.

"But this—"

He glanced back toward the base.

"—this isn’t the end of anything"

Another beat.

"It’s the beginning"

Dan studied him. Hemant’s expression had changed. Not just focused. Resolved.

"Something’s moving behind the scenes, something far more sinister!" Hemant continued. 

The wind picked up again, carrying a chill that had nothing to do with altitude. Hemant’s voice dropped further.

"And we just stepped right into it"

SOME TIME LATER

The convoy cut through the stark, wind-carved terrain of Ladakh, engines growling against the thin mountain air. Inside the transport vehicles, silence sat heavier than the cold. The rescued girls were wrapped in blankets, guarded carefully, attended by medics who worked with quiet urgency. Fear still lingered in their eyes—but now, there was something else too. Safety. Behind them, another vehicle carried the men of Delta Squad. No one spoke much. This victory didn’t feel complete. At the Army Base Camp, everything moved quickly. Medical teams rushed the girls into secured facilities for examination and care. Officers coordinated logistics, intelligence units sealed off recovered materials, and soldiers stood guard with renewed alertness.

But for Hemant and Dan—The mission wasn’t over. Not yet. Inside a temporary operations tent, Delta Squad spread out everything they had recovered from the JeM base. Crates. Documents. Weapons. Maps. Every piece mattered now. Dan sifted through ammunition logs while another soldier cataloged weapons. Hemant focused on the paperwork. His eyes moved fast, scanning, connecting. Then—He stopped.

"Dan" he said quietly.

"What?" Dan looked up.

"I found some transport records" Hemant held up a document. 

"What about them?" Dan walked over, leaning in. 

"The girls and the shipments....they've come from Karachi port" 

Hemant’s jaw tightened slightly. 

"That’s not surprising. Cross-border supply routes has always been part of a Terror Network's activities—" 

Dan frowned. 

"Wait" Hemant cut in.

He flipped to another sheet.

"They were being prep for transport"

Dan’s expression shifted as he read.

"To the Nepal border…" he muttered.

"This wasn’t meant to stay here" Hemant nodded slowly. 

A chill crept into the room.

"So India was just… a passage?" Dan crossed his arms. 

Hemant didn’t answer immediately. He picked up another manifest. His eyes narrowed.

"No"

"What now?" Dan leaned closer. 

Hemant turned the paper toward him.

"The Final destination of these girls and the shipment was...."

A pause.

"Shanghai"

The words landed like a blow.

"You’re telling me… all those girls…" Dan blinked. 

"Were never meant to stay in India. Kashmir was just a pit stop!" Hemant finished.

Silence. Heavy. Unsettling.

"This is trafficking. Global Trafficking" Dan ran a hand through his hair. 

"Not just trafficking" Hemant’s gaze hardened. 

He thought of the markings. The blue symbol. Burned into skin. Identical. Deliberate.

"Something organized, something that doesn’t stop at borders" he said. 

"Then this is definitely a nexus" Dan exhaled slowly. 

Hemant didn’t respond. Because one question kept echoing in his mind—Who marks people like that… and why? Later that evening, Hemant stood outside the command cabin. A soldier stepped out.

"General will see you now"

Hemant nodded once and entered. Inside, General Bakshi stood by a table, reviewing files. His presence, as always, filled the room without effort. He looked up briefly.

"At ease, Commander"

Hemant complied, but his posture remained firm.

"Sir, I need to discuss something regarding the Bogdang operation"

"Go ahead" Bakshi gestured. 

Hemant stepped forward, placing the documents on the table.

"These aren’t isolated findings" he began. 

"The supplies, the hostages—this operation connects multiple locations in multiple countries. Karachi, Nepal border, Shanghai. This isn’t just a terror module"

Bakshi listened. Silent. Measured. Hemant continued, his voice gaining intensity.

"Sir, this points to a larger syndicate. Organized. Structured. Possibly operating across continents. And the markings—"

He paused briefly.

"They’re not random. They mean something"

A beat.

"We should pursue this lead"

Silence filled the room. Then—Bakshi closed the file. Calmly.

"I understand your concern, Commander"

Hemant waited. But something in the tone already felt… off.

"However, your job here is done" 

Bakshi concluded. The words were simple. Final.

"Sir—" Hemant frowned slightly. 

"All recovered materials will be handed over to Intelligence. They will carry out whatever process is forward" 

Bakshi went on,  A pause.

"You and your unit have performed exceptionally. Once again"

Recognition. But not permission.

"Sir, with due respect—this could be bigger than—" 

Hemant didn’t move. Bakshi’s gaze sharpened. And just like that, the air changed.

"I know that you have… a tendency to push beyond your orders" 

He said, voice firmer now, A beat.

"But remember who you are"

Hemant held his ground.

"You are a Garud Commando"

Each word landed with weight.

"Your duty is to protect Indian assets. Not chase shadows across borders. Not investigate syndicates. That is not your mandate"

Silence. Tight. Controlled. Bakshi stepped closer.

"Good soldier follow orders"

The message was clear. Conversation over.

"Return to Nal Air Force Station, resume your protection detail of our Air Base" Bakshi added. 

Hemant’s jaw clenched slightly. But he saluted.

"Yes, sir"

And turned. Outside, the cold air hit differently now. Sharper. He stepped down from the cabin—Just as a military vehicle rolled into the compound. Its engine cut off. The door opened. A man stepped out. Broad-shouldered. Confident. Wearing dark shades despite the fading light. His build was unmistakably military—but not Indian. Hemant slowed. The man glanced at him. Then smiled. Warm. Casual. Like they shared a secret. Hemant frowned slightly, confused—but didn’t stop. He walked past. A few meters ahead, Dan waited. He had seen it too.

"Who the hell was that?" Dan asked.

"No idea" Hemant shook his head. 

"Didn’t look like one of ours" Dan glanced back once more. 

Hemant didn’t reply. Because something about that smile—Didn’t sit right.

"So? What did Bakshi say?" Dan asked, turning back. 

Hemant exhaled.

"He reminded us who we are"

"Let me guess… ‘follow orders, go back’?" Dan groaned. 

"We’re returning to Nal" Hemant nodded. 

Dan threw his hands up. 

"Fantastic. Back to roasting alive in Rajasthan"

That got a faint smirk out of Hemant. But it didn’t last. They walked in silence for a while. Each lost in thought. Because both of them knew—This wasn’t finished. Not even close. Back in their quarters, Delta Squad began preparing for departure. Weapons cleaned. Gear packed. Reports filed. Routine. Normal. Expected. But beneath it—Something lingered. Unanswered questions. Unseen enemies. Unfinished business. Dan lay back on his cot, staring at the ceiling. 

"You ever get the feeling we’re walking away from something we shouldn’t?"

Hemant sat quietly, the documents still fresh in his mind. The markings. The routes. The girls. And that man.

"Yeah" he said finally.

A pause.

"Every second"

THE NEXT DAY AT NAL AIR BASE

Nal had a rhythm now.

Back at Nal Air Force Station, the days no longer felt like a forced pause between missions. They had shape. Routine. Faces that were becoming familiar. For men like Hemant and Dan, that was rare—and strangely grounding. Garuda wasn’t just guarding anymore. They were embedded. Integrated. Useful in ways that went beyond pulling triggers. It started with her. Pranali Gupta. Call sign—Rani. And she lived up to it. Rani ran the engineering floor like a monarch in overalls—sharp, efficient, and absolutely uncompromising when it came to aircraft performance. If something flew out of Nal, it flew because she allowed it to.

Hemant respected that instantly.

"Don’t touch anything unless I say so" she had told him on day one, not even looking up.

"That’s fair" He had smirked. 

Three days later, she trusted him with a toolkit. That was her version of approval. Hemant slipped into the engineering role naturally. His background made him valuable—understanding systems, retrofits, structural tweaks. He wasn’t just muscle; he was precision. Rani saw that early. Dan, on the other hand, found his place with the armaments. Explosives. Ballistics. Payload systems.

"Basically" Dan had said once, inspecting a missile rack. 

"I make sure things go boom… correctly"

"Comforting" Rani had rolled her eyes. 

The base slowly revealed its hierarchy. Pilots. Cadets. Ground crew. Stories attached to each one. One evening, as they worked inside a hangar, Rani nodded subtly toward the training barracks.

"See that guy?"

Hemant followed her gaze. A man was mid-workout—pull-ups, controlled, effortless. Lean build. Sharp features. Confidence in every movement.

"That’s Vishal Agnihotri, Call sign—Victor" Rani said. 

"Looks like he knows it too" Dan leaned in slightly. 

"He is our Top Ace of the base. Best pilot we've got" Rani smirked. 

Hemant watched him for a moment. Measured.

"He flies like that too?" he asked.

"Better, and he doesn’t let anyone forget it" Rani replied. 

Then she added—

"Second best…"

Hemant didn’t need to ask.

"Kirti Raghuvanshi, Call sign—Kira" Rani said. 

That name landed differently. Hemant’s focus sharpened just a bit. Rani noticed.

"Oh, you know her" she teased lightly.

Hemant didn’t deny it.

"She flies a Mikoyan MiG-29, while Victor flies a Sukhoi Su-30" 

Rani continued, tightening a bolt as she spoke. 

"That’s not a fair fight" Dan raised an eyebrow. 

"Exactly, and yet—she beats him on certain sorties" Rani said. 

Hemant’s interest deepened.

"Skill" he murmured.

"Pure skill" Rani nodded. 

But there was more.

"Both of them come from… influence" Rani added.

"Of course they do" Dan groaned quietly. 

Rani ignored him.

"Vishal’s family has long-standing Air Force ties. Legacy pilot background. It shows"

Then she looked at Hemant.

"But Kirti…"

Something in her tone changed.

"Her father is Viren Raghuvanshi. Retired Colonel"

Hemant listened carefully.

"Her grandfather is a veteran of the Indo-Pakistani War of 1971. Passed away last year" 

Rani continued. A lineage of service. Of sacrifice.

"He’s got two older kids. Neither joined the forces. So… Kirti? She’s his pride" Rani said. 

Hemant exhaled slowly. That explained something. The discipline. The confidence. The weight she carried without showing it. He respected her more now. Not just for what she did—But where she came from. Rani wiped her hands and leaned against the workbench.

"There’s one more thing" she added casually.

Hemant glanced at her.

"Victor’s been....really interested in her!"

"Of course he has" Dan snorted. 

"Their competition seems to bring them closer. Lately they've been bonding outside base in the same friend circle. Its not at all surprising considering they're both from reputed defense families. Other cadets here have already hyped them due to their competetive nature, they’re pairing them up like it’s a done deal" 

Rani said. Hemant didn’t react immediately.

Then—

"People love some gossips....maybe its just some exaggerated humor" he said simply.

But something in his voice had shifted. Rani noticed. She didn’t push further. A few days later—Inside the hangar, Hemant worked under the exposed panel of a Mikoyan MiG-29, carefully adjusting components under Rani’s supervision.

"Align that bracket properly, if the rudder response lags even by a fraction—" she said. 

"I know...It’ll drag the maneuver" Hemant replied calmly. 

Rani gave a small approving nod.

"Good"

Footsteps approached.

"Rani?"

Both of them looked up. Kirti. She walked in with that same composed energy, helmet tucked under her arm.

"Status on my bird?" she asked.

Rani gestured toward the open panel. 

"Upgrades are pretty much done Kirti. The rudder lag has been reduced, will have smoother response on turns"

"Good. Last sortie felt was just…..sticky" Kirti nodded. 

Then her eyes shifted. To Hemant. A pause. Recognition.

"You two haven’t been formally introduced, have you?" Rani smiled slightly. 

She gestured.

"Commander Hemant Kumar. Garuda Task Force"

Then to him—

"Flight Lieutenant Kirti Raghuvanshi"

Kirti tilted her head slightly, a faint smile forming.

"So , these 'bodyguards' been reassigned to… aircraft maintenance now?" she said.

There was a teasing edge in her tone. Before Hemant could reply—Rani cut in.

"They’re not bodyguards, Kirti. They’re support integration. And frankly—better engineers than half my crew"

Kirti raised an eyebrow.

"Is that so?"

She looked back at Hemant, amused.

"Then I hope he doesn’t break my plane"

Dan, watching from a distance, almost laughed. Hemant just met her gaze calmly.

"I won’t" he said.

Simple. Certain. That seemed to satisfy her.

"For your sake" she replied lightly.

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Then she turned and began walking away. Hemant watched her. Not openly. But enough. Halfway to the exit—She looked back. Just once. And smiled. Not teasing this time. Something softer. Real. Then she left. Dan appeared beside him almost instantly.

"Mr.Lover Boy is going to his fantasy world again!!!" Dan teased him.

Hemant didn’t respond. He just looked at the aircraft for a moment. Then back toward where she had walked out. And for the first time in a long time—The chaos of missions, the weight of secrets, the shadows of something larger lurking in the world…All of it felt quieter. Not gone. But distant. Because sometimes—In between war and duty—There are moments. Small ones. Unexpected ones.

That remind you there’s still something worth holding onto.

                                                                                                                                                 
(TO BE CONTD)
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The directive came down like a quiet shift in doctrine—but everyone at Nal Air Force Station felt its weight immediately. Air Force cadets would now undergo commando training. Not optional. Not experimental. Institutional.

The future of the Garud Commando Force would be shaped from within the Air Force itself. And that meant one thing—Hemant and Dan were no longer just operators. They were instructors. The first day on the training ground was brutal. Not because the cadets were weak—they weren’t. They were already disciplined, already sharp. Pilots and engineers trained to operate under pressure. But this—This was different. This was weight. Recoil. Sweat. Close-quarters instinct.

"Again!" Dan barked, watching a group struggle with weapon transitions. 

"You hesitate—you die. Simple math"

Hemant, meanwhile, stood at the gun range, overseeing the heavy weapons module. His presence was quieter, but no less intense.

"Control the weapon, don’t fight it. Let it move with you" he told one cadet calmly. 

Then she stepped up. Kirti. She approached the station assigned to her—a heavy platform-mounted M16 rifle modified for sustained fire drills. Even for trained personnel, it demanded strength and control. She gripped it. Fired. The recoil pushed her stance off balance. She reset. Tried again. Same result. A flicker of frustration crossed her face. Hemant noticed. He walked over.

"Shift your footing, you’re absorbing the recoil wrong" he said, stepping beside her. 

She glanced at him briefly.

"Show me"

He adjusted her stance—subtle, precise. One hand guiding the weapon alignment, the other correcting shoulder placement.

"Lock here...Not here" he said. 

She followed. Fired again. Better. Still not perfect—but controlled.

"Okay… that helped" She exhaled slightly. 

Before the moment could settle—

"Hey, Kirti"

The voice cut in smoothly. Vishal Agnihotri stepped in, confident as ever.

"Let me, You’re overthinking it" he said, already moving closer. 

Hemant stepped back without a word. Vishal positioned himself behind her, hands guiding hers more directly.

“Relax your shoulders, You’re tensing up" he said. 

Kirti didn’t object. She let him. They fired again. This time smoother. And she smiled. That didn’t go unnoticed. Hemant turned away. No reaction. No expression. He moved to the next cadet, continuing instruction like nothing had happened. But he saw it. All of it. The days that followed only reinforced it. Training sessions. Briefings. Downtime near the hangars. Vishal and Kirti—together more often than not. Talking. Laughing. Flying. There was ease between them. Familiarity growing.

And every time Kirti smiled—Hemant noticed. He never lingered. Never interfered. But he noticed. Duty became his shield. If there was work, he buried himself in it. Weapons drills. Tactical simulations. Engineering support. Anything to keep his mind occupied. Because when it wasn’t—It drifted. To things he didn’t want to confront. Then came the next turn. A call from General Bakshi.

Hemant and Dan stood in the briefing room, listening.

"You’ve been selected, Garuda Task Force will be deployed next month for a special UN charter peace keeping operations at Congo!" 

Bakshi said, voice steady. Dan’s eyes lit up slightly.

"We’re going global" Dan couldn’t help it. 

Hemant didn’t smile. Instead—

"Peacekeeping operations aren’t clean" he said quietly.

"Exactly" Bakshi nodded once. 

The room fell silent. Because they both understood—This wasn’t escalation. This was exposure. New terrain. New enemies. Unknown rules. That night, the base buzzed quietly with the news.

"UN mission, yaar. That’s next level" Dan was still energized. 

"Also next level danger" Hemant leaned against the railing, eyes distant. 

"When has that stopped us?" Dan shrugged. 

Hemant didn’t answer. Because something else was occupying his thoughts. The next morning—Sorties. Hemant stood near the runway, watching the sky. Two aircraft cut across the horizon—An Su-30 and a MiG-29. Victor and Kira. They danced in the air—maneuvers sharp, aggressive. Competitive. Alive. And once again—Kirti edged ahead.

Despite the disadvantage.Despite the odds. She outflew him. Clean. Precise. Hemant watched as the jets descended. And when they landed—He saw it. Vishal laughing. Kirti smiling back. That same smile. And this time—It hit differently. Not sharp. Not sudden. Just… there. Persistent. Unwelcome. He turned away. Again.

Days later—Hemant was called to the visitor deck. Unusual. He wasn’t expecting anyone. As he stepped in—He stopped. The man from Ladakh. Broad-shouldered. Calm. Wearing that same easy confidence. And those shades. The man smiled.

"Good to see you again, Commander"

"I've seen you in Ladakh" Hemant’s eyes narrowed slightly. 

The man stepped forward, extending a hand.

"Name’s William J Irons. But you can call me Will"

Hemant didn’t take the hand immediately.

"Lets just say I was once a soldier like you. Just from another country. Former Marine to be exact" 

Will added casually. That explained the posture. The presence.

"What do you want?" Hemant finally shook his hand. 

"Straight to it. I like that" Will smiled faintly. 

A pause.

"I know what you did in Bogdang"

That got his attention.

"More importantly, I also know you haven’t stopped thinking about it" Will continued, 

Hemant said nothing. Because he hadn’t. Will reached into his pocket. Pulled out a small photograph. Placed it on the table. Hemant looked. The symbol. That same blue marking. His jaw tightened.

"You’ve seen this" Will said.

Not a question. A fact.

"Satan!" Hemant’s voice dropped.

Will leaned in slightly.

"We’ve been tracking it. Long before you stumbled onto it. So lets make it clear , whatever you're doubts are , its true. There is a larger set of players behind this operation. But this is way beyond your army paycheck. But like it or not , your actions in the military camp has brought you in their radar. Which is why I believe you will be more than willing to accept the offer I am giving you"

Global. Structured. Hidden. Hemant felt it again—that pull from Bogdang. That unfinished thread.

"You want answers" Will said quietly.

Hemant met his gaze.

"Yes"

Will smiled.

"Then I can give them to you"

Silence. Then—

"What’s the catch?" Hemant asked.

Because there’s always one. Will didn’t hesitate.

"You work with us"

A beat.

"Covert operations. Off the books. No chains. No bureaucracy"

Another step closer.

"You won’t be kept in the dark anymore. But you will become Darkness itself!"

The words landed deeper than expected.

"And in return?" Hemant asked.

Will’s voice dropped.

"You get closure. Something tells me this is the kind of things you prefer. A job where no one questions you , no one controls you. You get to do the right thing without anyone putting a leash!"

He tapped the photograph.

"So lets find out whats you're made of. Lets do some covert collaborations and see your talent and then we can make it permanent. What do you say? Ready for the new world order?"

A long pause. This was it. A line. Duty on one side. Truth on the other. Hemant didn’t hesitate.

"I’m in"

That evening—Dan listened. Every word. Every detail.

"And you just said yes?" he asked, stunned.

Hemant nodded.

"I had to"

"Or you wanted to?" Dan paced slightly. 

A beat. Then—

"Is this about that symbol… or about escaping this place?" Dan asked carefully.

Hemant didn’t respond immediately. Because the question hit closer than expected.

"Or maybe, it’s about her" Dan added 

Silence. Then—Hemant exhaled.

"…Partly"

He didn’t deny it.

"You’re unbelievable" Dan shook his head slowly. 

Hemant looked up.

"Not everything you desire can be achieved , but this is something I know I can control and it only needs my consent. The life of adventure and on the edge? its calling to me!" 

He said. His voice steadied.

"And this is my calling" he gestured vaguely beyond the base, beyond everything—A pause.

"The edge" Dan studied him.

"You think this is your path?"

"Yeah" Hemant nodded.

Quiet. Certain.

"Something tells me… this is where I’m supposed to go"

NAL Air Base had changed.

What was once a disciplined, predictable Air Force base had slowly transformed into something far more intense ever since the Garud commando training program began. At Nal Air Force Station, a new training yard had been carved out—ropes, obstacle rigs, firing pits, and endurance circuits replacing the quiet routines of cadet life. The air now carried the constant rhythm of boots hitting dirt, commands being shouted, and bodies being pushed past their limits.

The cadets adapted faster than expected.

They were already trained to handle pressure in the skies; now they were learning to survive on the ground. Bonds began to form in this new crucible—shared exhaustion, shared bruises, shared victories. Among them, Kirti seemed to thrive the most. There was something about this raw, physical challenge that suited her. She moved through the exercises with a quiet determination, pushing herself without complaint, embracing the grind rather than resisting it.

Vishal, on the other hand, struggled—but not in a way he would ever admit openly. The physical strain frustrated him, the loss of dominance irritated him, yet he showed up every single day with the same drive. Not for the training.

For her.

Hemant noticed.

From a distance, from the sidelines, from moments in between instruction—he saw the conversations, the shared glances, the easy laughter that now came more naturally between Kirti and Vishal. It wasn’t forced anymore. It was becoming something real.

One evening, as the cadets wrapped up a grueling drill, Hemant stood watching them disperse, his expression unreadable. That was when Rani walked up beside him, wiping grease from her hands with a cloth.

"You know, you never really had a chance" she said casually, following his line of sight, 

"Didn’t know it was a competition" Hemant didn’t look at her. 

"Everything is. You just don’t always realize it in time" Rani gave a faint smirk. 

"They’re… similar. Same world, same upbringing. Defense families. Expectations. Pressure. People like them—they understand each other without needing to explain"

She leaned against the railing, her tone softening slightly. A pause.

"People like us? We’re just spokes on the wheel. We keep things moving, but we’re not the center" 

She added quietly. That made Hemant turn. There was no irritation in his expression—only clarity.

“You might be right about the differences, But I’m not here to be just a spoke in the wheel" 

He said. Rani raised an eyebrow. Hemant’s voice remained calm, but there was something firm beneath it.

"I intend to be the whole machine"

That lingered.

Rani studied him for a moment, something like intrigue replacing her earlier certainty. Then she gave a small nod, almost impressed, and pushed herself off the railing.

"Well, I am curious on how this machine works from the rest!" she said, 

Hemant didn’t reply. He simply turned back to the field and resumed training the cadets, his focus sharper than before. A few days later, something else shifted.

Will returned. Hemant was called again, this time with less surprise but far more anticipation. When he reached the designated meeting area, Will stood waiting, as composed as ever.

"This is where things get real" Will said without preamble.

"They already are" Hemant crossed his arms slightly. 

"Not yet" Will smirked faintly. 

There was a pause before he continued.

'I told you who I was , now its time you knew who I am. And most importantly , what you are going to be a part of" 

Will said. Hemant said nothing, but his attention sharpened.

"We’re called SENTINEL" Will revealed. 

"A global military initiative operating under a special United Nations Security Council charter. Off-the-record operations. No bureaucracy. No delays. We handle threats the system can’t—or won’t—deal with. We operate outside the proper chain of command"

He stepped closer.

"Our purpose is simple. Eliminate the bad guys. Maintain global order of things and reduce the cause of chaos"

The weight of those words wasn’t lost on Hemant.

“And now, about your initiation" Will added.

"Understand this commander" Will confirmed. 

"If you perform the way I think you will… doors will open for you. Not just here. Everywhere. You won’t be another soldier waiting for orders—you’ll be someone the system depends on"

Hemant considered that for a moment. Then spoke.

"I am ready for it but on one condition"

"Go on" Will tilted his head slightly. 

"Dan comes with me"

There was hesitation this time. Will studied him, weighing the request.

"He’s not part of the selection" Will said.

"He’s part of me, If I’m in, he’s in" Hemant replied evenly. 

A longer pause followed. Then Will exhaled. 

"Fine. Dan will be part of our initial cordination missions with the GTF , but let me be clear , he will not be part of the Sentinel unit , because we're interested in only you. His responsibility in these missions is on you"

"It always is" Hemant said.

Will nodded once and shifted the conversation.

"Three days ago" he began. 

"A Chechnyan separatist group hijacked an oil rig in the Chukchi Sea—right between Alaska and Russia"

Hemant listened carefully.

"On the surface, it looks like a political disruption, but intelligence suggests something deeper. They’re trying to create a choke point on Russian oil production. Force instability. Push decisions that could ripple globally" 

Will continued. 

"Their trying to stir the russian population with a manufactured crisis!" Hemant said.

"Precisely" Will agreed.

He leaned in slightly.

"And if it escalates…the consequences will be catastrophic!"

"So what’s the plan?" Hemant nodded once. 

Will’s expression sharpened.

"SENTINEL inserts a strike team Zebra One to assault the base through an underwater approach. Silent. We take the rig back and neutralize the terror targets and neutralize the hostility"

"Underwater insertion into an active rig? Is that even possible in this day and age?" 

Hemant frowned slightly. Will smiled.

"Well...it is now!"

A beat.

"We’re deploying the USS Virginia. The first of its kind Stealth Submarine designed by the United States. On paper , it is meant to be revealed on the October of this year , but our Operation will be its first unofficial naval campaign"

Hemant’s eyes narrowed slightly. That changed the scale of things.

"Custom tools, advanced grappling systems, silent ascent gear. In many ways , this operation will change the warfare you've experienced till now!" 

Will added. Hemant absorbed it all. This wasn’t just a mission. This was a statement.

"You can brief what I have just said to Dan yourself. Be ready , I'll let you know once I've setup your travel arrangements" 

Will said finally. 

That evening, Hemant found Dan in their quarters. He didn’t ease into it. He told him everything. SENTINEL. The mission. The stealth submarine. The oil rig. Dan stared at him for a long moment.

"…You’re serious?"

"Completely"

"This isn’t just another op, Hemant. This is—this is global" 

Dan ran a hand through his hair, pacing slightly. 

"I know"

"And you already agreed?"

"I had to"

"Or you wanted to" Dan stopped pacing, looking at him carefully. 

Hemant didn’t deny it. There was a brief silence before Dan let out a breath and shook his head.

"You remember what I told you?" he said. 

"About being stuck with you in this life?"

Hemant gave a faint nod.

"Well… guess I meant it" Dan smirked slightly. 

The tension eased just a bit. Excitement began to creep in.

"We’re really doing this?" Dan asked. 

"Arctic waters…..covert global op....….oil rig…"

Hemant’s expression hardened slightly.

"Don’t romanticize it" he said. 

"What we’re walking into… makes everything we’ve faced so far look small"

Dan held his gaze. Then nodded.

"Good, after all , that is what's living on the edge is all about!" he said. 

A pause. And for the first time since Will’s proposal—Hemant allowed himself the smallest hint of a smile.

                                                                                                                         (TO BE CONTD)
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