Adultery Testing Her Limits : Web of Lust and Revenge

[SilentRavisherX]

Stories going great bro but please if possible give big updates best of luck for the next update

Thank you.

[SilentRavisherX]

You're doing an excellent job so far, Sir!


What truly sets a great writer apart is not just talent, but the confidence to trust their own vision. So please - continue at the pace you've set, and stay true to the model you feel is 'apt' for the characters and story you've conceived.

Yes, you should absolutely read the comments and feedback from your readers,  that's part of growing as a writer. But altering your story to fit someone else's fantasies or wishes? I believe that would strip away the very originality you, as a writer, are striving to bring into your work.

Here's the motivational truth: Every great story ever told was first doubted by someone. The magic lies in holding your course while keeping your heart open.

Again, I'm not saying you should ignore feedback. Far from it - I clearly support the viewpoints your fan-base shares here. Some of their ideas genuinely interest me too, and they make me think, 'What if...?' or 'Wouldn't it be better than...?'

But at the end of the day, I stand by my opinion: Write at your pace. Write what you have in mind. Be open to suggestions, criticism, and appraisals - but never let them rewrite your soul.

My critical viewpoint/comment: You'd want to read once or twice before posting each part, because through my eyes, there might be some 'diction' that you may need to correct to make this a wonderful read. In addition, once you post it, see if the post is actually clean like how you want to see it yourself (because, I am posting YLTS chapters on "A Banana Muffin Saga", and each time I click 'post' then  what I find is lots of gaps between the sentences, paragraphs, font irregularity and it's a mess for me to give another look at my own post - so, I go back, click 'edit-post' and make all the 'cosmetic' corrections and post once again - this is only to give the readers a clear post that they can enjoy while reading. You may need to look at it in this way once to check what I said make sense.


You're on the right path. Keep going, Sir. Your best story is still ahead of you."

Thank you very much for your encouraging words. Will follow your suggestions for diction check and and formatting more carefully and continue refining while staying true to the story’s vision.

[Abhi T]

Bro update where are you

[SilentRavisherX]

Chapter 4: The Mud, The Rain, and The Secret

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Suddenly, the sky darkened. A heavy drizzle began to fall.

"Baarish! Chalo ped ke neeche!" Swati squeaked, jumping up.
They dashed under the massive canopy of an ancient neem tree, pressing their backs against the thick, rough trunk. But the rain quickly turned into a torrential, blinding downpour. Within seconds, they were soaked to the bone.

The icy water plastered Swati’s green top to her body, turning it utterly transparent. Her bright red lace bra stood out vividly, the fabric straining against her heavy, swollen breasts. The freezing rain made her nipples harden painfully, pressing aggressively against the wet lace. Beside her, Priya’s grey top clung to her athletic frame like a second skin, her hard nipples standing out like arrowheads, ready to cut glass. 

They stood inches apart, shivering. The sound of the crashing rain isolated them from the rest of the world. The rain lashed against them mercilessly, thunder rumbling in the distance like a drumbeat to their rising desire. Cold water streamed down Priya’s athletic body, her wet clothes clinging to every toned curve. Swati’s soaked jeans clung painfully to her thighs, her large breasts rising and falling rapidly from the exertion. Their eyes met in the dim, rain-soaked light. The nervous laughter died slowly. The air between them grew incredibly thick, charged with a raw, primal heat that defied the freezing rain.

That was the moment everything changed.

Slowly, Priya raised her hand. She placed her warm palm on Swati’s wet, shivering shoulder. Swati froze. Priya’s hand slid down, her fingers trailing over Swati’s collarbone, down to the deep, wet cleavage, until her palm fully cupped Swati’s large, red-bra-clad boobs. A violent jolt of electricity shot straight through Swati’s shivering body, traveling directly down to her pussy.

No… this is wrong, Swati’s mind screamed. I’m a good girl. A decent girl from a respectable family doesn’t do this. This is sin. I’m supposed to stay pure for marriage. That they were two girls, that someone might see them.

"P-Priya... ?" Swati stammered, her voice barely a whisper over the roaring rain.
Priya didn't answer. She stepped closer, her athletic body pressing against Swati’s soft curves. She reached up, cupping Swati’s face, forcing Swati to look into her dark, burning eyes. Without a word, She smashed her lips onto Swati’s in a hungry, aggressive kiss.

In that isolated, rain-drenched moment on Lohagad, under the roar of the monsoon, the line they both had been carefully avoiding finally blurred — and then vanished completely.
Swati gasped against Priya’s mouth. It was her first kiss. It wasn't soft; it was hungry, aggressive, and deeply possessive. Priya’s tongue forced its way past Swati’s lips, tasting the cold rainwater and Swati’s sweet, hot saliva. She kept her hands flat against the tree trunk, not pushing Priya away but not cooperating either.

Yet her body betrayed her completely. Her pussy throbbed violently. A thick, hot slick of arousal leaked into her cotton panties, soaking the fabric instantly, mixing with the rainwater seeping through her jeans. The sheer masculine energy radiating from Priya — the strength in her hands, the confidence in her touch — was intoxicating than anything Swati had ever experienced.

Feeling Swati’s hesitation, Priya grew more aggressive. She broke the kiss, her breathing ragged. Priya’s hand dropped from Swati’s breast and went straight to the heavy, wet waistband of Swati’s wet jeans. With a swift, practiced motion, Priya popped the button and yanked the stiff zipper down. Swati gasped in shock as Priya’s rough, warm fingers shoved past the wet denim and the soaked cotton panty, diving straight into Swati’s dripping wet slit.
“Aah!” Swati cried out, her head falling back against the rough tree bark as Priya’s middle finger slid deep inside her tight, untouched pussy. It was incredibly wet, practically overflowing with slick juices. Priya began to pump her finger in and out, her thumb aggressively rubbing Swati’s swollen clit. The contrast of the freezing rain hitting her face and the boiling hot friction between her legs completely shattered Swati’s remaining inhibitions.

Why does it feel so good? Why can’t I stop?
Swati let out a filthy, uninhibited  moan, her hips involuntarily bucking against Priya’s fingers. She threw her arms around Priya’s neck, pulling her back into a desperate, sloppy kiss.
"Chal wahan," Priya panted, pulling her fingers out of Swati’s soaking pussy.
Priya grabbed Swati’s hand and dragged her out from under the tree, straight into the punishing downpour, toward the massive, flat black rocks. It was pure, animalistic heat now. The fear of being caught under the open sky only fueled their raging lust.

As soon as they reached the rock, Priya attacked Swati’s clothes. She grabbed the hem of Swati’s wet green top and yanked it over her head, throwing it into the mud. Swati stood there in the freezing rain, her full breasts heaving in her soaking wet red bra. Priya didn't even bother unhooking it. She grabbed the center of the bra and pulled with all her athletic strength. The hooks at the back snapped with a loud pop, the wet fabric tearing. Priya ripped the bra off and tossed it into the dirt.

Swati was completely topless under the open sky. Her milky white boobs bounced, her dark pink nipples swollen, hard, and aching from the cold rain. Priya dropped to her knees on the wet, muddy rock. She grabbed Swati’s heavy hips and buried her face in Swati’s boobs. She opened her mouth and sucked Swati’s right pink nipple into her mouth, biting and pulling on it ravenously, as if she were starving. Swati screamed, her fingers tangling in Priya’s short wet hair, her back arching violently as Priya’s hot tongue lashed against her sensitive flesh.

While devouring her tits, Priya’s hands grabbed the waistband of Swati’s heavy, wet unzipped jeans and her soaked panties. With one violent tug, she pulled them all the way down to Swati’s ankles. Swati kicked them off frantically into the mud. She was completely naked now, lying awkwardly on her back against the cold, hard, wet surface of the black rock. But the burning heat pooling between her thighs made her oblivious to the pain. The rough surface scbangd painfully against her back and ass as icy rain pelted her naked skin. 

Priya didn't waste a second. She crawled between Swati’s spread thighs, her own knees sinking into the squelching mud, grabbed Swati’s hips, and buried her face directly into Swati’s dripping wet pussy. Swati let out a piercing scream that echoed into the rainy hills. Priya’s hot, aggressive tongue lashed against Swati’s swollen clit, lapping up the thick, sweet pussy juices that were mixing with the cold rainwater. Priya ate her out like a starving animal, her mouth creating a tight seal over Swati’s pussy, sucking and slurping loudly. Swati’s fingers dug into the muddy moss around the rock, her nails caked in brown dirt as her hips bucked violently into Priya’s face. The sheer, overwhelming pleasure of Priya’s tongue diving deep into her pussy was short-circuiting Swati’s brain.

After several agonizingly pleasurable minutes, Swati’s body went rigid. She screamed, her thighs clamping down hard on Priya’s ears as a powerful, squirting orgasm ripped through her body. Thick, hot cum shot out of her pussy, flooding Priya’s mouth and dripping down her chin, mixing with the rain.

Panting heavily, Priya pulled back, her face slick with Swati’s juices and rainwater. She crawled up and lay down beside Swati on the rough, muddy rock. Swati, completely high on the raw adrenaline and her first explosive orgasm, suddenly felt a surge of wild, uninhibited dominance. She rolled over, taking Priya into a fierce embrace. Swati grabbed the hem of Priya’s wet grey top and yanked it over her head. With a swift, impatient tug, she unbuttoned Priya’s heavy jeans and pushed them down her muscular legs, taking her panties along in the same motion. Their clothes were scattered everywhere, soaking in the brown mud and rain.
Now both were completely naked under the open, stormy sky.

Swati pushed Priya onto her back against the cold stone. She looked down at Priya’s athletic body, her small, incredibly firm boobs, and her dark, rock-hard nipples. Swati lowered her head and took Priya’s left nipple into her mouth. She bit down hard, her teeth scbanging against the sensitive flesh, making Priya gasp and arch her back. Swati’s hands roamed over Priya’s tight, muscular ass, squeezing the firm cheeks, feeling the gritty mud coating Priya's skin as she sucked and chewed on her tits.

Then, Swati moved lower. She spread Priya’s strong thighs and looked at her wet, hairless slit. Without hesitation, Swati buried her face in Priya’s pussy. She mimicked Priya’s aggression, her tongue darting out to lick the swollen clit, her fingers sliding deep inside Priya’s tight, dripping hole. Priya groaned loudly, her hands tangling in Swati’s wet, muddy hair, pulling her closer.

The heat between them was volcanic. Swati crawled back up, her wet, muddy body sliding over Priya’s. They aligned their hips, pressing their soaking wet pussies tightly against each other.
"Aah... Swati..." Priya moaned, wrapping her strong, muddy legs around Swati’s waist.
They began to grind. It was a frantic, desperate scissoring. The friction of their swollen clits rubbing directly against each other was maddening. Their wet slits slapped together with loud, wet smacks that competed with the sound of the crashing rain. Both of their pussies were leaking copious amounts of thick, slick juices, acting as a natural lubricant against the cold air.

They kissed passionately, their mouths open and hungry. Their saliva mixed, tasting of rain, sweat, and the musky, sweet flavor of each other's pussies. It was impossible to tell whose saliva was in whose mouth, or whose thick pussy juices were coating whose thighs. They were a tangled, thrashing mess of wet flesh, gritty mud, and raw desire.

For Priya, this was a revelation. She had experienced lesbian sex before with other girls in the city, but it had never been like this— his vigorous, this primal, this deeply emotional. Feeling the usually shy Swati grinding her wet pussy against her with such feral intensity completely shattered Priya’s tough exterior. As Swati’s large boobs smashed against her chest and their pussies ground together in a slippery, frantic rhythm. They climaxed together. Swati screamed into Priya’s mouth as her pussy clamped down, squirting hot cum all over Priya’s thighs and the muddy rock beneath them. A second later, Priya’s body convulsed violently, her own thick juices exploding against Swati’s slit, mixing with the rain and mud. They ground against each other through the intense, shuddering aftershocks, their slick, muddy bodies sliding together, completely draining themselves.

Exhausted, they collapsed into each other's arms on the hard, unforgiving rock, their chests heaving, their limbs tangled in a sweaty, muddy heap. Slowly, the torrential rain began to ease, reducing to a light, chilling drizzle that made their overheated skin prickle.
The reality of their wild, primal encounter began to set in. They were a complete, filthy mess. The thick, slippery mud from the plateau had completely coated their bodies. Swati’s pristine, milky-white skin was smeared and darkened with heavy, gritty brown mud. It was caked across her stomach, plastered to her inner thighs, and the cold, slick grime had seeped deep into the crack of her ass. Priya’s athletic frame was equally filthy, the mud streaking her toned muscles and firm breasts.

Worse were the injuries. The unforgiving, jagged surface of the rock and the brutal, thorny hike had left dozens of raw, stinging scratches crisscrossing their naked legs, backs, and arms. The freezing drizzle washed over the cuts, making them burn fiercely as tiny beads of bright red blood mixed with the brown mud and rainwater. Swati’s body bore the brunt of the violence; her heavy boobs, neck, and shoulders were covered in dark, aggressive bite marks and angry purple hickeys left by Priya’s ravenous mouth. Every breath made her scratched skin sting. They lay there naked, under the open, clearing sky, catching their breath, their muddy bodies glistening in the fading rain. 

Priya felt a profound, possessive surge in her chest. This is it, Priya thought, her mind hazy with lust. She is mine. I have found the true love of my life.

Suddenly, a sharp sound cut through the silence of the jungle.
Rustle. Crunch.
It was the sound of heavy footsteps on dry leaves, very close by. Both girls froze. Their eyes snapped open, wide with sheer, paralyzing terror. The adrenaline from their orgasms instantly turned into ice-cold panic.

"Koi aa raha hai," Priya hissed, her voice trembling.
They scrambled off the rock, completely naked, their muddy bodies slipping and sliding on the wet surface. Panic consumed them. They frantically began grabbing their scattered, soaking wet clothes from the thick mud. Swati picked up her red bra, but it was completely useless—the hooks were violently torn off, the lace shredded. She threw it desperately into the bushes and tried to pull her muddy, wet jeans up her slick, trembling legs.
Just as Swati managed to pull her jeans to her knees, the bushes ten feet away parted violently.

A large, muscular dog – sleek, powerful, and clearly well-fed, stepped out onto the plateau. It simply stood there, freezing mid-step and its sharp eyes locked onto the two naked, mud-smeared girls, its ears shot straight up. It stared with intense, unblinking curiosity. For a long, horrifying second, nobody moved. Surreal silence fell over the plateau. Swati’s heart stopped completely. Her heavy breasts still heaving, dark mud streaking across her milky skin and dripping from her nipples. Beside her, Priya’s heart hammered against her ribs. She noticed the thick leather belt around the dog's neck. It wasn't a wild animal. It was a pet. For the first time since their encounter began, her usual confidence had completely evaporated.

The dog didn't bark. He didn't growl. He simply tilted his massive head to the side, his intelligent, brown eyes scanning the tableau of muddy, exposed flesh before him. He huffed once, a burst of air vibrating through his jowls. Swati and Priya just stared back at him, wide-eyed and motionless, statues of total exposure. Here they were — two completely naked girls, covered in mud and their own juices, scratched and marked from rough sex — being silently judged by a dog.

Then, breaking the bizarre standoff, a faint, deep male voice echoed through the trees from the path they had just come from.
"Sultan! Sultan, come here!" 
The voice was distant, but it was steadily, undeniably coming towards them, the sound of heavy footsteps crunching on wet leaves and mud growing louder with every second.
Swati’s stomach dropped. Panic surged through her again, sharper this time.
Her jeans were at her knees. Her bra was in the bushes. Priya had nothing.
The footsteps were getting louder.

[Mariawasti]

What a thrilling story. Rarely witnessed such dramatic situation in sex stories. The writing skill is at peak. Anxiously waiting for updates.

[SilentRavisherX]

What a thrilling story. Rarely witnessed such dramatic situation in sex stories. The writing skill is at peak. Anxiously waiting for updates.

Thank you very much.

[Sage_69]

Loved it.

[SilentRavisherX]

Loved it.

Thank you very much.

[SilentRavisherX]

Chapter 4: The Mud, The Rain, and The Secret

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Back in the present – The row house

Swati’s eyes snapped open in the cool, air-conditioned bedroom. Her chest heaved as if she had just run down the Lohagad hill. The scent of rain and mud still clung to her nostrils. Between her legs, she was shamefully wet — Even after all these years, Priya’s touch still had power over her body. Aditi sat inches away, watching her with predatory gleam, clearly enjoying every second of Swati’s unraveling, her breath coming in short, ragged gasps. 
The weight of twelve years of buried guilt crashed down on her chest like a stone. Aditi knew – she knew the secret she had carried like a curse for so long. Swati felt naked, exposed, and utterly trapped. There was no escape. Not anymore.

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Viraj - Three months earlier Escalation
After the first encounter. Over the next few days, the blackmail morphed into a twisted, daring game of master and slave. The activities escalated, becoming more humiliating and dangerous

Once, Regional Operations Coordinator Mr. Sandeep Gowda sat just outside his cabin with Vidya. Viraj ordered Poorva under the massive glass desk. While Viraj calmly discussed quarterly targets on a conference call with the Sr. VP, Poorva knelt between his legs, her mouth stretched around his thick, throbbing cock, gagging softly as he thrust aggressively into her throat. But Viraj wasn’t done.

“Strip. Everything,” he ordered quietly.
Her hands shook violently as she unbuttoned her blue corporate shirt and unzipped her skirt, followed by her bra and panties. Viraj snatched the bundle of clothes and casually stuffed them into the bottom drawer of his desk, turning the key.
“Bathroom,” Viraj whispered. “Chup rehna.”

Poorva scurried naked into the small, attached bathroom just as Viraj unlocked the main cabin door and warmly welcomed Sandeep inside. Her naked body reflected back at her in the full-length mirror — full breasts heaving with every panicked breath, wide hips, pointed nipples, the dark curls between her thighs still slightly damp from her own shameful wetness. Look at yourself, she thought bitterly. A 26-year-old woman from a decent family, standing naked in her boss’s bathroom while he talks business outside. What have you become?
Without warning, Viraj walked straight into the bathroom, and left the door wide open. Sandeep was still seated just outside. His head was just 10 feet away. Viraj casually turned on the tap, letting water run loudly.

Poorva stood frozen beside him, completely naked, eyes wide with terror. Viraj smiled at her in the glass — a cold, possessive God-like smile curled his lips — while he soaped his hands. Without breaking eye contact with her reflection, he reached down and slid two wet fingers into her pussy. Poorva bit her lip hard to stay silent as His fingers circled her clit slowly, then pushed inside her, stroking in a steady, rhythmic motion while he continued talking to Sandeep about hardware procurement plans.

Poorva’s legs trembled. She could see everything in the mirror — her firm boobs rising and falling rapidly, her nipples stiff and dark, her wide hips rocking involuntarily against his hand. Her ass pressed against the freezing tiles. Shame flooded her so intensely she felt dizzy. 
Viraj leaned close to her ear, and whispered hotly, “Main bahar jaake aata hoon. Tab tak tu cabin me hi rahegi… nangi….samzi.”
He withdrew his fingers, wiped them casually on a towel and walked out to visit the working bay area with Sandeep.

For the next forty-five minutes Poorva stood there naked, heart pounding. She imagined Vidya walking in with a file or a cleaning staff unlocking the door. She imagined the shame of being caught like this — completely naked.

When Viraj finally returned, Poorva was trembling, her cheeks wet with silent tears. Yet beneath the crushing shame, something darker and more confusing had begun to stir inside her — a secret, traitorous heat that made her thighs press together.
For Viraj, this was still power. He had not yet understood that it was becoming something else.

End of Chapter 4

[Sage_69]

If Poorva starts a revenge game, it would be cool. But the situation with Swati is also getting more interesting, lol.

[tweeny_fory]

Wow
So Swati old history is going to haunt her. So what happened in the forest?

[SilentRavisherX]

Chapter 5: Ghosts of The Past

Swati - 12 years earlier

The heavy crunch of boots on dry leaves grew louder.
Swati and Priya, completely naked and covered in mud, scrambled frantically behind the massive black rock, dragging their soaked backpacks with them. They crouched low, their bare skin pressing against the cold, wet stone. Swati’s heart was hammering so violently against her ribs she thought it might burst.

"Sultan! Idhar aaja!" a male voice yelled, much closer now.
Two men, looking to be in their early thirties, walked into the clearing. They stopped just a few feet away from the rock, completely unaware of the two naked girls hiding on the other side.
"Bhai, thodi der baithte hain yahan. Thak gaya hoon," one man said, sitting down on a smaller stone. The dog still stood there dead in its tracks, its sharp eyes locking onto Swati and Priya.

Swati let out a terrified whimper, tears instantly springing to her eyes. If the dog barked, the men would look behind the rock. They would be caught completely naked, their bodies slick with mud and pussy juices. It would be the end of their lives.
Priya immediately clamped her muddy hand tightly over Swati’s mouth, her own eyes wide with panic.

The dog didn't bark. Its nostrils flared as it caught the strong, musky scent of female arousal, sweat, and blood. It took a step closer. Swati squeezed her eyes shut, her body trembling violently. The rough stone scbangd her bare ass. The dog stepped right up to Priya. It sniffed her bare, muddy stomach, and then, to their absolute horror, it extended its long, rough tongue and licked Priya’s bare left breast and both her cheeks. The rough texture of the tongue dragged across Priya’s hard nipple. Priya flinched, her face contorting in distress, but she didn't dare make a sound.

Then, the dog turned its attention to Swati. It sniffed her heavy, muddy breasts. Swati was paralyzed with fear. The dog’s wet nose nudged her cleavage, and then it opened its mouth, its sharp teeth lightly scbanging against Swati’s swollen, bite-marked right nipple as it licked the rainwater off her skin. A muffled, hysterical sob escaped Swati’s throat against Priya’s hand. The sensation of the animal's teeth grazing her highly aroused nipple while two strange men sat just feet away was a terrifying mix of absolute humiliation and a sick, involuntary spike of adrenaline. Her wet pussy throbbed traitorously. She could feel her own juices leaking onto the muddy rock, mixing with the dog’s saliva and Priya’s terror sweat.

For a few agonizing minutes, the men sat there, casually discussing their trek, movies, and their families. And for those minutes, the massive dog stayed behind the rock, sniffing, nudging, and licking the terrified, naked girls. Swati looked at Priya and saw sheer agony in her eyes. Priya was shifting her weight awkwardly, her thighs clamped tightly together. She was desperately holding in her pee, terrified that the sound or smell would give them away.

Finally, one of the men stood up. "Chal bhai, andhera ho raha hai. Sultan, chal!"
The man walked around the edge of the rock, grabbing the dog's collar. Swati and Priya had silently crab-walked to the very back edge, pressing themselves flat against the stone, holding their breath. The man yanked the reluctant dog away and they began to walk back down the trail. Both girls waited until the footsteps completely faded into the distance. 

The moment they were safe, Priya collapsed against the rock with a loud gasp. She couldn't hold it anymore. The sheer stress and terror broke her control. A stream of hot, yellow pee shot out from between her muscular thighs. The warm liquid hit the muddy rock, splashing onto Swati’s bare feet and hands. Swati watched, mesmerized and relieved, as the golden stream flowed through the dark, wet curls of Priya’s pussy hair.
When Priya finished, they looked at each other. The absurdity, the terror, the sheer wildness of what they had just survived hit them simultaneously. They burst into quiet, hysterical laughter, tears of absolute relief streaming down their muddy faces. It felt as if they had crossed a massive threshold together, finding something invaluable in the chaos.

The adrenaline morphed instantly back into raw lust. Priya lunged forward, crashing her lips onto Swati’s. Swati kissed back with equal ferocity. They fell backward onto the muddy ground, completely uncaring of the dirt. Within seconds, they had their muddy fingers buried deep inside each other's dripping pussies, grinding and moaning into each other's mouths for one last, passionate session under the darkening sky.

By the time they dressed, it was almost night. Their original clothes were completely ruined. Swati couldn't even find her panties in the mud, and her red bra was torn beyond repair. They shoved the ruined clothes into their backpacks. Cleaned themselves with towels. Swati put on her spare clothes—a pair of tight jeans and a simple cotton top—For the first time in her life she went completely commando. She wore no bra, no panties. Priya did the same, handing Swati her thick jerkin to hide her bouncing, braless breasts.

The walk back to the base camp was a sensory overload for Swati. Every step she took, her heavy, bare boobs rubbed against the rough cotton of her top, her nipples constantly hard. Lower down, the thick seam of her denim jeans rubbed directly against her swollen, highly sensitive clit. Her pussy was still leaking slick juices, making the denim damp. It was terrifyingly erotic.

They met the rest of their group at a small hotel near the base. Sitting at the table, eating hot pakoras, Swati felt a constant, thrilling flush on her cheeks. No one knew that under the jeans, she was completely bare, her pussy throbbing with every movement.

They took the 9 PM bus back to Pune. Swati and Priya sat in the extreme back row. When the bus lights were switched off for the night, Priya pulled Swati’s jerkin open. In the pitch-black darkness of the moving bus, Priya pulled Swati’s top up, baring her heavy breasts, and spent the next hour silently sucking and biting Swati’s nipples, keeping Swati in a state of constant, leaking arousal until they reached the city.

For the next two months, their relationship became an intense,dangerous addiction. They had sex everywhere—in Priya’s house, in Swati’s bathroom, in the kitchen when no one was looking. They were reckless, blinded by lust and what Priya believed was true love.
But their luck ran out.

[Abhi T]

Fantastic updates bro the story is going great but I have a request if possible please add pictures

[SilentRavisherX]

Chapter 5: Ghosts of The Past

Continued.....

It was a quiet Tuesday afternoon. Swati’s little sister, Shruti, was at college. Her father was at work, and her mother had gone to the market. They thought they had the house to themselves. In the bedroom Swati shared with her sister, they were completely naked on the bed. Priya was on top of Swati, their bodies slick with sweat, their mouths locked in a passionate, messy kiss, their fingers buried deep in each other's wet slits. They were so intensely involved, moaning loudly, that they didn't hear the front door unlock.
The bedroom door swung open.

Swati’s mother stood in the doorway, dropping her grocery bags. The sound of the plastic hitting the floor shattered the world. Swati and Priya froze, their eyes wide with absolute horror. Swati’s mother stared at the two naked girls, her face draining of color, her eyes wide with disgust and disbelief.
"Maa..." Swati whispered, her voice cracking.
Her mother let out a guttural scream. She lunged into the room, grabbing Priya by her short hair and yanking her off Swati.

Smack!

A brutal, open-handed slap echoed through the room as her mother struck Priya’s naked face.
"Kutti! Randi!" her mother screamed, tears of rage streaming down her face. 
"Tune meri bacchi ko kharab kar diya! Mere ghar mein yeh ghinouna kaam kar rahi hai?!"

Smack! Smack! Smack!

She slapped Priya three times more, her rings cutting into her cheek. Swati scrambled backward against the headboard, pulling a bedsheet over her naked body, sobbing hysterically.
"Nikal mere ghar se! Aaj ke baad apni manhoos shakal mat dikhana!" Her mother roared, throwing Priya’s clothes at her. 
Priya, her face red and bleeding, didn't say a word. She looked at Swati with a heartbreaking expression of pure agony, gathered her clothes, and walked out into the hall to dress. She left the house crying silently. 

The moment the front door closed, the real nightmare began for Swati. Her mother locked the bedroom door, grabbed a thick wooden hanger from the closet, and turned to Swati. For the next thirty minutes, Swati endured a merciless, brutal beating. The hanger struck her bare back, her thighs, her arms. Every inch of her body screamed in pain, but the physical agony was nothing compared to the suffocating shame.

When her father came home that evening, her mother told him in hushed, horrified tones, making sure little Shruti didn't hear. Her father walked into the bedroom. He didn't yell. He just looked at Swati with eyes full of tears and absolute, crushing disappointment. He slapped her twice, hard enough to make her ears ring, confiscated her mobile phone, and walked out.
Swati was placed under strict house arrest. For the next thirty days, the house became a tomb of heavy, airless silence, where even the clinking of a spoon against a plate felt like an accusation, and her father’s refusal to even look at her during dinner was a slow, daily execution of the girl she used to be. She couldn't make eye contact with anyone. Her mother gave her long, emotional lectures about purity, family honor, and the disgusting sin she had committed. Swati’s mind, already fragile, broke under the pressure. She began to believe she was dirty, a sinner who had ruined her family's peace.

When her first-year college exams approached, her mother dragged her in front of the small temple in their living room. She placed Swati’s hand on her own head.
"Kha meri kasam," her mother demanded, her voice cold. 
"Kasam kha ki tu us ladki se dobara kabhi baat nahi karegi. Kasam kha ki tu aage se aisi koi ghinouni harkat nahi karegi aur khud ko pavitra rakhegi."
Swati, broken and sobbing, swore the oath.
Her father dropped her off and picked her up from her exams. 

Priya, desperate and heartbroken, tried to send messages through Shruti, begging to meet. But Swati, consumed by guilt and her newfound desire to be 'pure,' refused. Finally, when her parents were satisfied she had changed, Swati was allowed to go to college alone. One afternoon, as she walked out of the gates, she saw Priya waiting on her Bullet motorcycle. Priya looked exhausted, her eyes red-rimmed.
She ran up to her. "Swati! Please, meri baat sun..."
"Mujhse baat mat karo, Priya," Swati said coldly, stepping back. 
"Jo bhi hua, wo ek bohot badi galti thi."
"Galti nahi thi, Swati!" Priya pleaded, tears spilling down her cheeks right there on the open street. 
"Hum dono ek doosre ke liye bane hain. Main tumse pyar karti hoon. Please mujhe chhod ke mat jao."
"Nahi! Main galat thi. Main aisi nahi hoon," Swati snapped, her guilt making her cruel. 
"Mujhe akela chhod do."
Priya grabbed Swati’s hand, her voice cracking, her hand shaking. 
"Tu apni padhai puri karle hum yahan se kahin dur chale jayenge, Mujhe malum hain, Tum bhi mere bina nahi reh sakti."
"Mera peecha mat karna. Mujhe kabhi contact mat karna," Swati yanked her hand away and walked off, ignoring the sound of Priya sobbing, her heart shattering into a million pieces.
Priya didn't follow her. She stood completely still on the road, watching Swati walk away, tears streaming down her eyes.

Two months later, Swati’s family hurriedly packed up and moved to a completely different corner of the city, far away from the rented flat and the shame it held. Priya tried desperately to find her. She rode her Bullet around Swati’s college, searched through mutual friends, and scoured social media. But Swati had changed college, and her parents had deleted all her accounts.

…The Priya chapter of Swati’s life was violently, completely erased. 

Years passed. Swati buried the memories deep in her subconscious, locking away the dirty, horny girl who had scissored on a muddy rock. Through mutual contacts, an arranged marriage was fixed with Viraj. Swati’s lower-middle-class parents were overjoyed to get such a wealthy, successful IT professional as a son-in-law. Viraj’s family, especially Madhavi and Shrikant, were equally thrilled to get such a simple, homely, and pious daughter-in-law.

Swati had successfully reinvented herself. She was the perfect wife, the perfect mother.

[tweeny_fory]

wow a perfect wife now
a lesian earlier
so this is going to be against her
will she become a lesbian again
or a slut

[SilentRavisherX]

Chapter 5: Ghosts of The Past
Continued....

Back in the present – The row house

All these memories came flooding back to her in a violent rush, snapping her back to the dimly lit bedroom.
Swati stared at Aditi, her chest heaving, her face pale with absolute terror. The mistake she had made twelve years ago, the secret she thought was dead and buried, had just walked into her bedroom. If Viraj found out... if Madhavi and Shrikant found out... her life would be over. They would throw her out on the street. She would lose Arush. She would lose everything.

"K-kya matlab hai tumhara?" Swati stammered, her voice shaking uncontrollably, desperately trying to play dumb.
Aditi let out a dark, mocking chuckle. "Bhabhi, aapko malum hai mera kya matlab hai. Wo Lohagad ka trekking... wahan khule aasmaan ke neeche wo wild lesbian sex... aur baad mein aapki mummy ka aap dono ko range haath nanga pakadna?"
Swati was genuinely perplexed and terrified. How did she know these exact details?
Swati swallowed hard, trying to muster a shred of courage. "Koi bharosa nahi rakhega tum par, Aditi," 
she whispered fiercely, her eyes darting toward the door. "Mummyji mujh par poora vishwas karti hain. Papa har bada kaam mujhse pooch kar karte hain. Yeh sab... yeh sab 11-12 saal pehle hua tha, shadi se bohot pehle. Tumhare paas koi saboot nahi hai."
Aditi’s smile widened into a wicked, triumphant grin. "Saboot?"

Aditi leaned in, the strap of her T-shirt sliding provocatively down her shoulder. She reached into the pocket of her shorts and pulled out her mobile phone. She tapped the screen a few times and pressed play.  She didn't just play the recording; she reached out, her cool, manicured fingers tracing the line of Swati’s jaw before firmly cupping her chin. She forced Swati to look directly at her as a voice filled the quiet bedroom. It was slightly slurred, heavy with alcohol and deep-seated pain, but Swati recognized it instantly. It was Priya.
"...yaar Aditi, tu nahi samjhegi," Priya’s recorded voice echoed from the speaker. 
"Wo Lohagad ka trek... fuck, it was surreal. Baarish ho rahi thi, aur hum dono us pahad pe nange the... I thought she was the one, man."
Aditi’s thumb began to stroke Swati’s trembling lower lip, a mocking imitation of a lover’s touch. The contrast was agonizing—the audio of Swati’s raw, animalistic past vibrating in the air while Aditi’s predatory hand claimed her present.

Then, Aditi’s voice could be heard in the background of the recording, sounding casual and probing. "Par achanak kya hua? Usne tujhe chhod kyun diya?"
"Uski maa ne hume pakad liya tha," Priya’s voice cracked with old grief. 
"Bed pe. Nange. Uski maa ne mujhe thappad maar ke ghar se nikal diya. Aur phir wo log wahan se shift ho gaye. Swati... Swati Chaudhary. Uske papa bank mein clerk the. Uski ek chhoti behen bhi thi, Shruti. Pata nahi kahan chali gayi wo..."

The moment the name 'Swati Chaudhary' crackled through the phone’s speakers, slurred and broken by Priya’s voice—made her pussy give a sharp, traitorous contraction, a raw physical reminder that no matter how many sarees she wore or how many prayers she said, she was still that girl on the mountain. Aditi paused the recording. The silence in the room was deafening. Swati felt the floor drop out from under her. Her mind was spinning in absolute confusion and horror. How did Aditi meet Priya? Why was Priya telling her all this? The recording was damning. The specific details—her maiden surname, her father's exact job, her sister's name—left absolutely no room for doubt. Anyone who heard this would know exactly who the 'Swati' in the recording was.

Tears finally spilled over Swati’s eyelashes, rolling down her flushed cheeks. Her entire body slumped in defeat. The pious fortress she had built was completely shattered.
Aditi threw her head back and laughed, a hysterical, victorious sound that chilled Swati to the bone.
"Ab samajh aaya, Bhabhi?" Aditi whispered, leaning in so close her hard nipples brushed against Swati’s arm. 
"I hold your entire future in my hand. Ek click, aur yeh audio Viraj bhaiya, Mummy, aur Papa ke phone pe hoga. Tumhari yeh 'sati-savitri' ki image ek second mein raakh ho jayegi."
Swati looked at Aditi through her tears. She had no options left. No escape. She was completely, utterly trapped.

"Haan..." Swati choked out, a single, defeated sob escaping her lips. Aditi smirked, her eyes gleaming with dark satisfaction. The real game was about to begin.

[Sajibx]

Excellent update.

[SilentRavisherX]

Chapter 5: Ghosts of The Past

Continued...…

Viraj Office – Three months earlier – The starting days 

After that first shattering humiliation, Viraj established a ruthless daily ritual.

Every lunchtime, while the office headed to the cafeteria, he'd text: "Cabin. Now."

Poorva's stomach knotted each time she walked down the corridor, Nikhil's resentful glare burning her back like acid. The team whispered about the boss's "special mentoring," but no one questioned Viraj's authority. Vidya, the receptionist, watched with sharp, silent eyes.

Day after day, the door would click shut. The lock turned with finality.

“Skirt off. Panties too,” he would order calmly, already seated at his desk like a king on his throne. “Then sit on the stool.”

Every Session, her fingers shook as she unzipped her skirt or trousers and stepped out of it, then hook her thumbs into the waistband of her damp panties and push them down her thick, dusky thighs. The air-conditioned chill raising goosebumps on her naked legs and ass. She perched naked from the waist down on the aluminum stool, gasping as icy metal touched her warm ass cheeks and pressed cruelly against swollen pussy lips.  Viraj spread her thighs wide. "Good girl. Keep them open."

While Viraj explained basic programming concepts like teaching a first-year student. Two thick fingers would trace her swollen pussy lips, then slide inside her tight, wet pussy without ever breaking his explanation. The wet, obscene sounds of his fingers slowly pumping in and out of her dripping cunt filled the quiet cabin, mixing with his calm technical voice. Every time his thumb circled her swollen clit, her pussy would clench greedily around his fingers, leaking fresh juices onto the stool despite the burning humiliation.

“Take my cock out,” he would say midway through the session, eyes still on the screen.

With trembling hands, Poorva would unzip him, pull out his heavy, throbbing cock, and hold its thick length in her small palm while he continued teaching. The heat and weight of it, the way it pulsed against her fingers, made her feel utterly degraded — a respected, educated woman reduced to a naked, dripping plaything during office hours.

On the sixth day, Viraj had escalated further.

“Shirt and bra too,” he commanded. Poorva stood on shaky legs, She'd peeled off her blouse, then unclasped her bra, exposing her heavy, 34D breasts, her dark nipples already stiff from fear and the cool air. Fully naked now, she felt utterly exposed. Viraj continued the lesson, his fingers never leaving her pussy, his other hand occasionally squeezing a nipple, twisting it just enough to make her whimper. 

The fear of discovery was a constant undercurrent. What if someone knocked? What if Vidya, the sharp-eyed receptionist, barged in with an urgent file? Every corridor footstep made her asshole clench in terror, but Viraj seemed to relish the risk. He'd often leave the door unlocked until the last moment, or call her in while a colleague waited outside. The thrill of being caught naked, of being exposed as the boss's slut, was both terrifying and, in a dark corner of her mind, perversely exciting. 

On the ninth day, Viraj leaned back in his chair, his thick cock already out and rock-hard.

“Open your mouth.”

Poorva hesitated only a second before leaning forward. She wrapped her lips around the swollen head of his throbbing cock. The taste was strange — salty, slightly musky, overwhelmingly masculine. The thick shaft stretched her mouth as she awkwardly sucked him while he continued explaining database concepts, occasionally pushing deeper into her throat until her eyes watered. As she gagged softly, her own pussy leaked onto the carpet, a traitorous slick of arousal that she couldn't suppress. The stimulation was undeniable—the humiliation, the powerlessness, the raw physicality of servicing him while he talked tech. It twisted her shame into something darker, more addictive.

Poorva returned to her desk with her lips still tingling and the strange, musky taste of his cum lingering on her tongue. As she left the cabin, she caught Vidya’s knowing glance—the receptionist’s eyes held a mix of pity and cold assessment—but she said nothing.

Yet barely an hour later the true psychological twist came.

Back at her desk, the fog of the "training" seemed to crystallize into a strange, sharp clarity. While debugging a stubborn module that had been troubling the entire team for two days, Poorva suddenly saw the solution clearly. Her fingers flew across the keyboard. She typed, tested, and — for the first time in her life — fixed a production bug completely on her own, without asking Nikhil or any senior for help - The green “success” notification flashed on her screen. A feat seemed impossible a mere week ago.

A powerful rush surged through her chest.

I did it… I actually did it.

She had done it. She wasn't just the "new girl" or the "boss’s pet"—she was a developer. For the first time since moving to Pune, Poorva felt a genuine surge of confidence. A bright, clean feeling of progress. She was no longer the nervous village girl who had arrived in the city with trembling hands and constant self-doubt. She was becoming someone sharper, someone capable. The fog that had clouded her mind since joining the company was slowly lifting. Her life felt clearer, more in focus. A strange, conflicted warmth bloomed in her chest. “Viraj taught me this.”

Even though he had just used her mouth like a cheap toy, even though she was still sitting with his dried cum at the corner of her lips, a reluctant thread of gratitude twisted inside her. He had humiliated her, degraded her… and yet, in these twisted “training” sessions, he was actually making her better at her job. Stronger. More confident. The irony was a hard pill to swallow: the man who was systematically stripping her of her dignity was also the only one giving her the tools to succeed. That evening during the coffee break, she walked up to Viraj with an excited, almost shy smile she couldn’t suppress.

“Sir,” she said, her voice bright with genuine happiness, “I fixed my first bug today. Completely on my own. Without asking anyone for help.”

Her eyes sparkled with pride and relief. For a brief moment, the shame of what had happened in the cabin took a backseat to this new, intoxicating feeling of achievement. Viraj looked at her, clearly pleased. A soft, unfamiliar warmth touched his eyes—something beyond lust or ownership. He praised her warmly, his voice carrying genuine appreciation. "I'm proud of you, Poorva. It seems our sessions are paying off. But we've only scratched the surface."

The same voice that had ordered her to suck his cock just hours ago now told her she had done well. Poorva felt a confusing mix of emotions—lingering humiliation, budding gratitude, and a dangerous new sense of dependency. She was tied to him now by more than fear; she was tied by growth. Then Viraj leaned in slightly and said casually, "Tomorrow is Saturday. The office will be empty. Come in at 11:00 AM. We’ll have a 3-hour session. I’ll clear every 'concept' you have left."

He expected refusal, an excuse—the usual dance of coercion. Instead, Poorva met his eyes, that small, conflicted half-smile returning to her lips. Her heart beat faster, not just with fear, but with a dark, curious anticipation. “Okay, Sir,” she replied softly. Viraj blinked. Something in his expression shifted — not much, barely visible — but it was there. The power dynamic had just shifted in ways he hadn't anticipated. She wasn’t just complying; she was agreeing. And in her eyes, he saw something new—a flicker of willingness that went beyond survival.

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Back in the present - Poorva

Meanwhile, in another part of the city, Poorva unlocked the door to her cramped flat. She looked extra cheerful today. She walked into her bedroom, stripped off her tight corporate clothes, and changed into a loose, comfortable home t-shirt and a pair of soft half-shorts.

She headed to the kitchen to make coffee.

She walked out into the hallway and passed the adjacent bedroom. The door was wide open.

Inside, the room was set up like a small, intense home gym. Heavy metal music was playing softly from a Bluetooth speaker. Standing in the center of the room, curling a pair of heavy dumbbells, was her flatmate.

She is 32 now. Her hair was still cut short, styled in a sharp, boyish fade. Her body was incredibly athletic, her arms and shoulders bulging with well-defined, hard muscles that glistened with sweat. The sharp tang of sweat and metal filled the air. She wore only a tight sports bra that flattened her small breasts and a pair of loose track pants. She lowered the dumbbells, her dark eyes catching Poorva in the doorway. She wiped the sweat from her forehead with the back of her hand and gave Poorva a warm, charming smile.

"Hi, Poorva," Priya said, her voice deep and steady. "Kaisa tha din?"

End of Chapter 5

[Jeshwanth]

Wow, peak writing.. felt so many things for the characters.

very good writing, please don't stop writing, kindly write more and more.

Waiting for next update.

[SilentRavisherX]

Chapter 6: The Scent of Surrender

Poorva - Three months earlier

She was practically humming when she came through the door, still buzzing with a confusing mix of shame and strange exhilaration. The ghost of his fingers inside her, the taste of his cock, the cold metal stool against her naked ass—it all followed her home. The moment she stepped inside, the familiar warmth of home wrapped around her. Priya and Bela had been living with her for one and half years now; the three of them had become a makeshift family.

Bela was at the study desk, buried in medical books. Priya was in the living room, phone pressed to her ear, talking to her younger brother Siddharth. The moment Priya saw Poorva, her sharp eyes softened with that familiar protective warmth. Poorva changed quickly into comfortable clothes, then moved into the kitchen with unusual energy. She made tea for all three of them, humming softly. Bela took hers without looking up from her dissection diagram.

Poorva handed her a steaming cup. Priya took it, studying Poorva’s bright face. Then her mother's face on the screen — tired, familiar, with Priya's same jawline. 

"Khana kha rahi hai na?" her mother asked. She always asked.

"Kha rahi hoon, Aai."

"Priya —" her mother's voice shifted, 

"Siddharth ke liye koi dekhna chahiye. Tumhari jabtak shadi nahi hogi, uski kaise ho sakti hain?"

"Tum jaanti ho, Aai." Her voice was even. Practiced. 

"Main us tarah ki nahi hoon."

Her mother's face on the screen went quiet with a particular kind of sadness — not new, not surprised. Just the grief of having heard this before and still not having found a different way to hold it. Poorva looked at her flatmate — this woman she had lived with for two years, who cared for her when she was sick, who even paid her rent when she did not have money.

When the call ended, Priya sat back and looked at Poorva for a moment. 

“Aaj itni khush kyun ho ?”

Poorva smiled "Maine pehla bug fix kiya. Khud se. Bina kisi ki help ke."

Priya looked at her for a moment.

"Tera Viraj Sir kaam ka hai," she said finally.

"Haan," Poorva said, avoiding her eyes. And did not say anything else.

Poorva smiled. “ Let’s go out tonight, Didi. Just us.”

Bela declined — practicals the next day — so only Priya and Poorva left for a quiet lounge bar in Baner. They ordered drinks and dinner, the low music and dim lights creating a relaxed bubble around them.

"Teri life mein kya chal raha hai?" Poorva asked, leaning on her elbows.

“ aaj kal  kaun hain - Gauri, Stuti?“ 

“ No one,” Priya said.

“Ek Aditi bhi thi na - 2-3 mahine pahile tak” Poorva wanted to know

“Chhod na usko, wo complicated thi, Toxic bhi” Priya said as if to change the subject.

"Abhi to sirf Studio." Priya swirled her drink. 

"Shift kar rahi hoon. Naya space Baner mein hi hai, Partner ke saath paperwork chal raha hai. Ek- Do mahine mein shift ho jaayenge."

"Nakshatra Dance and Fitness Studio."

“Nakshatra… itna khoobsurat naam. Kaise rakha?” Poorva asked, leaning forward, genuinely curious.

Something moved across Priya's face. Small. Controlled. The way she controlled most things.

“Kisi ke naam pe rakha tha,” she said, her voice dropping.

“Bahut pehle… jab main college mein thi. Ek raat, terrace pe… hum dono soye hue the. Usne mujhe aasman dikhaya… Swati nakshatra. Kehti thi, ‘Dekho, Priya, mera nakshatra hai - ye baarish ke boond ko moti me badalata hain"’ Uske baad se… wo nakshatra mera ho gaya.” –She fell silent, lost in the memory. 

Tears slipped down Priya’s cheeks. She wiped them quickly, forcing a smile. This was a ghost that still lived and breathed in her.

“Uske baad?” Poorva prompted softly.

Priya shrugged, the movement too casual to be real. 

“Kuch nahi. Society aa gayi beech mein. Baraah saal ho gaye.use dekha tak nahi. Par dhoondh rahi hoon… aaj bhi.”

"Chhod yeh sab," she said, and her voice was already back to its usual register. 

"Tu bata. Yeh Viraj Sir — kuch interesting lag raha hai."

Poorva’s heart gave a violent, guilty throb. She thought of the throbbing cock she had held in her mouth just hours ago, the taste of him still a phantom on her palate. She thought of the Saturday session looming ahead.

"Woh mera boss hai" Poorva said, her voice shaking slightly as she looked down at her drink. "Aur shaadi shuda hai”

Priya smiled. Poorva smiled back.

Priya studied her for a long moment, sensing the lie but not pressing. She reached out and gently squeezed Poorva’s hand, her protective instincts flaring as always. They finished dinner in comfortable silence and returned home together, the night air cool against their skin. Priya walked close, shoulder brushing Poorva’s, the same quiet strength she had once shown a girl named Swati many years ago.

---

Back in the present – The row house

The silence in the bedroom was suffocating. Swati stood frozen, the damning audio clip of Priya’s confession still echoing in her ears. She had finally understood the terrifying reality: her entire life, her marriage, her respect in society—everything was now tightly gripped in Aditi’s manicured hands. Her throat was bone dry.

Aditi looked at her intently, her dark eyes gleaming with a sadistic thrill. She leaned back slightly.

"Bhabhi," Aditi commanded, her voice soft but laced with absolute authority. 

"Apna top utaaro. Mujhe tumhe theek se dekhna hai."

Swati’s breath hitched. She knew whatever Aditi said, she had to follow, but the pious, modest woman inside her made one last, desperate, trembling attempt.

"Aditi... please," Swati stuttered, tears welling in her eyes, her hands joining together in a pleading gesture. 

"Mujhe maaf kar do. Maine kabhi tumhara bura nahi chaha. Main is ghar mein tumhari har baat manungi, main roz tumhare pair chhungi... par please, yeh sab mat karo...!"

Before Swati could finish her sentence, Aditi moved with terrifying speed. She closed the distance between them, grabbed Swati’s right wrist with a firm, bruising grip, and twisted it sharply behind Swati’s back. Swati gasped in pain. Aditi pressed the index finger of her other hand hard against Swati’s trembling lips, silencing her instantly.

She leaned in dangerously close. There was barely five centimeters of distance between their eyes. Swati could feel Aditi’s hot breath on her face, smelling of expensive mint and raw malice. "Top. Bhabhi," 

Aditi hissed, her eyes narrowing into dark slits.