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Hi, I am New writer Writing Story For first time.
In case of any mistakes please understand. I was active under different name but Now I have created this account
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Testing Her Limits : Web of Lust and Revenge
Chapter 1: The Return of the Wild Child
The afternoon sun beat down on the luxurious Hinjewadi row house, part of hi-class Row house Society with 24 Row Houses. Inside, Swati felt only a cold, heavy knot in her stomach. She stood in the living room wearing a simple peach-colored salwar suit, her milky white skin glowing in the soft light. At thirty-one, she looked remarkably like a young Anushka Sharma, but today her face was pale with worry.
Her husband, Viraj, was at the office again. For the past few months, he had been acting completely weird. He was always angry, finding small faults in everything she did, and trying to control who she talked to. Worse, there had been no sex between them for three long months. Three months without a hard cock inside her. Her body craved release, her pussy aching for a throbbing shaft to fill her wet slit, but Viraj’s coldness left her feeling unwanted, frustrated, and gloomy.
But today, her anxiety was about someone else. Aditi was coming back. Aditi Was Viraj's Little Sister. Swati remembered the bitter past. Years ago, she had caught Aditi making out with a boy outside their gate, his hands squeezing her boobs. When Aditi didn't stop, Swati had told her mother-in-law, Madhavi. That single act had caused a storm, leading to Aditi being hastily married off to Manoj in Ghaziabad. Now, divorced and childless, Aditi was returning to live with them. Swati expected anger, tears, or cold silence.
At exactly 4 PM, the front door opened.
"Surprise!" a loud, cheerful voice rang out.
Swati blinked in shock. Aditi stood there, looking absolutely stunning. She was twenty-nine, tall, slim, and fair, radiating the wild beauty of Kriti Sanon. She wore tight blue jeans and a short, deep-neck crop top that left nothing to the imagination.
Before Swati could process anything, Aditi dropped her bags and rushed forward. "Bhabhi!"
Aditi threw her arms around Swati in a tight hug. Swati gasped as Aditi’s chest crushed against hers. Aditi was clearly not wearing a bra. Swati could feel the soft, heavy squish of Aditi’s perfect boobs pressing into her own, and the sharp, hard points of Aditi’s nipples digging right through the thin fabric of Swati’s suit. The intimate contact lasted a few seconds too long. Swati felt a sudden, uncomfortable heat rush to her cheeks. She gently pushed Aditi back.
"Welcome home, Aditi," Swati managed to say, her voice shaking slightly.
Aditi just smiled brightly, her eyes sparkling with a strange energy. She didn't look like a broken, divorced woman. She quickly moved to touch the feet of Madhavi and Shrikant, laughing and joking. She even picked up Swati’s five-year-old son, Aarush, spinning him around. She helped Swati prepare dinner, chopping vegetables and making jokes. Swati was amazed. Maybe Aditi had changed?
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Chapter 1: The Return of the Wild Child
CONTINUED…….
But that illusion shattered later that night.
It was around 11 PM. Viraj was still working on his laptop in their first-floor bedroom, ignoring Swati as usual. Swati was in the hallway, getting a glass of water, when she heard footsteps coming down from the second floor.
"Bhabhi?" Aditi whispered.
Swati turned and froze. Aditi was standing on the stairs, asking for an extra blanket. But she was wearing only a thin, oversized white men's shirt. Nothing else. The top three buttons were open, showing the deep cleavage of her white tits. The cold AC air had made her nipples rock hard, and they poked aggressively against the thin white cloth.
"Aditi?" Swati stammered, trying to keep her eyes on Aditi's face.
"Haan Bhabhi, thand lag rahi hai,Blanket Chahiye tha" Aditi smiled innocently.
Swati quickly grabbed a spare blanket from the closet and handed it to her. "Ye lo."
"Thanks, Bhabhi!" Aditi turned around to walk back up the stairs.
Swati’s breath hitched in her throat. The shirt was dangerously short in the back. As Aditi took a step up, the hem rode up completely. Aditi was not wearing a panty. Her bare, milky white ass cheeks were fully exposed to the open air. Swati could clearly see the deep crack of her tight ass and the pink, hairless lips of her pussy from behind.
Just then, Arush walked out of his room rubbing his eyes. "Mummy, Bua Pant Bhulgayi ."
Swati panicked. She quickly pulled Arush against her legs, covering his eyes with her hands. "So jao, Arush!" she hissed.
Aditi stopped on the stairs, looked over her shoulder, and giggled before disappearing upstairs. Swati’s heart hammered. It was so humiliating, so blatant.
The next day, the psychological games continued. Aditi insisted on taking Swati and Arush to the mall. With the family, Aditi was the perfect, chirpy daughter, but alone with Swati, the air was thick with tension.
Inside a high-end clothing store, Aditi grabbed a few dresses and pulled Swati toward the trial rooms. "Bhabhi, ye zip kro na please, please? Arush, tum yehi bench pe baitho," Aditi instructed.
Swati reluctantly stepped into the cramped changing room. As soon as the door clicked shut, Aditi didn't just take off her top; she stripped completely naked in one fluid motion. Swati gasped, pressing her back against the door.
Aditi stood there, completely nude, her body a flawless sculpture. Her boobs were perfectly round, the pink areolas swollen, and her nipples standing at attention. Her stomach was flat, leading down to a completely shaved, plump pink Pussy.
"Aditi! Kya kar rahi ho? Kuchch kapde pehno!" Swati whispered fiercely, her face burning red.
"Relax, Bhabhi. Hum dono aurtein hi toh hain," Aditi laughed softly, casually picking up a tight red dress. She didn't try to cover her naked breasts or her bare pussy. She slowly shimmied into the dress, making sure Swati got a full view of her jiggling tits and tight ass. "Ye Zip karo na?"
Swati’s hands trembled as she reached out, her knuckles accidentally brushing against the bare skin of Aditi’s back. The smell of Aditi’s sweet perfume mixed with the raw, musky scent of female skin filled the small cubicle. Swati felt a shameful, reluctant throb between her own legs. It had been three months since Viraj touched her, and this raw display of sexuality was messing with her mind.
After the mall, they went to a nice restaurant for lunch. They sat in a corner booth, Arush busy playing a game on Swati's phone. Swati thought she could finally breathe, but Aditi slid into the seat right next to her instead of opposite her.
While looking at the menu, Aditi suddenly reached out and placed her hand directly over Swati’s left breast. Swati jumped, her eyes widening in shock.
"Aditi!" Swati hissed, looking around to see if anyone was watching.
"Shh, Bhabhi, yahan ek thread nikala hua hai," Aditi said innocently, pretending to pluck a loose thread from Swati’s top. But instead of pulling her hand away, Aditi’s fingers lingered, gently muzzling and pressing into the soft flesh of Swati’s boob. Swati’s nipple instantly hardened against her will, betraying her three months of sexual starvation.
Aditi smirked, leaning in close so only Swati could hear. "Waise Bhabhi, you have a great figure. Viraj bhaiya toh maze lete honge. You know, when I was in Ghaziabad..." Aditi took a sip of her water, her eyes locking onto Swati’s horrified face. "...my sex life was crazy. Mera ek friend tha, uska lund itna mota aur lamba tha. Jab wo meri choot mein daalta tha na, Bhabhi, meri gaand phat jati thi dard se, par maza bahut aata tha."
Swati felt dizzy. "Aditi, stop it! Arush is right here!" she whispered angrily, her face flushed crimson with deep embarrassment and humiliation.
Aditi was nonchalant. "Arush game khelraha hain uska yahan dhyan nahin hain , Bhabhi. Main just batarahi thi….. Wo mujhe ghodi banakar itni zor se chodta tha ki mera paani nikal jata tha. Squirting orgasm, you know? Pura bed gila ho jata tha mere cum se. Viraj bhaiya bhi aise hi karte hain kya Bhabhi? Ya bas do minute mein uska nikal jata hai?"
"Shut up!" Swati snapped, her voice trembling. Her mind was in turmoil. Hearing these dirty, explicit words—lund, choot, chodta—from her sister-in-law in a public restaurant was deeply humiliating. Yet, a treacherous wetness was pooling in her own panties. She hated herself for it. Aditi just laughed, eating her pasta as if she hadn't just talked about getting her pussy pounded.
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(15-03-2026, 03:02 AM)Rizzi1198 Wrote: Good start
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Chapter 1: The Return of the Wild Child
CONTINUED…….
The final straw came two days later. Swati went up to the second floor to give Aditi some washed clothes. She knocked on the open door and walked in.
"Aditi, Tumhare Kapde—"
Aditi was standing near the bathroom. She turned around, smiled, and casually untied the knot of her bathrobe. It fell to the floor. Once again, she was completely naked. Her heavy boobs bounced slightly, her pink nipples hardened.
"Thanks, Bhabhi. Main nahane hi jarahi thi," Aditi said, walking into the bathroom. But she didn't close the door. She turned on the water and stepped under the spray.
Swati stood frozen in the bedroom, watching the water cascade over Aditi’s naked body, making her skin slick and shiny. Aditi began to lather soap over her tits, squeezing them together.
"Bhabhi, itni garmi hai. Aaja, let's take a joint shower," Aditi called out over the sound of the water.
"No, I have work," Swati said, her voice tight. She turned to leave.
Suddenly, wet footsteps slapped against the tiles. Before Swati could reach the door, Aditi was standing right in front of her, dripping wet and completely naked. The smell of floral soap and wet female skin was intoxicating.
"Aaja na, Bhabhi.chalo kapde nikalke aja," Aditi whispered, her eyes dark with mischief.
Before Swati could react, Aditi reached out with wet hands and grabbed the waistband of Swati’s lower pajamas. With a quick tug, Aditi pulled them down with panties a few inches, exposing Swati’s Ass and the top of pussy.
"Stop!" Swati gasped, slapping Aditi’s hands away and quickly pulling her pajamas back up. Her heart was beating out of her chest. The sheer audacity of this girl! "I said NO, Aditi. Don't cross your limits."
Swati’s voice was firm and decided. Aditi looked at her for a second, then raised her hands in mock surrender, a playful smile on her lips.
"Chill, Bhabhi. Gussa kyun ho rahi ho? Main toh bas nahlane ko bol rahi thi," Aditi chuckled, her wet, heavy boobs jiggling with the movement. The water cascaded down her flat stomach, pooling in the deep crease of her shaved, pink pussy before dripping down her smooth thighs.
"This is not a joke, Aditi," Swati said, her voice shaking with a mix of anger and a humiliating, deep-seated arousal. Her own wet slit was throbbing against her cotton panties, a shameful reaction to the naked, beautiful woman standing in front of her. "Apni hadd mein raho."
Swati turned and practically ran out of the room, her heart pounding against her ribs.
Back in her own first-floor bedroom, Viraj was glued to his laptop, not even glancing up as she entered. Swati sat on the edge of the bed, her mind racing in panic. She was completely trapped. She realized with a sinking feeling that she couldn't tell anyone about this. If she went to her mother-in-law, Madhavi, or to Viraj, and said, "Aditi is walking around without panties, stripping in front of me, and grabbing my boobs," they would think she was insane. They would accuse her of trying to ruin Aditi's life again, just when the poor girl had returned home broken from a painful divorce.
Aditi knew this perfectly well. That bitch knew exactly what she was doing. It was a calculated psychological game, a power play where Swati was the helpless victim. Swati took a deep breath, her chest heaving as she tried to calm her internal turmoil. I just need to keep a safe distance from her, Swati decided firmly in her mind. No more going to her room. No more mall trips alone. I will only talk to her when the whole family is around.
Up on the second floor, the shower was off. Aditi lay completely naked on her wide bed, the cool air-conditioning drying the remaining droplets of water on her flawless, milky skin. Her heavy, perfectly round boobs rested on her chest, the large pink areolas tight and her nipples standing erect like hard pebbles.
She reached for her phone on the nightstand, her lips curling into a wicked smirk as she answered an incoming video call. She propped the phone against a pillow, giving the caller a full, explicit view of her naked body—her jiggling tits, her flat stomach, and her plump, shaved pink pussy.
On the screen, the face of a man appeared. He was in a dimly lit room, his eyes instantly dropping to her naked breasts and the wet slit between her legs.
"Kaisi chal rahi hai planning, meri jaan?" the man's deep voice crackled through the speaker.
Aditi let out a dark, throaty laugh. She reached up, cupping her own heavy boobs, squeezing the soft flesh together. "Bahut mast. You should have seen her face today. Sati-savitri Bhabhi is losing her mind."
As she spoke, Aditi replayed the incidents of the last few days in her mind, a rush of vindictive pleasure washing over her. She remembered the shock in Swati’s eyes when she walked down the stairs with no panties, exposing her bare ass and pussy. She remembered the trial room, how Swati had trembled when Aditi stripped completely naked in front of her. And today at the restaurant—when Aditi had grabbed Swati's boob and talked about getting her own pussy pounded and squirting cum. Swati had looked so humiliated, so deeply embarrassed, yet Aditi had noticed the subtle, heavy breathing. She knew Swati was sexually frustrated. Three months without Viraj's cock was making the pious Bhabhi weak.
"Aaj toh maine uski panty utaarne ki koshish ki bathroom mein," Aditi told the man on the screen, her fingers trailing down her stomach to lightly trace the wet lips of her own pussy. "She ran away like a scared little rabbit. Par uski choot gili thi, I swear. I could smell her arousal."
The man on the screen chuckled darkly. "Good. Uska ghamand todna hai. She thinks she is so pure, so perfect."
At those words, Aditi’s playful mood darkened into a cold, burning rage. Her fingers stopped moving. She stared at the ceiling, replaying the deep, festering wound Swati had given her three years ago.
It was Swati who had ruined her life. Swati, the perfect daughter-in-law, who had caught Aditi making out at the gate. Aditi had begged her, cried in front of her, pleading with her not to tell anyone. But Swati, acting like a moral judge, had gone straight to Madhavi. That single act of snitching had destroyed everything. The Yadav family had panicked. Within three months, they had forcefully married Aditi off to Manoj, throwing her into the hellhole of Ghaziabad.
Aditi’s eyes clouded with rage as the nightmare of that cursed marriage flooded back. Manoj had never treated her like a wife — he had used her like a cheap, disposable toy, a mere slut for his sadistic pleasure, forcing himself inside her without mercy, pounding her raw while whispering filthy abuses. Her body had been broken while her soul was shattered under the weight of endless humiliation. That pain, that degradation, that complete destruction of her dignity… it all culminated in a bitter, ugly divorce that left her emotionally scarred and seething with revenge. All while Swati sat comfortably in her high-fi Pune row house, playing the perfect wife and mother.
She took everything from me, Aditi thought, her jaw clenching. Now, I will take everything from her. Her dignity, her pride, her mind... and her body.
Aditi looked back at the phone screen. She pushed her heavy breasts upward with both hands, lowering her neck. She opened her mouth and caught her own stiff, pink nipple between her lips, sucking on it wetly, her tongue swirling around the hard peak. She moaned softly, her other hand sliding down to plunge two fingers deep into her dripping wet pussy.
The man on the screen groaned, watching her fuck her own wet slit while sucking her nipple. "Fuck... Aditi, tu sach mein pagal hai. Kya karegi ab Bhabhi ka?"
Aditi pulled her nipple out of her mouth with a wet pop, her chest heaving, her fingers still pumping in and out of her slick pussy juices. She looked directly into the camera, her eyes flashing with a dangerous, predatory hunger.
"Uski aisi gaand marenge hum dono milke," Aditi whispered, her voice dripping with pure venom and lust. "Uss randi ko nangi karke nachayenge. I will break her so completely, she will beg us to use her holes. Bhabhi ki choot phad denge hum."
"I can't wait to see her crying on her knees," the man replied, a cruel smile matching hers. "Keep pushing her buttons. Make her desperate."
"I will," Aditi murmured, pulling her slick fingers out of her pussy and bringing them to her lips to taste her own juices. She stared at the screen, her mind finalizing the dark, humiliating traps she was going to set for Swati. A slow, wicked half-smile spread across Aditi's face. The game had only just begun.
End of Chapter 1......
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Very interesting premise. Pretty good 1st chapter. Hooks the reader right into it. Eager to see what's coming next
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(14-03-2026, 07:03 AM)tweeny_fory Wrote: wow a spoiled child back to the home.. lets see what is going to boil
the intor is good, but as everyone tells, the paragraph is smaller for anyone to give a review...
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(17-03-2026, 01:13 AM)navytut Wrote: Very interesting premise. Pretty good 1st chapter. Hooks the reader right into it. Eager to see what's coming next
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Chapter 2: The Scent of Betrayal
The next morning arrived with a quiet heaviness in the house. Swati woke earlier than usual, her body still carrying the weight of yesterday’s unease. She had barely slept—every time she closed her eyes, she saw Aditi’s naked body in the changing room, felt the press of Aditi’s hands on her breasts in the restaurant, relived the moment her lowers and panty were yanked down to her ankles, exposing her pussy and ass completely to Aditi’s hungry gaze. Shame burned in her chest like acid. She felt dirty, violated, and powerless. How could she tell anyone? Who would believe her? Aditi was a family. And Viraj… Viraj wasn’t even talking to her properly anymore.
She slipped into the kitchen, in her simple cotton kurti and leggings, and started making tea, trying to focus on the simple task to calm her nerves.
At 7:30 a.m., Aditi came downstairs looking fresh and radiant. She wore an oversized white nightshirt that reached mid-thigh and tiny pink shorts underneath. From the front, she looked decent and presentable to her parents, but every movement made the hem ride up, teasing the lower curve of her firm ass and the edge of her shorts. Her boobs swayed noticeably under the thin fabric, dark nipples faintly visible whenever the cloth shifted. Her hair was loosely tied.
“Good morning, everyone!” Aditi called cheerfully and walked straight to Arush, who was playing on the floor with his toys.
Arush looked up with a big smile. “Bua!”
Aditi smiled sweetly and knelt down to give him a hug, her nightshirt riding up so high that the pink shorts barely covered her pussy mound. The soft, plump curve of her pussy was clearly visible, the thin fabric stretched tight over her smooth lips, the outline of her labia unmistakable. Swati froze, her hand hovering over the tea. She stared in shock, heat rushed to her face. She quickly looked away, but the image stayed burned in her mind — Aditi’s barely-covered pussy openly displayed just feet from her son.
Aditi hugged Arush tightly, her voice sweet. “Mera pyara Arush! Aaj Bua ke saath khelega?”
Madhavi entered from the hall, smiling. “Aditi beta, chai piyegi?”
“Haan Ma, bhabhi bana rahi hain na,” Aditi replied innocently as she stood up and smoothed her nightshirt.
Swati kept her back turned, stirring the tea with unsteady hands. She felt Aditi step right up behind her.
“Bhabhi, ek cup mujhe bhi dena,” Aditi said playfully, pressing her body lightly against Swati’s back. Swati stiffened as she felt Aditi’s firm breasts and hard nipples through the thin layers brushing against her shoulder blades.Aditi’s breath was hot on her neck.
Swati poured the tea silently and handed over the cup without turning. Aditi’s fingers lingered on hers a second too long.
They sat at the dining table. Shrikant read his newspaper while Madhavi served parathas. Aditi sipped her tea and looked at Swati.
“Bhabhi, aaj Pushpa 2 release ho rahi hai theatres mein. Chalo na, chalte hain? Arush ko bhi le chalte hain.”
Swati kept her eyes on her plate. “Nahi Aditi, ghar pe hi dekh lenge. Aur mujhe aaj sar dard bhi ho raha hai.”
Aditi whispered playfully. “Arre bhabhi, ghar pe toh bore ho jaayegi. Theatres ka maza hi alag hai. Popcorn, darkness, excitement…”
Madhavi laughed. “Aditi, Swati thak gayi hogi. Let her rest.”
Shrikant folded the newspaper. “Haan, aur aaj kal ki filmon mein kya dekhna hai? Sab action aur gaane hi hote hain na, story kahan rehti hain!.”
Aditi grinned mischievously. “Papa, action toh banta hai. Aur gaane…gaane bhi achhe hain, aur Pushpa me to story bhi bahot achchi hain! Aur Rashmika kitni hot lagti hai. Bhabhi, aapko pasand hai na Rashmika?”
Swati forced a small smile, “Haan… theek hai. Par aaj nahi.”
Her cheeks were burning. She understood the subtext perfectly — the deliberate comparison, the hidden taunt — she could only stay silent, trapped in the impossible double-bind Aditi was already so skilled at creating.
When Madhavi went into the kitchen to get more parathas and Shrikant was absorbed in his newspaper again, Aditi leaned closer across the table, lowering her voice so only Swati could hear.
“Bhabhi, theatres mein lights off hone ke baad log kya karte hain, pata hai na?”
she whispered with a mischievous glint in her eyes. Swati’s cheeks turned red. She looked down at her tea, heart pounding.
Aditi leaned back slightly, her eyes never leaving Swati’s flushed face. Under the table, her bare foot slowly slid forward and brushed deliberately against Swati’s calf, tracing a slow, teasing path upward till thighs before pulling away.
“Relax Bhabhi… mazak kar rahi hoon,” she whispered with a sweet smile.
The breakfast continued with normal chatter, but Swati felt Aditi’s eyes on her the whole time—watching, teasing, waiting for the next opportunity.
Later that afternoon, Swati was back in the kitchen, chopping vegetables for lunch. A sudden, crushing wave of loneliness washed over her. She stared blankly out the window, remembering their first year in this house. Back then, Viraj used to sneak up behind her, wrapping his strong arms around her waist and pressing soft kisses to her neck while she cooked. Now, she was completely starved of his affection, craving even a passing glance from the man who treated her like a stranger. She was so lost in her painful memories that she didn't hear the footsteps before Aditi was already against her, close enough that her breath was warm on Swati's neck.
Aditi’s left hand rested on Swati’s shoulder while her right hand slid around her waist and moved upward, cupping Swati’s left boob firmly through the cotton kurti. Her fingers gave the soft flesh a deliberate squeeze, thumb brushing slowly across the nipple.
Swati’s breath caught. The knife trembled in her suddenly unsteady hand. “Kya bana rahi ho, Bhabhi?” Aditi whispered close to her ear, voice low and intimate.
Swati felt her nipple harden instantly under the touch. Heat rushed to her cheeks. She grabbed Aditi’s wrist and pulled the hand away. “Bas karo, Aditi. Yeh galat hai.”
Aditi gave a soft, tinkling laugh. “Arre Bhabhi, itni touchy-feely toh har nannad hoti hai apni pyari bhabhi ke saath. Aap toh aise darr rahi ho jaise maine koi gunaah kar diya ho.”
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Request you all to please guide if there are any shortcomings. This will be slow burn story , with various plotlines which will start emerging. Also if somebody can help me with proper formatting, please help out.
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Continue. Going great so far
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(22-03-2026, 11:46 AM)navytut Wrote: Continue. Going great so far
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the first post showed naughty and spoiledaditi, but hte 1st chapter showed her true intentions
it was too hot to know to what lelvel aditi will play with her bhabhi
it is a very intersting plot, your sstory narration is simple and easy to get through
just a small request, could you write the dialogs in english too. .easy for everyone to follow through
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also is aditi going to take her bhabhi to the cinema theater?
one idea from my side..
may be she can book 3 seats, and tell her boyfrend to occupy the 3rd seat
movie 1st half aditi sit in between and gets played by the stranger (for bhabh iits stranger), but aditi knows its he bf
then 2nd half aditi make bhabhi sit in between and both of them tease her
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Chapter 2: The Scent of Betrayal
Continued...….
Swati turned away, heart racing. She felt humiliated — her body was betraying her again. She could feel unwanted heat building between her thighs. Her pussy tingled, a small wet spot forming in her panty. She hated it.
Aditi stepped back, still smiling. “Theek hai bhabhi… jaise aap kahen.”
Without making eye contact, Swati slipped past her and walked out of the kitchen. Aditi stood there, looking at Swati’s retreating figure.
Swati rushed to the bathroom, locked the door, and lifted her kurti. Her panties were damp, her pussy lips swollen. She pressed a hand over her mouth to stifle a sob. Why? Why does my body respond like this? I’m a married woman… a mother. This is wrong, so wrong. She slipped a finger inside her panties, feeling the slickness. A sharp gasp escaped her. It felt good—the shameful arousal mixing with her self-disgust. She imagined Viraj touching her like that, but it was Aditi’s face that flashed before her eyes. She yanked her hand away as if burned. Splashing cold water on her face, she tried to compose herself, but the image of Aditi’s exposed pussy haunted her, and a treacherous warmth lingered.
In the late afternoon, the family was sitting in the living room. Aditi looked at her parents with a serious, slightly sad expression.
"Mummy, Papa," Aditi started, her voice soft. "Main soch rahi hoon ki main jaldi se job dhoondh loon. Mere interviews jaldi hi shuru ho jayenge. Main aap logon pe bojh ban ke nahi rehna chahti."
"Pagal ladki!" Madhavi scolded her gently. "Tu hamari beti hai, koi bojh nahi. Aaram se decision lena. Koi jaldi nahi hai."
"Haan beta," Shrikant added. "Jaldbazi mat kro. Ghar tumharahi hai. Pehle mentally relax ho ja. Job baad me bhi start kar sakti ho.."
Hearing this, Swati felt a sudden pang in her chest. She was an MCS graduate. Before marrying Viraj, she had a career. Now, Viraj didn't even acknowledge her education. He just treated her like a maid and a nanny.
After Aditi went upstairs to her room, Swati sat beside her in-laws.
"Mummyji, Papa," Swati said hesitantly. "Mere pass bhi free time rehta hain... Arush ab college jata hai. Main bhi ab job shuru kar doon?"
Madhavi and Shrikant exchanged a look and smiled.
"Bahu, yeh toh bohot achhi baat hai," Shrikant said. "Tum itni padhi-likhi ho, tumhe apna career aage badhana chahiye."
"Haan Swati," Madhavi agreed. "Tum Viraj se baat karo aur job dhoondhna shuru karo." Madhavi patted her hand."Viraj thoda gusse wala hai, par tu use shanti se, pyar se samjha. Wo maan jayega.”
Swati nodded, but inside she felt hopeless. She knew Viraj didn't "understand"—he commanded.
Later, while folding laundry with Madhavi, she gathered courage and almost opened up.
“Mummyji, Aditi…?” she began.
But her courage faltered. How can I accuse her daughter without proof? She’ll think I’m crazy or jealous.
Madhavi nodded, a sad smile on her face. “Haan beta, Aditi ne bahut kuch saha hai. Wo upar se to dikhati hain bahut khush hai, lekin andar se tooti hui hai. Main chaahti hoon tum dono dosti se raho. Usse hamari madad ki zaroorat hai.”
Swati felt a pang of guilt. How can I suspect her? Maybe she’s just broken and acts out. But the memory of Aditi’s hands on her breasts burned bright.
“Haan Mummyji, main samajhti hoon,” she said quietly.
Madhavi sighed, then returned to folding. “Tum acchi bahu ho, Swati. Viraj ko bhi samajhna chahiye.”
Swati forced a smile, but inside she was torn. The secret weighed heavily, and she felt more alone than ever.
After dinner, Swati tried to strike up a conversation. “Viraj, aaj office mein kya hua?”
“Kuch nahi,” he grunted, not looking up from his phone.
“Kal Arush ka PTM hai, chalein?”
“Mujhe time nahi hai. Tum jaake manage karo.”
Swati’s face fell, but she nodded silently. Viraj stood up and walked to their bedroom, closing the door behind him. Swati stayed at the table, fighting back tears.
As Swati sat alone at the table, Viraj was miles away in thought—back to the day his obsession with Poorva truly took hold.
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Hi everyone,
I have uploaded Chapter 2: 2nd part today. Next part will be posted soon.
I have made some changes and enhancements in the previous parts to improve the flow of the story.
This is not your typical quick-action erotica. It is a slow-burn story with emotional turmoil, reluctant arousal, and detailed character development. The real intensity and hardcore humiliation will build gradually — once the limits start getting tested, it will become much more exciting and intense.
The main plot revolves around Swati’s , but there will be 2-3 parallel subplots running alongside.
Please provide your feedback.
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(28-03-2026, 12:48 PM)tweeny_fory Wrote: also is aditi going to take her bhabhi to the cinema theater?
one idea from my side..
may be she can book 3 seats, and tell her boyfrend to occupy the 3rd seat
movie 1st half aditi sit in between and gets played by the stranger (for bhabh iits stranger), but aditi knows its he bf
then 2nd half aditi make bhabhi sit in between and both of them tease her
Will try to accommodate suggestions.
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(22-03-2026, 08:41 PM)Saj890 Wrote: Very nice
Thank you
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