Adultery Love Sex And War : Age Of Darkness

[Blackdick11]

Hi does this story has hot beautiful girl sex with old man or uncle or watchman type of story? please tell.

This isn’t that kind of story you're looking for.

[Bakchod Londa]

The very thing Hemant was afraid of has finally happened. I can’t help but wonder the same thing, HOW did Sonarika find out? DID Rustom really mention in his letter who Michael King is, or is there something more to it? BECAUSE honestly, my instinct telling me she didn’t learn this from the letter at all. It feels like someone else must have told her… AND for some reason, my suspicion keeps circling back to Vikram’s sister, ANJANA. I don’t know why, but something about it just doesn’t sit right. If Hemant gets exposed. Anjana is the one who benefits the most. AFTER all, the revenge is meant for MICHAEL KING not HEMANT KUMAR.

If so then hemant and sonarika are going to have a really nasty fight, where they’ll both start throwing accusations at each other about "cheating and adultery" & if sonarika found out about MK from Anjana then she probably also told her about his latest hot affairs, just to add more fuel to the fire,,,so that it completely kills any hope of them getting back together.

[Demeter]

Like I said before, I have split this chapter into two which means Chapter 32 will come online this time without delay on Saturday. 
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Saturday's announcement is already behind us, while more than a third of Sunday is now history. 
This means that the announcement has remained empty, or rather, it has turned out to be a mirage. 
Nothing more than a chimera, and therefore an immense nothingness!

One always learns something new, for example, that one should not weigh everything that is said on golden scales and take it seriously.


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Demeter

[Blackdick11]

It happens, bro. updates don’t always drop on the exact date they’re announced.
There must be some reason; otherwise Harry wouldn’t announce a date and then skip it.

[Harry Jordan]

One always learns something new, for example, that one should not weigh everything that is said on golden scales and take it seriously.


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Demeter

Unfortunately , yes there is a delay. And the reason is that I was planning a special chapter with Sonarika on the eve of Women's day. But I had to modify somethings in the story so that there was more to her character. And it has progressed very well until now , because we will see some unexplored backstory of Sonarika in this chapter and also go in depth on the equation between Sonarika and Meghna , including their history. Certain things about them will be explored which will be pivotal to Sonarika's future arc and eventually set up her storyline in the Goa setting.

The reason for no chapter Yesterday was because Saturday was my Dad's Birthday and Today I couldn't do women's day because of the World Cup Final!!!


But like every chapter,  I an assure you , it will be worth the wait. Next Saturday will be posting the Women's day special chapter on Sonarika. We will spend some time learning about Sonarika and her history. The Delhi episodes will be quiet a mix of drama and thrill as Sonarika reaches her crossroad in life where she will have to choose her transformation to evolve so she can survive the war coming to her!

[RCF]

This whole I missed the Saturday so its going to be next Saturday is troubling me, If you are ready post it why wait till Saturday? Is it some kind of auspicious day for Sonarika or Hemanth to screw Bollywood beauties lol

You earlier mentioned Chapter is ready now you are saying you are improvising it for Sonarika's arc, then why wait till Saturday?

~RCF

[Harry Jordan]

This whole I missed the Saturday so its going to be next Saturday is troubling me, If you are ready post it why wait till Saturday? Is it some kind of auspicious day for Sonarika or Hemanth to screw Bollywood beauties lol

You earlier mentioned Chapter is ready now you are saying you are improvising it for Sonarika's arc, then why wait till Saturday?

~RCF

Actually I simply chose Saturday because that is the time readers are quiet comfortable with updates so that people read it comfortably. Many had sujjested weekends and I can understand why since that is a more comfortable timeline for them to enjoy the chapters. 

And yes , it was ready , but when I read it myself , it simply didn't work. I myself felt the chapter was bland with a lot of nothing happening. And it was bothering me how Sonarika's arc wasn't getting the uplift I wanted. So I wanted to explore a small but intriguing part of her past which when I added had to rework the conversation and alter the events that followed it to some extent. I intended to release it on the eve of Women's Day but sadly things didn't work out.

I will post the chapter once I am absolutely sure the quality isn't affected. Saturday is just a target I am trying to follow , maybe I'll post it sooner if I am satisfied with the final outcome.

[RCF]

Actually I simply chose Saturday because that is the time readers are quiet comfortable with updates so that people read it comfortably. Many had sujjested weekends and I can understand why since that is a more comfortable timeline for them to enjoy the chapters. 

And yes , it was ready , but when I read it myself , it simply didn't work. I myself felt the chapter was bland with a lot of nothing happening. And it was bothering me how Sonarika's arc wasn't getting the uplift I wanted. So I wanted to explore a small but intriguing part of her past which when I added had to rework the conversation and alter the events that followed it to some extent. I intended to release it on the eve of Women's Day but sadly things didn't work out.

I will post the chapter once I am absolutely sure the quality isn't affected. Saturday is just a target I am trying to follow , maybe I'll post it sooner if I am satisfied with the final outcome.

Only few readers suggested it and I find it selfish. Most of the stories here get updated all over the week with no timeline esp for only weekends, when so many readers can read it on other stories why restrict the updates on this one to Saturday? There are many readers who will read late nights, or if they get bored on a less work day, it doesn't hurt to post it as soon as it is ready.  Up to you but I feel its unnecessary stalling of the update once complete. 

~RCF

[Harry Jordan]

Only few readers suggested it and I find it selfish. Most of the stories here get updated all over the week with no timeline esp for only weekends, when so many readers can read it on other stories why restrict the updates on this one to Saturday? There are many readers who will read late nights, or if they get bored on a less work day, it doesn't hurt to post it as soon as it is ready.  Up to you but I feel its unnecessary stalling of the update once complete. 

~RCF

Yeah you're right. I did this technique simply to motivate myself to work on my story so that I can post each chapter on regular intervals. I simply used Saturday as a target so that I don't fall behind and create unexpected delays. One thing I have noticed is that usually gaps between each updates is when readers feels less involved with the story. Which is why I assumed a Saturday target so that I can post one chapter every week. But you're right , I'll just post the chapter once my review of it is done and I am satisfied by the final outcome!

[Demeter]

A good story is characterised above all by its dynamism, which captivates the reader. 

‘And this story is a very good one indeed!’

This dynamism is only possible through continuity, which is why the time between the publication of following chapters should be kept as short and consistent as possible 
in order to maintain the reader's interest.

 Another aspect I should mention is that I find it very regrettable that readers (with a few exceptions) do not put their thoughts, expectations, feelings and views about the 
story into words and comment on them, even if it is only two words!

Perhaps some readers will take this as an opportunity to get more involved in the future. 


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Demeter

[DeanWinchester00007]

What a marvelous update . Every time , Harry . You are just ascending with every update . 

That foursome scene is very good . Now I understand you state earlier you are trying to write scene involved with two actress but you gave us bonus with FOURSOME scene . It was so good . 

The Action , I was missing it . I love the gruesome death scene .  How MK does not hold himself when it comes to kill his enemy and I want more   . 

The ENDING was one of the great part of the entire story .

SONARIKA really got some guts speaking to MK about failing of their Marriage . 

I hope when the confrontation scene come , MK does not hold himself , for the sake of maintaining the DECORUM . 

and Finally be free from HEMANT? 

So what happens now ? Is HEMANT gonna cease to exist ? Now that everyone Knows the TRUTH , does MK now be in his True self ? Was HEMANT ever existed ? Was there really a HEMANT or MK was just pretending to be some one else . 

If I have to Choose I would choose HEMANT over MK . I see them as Two complete Individual . Hemant should be the person MK wanted to be . 

and as SONA .

I dont know how she knows the truth ?

It cannot be MK's Mentor , ( thought MK just told He was in love with her Mentor's daughter , So this is like any bollywood movie scene   ) 

But I think it would be VIKRAM who would have revealed Hemant's true Identity , so he can sway SONA from Hemant . 

As for Sona , we need to understand from her point of view. She is an average middle class women , for her to know that the man she slept and had kid was not a simply a man hiding his identity but Very dangerous Psychopathic Man , who butcher half of dozen of people everyday ( again as a reader we know the his truth but She does not know MK ) . The man who terrorize the mafia of half world . 

He never confessed to her , but SONA did confessed her cheating to him . She accepted her fault but HEMANT never did , that makes him coward and He could have told her any time . Directly or Indirectly He did bring danger to her kid and her family , though he saved them too and now his truth is out , Enemies in future will target his family . 

She married a common man not MK , So her anger or what ever she is gonna do with him is some what justifiable . Just because he was good father and husband , did not cheat , would not absolve his fault . 

Just like HEMANT thought that SONA never loved , SONA could also feel the same . The Man who has done lot of shit , is definitely capable of fooling her too . 

Yes , She cheated but HEMANT's hiding his past is not something one should ignore or see it as irrelevant issue or even downplaying it would be wrong thing . 

We have talked about this earlier , And Many members said earlier , That Hemant's hiding his past is much bigger issue than SONA's cheating and Now I agree with it . 

I mean as they say every Saint has past and every sinner has a future . Hemant cannot plays a saint unless He accepts that he is a sinner too . 

And comparing too , SONA's Sin , Hemant's was bigger . Burying your past does not mean You dont own it . He did not give Sona's chance to choose .  Sona cheated but Hemant too . She is paying for her SINS and Now It is Hemant's Time to pay for his . 



Again , Wonderful Update harry . The ending was great . I would love to read Sona's disbelief or confusion or what ever she felt when she learned the truth about Her husband or MK . 

Would not she afraid of Such a Man who terrorize the biggest Mafias of world . 

I hope you  write more scenes of SONA x HEMANT . I missed them , So many updates and no scenes of them together . Now here finally , They gonna meet , Can you please increase the length of next Chapters . Just write more dialogues of them . Anything them fighting , cussing , anything , Just please write a paragraph of SONA X HEMANT  and if there is little bit possibility of them    , There is something call HATEFUCKING so maybe maybe maybe  . 

 Harry . And I agree with your point of Posting updates on SATURDAY NIGHT ( just make it extra worth the wait ) . 


12/10.1 extra for Foursome and other 1 for SONA's Return 


                           
  You are the BEST HARRY

[Demeter]

"Dean Winchester00007"s comments seem understandable and, in part, plausible to me.
There is general agreement, but there are differing views on one fundamental point.

First of all, I would like to emphasise that I greatly appreciate the character of Sonarika and that the sections in which she appears are of particular importance to me. 
The moments they share, full of sensual encounters, are characterised by an exciting atmosphere and, in my humble opinion, have a special appeal that even overshadows 
the moments with Pranitha.

Equating the adultery and affair with Vikram, which Sonarika had behind the back of her husband and the father of her child, with Hemant's silence about his past is
incomprehensible, daring and inaccurate.
At this point, Hemant had largely come to terms with his past and closed this chapter in his life. 
It is quite conceivable that Sonarika played a major role in Michael King's resurrection in Hemant. She felt it was imperative to intervene in the cafeteria in her role as protector. 
In her opinion, Hemant was not sufficiently capable of asserting himself and protecting his family. She felt the need to show him what she expected of a ‘real man’, 
namely one who was capable of protecting himself and his family.

At that point, MK was, in a sense, no longer in existence.
Sonarika harboured the desire and dream of having a strong man by her side, someone she may no longer have seen in Hemant. In my opinion, this urge was also the trigger
for her affair and sexual relationship with Vikram.
Hemant had his first extramarital sex only after Sonarika had revealed her affair with Vikram, not before.
Hemant considered discarding all the past events and making a fresh start with Sonarika if she had not gone to Vikram after their conversation and he had not found her in
Vikram's flat. Hemant had booked a hotel room for that evening, which he wanted to spend with Sonarika. 
However, things turned out differently than planned because he met her at Vikram's flat.

It would also be interesting to explore the following questions: 
What circumstances led Hemant to become Michael King?
Did he possibly have a secret mission?
I would like to cautiously note that one might wonder whether he was possibly working on behalf of government institutions and carrying out certain operations.
The question arises as to whether he was authorised to talk about this, apart from the small circle of people who were responsible for planning and commanding these operational actions?

Questions upon questions, which will hopefully be answered by the author soon...

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Demeter

[RCF]

We are comparing apples to oranges..both are betrayals of different kind. Doesn't matter which sin is bigger or smaller.

What's important is Sonarika has every right to question Hemanth on hiding his past esp when ghosts from his past did not yet die and are looming around to bring war to his door step and He is still claiming custodial on their kids on the name of her infidelity and we have seen she gave up everything but now knowing what she knew she can reclaim what's important. Would an attack on Karan and his death make his sin bigger and justify Sonarika's actions?
He brought Sara to his home and made her his nanny, a living proof of his failure as MK. There ends the matter, him fighting over the risk with Sonarika is stupidity.

At the same time, Sonarika doesn't really know what MK is capable of so she cannot understand the fact that, unless the whole family is together with Hemanth, they are not safe anywhere..a simple grab and go like what happened with the goons when they took Sonarika can happen again if they are not with him and his security.

So couple needs to discuss and come to an agreement and safety of Karan and Anjali should be priority over their petty arguments on who failed this marriage, Marriage is already gone and nothing left to ponder.

~RCF

[Munda007]

We are comparing apples to oranges..both are betrayals of different kind. Doesn't matter which sin is bigger or smaller.

What's important is Sonarika has every right to question Hemanth on hiding his past esp when ghosts from his past did not yet die and are looming around to bring war to his door step and He is still claiming custodial on their kids on the name of her infidelity and we have seen she gave up everything but now knowing what she knew she can reclaim what's important. Would an attack on Karan and his death make his sin bigger and justify Sonarika's actions?
He brought Sara to his home and made her his nanny, a living proof of his failure as MK. There ends the matter, him fighting over the risk with Sonarika is stupidity.

At the same time, Sonarika doesn't really know what MK is capable of so she cannot understand the fact that, unless the whole family is together with Hemanth, they are not safe anywhere..a simple grab and go like what happened with the goons when they took Sonarika can happen again if they are not with him and his security.

So couple needs to discuss and come to an agreement and safety of Karan and Anjali should be priority over their petty arguments on who failed this marriage, Marriage is already gone and nothing left to ponder.

~RCF

Important is the writter has never made Vikram a villain. So Sonarika going back to Vikram is very much likely ending.

[RCF]

Important is the writter has never made Vikram a villain. So Sonarika going back to Vikram is very much likely ending.

Vikram will become villain, its inevitable. He is already being influenced by two women - Meghana and his sister. 

He will follow their footprints thinking he will get Sonarika but will end up becoming that possessive ex who will eventually become a bad memory for Sonarika. 

~RCF

[rk1300051]

When will come next update...?????