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Mamta ek Muse : Chapter 1
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(20-12-2025, 12:42 PM)ricah43165 Wrote: Intense. Well-written. Totally hooked.

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Scene: Next day


Aaj sunday tha aur Mamta aur Kirthi dono hi ghar par the. Mamta kal ko leker bhot sharminda feel kr rhi thi ki kaise wo movie dekh ker aur Kirthi ki bate sun ker emotions me beh gyi aur Kirthi ko kiss kr baithi. Wo Kirthi se nazre nahi mila rhi thi. Kirthi ne bhi ye notice kiya lekin kuch kaha nahi. Dopher ke waqt tha. Kirthi aur Mamta dono aamne samne sofe par baithe the. Kirthi apna phone chala rhi thi aur Mamta ek Book padh rhi thi. Mamta ne aaj ek lining top ke sath knotted shorts dali hui thi. 

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Tabhi darwaje par bell baji aur Kirthi jaldi se uth ker kholne gyi jaise ki use pta ho ki kon hai. Mamta ko lga ki shyd kirthi ka koi parcel aya hoga aur usne main gate ki taraf dekha toh Kirthi ka bf Javed aya tha.

Kirthi aur Javed dono badi hi garamjoshi se mile aur gate par hi kiss krne lge. Mamta ye dekh ker srma gyi aur ankhe neeche krli. Lekin uska man nahi mana aur usne ek bar fir se unki taraf dekha. Iss bar Javed ka hath Kirthi ki gaand par tha aur wo shorts ke upar se use daba rha tha. Jaise hi uski nazar upar Javed ke chehre par gyi toh Javed use hi dekh rha tha. Mamta knew he caught her red handed looking at them. She felt so humiliated and started looking elsewhere. Javed ne use range hatho pakad liya tha. Wo dono ab ander aa gye. Mamta man hi man ye soch rhi thi ki javed ye bat Kirthi ko na bta de verna Kirthi toh uski le legi,

Fir Kirthi aur Javed aakar sofe par baithe aur samne Mamta baithi thi. Tabhi Kirthi kehti hai,
Kirthi : yar Javed aaj mamta tujhe alag alag si nahi lg rhi ? mera mtlb dekh kitna glow hai iske chehre par, 

Mamta ye sun ker hairan hokar javed ko dekhti hai aur fir Kirthi ko. Use smj nahi aya ki Kirthi kya bol rhi hai. Yahi halat javed ki thi,

Javed - Mai smjha nahi Kirthi, alag kaise mtlb ? 

Kirthi -  are dekh toh shi, Mamta ke chehre par dulhan jaisi ronak nahi hai ? Jaisi ronak suhagraat ke bad dulhan ke chehre par hoti hai ? Lgta hai iski kal ki raat bhot Rangeen gyi hai..... ( Kirthi smirk at mamta) ..kyu ri Mamta ...... BEHENCH_OD...... ( she took a long pause deliberately ) .... kaha muh mar ke aayi hai ? ( kehte hue Kirthi ne Mamta ko ankh mari )

Javed hasne lga aur bola - 
"Kirthi tu kabhi Mamta ki tang khichna band nahi karegi na, Maine toh sirf ek baar isko Chhoti Ran_d bola tha par tu toh mujhse bhi 2 kadam aage hai, direct Suhagraat ke bed par lita diya ise"

Mamta felt damn horny hearing out both of them. Kirthi was humiliating her for last night kiss indirectly while Javed was calling her Choti Raa_nd openly. Ufff. Her nipples got tight and she wanted to say something to defend herself but not able to think straight,
Mamta: Bc kitni gandi hai tu Kirthi, aur tum bhi iski taraf ho gye Javed .. jao mai tum dono se bat hi nahi krungi,

ye bol ker mamta ne bura sa muh bana liya lekin ander hi ander wo bhot garam ho gyi thi. Jis tarike se Kirthi ne javed ke samne usse pucha tha ( kyu ri behench_od ... ) it was so ...so humiliating jaise ki mamta sach me koi raa_nd ho. Agar Kirthi ki jagah kisi aur ladki ne aisa pucha hota toh mamta usse sach me bat krna band kr deti but Kirthi was her best friend. Wo ye maanti thi ki Kirthi uske liye kabhi bura nahi sochegi lekin ye gande bate nahi choregi. Isliye mamta ne khud ko aur humiliate hone se bachane ke liye aisa bol diya, 

Javed: Seriously, Mamta? ok I'm sorry from both of us. Kirthi is just... wild. But tujhe pta hai na ye teri sabse jyada care krti hai. Wo toh ye badmash kuch bhi bolti rhti hai. Aur Maal toh tum ho hi Mamta. Itna acha figure hai toh why hide it? You have the kind of body that needs to be admired, not hidden,

Mamta: "Ab tum bhi shuru ho gye Javed.. bs kro.. " 
Mamta liked it when Javed called her *Maal*. She never got such compliment from a guy. Mamta ne ek smile pass ki un dono ko dikhane ke liye ki ab wo naraj nahi hai, 

Kirthi squeezed Javed arm and said,
Kirthi: "Dekha? I told you. She's a good girl, but she needs someone to teach her how to be a modern one, how to be a badass Modern Bitch. We are going to teach you, Meri Jaan, Meri Kutti "

Kirthi ne Jaan aur Kutti dono hi itne sweet tone me bola ki Mamta smj hi nahi payi ye compliment tha ya comment,
Mamta: "Mai jaisi hu thk hu .. "
Mamta ne bs itna hi bola lekin ander hi ander wo khus thi kyoki usko dono se itni attention mil rhi thi,

Kirthi suddenly jump of couch and reached near Mamta,
Kirthi: "Tu mujhse naraj hai kya ? mujhe bilkul achha nahi lagega agar tu haan bolegi toh " 

Kirthi ne ek jhhut mut ka sad sa chehra banate hue pucha jo Mamta ko bhi dikh rha tha. Mamta ne bhi vaise hi tease krte hue kaha -

Mamta: "Haan ..mai tere se naraj hu .. " 

Kirthi: "Dekh na Javed, Teri chhoti raa_nd mujse naraj ho gyi hai behench_od "

Mamta gasp hearing *teri chhoti ra_nd*, it seemed like they have declared that name, without her consent,

Mamta: "dekh fir se ..tu mujhe chhoti ra.. " bolte bolte Mamta ruk gyi aur apna face book me chhipane lgi, 

Tabhi kisi ke hath ne uski book ko hata diya. Mamta ne nazar utha ker dekha toh Javed bhi uske paas aa gya tha...

To be continued...
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Hi fellow readers, Please drop your comments and appreciations to let the story grow.
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#24
Awesome... yeh sali kirthi... mamta ko apne jaise(rand) banake hi chodegi
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#25
Excellent start. Gave you plenty of repu and likes. Please make the seduction slow with lot of build up. Also include full description of Mamta's clothes and figure.
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(21-12-2025, 04:30 AM)Blackdick11 Wrote: Awesome... yeh sali kirthi... mamta ko apne jaise(rand) banake hi chodegi

Absolutely, bro. jesa sangat, wesa rangat.
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(21-12-2025, 04:30 AM)Blackdick11 Wrote: Awesome... yeh sali kirthi... mamta ko apne jaise(rand) banake hi chodegi

Yes it seems like.
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(21-12-2025, 06:07 AM)behka Wrote: Excellent start. Gave you plenty of repu and likes. Please make the seduction slow with lot of build up. Also include full description of Mamta's clothes and figure.

Thanks Love-letter & sure, will add.
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(21-12-2025, 08:06 AM)Bakchod Londa Wrote: Absolutely, bro. jesa sangat, wesa rangat.

Yeah..
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Mamta

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Kirthi, Mamta & Javed

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Scene: A Gift 

Tabhi kisi ke hath ne uski book ko hata diya. Mamta ne nazar utha ker dekha toh Javed bhi uske paas aa gya tha. Ab dono log uske dono taraf baithe the,
Javed: " kya re chhoti raa_nd ? .. hum tujhe bhav de rhe hai toh tu sar par chhad ker Moot rhi rhi hamare " 

Mamta: "Ufff....Tum na pitoge mujhse....ruko abhi btati hu ",
Mamta felt so degraded hearing that line *sar par chad ker moot rhi hai*. She never heard such filthy comment ever in life. At the same time this comment made her damn horny. Apni blushing chhipate hue Mamta javed ko marne ke liye hath badhati hai lekin javed uska hath pakad ker apne hath me daba leta hai, wo dusra hath use krti hai lekin Kirthi uske hath ko apne hath me leker sehlaane lgti hai, 

Kirthi: "tujhe kya lga Javed ? teri chhoti rand me gussa nhi hoga? abhi marti tujhe, bach gya tu.. ( fir mamta ki taraf dekh ker dusre hath se uske baal sehlate hue) ..ufff meri Banno .. itna gussa mat ho " aur itna bol ker Kirthi Mamta ko uske gaal par chum leti hai. Mamta hairan reh jati hai. She never expected ki Kirthi aisa kuch karegi.

Javed: "achaa ye kya bat hui, tune toh mana liya aur mai reh gya. Mai bhi manaunga.. ( mamta ki taraf dekh ker ) .. Sorry meri Maal item .. " aur Javed bhi mamta ke dusre gaal par ek chummi le leta hai.

Mamta: "Sshh.... ruk jao tum dono..."
Mamta dikhave ke liye hath churane ki kosis krti hai par ander se uski chut geeli hone lgti hai, both of them kissed her cheeks without her consent. Javed kiss was totally unexpected for her ? she felt a man lips on her skin for the very first time. Mamta's pussy twiched in pleasure and she gasped. 

Kirthi (muskurayi) : "Achaa meri acting karega sale, abhi dekh" bol ker Kirthi fir se Mamta ke gaal par kiss krti hai lekin iss bar she bite her cheeks softly which made Mamta moan making a sound *Ouchh.....*. Javed also did same but he didn't bite but willingly gave Mamta a Wet Kiss. Mamta could feel Javed drool wetness on her right cheek and feeling so hot and horny, 

Mamta ko pta tha ki ab agar usne inn dono ko nahi roka toh kahi ye dono mil ker use yahi Nangi na kr de, isliye wo apni puri jaan lga ker hath chura leti hai aur khadi ho jati hai, uska chehra iss utter humiliation se pura laal ho gya tha, 

Udhar Javed aur Kirthi dono use dekh ker has rhe the, tabhi
Kirthi mamta ka hath pakadti hai aur kehti hai, 
Kirthi: "sorry Jaan, lekin bs tere sath thodi masti kr rhe the, dil par mat lena ...... baki aur kahi bhi le lena......... acha han javed se maine tere liye ek gift mangvaya hai, baith jara dikhati hu ... "

Kirthi Mamta ko hath pakad ker sofa table par bitha deti hai aur javed ko Ishara krti hai. Javed apni jeb se ek chota si kapda nikalta hai. Mamta ki sanse tham jati hai ki pta nahi ye dono kya gift laye honge...kahi kuch aisa vaisa toh nahi hai. Par dusri taraf Mamta ke ander ki raa_nd ye janne ko betab thi ki wo kya hai,

Javed: "dekh Mamta, kaisa lga ye ? tere liye laaye hai hum puri market ghum ker .. kaisa lga ? "

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Mamta ne dekha ki wo log ek hair scraf leker aaye the. She felt relieved ki kuch aisa vaisa nahi hai. But one part of her felt bad.
Mamta: "Wow ... kitna pyara hai .. mere baalo me kitna acha lagega ye .. thanks Kirthi and Javed " 

Kirthi( grinn krte hue): "Meri banno ye tere baalo ke liye nahi hai, ruk .. sit close to me so that I can tell you ise kaise pehnna hai, jara khadi ho aur mere pas aakar baith. Saying that Kirthi made Mamta get up from sofa table and sit on floor... on her knees.. saying "yaha se easy rahega bandhna Meri jaan",

Mamta felt so horny that she was sitting on floor, literally kneeled down in front of both of them, like some slave. Ye sochte hi Mamta ki chut fadakne lgi,

Kirthi liked it that Mamta quietly sit there,

Kirthi: "Kitni OBEDIENT hai ye Javed, hmne ye gift shi chuna hai .. " aisa bol ker Kirthi Mamta ko wo hair scraf hairs me bandhne ki jagah mamta ki neck par bandhne lgti hai, 

Mamta eyes widened in shock and disbelief,
Mamta: "Kirthi ye toh hair scraf hai .. yaha garden par kyu bandh ... " isse pehle ki Mamta pura bolti Kirthi ne use chup rehne ka ishara kiya aur uski garden par uss scraf ko acche se bandh diya aur fir kehti hai,

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Kirthi: "Uff dekh na Javed, Bilkul KUTTI ke PATTE jaisa lag rha hai Mamta ke upar ........Meri jaan, ab tu lag rhi hai.... Proper Kutti " 
keh ker Kirthi Mamta ke forhead ko chum leti hai, 

Mamta felt so horny hearing *Kutti ke Patte jaisa* and *proper kutti*. That hair scraf coldness she could feel on her neck, giving her feel of a real bitch. She moaned like "Uffff Kirthi ... ye kya ....bol ...rhi..hai ",

Javed: "Proper nahi PALTU KUTTI bol Kirthi"
Mamta was like "Shhh...javed..ye..kya ?" 
Javed pyar se Mamta ke sir par hath ferta hai jaise wo sach me koi kutiya ho, fir uske gale me bande patte ko khich ker dekhta hai aur kehta hai, 
"Ye jyada tight toh nahi lg rha Mamta?" 

Mamta felt so degraded hearing that question. They have turned her a into a paltu bitch and now asking humiliating things. Mamta agar horny nahi hoti toh gussa krti ya bhag jaati. But she was damn horny and their questions were making her more wet. She was feeling so good in that Degradation. Her pussy was fluctuating. When Javed asked that question Her body freeze and she shake her head in No slowly, 
Mamta: "n..nahi ... lekin .. " 

Kirthi: "lekin vekin kuch nahi .. dekh hum dono tere liye bhot pyar se laaye hai toh ISE KABHI UTARNA MAT .. verna hum sochenge tu hamare pyar ki respect nai krti Mamta" 
Keh ker Kirthi wo patta pakad ker Mamta ko paas khichti hai aur uski nose par ek kiss kr deti hai, 

Mamta closed her eyes in heat of moment, feeling Kirthi lips on her nose and just then a click sound was there. Javed ne unki ek photo khich li thi. Mamta's pussy twiched in pleasure realising that,
Mamta: "Javed, delete kr ise pls, photo kyu... "

Javed: "Kr dunga Darling, itni kya jaldi hai, let me create a whatsapp group of three of us and upload it there first. "

Mamta use mana krti hai par wo kaha manne vala tha. Thodi der me hi Mamta ka phone vibrate hota hai aur wo vaha baithe baithe check krti hai. Javed has created a group named *PROUD PARENTS* aur Mamta aur Kirthi ko add krke wo photo usme dal di thi. Mamta felt so humiliating seeing her photo,that group name. It was too much for her. Par abhi toh story baki thi. 

Javed: "ye toh galat hai yar ..Kirthi .. tune toh apni kut_ti ke sath photo khichva li lekin mai toh reh gya." 

Kirthi: "toh ab khichva le .. chalo selfie lete hai " 

Javed turant khada hokar Mamta ke pas aata hai, fir thoda jhuk jata hai, Kirthi bhi Mamta ke pas aakar khadi ho jati hai uske peeche. Javed selfie mode on krta hai aur Kirthi ko phone deta hai. Kirthi jaise hi photo click krne vaali hoti hai Javed kehta hai "Cheese..." Mamta thoda hesitate krte hue smile krti hai aur tabhi javed ka hath mamta ke shoulder se hat ker uske gale par aa jata hai aur Mamta ki aise patte me javed ke hatho choke hote hue photo click ho jati hai. Mamta was getting goosebumps now. She was literally feeling like a owned bit_ch. She made a "Ummmmmm..." sound out of heat when Javed grabbed her neck.

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Javed Mamta ke gaal par ek kiss krta hai aur kehta hai "Good girl .. " aur vapas sofe par baith jata hai, thodi der me hi wo ye photo whatsapp group me dal deta hai and uss photo ko dekh ker Mamta ki chut buri tarah fadfadane lgti hai. She was in such a filthy bitchy pose with them. Photo me uska smile krna ye dikha rha tha that she is willingly part of this photo, Damnn. Kirthi bhi wo photo dekh ker badi khush hoti hai and her eyes sparkled,

Kirthi: "Waah Javed maan gye tujhe, aise toh hum koi REAL me kutiya pakad ker laaye toh wo bhi itni Obidently smile na kre jaise mamta ne ki hai, well done Mamta Meri Jaan " 

Na jane kyo Mamta ko wo compliment bhot achha lgta hai aur wo smile krti hai. Mamta ki chut ne uske dimag par kabu pa liya tha. Wo kuch smjhne ki halat me nahi thi. Mamta ab bhi neeche baithi hui apne phone me uss photo ko, uss group ko ghoor rhi thi. Tabhi group ka naam update hokar *Proud Parents* se *PROUD OWNERS * ho jata hai. When Mamta saw that, her pussy leaked some juice in excitment. She was their offical bitch now. Damn.

Kirthi: "han ye naam shi hai. Parents suit nahi kr rha tha. Kutti ke liye group hai toh Owners hona chahiye, kyu Mamta baby? "

Mamta: "Uff...shut up Kirthi ... " 
It was too much for her to handle. Mamta's panty was so wet. Uska man kr rha tha wo jaldi se apne room me bhag jaye aur apni chut ragad dale. Mamta excused herself and walked towards her room with quick steps to rub her pussy wildly ...

To Be Continued...
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Nice story keep updating
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Scene: Self Service

Mamta apne room me aate hi sidha bathroom me gyi aur darwaja band kr liya. Usne apni shorts utari aur neeche apni panty ki taraf dekha. Mamta ki black panty uski chut ke ras se bhigi hui thi. Usne jaldi se apni panty utar ker bathroom ke gate vale hanger par tang di aur toilet sheet ko band krke us par baith gyi. Kirthi and Javed words were still echoing in her mind ... *Obedient*.. *PALTU*...*Proud Owners* ....  kisi paltu kutti ki tarah Kirthi ka uske mathe ko chumna ..Ufff.... Javed ka usko kiss krna.. Shhhh...it was too much to handle,

Mamta ko dhyan hi nahi rha kab uski ungliya uski kunwari choot ke upar chali gyi. Wo hamesa apni chut ke baalo ko trim krke rakhti thi. Aur aaj use apni chut ki halat dekh ker aisa lga jaise use sach me ek partner ki jarurt hai. Uski chut puri bheegi hui thi.... paani tapka rhi thi. Mamta ne apni back peeche diwar par lagayi aur apni dono jangho ko kisi ran_di ki tarah .. faila liya. Wo apni chut me fingering krte hue siskariya bharne lgi -
"Ahhh.....Shhhh...Ummm...han mai ...mai tum logo ki ran_di hu .. shhh...tumhari paltu kutti hu .. ahh kitna ache se khyal rakhte ho tum log mera .. ufff mamta .. you got such a good parents ... ( fir muskurate hue) ummm ..Good Owners... mere liye gift laye .. Ahhh .. what a hot... gift " 

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Mamta's fingers were getting wet from her pussy juice.... noise of her fingering and moans were filling the bathroom. Tabhi Mamta ka dhyan apne gale me latke PATTE par jata hai, wo sochne lgti hai ki han isi naam se bula rhe the wo log isko.... ...mamta ka patta ... nahi .. Kutti ka Patta. Mamta ne uske ek end ko apne muh me liya aur masti me choosne lgi. She recalled ki kaise Kirthi kal raat uske lips chus rhi thi...unhe kat rhi thi. Agar wo vapas apne kamre me nahi jaati toh Kirthi sach me usse apni Chut chatwa leti...Ahhh... ye thought aate hi Mamta's pussy leaking more juice. She continued murmuring to herself -
"Ahhh..Kirthi .. meri behen .. meri jaan .. tere lips .. ummm.. kitna acha taste the unka, ... ummm ...kaash ek bar  .. Ummm...tu kitni badmash hai .. .. ufff ... mujhe bigad rhi hai .. ahh you both are spoiling me .. Ufff ..I am getting spoiled.. I am behaving like a Slut... ahhh ... randi .. ufff ... han ..javed ki chhoti rand ..... kitni care krta hai wo meri ... Ummmm..shyd mai pehle se aisi hu .. Ummmm"

Mamta fingers and nasty talks were showing their magic and a strong orgasm started building inside her. Toilet sheet uski chut ke paani se bheeg rhi thi. Mamta ne apna phone uthaya aur wo group khol ker apni wo humiliating photos dekhne lgi jisse wo jaldi se fariq ho jaye -
"Ahhh ..javed .. Kirthi ..sach me kitni Obedient lg rhi hu mai .. Ufff...tumhara hath javed... I can still feel it around my neck ....Shhhh....Krithi ...meri behen ... That forhead kiss ... Damn.... mujhe tum dono ki modern bitch banna hai .. ahh ...tum dono mujhe jaisi rakhna chahte ho rakh lo .. ummm..randi ki tarah rakhoge na.... kutti ... paltu ... uffff ... Kirthi ..mai reh lungi .. mai toh kutti hu na .. Kirthi ... shyd jaisa tune kaha tha Kirthi ... ek Padiashi raand ... Aahhh....I am coming for you meri kutti ... Ahhh..... Yes ... Fuckk .. yess .. Ahh ... Kirthiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......I am cuminng..........URGHHHHHHHHHH "
Mamta got so high while looking at her pics and her pussy exploded. She was squirting like a slut in the heat. Itni bar chut ke paani me ander bahar krne se uski fingers me bhi wrinkles pd gye the.

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Mamta ne dheere dheere fingering kam ki aur thodi der vaise hi rhi. Uske Ander ki saari garmi bahar nikal chuki thi. Aisa lg rha tha jaise uska pura badan tut rha ho.

She was feeling so Satisfied and happy. Itna achha use shyad hi kabhi lga ho. She was breathing heavily. A grinn was on her face thinking ki aaj wo koi porn dekh ker nahi balki khud ke liye ye sab soch ker fariq hui thi.. Use jara bhi guilt feel nahi ho rha tha kyoki uski nazar me usne kisi ke sath kuch real me nahi kiya tha balki sirf socha tha. 

Mamta took 5 more mins to get calm. Then she picked up jet spray and cleaning her pussy lips. Usne ab bhi apni janghe kisi ran_di ki tarah phaila rakhi thi aur apni chut par jet spray chala rhi thi. 


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Thanda thanda paani jaise uski chut ki bachi hui garmi ko shant kr rha tha. Finally she got up, cleaned the toilet sheet and came out of bathroom. She pulled a new panty from wardrobe and wore it then same shorts. Fir usne mirror ke aage jakar apna huliya thk kiya aur bed par aakar let gyi. Use itni thakan ho gyi thi ki bed par let te hi use neend aa gyi. Karib 2 ghnte bad uske gate par jor se knock hui tab jakar uski ankhe khuli, usne phone me dekha toh sham ke 5 bj gye the ...... 

To be Continued .....
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The way you’re unfolding this story is brilliant. The pacing feels very natural, and it makes the plot much more immersive. I wanted to tell you not to feel pressured to reach the sex scene too quickly—I’m genuinely enjoying the build-up and the depth you're giving the characters. Keep up the amazing work.

Good Luck

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(22-12-2025, 12:23 PM)Vihaan Wrote: The way you’re unfolding this story is brilliant. The pacing feels very natural, and it makes the plot much more immersive. I wanted to tell you not to feel pressured to reach the sex scene too quickly—I’m genuinely enjoying the build-up and the depth you're giving the characters. Keep up the amazing work.

Good Luck

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Absolutely loving it, bro
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#39
wonderful ,didnt expected that this will be that good

however its going fast ,make it slow ,because seduction is much better than sex
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excellent
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