[Vinty03]

S0 hot update

[damien123456]

Hi Suraj sir, the update is great, but I didn’t like the direction it took. You initially showed Shipra in a high position, but now she’s portrayed as a whore. The stranger might be Salim, I think, but I’m not convinced by how you changed Shipra. How could a highly educated and ambitious woman fall for such desires? I know it’s just fantasy, but like other stories in the forum, turning a woman into a whore means you don’t need to show her in a high position like in the beginning. Your story stood out as the best in the forum because of the cat-and-mouse dynamic between Shipra and Patode, but now she’s fully submissive to him, and I really don’t like this turn.

If she shares herself with others in her moments of euphoria, it feels like something familiar, but I don’t think there’s any new element or surprise in your story, apart from her fully embracing that role. When will she come to her senses?

[RCF]

Hi Suraj sir, the update is great, but I didn’t like the direction it took. You initially showed Shipra in a high position, but now she’s portrayed as a whore. The stranger might be Salim, I think, but I’m not convinced by how you changed Shipra. How could a highly educated and ambitious woman fall for such desires? I know it’s just fantasy, but like other stories in the forum, turning a woman into a whore means you don’t need to show her in a high position like in the beginning. Your story stood out as the best in the forum because of the cat-and-mouse dynamic between Shipra and Patode, but now she’s fully submissive to him, and I really don’t like this turn.

If she shares herself with others in her moments of euphoria, it feels like something familiar, but I don’t think there’s any new element or surprise in your story, apart from her fully embracing that role. When will she come to her senses?

Agreed, though this is expected as part of the story. Despite slow seduction, Patode grooming her which took almost 20 chapters, we should be convinced now that she changed for good. She craves wild sex now and its evident. I still think when this is over she will be mad at Patode for taking her to a park and sharing her with Salim thinking this is coincidence and not planned. Eventually Salim would also get her in his own time with out Patode so this is a familiar arc that will continue until Patode holds upper hand. 

I guess only when Toppo gets her then she will truly realizes her downfall as she hates Toppo and will never willingly give herself to him unless coerced by Patode so that I think would be turning point. 

~RCF

[navytut]

Excellent update. Loving where this is going. The step by step process of turning her into exhibitionist and then opening up to others is neatly developed. It's as thrilling to read as imagining. This layer by layer of unraveling of her debauchery is well written. Waiting for the reveal of the villager's identity. In the meantime, that's an interesting progress in Shrutika's narrative.

[eslx1212]

The colour photo showing Shipra humping on Patode's cock is too hot. Superb work with the photos.

The narration is good, but Suraj, please do something about the quantity of talking from Patode while having sex. It is not only unnatural that anyone talks that much but it is actually having an off-putting effect on Shipra, unless you deliberately intend that for her. While reading though, it is annoying.

And try not to make us wait too long for the next part.

[Umavictor32]

Hi Suraj sir, the update is great, but I didn’t like the direction it took. You initially showed Shipra in a high position, but now she’s portrayed as a whore. The stranger might be Salim, I think, but I’m not convinced by how you changed Shipra. How could a highly educated and ambitious woman fall for such desires? I know it’s just fantasy, but like other stories in the forum, turning a woman into a whore means you don’t need to show her in a high position like in the beginning. Your story stood out as the best in the forum because of the cat-and-mouse dynamic between Shipra and Patode, but now she’s fully submissive to him, and I really don’t like this turn.

If she shares herself with others in her moments of euphoria, it feels like something familiar, but I don’t think there’s any new element or surprise in your story, apart from her fully embracing that role. When will she come to her senses?

I completely disagree to this... Firstly understand the amount of time taken by Suraj to make  shipra to this level....secondly if you focus on namrata's response and shipra response you can find that shipra still tries to keep up her reputation by bouncing back or speak ruthless to patode...only in this update, she is being bit submissive but compared to Namrata her attitude still has that swag... One more thing which we have to understand is her situation...she is not having a supportive husband,no sex,no love nothing...so when you have a person opposite to her who keep on bringing out her tragedy in life and tell her that he can be better person, automatically shipra will get inclined to patode....so I don't think so shipra behaving like this in this update...and I think till she gets inclined to toppo this will continue....

[Umavictor32]

The colour photo showing Shipra humping on Patode's cock is too hot. Superb work with the photos.

The narration is good, but Suraj, please do something about the quantity of talking from Patode while having sex. It is not only unnatural that anyone talks that much but it is actually having an off-putting effect on Shipra, unless you deliberately intend that for her. While reading though, it is annoying.

And try not to make us wait too long for the next part.

 What makes this story different from other stories is patode speech my dear....patode is not just doing sex with shipra....he is corrupting her...he is making her submissive...he is breaking her...he is destroying her thought process step by step ......secondly this is not visual media....while writting to express how a woman is verbally corrupted we need to follow this style..... I would expect more of patode talks which I feel is a highlight in this story...

[Kore shivkant]

Its really an awesome update worth the wait....... Eagerly waiting for the next update...... waiting for the reaction of Shipra after sex.......

[NityaSakti]

Finally shipra turned like a cheap roadside whore. Good one.

[drlund]

Dont listen to anyone.. the update is awesome.. and story is magnificient and getting in the direction it intended..
Always waiting for future updates

[desiass]

You did it again……story title is getting justified now.

[Awesomeabhit]

The story seems to go far. So please provide frequent updates instead of a month wait. Just want to see Shipra more bold and wild in coming episodes.

[masochist]

shipra should open her white bra and let the guy suck her nipples.

[Thilka]

Dear suraj give update regularly otherwise momentum will lost

[Strangerstf]

Excellent update..
Waiting for the next one

[Kore shivkant]

Waiting for the next update Suraj........

[Strangerstf]

When can we expect the next update?
Please give us the next update as soon as possible.

Thank you.

[slammaster]

We need that holiday special

[suryaspk]

It's going to be a month.. tell us when next update is coming.

[Kore shivkant]

When will be the next update?????