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(26-11-2025, 11:45 PM)Munda007 Wrote: I think end is nearing. some twist and turn but end is nearing

Yup , I think it too . Few more updates and story will wrap up .
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Chapter 27 - WTF . What happened ? Felt little Rushed though it contained some good moments and scenario but still fall short . 

7/10 .

Missed opportunity ? I have been waiting for this moment , Hemant x Meghna getting their shot  and Then Sona x Hemant confrontation and it was perfect situation to show SONA' jealousy and insecurity , Hemant should have teased her more and then 

Finally STAND OFF BETWEEN SONA x MEGHNA . SONA should have understand her plan  or misinterpret MEGHNA's intention such as Pushing VIKRAM on her and Taking HEMANT or simply more drama was needed there . Both of these incident deserved at least a paragraph to create a dynamic and more tension among the characters . 

POOR RITESH , His death was brutal . Highlight of the Story . Also we get to know how brutal and dangerous ZARIR is . His and MICHAEL KING BATTLE will be fun to watch . 

The story suddenly moves so fast . ZARIR moving India .

ANJANA . Her plan was despicable but so simple and efficient . SONA will fall in her trap . She is so stupid . Even after every thing has happened one thing she failed to do is MOVE AWAY FROM VIKRAM . 
I dont how hard it is for her to just simply AVOID him . Confessing that she does not feels like same for him and that she never loved him but still linger around him and telling him move on etc etc is what giving VIKRAM the false hope . 
I think VIKRKAM still has a chance with her at this point this is getting so repetitive . Her actions remains the same . Even after so many things happened She just could not get away from him . Is it that hard for her to just completely Ghost him .It is not that she could not , She just dont want to . 

And now , She is surrounded by ENEMIES - ANAJANA, SCORNEFUL MEGHNA , and VIKRAM . There is no way she could fight them . Hemant of course , Her guardian angle will save her but He could not help her with her feelings . He can help her physically but mentally and psychologically she is not that tough , THE TRIO will manipulate her , trap her , Capture her , and Imprison her with VIKRAM as her JAILER . She is just too stupid at this point now . I guess Sona needs to give reality check to VIKRAM or Behave in a way that shows she despised him or rudely shut him off or anything that made him feels like he is just like another stranger for her until I dont see any way for her to survive on her own . Her friendly nature towards VIKRAM is the problem . Now He is moving to GOA too . Her whole plan fall flat before even starting . Does She not thinks  How Hemant would react when comes to know that both of them moving to GOA . Hemant already accepted that which make him weak , he will lose focus thus create a window of opportunity for his enemies to attack . 

HEMANT is getting distracted , now SANJANA is after him . But at least he got VIKRAM's file and BAJAJ CORP's name under his RADAR . I hope Harry has planned at least one confrontation between VIKRAM and MICHAEL KING . He needs to get know Who is the MAN he messed up .  

HEMANT at this point is very vulnerable , Even though He knew that this day will come , But GOA's plan of VIKRAM and SONA will shook him and Then Sona moving to delhi , Then with ANJANA's family , THEN VIKRAM is also gonna be there , It will hurt him . Let us see How he handle himself , More women to ease his pain , PRANITHA  , Specially TARA . She got perfect opportunity and she will exploit this. 

Both Husband and Wife , VULNERABLE and SURROUNDED by ENEMIES . They dont have anyone but each other even though they are separated. Let see How they fight and survive . 

THE SEPARATION was emotional . And THAT AIRPORT scene was so surreal  and bittersweet . A moment of SOLACE for both of them . After a long time we get to see both of them together so it was needed and expected and executed well for that PRAISE FOR YOU HARRY    Iex Iex Iex . The longing they felt for each other , emotionally and Physically was well evident . I hope this fuels their passion for each other again and ignite the  old flame , the fire again . From the ASHES of Betrayal , Pain , and heart break , Their love rises like Phoenix and protects them in UPCOMING WAR on both of them and Guides them towards  each other . 


Quote:'I am yours. I have always been yours'

"Whatever happens, Hemant… I will always love you. This is not an ending. It’s just… a path we have to walk so we can find our way back to each other"

"You are mine. I am yours. And we will learn that truth from our life forward!"

Few lines , Yet they carry so much weight . Lovely Ending with Hope and Warmth .  Angel


Again , Wonderful Update , Harry .  congrats thanks . 

and I Hope you are fine and well .  Flexed-bicep Flexed-bicep
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Though 1 thing I am still confused about is Did Anjana knew about Hemant's Past ? if not then How did she come to know about his Past ?

Anjana's plan was simple , Get Sona x Vikram together . Vikram will leave the company and settles with Sona . She has nothing to do with HEMANT .

So , Did she get info about SONA and then on her HUSBAND , HEMANT . That is how she knows Hemant's past and then to neutralize him She met ZARIR .

Or she was already in touch of ZARIR and Then at some point ZARIR identify the HEMANT and revealed her HEMANT's True Identity .

Maybe i missed some parts or forgot .

Or

It will reveal in future UPDATE !!!

Thanks again , Harry .
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It is a thoroughly successful chapter with striking moments that hint at the turbulent and emotional times ahead.

In this context, five aspects stand out:

° Meghna's overzealous ambitions to destroy Soranika, adorned with a great deal of hatred. 
She was indirectly but very clearly warned - about Sonarika - by Hement. If she makes the slightest mistake, she will pay a high price for it. That is certain!

° Anjana's lust for power is very pronounced and rigorous. She does not even shy away from murder. 
The most obvious war is being fought here in this field: Zarir and his allies on one side and Michael King on the other.

° Tara's plan to clear the field from within seems to be well prepared and implemented. She currently poses the greatest threat by attacking Hement at his weakest point, namely his family. 
Exposing her double-dealing and eliminating her will be time-consuming and exhausting. 

° Vikram's sweet talk and his constant attempts to manipulate and win back Sonarika are also noteworthy. He will try everything to achieve his goal. 
However, he has come under the scrutiny of Michael King, which could have devastating consequences for him in the end. On the other hand, he must also be wary of Anjana and Zarir, who see him as an obstacle to their campaign. 

° Sonarika is determined to find her way back to her family and her life partner, husband, friend and great love, Hement. Her inner turmoil and instability are the biggest obstacles in her path and must first be overcome before she can move forward.
Above all, she must be strong-willed in order to keep Vikram at bay and Meghna in check. This will be a mammoth task for her, one that she can only accomplish with the help of Hement, Ragini and Moini.

The end of the chapter was overwhelming: full of emotions, longing, feelings and suffering... but also marked by uncertainty.


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(26-11-2025, 11:45 PM)Munda007 Wrote: I think end is nearing. some twist and turn but end is nearing

I see it differently, because in my opinion this story has potential for another twenty chapters.
There are many windows from the past that have not yet been opened, many dark spots that have not been illuminated, and relationships that have not been told.
And then comes the present, where everything is just beginning, and with it a new era that is completely different from the past.
These are just a few aspects that point to this. 

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(27-11-2025, 02:02 PM)DeanWinchester00007 Wrote: Chapter 27 - WTF . What happened ? Felt little Rushed though it contained some good moments and scenario but still fall short . 

Few lines , Yet they carry so much weight . Lovely Ending with Hope and Warmth .  Angel


Again , Wonderful Update , Harry .
Nice Observations , I will provide some context.


The reason Sonarika doesn't simply GHOST or IGNORE Vikram is because she accepts she not only betrayed Hemant but Vikram as well. At this point in her arc , she realized even though the sex and the passion with Vikram was breathtaking , at the end of the day , those moments fuelled her sickness , her hypersexuality. And she was basically unknowingly using Vikram for physical needs. Now that she knows her mistake , she wants Vikram to move away willingly rather than clung to her because of his 'Love' for her. Because Sonarika at this point , can never reciprocate it anymore. Her heart , her mind and her soul only sees one man as her love , and it is her Hemant. And the beauty of the arc is that she is willing to sacrifice her life with Hemant only for Hemant's peace and his happiness. The kiss in the airport was her all out attempt to show Hemant that she still aches for him , and that no amount of fuckings Vikram gives , he can never take Hemant's place in her heart. Because Hemant wasn't just a husband in her life , he was her savior , the one who came in her life at the right time and rescued her from her own storm of descend. But at the same time , Sonarika is willing to move away from Hemant just so Hemant isn't bothered by her presence in his life. She is willing to sacrifice a future with him so that he no longer feel hurt by her and her presence. This shows that despite all the experiences with all the men , Hemant was her true love and companion. Will she find her way back to him, only future will tell.


Well the Meghna-Sonarika confrontation was short and sweet because this is not the end of their rivalry. Because from now , things will escalate much further between them. Sonarika only doubts Meghna and her intentions now , she is still unaware of all the cruel things Meghna had already done to her and her family. And Meghna is only going to escalate the situation much further. The real heat of their conflict is only about to begin. But the biggest mistake Meghna has done right now , is expose herself , to Hemant of all people. And right now , Meghna has no idea , she has locked herself in a cage against a Lion!



Though Vikram is portrayed desperate , he is not exactly a villain in this story either. He is also a victim just like Sonarika , he too is a pawn in someone else's game. His love for Sonarika is indeed genuine , but half of it is stemmed from a past love he lost. He doesn't wanna loose Sonarika as he lost Sarika. And now he intends to up his game and truly change so that he can earn her admiration and respect again. But will we earn that and finally win her back? Or will he finally see the true villains in his life and fight back? That only time will tell.


As for Anjana , she knows things about Hemant and Michael King that Daraaksh has told her. And she isn't concerned about Hemant because her target is never him , but Sonarika. As long as Anjana is concerned , her only mission is making Sonarika and Vikram a couple and have Vikram move away from the business so that Anjana can claim the BajajCorp empire all for herself. She doesn't care about Hemant as he is Daraaksh's problem.


And then there is the mysterious Tara , a pawn planted by Daraaksh to wreck Hemant's life from within. Will she succeed in wrecking Hemant or will The Eagle see the Snake and hunt it down? Only time will tell.


For now , the attention will be towards next chapter as we will finally witness Operation Jewel Thief commence and the ripples of that event bringing major changes not just to the characters but also the world. So brace yourself , because the ride is about to get INTENSE!  flamethrower
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I think you should get into a logical direction so that Hemant and Sonarika can welcome the New Year (2026) together.
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Story is no where near to completion. I suspect like Demeter said, we can easily see 20 more chapters as now part 2 is also merged into this one.

Anyone underestimating Sonarika are not reading between the lines properly. We have the seen how Hemanth turned himself into MK and groomed himself back to his peak, we will now witness the growth of Sonarika...She will turn the company she is heading to into an empire, Also she will be able to easily handle Meghana, Meghana has advantage all this time that Sonarika depended on her for her life's crucial decisions, once that role is taken by Ragini, she saw the real difference between a manipulator and real friend. Sonarika is possessive by nature and can be fierce when it comes to her family. She has shown her side once to Sandeep and now to Meghana, Imagine what she will do to Meghana if she ever finds out that Meghana killed her sister and played huge part in destroying her marriage.

As for Vikram, I have no doubt in my mind that she has out grown his charm and won herself back, hence you can see real difference in the way she is missing her husband. Even when she signed divorce papers, she was in two minds but now she has clarity. Sonarika will never fall again for Vikram even if Vikram changes himself for her...Only way she can go to Vikram at the end probably if Hemant chooses someone else as his life partner.

Of all the characters the most silly one is Anjana lol
On one end she thinks Daaraaksh cares for her, he is just using her and if needed he will just kill her as well...classic Aish role in Khakee movie...other end she thinks she can play with Sonarika with sympathy, Sonarika clearly is not the old one. She can think clearly plus she has Ragini to clear her thoughts. Its not going to be easy to trap Sonarika and Vikram at one place now. I can clearly Vikram trying many times in Goa but I doubt he would succeed.

Interesting aspect would be to see how she will find truth about Meghana and how she will get her revenge. Since last 2 chapters Sonarika's arc becoming more interesting than Hemant.

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(28-11-2025, 07:06 AM)RCF Wrote: Of all the characters the most silly one is Anjana lol
On one end she thinks Daaraaksh cares for her, he is just using her and if needed he will just kill her as well...classic Aish role in Khakee movie...other end she thinks she can play with Sonarika with sympathy, Sonarika clearly is not the old one. She can think clearly plus she has Ragini to clear her thoughts. Its not going to be easy to trap Sonarika and Vikram at one place now. I can clearly Vikram trying many times in Goa but I doubt he would succeed.

Interesting aspect would be to see how she will find truth about Meghana and how she will get her revenge. Since last 2 chapters Sonarika's arc becoming more interesting than Hemant.

~RCF

Nice observations , though I wanna add one aspect clearly.

The Anjana's arc with Daraaksh is not of love , but rather two individuals complimenting each other in achieving their goals. Anjana is not exactly "in love" with Daraaksh , but he is the man who supports her in her quest , which is to take over the entire Bajaj Corp empire. And both have their goals interlapped so that they can get what they want. Anjana wants Hemant and Sonarika to separate so that Sonarika can be manipulated into a life with Vikram so that Vikram will move away from the family business and live his life he desires with her. She doesn't have ill intentions for Vikram as she believes his feelings for Sonarika is genuine. But she desires and wants to gain control of the entire Bajaj Empire as a "fuck you" and revenge towards her father who has treated her mother and herself terribly all her life. And on the contrary , Daraaksh wants Sonarika and Hemant to separate so that Hemant fully changes and transforms into Michael King so that he can take his revenge. He initiates a dual strategy where he is wrecking Hemant's personal life so that his normal life is destroyed and Michael King can return to his old ways. Which is why he is only targeting his marriage and none of the other ladies in Hemant's life as he believes they are a catalyst to resurrect Michael. Plus he injected Tara into Hemant's life as a virus to crack Hemant from within. Someone who can stab him in his back when the times comes and wreck him inside out. But what neither Daraaksh nor Anjana notices is that Hemant doesn't want to be Michael , he is doing everything to put Michael to rest , and for Micheal to put to rest , he has to avenge the loved ones he lost and finish old scores so that he can be Karan's father and become Hemant that is no longer bothered by Michael and his existence within him. But now , Sonarika with her kiss planted a small seed of hope in Hemant that somewhere in the future , he can bring back his family together and his Sona will return. This will be the start of their growth arc and finally see and realize how much they matter to each other. And this is also the turning point from where Sonarika will transform from Hemant's weakness to Hemant's strength as she will evolve in her new life becoming the woman she was supposed to be. In short , bad news for Meghna all together!
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Sonarika moving to Goa seek some peace, but Vikram’s ‘I have a hotel there too’ revelation just snatched away her peace again. Now that he knows the address of Sonarika’s VATIKA Botanical Research and Development Center, he’ll show up whenever he feels like it, using any excuse he can find just to drop by.
Hope is such a bitch,,,, instead of facing reality, it pushes you to live in "maybe". And VIKRAM is totally stuck in that same mess.

Now that Sonarika will in Goa and Vikram is relocating there as well, I think Hemant’s mind will be plagued with baseless fears, even torment him with vivid, imagined nightmares, force him to believe a lie as truth...

I felt bad for Ritesh. he thought he was going to surprise Anjana, but instead Anjana and Daraaksh ended up giving him a brutal, heartbreaking surprise.

The mask Meghna wore "best friend, sister, well-wisher" has finally fallen off. now the real show starts. Two once-inseparable girls turning into foes… this showdown is going to be juicy. Until now, Meghna had been manipulating Sonarika like a puppet master. but now it seems Anjana has stepped into that role fully prepared with her own plans to control Sonarika. 
Let's see whether her 'sympathy card' works or not... though it seems like it will. This sympathy tactic tends to work quickly on women :)

The separation was heartfelt, but it lingered with a feeling of hope.
In Hemant and Sonarika’s case, there’s some hope for them… but for Vikram, not a chance at all.
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(28-11-2025, 04:38 PM)Blackdick11 Wrote:
Quote:Sonarika moving to Goa seek some peace, but Vikram’s ‘I have a hotel there too’ revelation just snatched away her peace again. Now that he knows the address of Sonarika’s VATIKA Botanical Research and Development Center, he’ll show up whenever he feels like it, using any excuse he can find just to drop by.
Hope is such a bitch,,,, instead of facing reality, it pushes you to live in "maybe". And VIKRAM is totally stuck in that same mess.

I hope she realizes this , that her plan moving to GOA will back fire on her very badly . VIKRAM will try to meet her and eventually at some point she will succumb to him , May be out of pity , Guilt of using VIKRAM or any other etc reason and HEMANT already knows that VIKRAM Is moving there too , and brought a FAMILY HOUSE . 

I mean can you blame VIKRAM for having  hope ? This is not first time Sona breaking up with him . Last time when she broke up with him , They hardly stayed apart from each other and then eventually end up fucking together and dreaming to live together. 

 This time when she broke up with him , She is still having a friendly relation with him , caring for him , advising him to move on and so on . Apart from words , Sona has not done anything , she has not taken any step which shows that She is actually serious this time , and their break up is permanent and also VIKRAM does not know or understand Sona's whole transformation which happened in last few months . For him this might be like , Oh dont worry , She will come to him again just like she did in past . And why not , Sona has not done anything to show how serious she is this time and Now is going to be DIVORCEE soon . So He is single and She is single , There is no reason for him to believe that they are not gonna end up together . 



Quote:Now that Sonarika will in Goa and Vikram is relocating there as well, I think Hemant’s mind will be plagued with baseless fears, even torment him with vivid, imagined nightmares, force him to believe a lie as truth...

Yup . I mean , After what happened outside the AIRPORT , and then Both of them moving GOA . I dont know how Hemant gonna react to this . 


Quote:The mask Meghna wore "best friend, sister, well-wisher" has finally fallen off. now the real show starts. Two once-inseparable girls turning into foes… this showdown is going to be juicy. Until now, Meghna had been manipulating Sonarika like a puppet master. but now it seems Anjana has stepped into that role fully prepared with her own plans to control Sonarika. 
Let's see whether her 'sympathy card' works or not... though it seems like it will. This sympathy tactic tends to work quickly on women :)

Hahahaha , I think The sympathy card will work on SONA. ANJANA is turning out to be very dangerous . Even if it does not work on SONA , I am afraid this whole situation some how gonna affect HEMANT. I mean after the AIRPORT interaction , and then Him seeing SONA with VIKRAM and His family , A PERFECT FAMILY would give him a big shock. I mean in AIRPORT she was saying I AM YOURS FOR EVER and then Meeting with the family of Man who loves you so much and I am sure ANJANA and Meghna will make sure that HEMANT sees this and will cook up more stories about VIKRAM x SONA getting together to hurt HEMANT  , And then TARA will play her game . This whole situation will be like Two front war on HEMANT .

HEMANT is very vulnerable , ONLY KING CAN SAVE HIM . 

MICHAEL KING  Armyman .
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(28-11-2025, 08:21 AM)Harry Jordan Wrote: Nice observations , though I wanna add one aspect clearly.

The Anjana's arc with Daraaksh is not of love , but rather two individuals complimenting each other in achieving their goals. Anjana is not exactly "in love" with Daraaksh , but he is the man who supports her in her quest , which is to take over the entire Bajaj Corp empire. And both have their goals interlapped so that they can get what they want. Anjana wants Hemant and Sonarika to separate so that Sonarika can be manipulated into a life with Vikram so that Vikram will move away from the family business and live his life he desires with her. She doesn't have ill intentions for Vikram as she believes his feelings for Sonarika is genuine. But she desires and wants to gain control of the entire Bajaj Empire as a "fuck you" and revenge towards her father who has treated her mother and herself terribly all her life. And on the contrary , Daraaksh wants Sonarika and Hemant to separate so that Hemant fully changes and transforms into Michael King so that he can take his revenge. He initiates a dual strategy where he is wrecking Hemant's personal life so that his normal life is destroyed and Michael King can return to his old ways. Which is why he is only targeting his marriage and none of the other ladies in Hemant's life as he believes they are a catalyst to resurrect Michael. Plus he injected Tara into Hemant's life as a virus to crack Hemant from within. Someone who can stab him in his back when the times comes and wreck him inside out. But what neither Daraaksh nor Anjana notices is that Hemant doesn't want to be Michael , he is doing everything to put Michael to rest , and for Micheal to put to rest , he has to avenge the loved ones he lost and finish old scores so that he can be Karan's father and become Hemant that is no longer bothered by Michael and his existence within him. But now , Sonarika with her kiss planted a small seed of hope in Hemant that somewhere in the future , he can bring back his family together and his Sona will return. This will be the start of their growth arc and finally see and realize how much they matter to each other. And this is also the turning point from where Sonarika will transform from Hemant's weakness to Hemant's strength as she will evolve in her new life becoming the woman she was supposed to be. In short , bad news for Meghna all together!

ANJANA - A woman with daddy issues .  Big Grin

 
At first I was thinking , DARAAKSH is a fool for not taking out HEMANT in his dormant stage . MICHAEL KING is too wild , too dangerous , I was re reading some part specially the LONDON EPISODE and those guy who attacked KARAN ,and the DARAAKSH's backstory , which is enough to show MICHAEL IS VERY EFFICIENT , BRUTAL , and MONSTER . You can only kill MICHALE when he stops breathing . But still DARAAKSH chooses to face MICHAEL not HEMANT and That gives few point to DARAAKSH . Stupid or Brave ? but He chooses his opponent honorably but He does not wants to kill him , He wants to destroy the MICHAEL . Hurt him Mentally and Physically , Forcing him to give up his identity , PUSHING HIM TO BE MICHAEL , SO HE CAN FIGHTS the MAN who destroyed his family and that man is not HEMANT .  INDIRECTLY He is helping him  Tongue . I thought DARAAKSH is going to be like paper tiger, a mindless killer , But He is strategic. 

If I am not wrong , Currently HEMANT DOES NOT KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT DARAAKSH's whereabouts . 
Let see at what point and how DARAAKSH reveals himself TO HEMANT .  Cool
 
I would love to read some chapters on MICHAEL KING's past . I hope you have planned some chapters on MICHAEL KING's past .
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Hello Harry,

Can we expect a new post from you today?
Your routine was to publish a new post every weekend, but this was interrupted by your accident and could only be resumed after two weeks.
Today would be a good day to resume your old schedule. 

Thank you and have a nice evening!


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(30-11-2025, 09:11 PM)Demeter Wrote: Hello Harry,

Can we expect a new post from you today?
Your routine was to publish a new post every weekend, but this was interrupted by your accident and could only be resumed after two weeks.
Today would be a good day to resume your old schedule. 

Thank you and have a nice evening!


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Unfortunately not today,

  As I am still recovering , I am not sure when and I have been aware of many reader's frustrations when I delay my postings on the time I initally claims. So from now on I am using a different tactic. Instead of announcing it early , I will simply post a comment hours before I am uploading the chapter. This will let the readers be prepared when the next chapter comes. So the next chapter might take time as there is a lot of work , it will feature the Operation Jewel Thief heist and it needs work to set the action sequence. Due to my resting state , I get more time to work on the story now , but still the pain is still not subsided yet. So brace for it soon as the next chapter will be quiet a spectacle!
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(01-12-2025, 08:03 AM)Harry Jordan Wrote: Unfortunately not today,

  As I am still recovering , I am not sure when and I have been aware of many reader's frustrations when I delay my postings on the time I initally claims. So from now on I am using a different tactic. Instead of announcing it early , I will simply post a comment hours before I am uploading the chapter. This will let the readers be prepared when the next chapter comes. So the next chapter might take time as there is a lot of work , it will feature the Operation Jewel Thief heist and it needs work to set the action sequence. Due to my resting state , I get more time to work on the story now , but still the pain is still not subsided yet. So brace for it soon as the next chapter will be quiet a spectacle!


Your health and recovery are very important to us, especially to me. 
I am aware of the significance of illness and injury. In the past, I myself went through this ‘ordeal’ for a long time.
That's why I can totally relate!

I welcome and appreciate your new approach and strategy. You have chosen the right path, one that many will support.

Please get well again and return to your fan community with full strength and determination!

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Any update this weekend?
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Please update story sir, waiting
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I hope this is not one more unfinished stories.
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Update

I know some of the readers might be concerned whether this story will stay unfinished. Just to give some update , I am still recovering. I do got to spend some time working on the story but my head injury has created problems for me. The occasional headaches doesn't help either. But in a way focusing on the story is kind of therapy for me. I don't know when I will post it , but like I said before , I don't wanna give false hope to readers. I will simply post one message notifying the coming of the chapter in the next 24 hours. This message is not that , this is just my health update. Once my headache frequency ends  , I will focus on posting the finished product. I have already made enough materials but when it comes to editing it , I have a hard time focusing it and that is when the headaches kick in. For now , the healing is happening well but slow. Headaches are low , but still there. Once the next chapter is ready , I will post a simple message and it will come online in that few hours.


Recently , one of my fellow friend took me to the cinemas to recover and he made me watch Dhurandhar which honestly is not something you should be watching when you are recovering LOL  Big Grin


As a movie fan though , I absolutely loved it. The movie showed the best example of world building , I wish I could give a build up to my baddie Daraaksh in the story similar to Akshaye Khanna's Rakesh Dacait in this movie but oh well. The characters are quiet different from each other. But damn , the filmmaker has real talent in building villainous characters and adding mysticism to it. I wish this movie was made few years back and I would've definitely inspired it in my story because the movie's use of espionage and stealth ops is very realistic and gripping. I just hope I am well healed enough when part 2 of the movie comes in March.


So this is just a Health Update. I am recovering , and I will let all readers know when the next chapter will come. Don't worry folks , Hemant Kumar's story will not be left unfinished. His Adventures WILL CONTINUE!


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(14-12-2025, 11:06 PM)Harry Jordan Wrote: Update

I know some of the readers might be concerned whether this story will stay unfinished. Just to give some update , I am still recovering. I do got to spend some time working on the story but my head injury has created problems for me.
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So this is just a Health Update. I am recovering , and I will let all readers know when the next chapter will come. Don't worry folks , Hemant Kumar's story will not be left unfinished. His Adventures WILL CONTINUE!


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Hallo Harry,

I am glad that you are well on the road to recovery.
I realise that the burden of the past year weighs heavily on one towards the end of the year. But then it's Christmas, and the joy of a new beginning gives you strength. 
At least, that's how I feel.

You write about your impressions of the film ‘Dhurandhar’. I don't know it and I don't know if it's being shown in European cinemas.
But I know and love the film ‘The Count of Monte Cristo’, which is based on the novel of the same name by Alexandre Dumas.
I recommend everyone to read the book or watch the film. It is a masterpiece, written in a captivating style from beginning to end. But it is also very emotional, sad and sentimental! 

I hope that the story of Hemant Kumar and Sonarika does not end like that of Edmond Dantes and Mercedes, as told in this book and film. 

I wish you a speedy recovery, lots of strength and patience. Stay positive!
I hope to see you here again soon ...


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