Adultery Love Sex And War : Age Of Darkness

[Shiva shiva shiva]

Please udate story sir

[Harry Jordan]

Please udate story sir

Expect the next chapter by weekend. As I stated before , I have erratic schedules which is why these delays will happen. I will try to do postings on weekends as readers are more comfortable in that timeframes but no guarantees. For now next chapter is coming this weekend 

[DeanWinchester00007]

Expect the next chapter by weekend. As I stated before , I have erratic schedules which is why these delays will happen. I will try to do postings on weekends as readers are more comfortable in that timeframes but no guarantees. For now next chapter is coming this weekend 

Are Harry , Take as much Time as you need . Take extra time , Just rest a bit . 

To bo honest , I dont want next update. After so many updates and Month we had a very good and satisfied update . At this point everything is fine and good . I like this calm and I know the next update will bring more chaos and wreck havoc and more bad shit will happen and I am not ready for it . lol . 

Why dont you take vacation or something instead of posting next update . hahahah 

How about next Update Sona x Hemant update . Or At least  please dont touch SONA anymore . She is on right path . AND SHE IS MAIN CHARCTER of THIS SAGA . No back seat for her sorry . I am okay with Let Hemant take the back seat . lol . 

[DeanWinchester00007]

In short, Meghna, Vikram, and MK/Hemant are shocked while Sonarika totally rocked!!!!

tbh... CHUTIYA CUT GAYA US MF MILLIONAIRE VIKRAM KA :) :) :)
The whole situation looked like it was working in his favor… but in the very next moment, sonarika flipped everything...like...EK PAL MAIN HALAAT BADAL DIYE... JAZBAAT BADAL DIYE!!! ;) ;) ;)

Hahahahah , SO APT . That MC Vikram enjoyed so much of INVINCIBILITY and so much cockiness and ENTITLEMENT . The only thing I am not okay with Is that He will never get to know who the REAL HEMANT . The confrontation , HEMANT WHOOPING HIS ASS . 

[DeanWinchester00007]

This is Wonderful Update . I have read it thrice . The way you wrote  The calm demeanor of SONA and her healing journey is just so good . 
At the start of the UPDATE , The whole para of SONA making decision of what to do , Leaving Hemant and Moving in with MC VIKRAM was so stressful , Every line i was like please dont please dont hahahahha . The way it was written I kind of already accepted that shit She is gonna move in VIKRAM and it will fucked up the little hope that is left , I was feeling so Sad about it , But then The Lady Gang came to the rescue .
To be honest This is very rare in EROTIC STORY , where Women are doing some thing Logical and right thing , and actually saving their friend instead of being Home wrecker . Hahahahha

Though her whole healing journey was shown in single update , but It took her many WEEKS to heal and see the fault of her action . It does not happened  over night . Which is why she was so confidence and at peace . Though I wanted her to stand up to HEMANT while He was making absurd remark but Then It is understandable . She loves him and The part of her healing also include to Accept the damage she did to him .

Hemant was so pissed , Such a comedic relief while reading her reaction . She also made a comment that He is more childish that his child . Lol . That was such good reply .

Now the Real SONA is coming out . 

While reading the FIRST TIME . I thought that The BREAK UP scene was short , and needed more drama . But after reading again , I think that was right to not stretch the break up scene because Whatever THE MC VIKRAM and SONA had was not real and natural . There no true feelings no true emotions . It was all manipulating and web of lies , Their whole whatever they had was built on false emotions . So it was  only right the break up should also be not the real break up . It is like waking up one day and not having any feelings for the person you claimed to be in love  . No hate but No love just General feeling , like they are acquaintance and That is exactly what SONA did . NO drama no nothing NO bullshit Just Straight Forward truth and Left with Dignity . That was such mature writing . If i were you i would have fucked that scene with over drama    lol . 

The Last para was Great . You gave her the MICHAEL KING TREATMENT , Great lines , Purpose , Badass one liner . I loved it . 


But May be i missed something , How did SONA know about MEGHNA was her true enemy ? How did she know ? 

Now VIKRAM will reveal his true face and will collude with MEGHNA . And now I think after knowing that ANJANA BAJAJ plan's fail and Her brother is hurt , It will make her more vicious and She and that other VILLAIN will escalate their plan to HURT HEMANT and SONA . 

But this thing HEMANT is not ALONE . HIS LADY LUCK IS WITH HIM. HE WILL CONQUER ANYTHING NOW . 

I just hope , The upcoming update contains more Blood and more Gore . 

[Munda007]

Expect the next chapter by weekend. As I stated before , I have erratic schedules which is why these delays will happen. I will try to do postings on weekends as readers are more comfortable in that timeframes but no guarantees. For now next chapter is coming this weekend 

Quality over Quantity.

[Demeter]

After reading the first three chapters, I can say the following:
An interesting start that suggests we readers will enjoy reading it, as it captivates us right from the start with an exciting story. 
However, it also requires readers to be fully engaged in order to maximise the enjoyment, otherwise we run the risk of losing the thread and getting lost in the jumps in time and the phases that are distant from each other in terms of location.
The dialogues are very well written.

Smell it, but don't tear it off
Demeter

[Munda007]

Hope to get an amazing update today. Waiting for it

[Speedy21]

Hope update is on the way .... Happy diwali to all the readers

[Harry Jordan]

Sorry guys , like I said unexpected delays will happen. And this time , Diwali is giving me very few time to polish the story. I don't want to compromise on the quality considering how everyone loved the last chapter so I want to make sure the next chapter doesn't fall short. There is still some polishing left but the chaos of Diwali is giving me a hard time to focus on writing. No Idea when I will post it but it will come in a few days. Most likely tomorrow unless Diwali irritates me with the noise again.

Next chapter too will feature some sex , and some will know who is involved in that sex scenes. But it will be more on world building as the next phase of the story will begin with the next chapter with our lead characters drifting apart in their solo journies. Uncharted Terrain Ahead! Caution for Hemant and Sonarika!

[Demeter]

I would like to express my sincere gratitude to my friend ‘RCF’, because without his post ‘Comment’, which I discovered quite by chance, I would never have had the pleasure of reading this excellently written story. 
The title failed to catch my attention, and so I was denied any further interaction with it. (Incidentally, that is the only point of criticism I have after reading 12 chapters so far!)
The author (my utmost respect) has integrated so many aspects and characteristics into the story, giving it a broad spectrum. The reader never gets the feeling of monotony. 

I discover cinema characters and films that captivated me when I saw them a long time ago: 

* Rambo
* Bulldozer
* Where Eagles Dare
* 11 Days, 11 Nights
* Salt on Our Skin.
* Angelina – The Lady of the Night
* 9 1/2 Weeks
* Naked Come The Stranger 

etc. etc. 

Today, this story captivates me...

I really enjoy reading it. It transports me back to the 1980s (as a teenager), the 1990s (as an adult), the 2000s (as a married man) and the present (as someone who enjoys life).


Smell it, but don't tear it off
Demeter

[Demeter]

I have finished reading Chapter 17.

The lasting impression I have of the main characters can be described as follows:

I compare Hement's situation to day and night. They follow each other. Although they separate from each other, neither night can catch up with day, nor day with night ...

Sonarika's behaviour is comparable to that of a clock that is running wrong, because although running wrong, it shows the correct time twice a day ...

It is possible that further characteristics will come to the fore at a later stage, which I look forward to with anticipation.
At a later date, I may make a more detailed attempt to formulate my thoughts and views.

I congratulate the author on his fluid and impressive writing style.


Smell it, but don't tear it
Demeter

[Demeter]

I have no intention of debating Sonarika and Hemant's emotions and current decisions at length, as I am neither a psychologist nor a psychiatrist. 
It is not my place to pass judgement or point the moral finger.
The author has chosen this approach, which I accept and welcome without reservation.

It is important to be aware that this is fiction and not real events!

The bottom line is to convey to the author through our comments and opinions that we appreciate his work and, as readers, are captivated by its fascination. 
I can see that the author appreciates this recognition and is very pleased about it.
Criticism should serve to improve the design, flow, content and events and provide positive impetus. However, this only works if it is constructive.
This also applies to mutual criticism among readers, which in some cases can develop into personal hostility.

After reading 20 chapters – especially the last one – I would say that Hemant would not have filed for divorce so quickly if Sonarika had shown more ‘tact’ and demonstrated more ‘sensitivity’.
In those crucial moments when she had the opportunity to explain certain aspects in a clear and understandable way, - but she unconsciously slammed the door that had been left open until then -, thereby ruining the situation.

Namely; 
When Hemant told her to share the food she had brought, it was a signal that he was willing to listen and talk to her. However, she allowed Vikram to contact her and call her, “instead of blocking him during this turbulent time”.
The result: Hemant threw her out and shouted, “Get out!”

Blind and reckless as she was, she continued where she had left off.

Two days later, the same scenario played out in the bedroom when Vikram called her again.
The result: instead of an enlightening, possibly ice-breaking conversation and get-together, "Hemant moved into the guest room!".

Nevertheless, I remain convinced that the ‘Sonarika–Hemant’ episode is not over yet and that we are in for a number of unexpected twists and turns.

We shall see...


Smell it, but don't tear it off
Demeter

[Demeter]

In a few lines, I would like to express what has been building up inside me, the thoughts that are swirling around in my head.

It is the story of two people who are connected by a special bond and who were searching for themselves while trapped in a labyrinth of emotional outbursts.
They were one, but somehow an invisible hand kept them apart, which in the end led to the cloak that enveloped them being torn apart. 

Until the end, I was torn. 
At times I was emotionally connected to Hemant, mentally I stood beside Sonarika, felt aversion towards Vikram and contempt for Meghana.

Then came the sentence that encompassed everything that had been experienced up to that point, nullified everything that had been said, healed all wounds and revealed new paths that could perhaps change many things.

‘Maybe one day you will repair what you broke in me!’

This sentence contains:

Disappointment
Hurt
Love
Emotions
Hope
Trust
Dreams
Expectations
Desires
Requests
Connection
Willpower
Confidence
Perseverance
Struggle
Prayer
Faith ...

All of this illustrates and holds up a mirror that reflects the inner self of a person in such a situation...


Smell it, but don't tear it off
Demeter

[desihunter]

Please update

[Munda007]

Any chance of next episode?

[sudhir2580]

Harry bro...Can we expect an update today ..

[Shiva shiva shiva]

Please update story sir

[Speedy21]

Harry .. wht happened man ... Hope ur alright ...wen can we expect the update

[Harry Jordan]

UPDATE

Sorry Readers for this terrible delay. Diwali was definitely quiet overwhelming. I had a hard time writing the story considering the chaos that was going on outside. I usually tend to write in a calm environment , something I never got the entire last week. Plus I need extra focus on writing the sex scene as I want it to be spicy , and the chaos of Diwali gave me a hard time with the story being done. So finally I got time to work on it and I will be posting the next chapter this weekend , I might post this on Friday night rather than Saturday so that readers can be quiet comfortable reading as there is reasonable blend of sex and action scenes this chapter. 

But I am also posting this update to share a very bizzare experience I had recently and I feel the need to share it with all as it is related to this story.

Due to the mayhem of Diwali , I barely had time to write , so I ended up watching some new releases in those chaos. And one particular film I was looking forward to is  "They Call Him OG" , as I might've already told all of you the Firestorm song inspired me to write that major action scene of Hemant/Michael saving Shraddha from those goons. So I finally saw the film , and I definitely enjoyed it for the most part , I mean Sujeeth as a director has some really cool skills to show his heroes as larger than life characters , and Pawan Kalyan's swag is pretty unique than other South Stars. And not to mention Thaman's music. I am very choosy in music , and for me when it comes to South films. Anirudh , Thaman , Jakes Bejoy and Ravi Basrur are my prime picks when it comes to Mass Masala Flicks and Action Films. Anirudh as you may already know I am a big fan of Lokesh Kanagaraj movies , but those other music directors , they have their own different styles , and I have to say kudos to Thaman , to me the best part of this OG film is his music and the way he has hyped each scene with such mass song , I mean , that Interval Block of OG with that heavy BGM , my god , even thinking about it now makes the hair in my hands stand!!!! 

Now coming to the bizzare part. As I was watching the movie , I saw the introduction sequence of Pawan Kalyan and I actually had an out of body experience. And the reason for that was that the scene played out exactly the same way I intended to introduce Michael King in the flashback portion for my story. Just like how OG comes to save Prakash Raj's Dadaji character , Michael King is introduced in a flashback in his prime when he saves Manush Rustom , his father figure type character in a marketplace at Baku , Azarbaijaan. The difference is that the movie version has a distinct style and showcase as OG is showcased as a Samurai and very Japanese Martial Art expert , while Michael King in my story is a blend of an ancient European Knight weilding a greatsword rather than a Katana. Seeing that scene really gave me a strange feeling as I felt my story was coming alive right in front of my eyes.

Anyways , because of that , I had to omit out that entire sequence from the story as it was too similar. I already had certain pivot ideas , and I already have chosen one that will make the story interesting. Another decision I made is I am not going to do a full on flashback sequence but rather show some snippets in each future chapters so that Michael King's story will be told parallely to the current timeline of the storyline. 

Now , an important part to look out to for this next chapter , is that I will be introducing a fresh character that will be a key player in the Part 1 of this saga. So brace yourself for the character's arrival.

And like I said before , unexpected delays might happen , but thankfully Diwali is over and peace has returned. So I will try not to bring any more delays in the future and try to post updates every weekend. Anyways hope you guys love the next chapter when it comes this weekend as it makes me feel really happy and a lot of gratitude that so many readers loved my story so far.

With Lots Of Love And A Belated Happy Diwali From Me

                       Your's Truly

             HARRY JORDAN