Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[DeanWinchester00007]

Wonderful writing.what an excellent story teller you are.

I guess Hemant can’t really cut off all relations with Sonarika…due to Karan. And again as many have pointed out before, I feel the real loser in all this mess is Hemant and Karan. Sonarika would be happy with Vikram and forget Hemant after sometime. After all Time heals everything. However, what punishment is this that she has a life she wanted…beautiful family…loving husband, son, her sister.Whereas Hemant has just semblance of a good life. Making out with everyone you desire may not bring the calm Hemant really wanted. Michael King and Hemant to truly be free and one require that calm…and that doesn’t comes with betrayal…or leaving the past behind as Michael did when he married Sonarika.

One has to face the past. Accepting ones mistakes and letting ones love go away just because one thinks she is happy with other man shows a weakness in Michael. That was not the Michael King different characters in the story spoke about.

But again, what a wonderfully written story. Just jotting down what I felt. Not to point out anything in the story. Hoping for more such cool and exciting updates.

Yep , Sona has so many options , Even though there is reason for her actions , but medical conditions and Meghna influences cannot bear the whole responsibility of her affair. She also wanted to have an affair with VIKRAM , maybe its love she is not willing to accept now , maybe after she heal she can see clearly that she never loves Hemant . 


The way the story is going my biggest fear is Sona getting pregnant by VIKRAM . The way VIKRAM was talking about putting baby in her and giving sibling to KARAN and her reaction was , dont joke at this time . lol and In recent update both them having unprotected sex , The possibility is very high . It will be devastating . 

Yes , this is point , She has nothing to loose in the end , She only gains . Loving husband VIKRAM , her kids , Big house , Great career and An guardian angel Anjana Vikram's sister. She got stability from Hemant and she improved herself and got VIKRAM .

Meanwhile , Hemant lost his 10 years  while trying to be someone he is not and Now He is going back to his old self . He not only lost his time but any hope in finding love again . Hemant is loser but MICHAEL IS NOT . 

Its not wrong to say His mistake is not SONA but HEMANT .

[DeanWinchester00007]

True in some instance but its a given fact that a Woman's sexual apetite and need exceeds much more than a mans. So sometimes when a forced encounter happens , the female grows a need of rougher sex to ignore those bad thoughts which helps them to overcome that incident. Many cognitive studies have shown women who are survivors of assaults often grows a need to feel that roughness in a safer way. Not to forget what happened to Sonarika was not a full on assault , but an attempt. An assault would've traumatized her beyond repair.

Here Sonarika's reasoning is tender sex with Hemant will never make her forget Dilawar's forced actions. But Vikram and his roughness she is familiar with will help her overcome what Dilawar is. For her , Hemant always holds back. Unaware about his change.

Yup , Perfectly Explain . Can it be consider as  COPING MECHANISM ? Its not Cure ? It can turn into Vicious Cycle . But again Why does Hemant touch makes her ick ? I get the connection of Rough sex Dilawar and Vikram etc etc , But Hemant i dont get it ? Yes , The sex part where Hemant lacks is fine , But why Simple touches making her ICK ? Is it because some part of her thinks Hemant is not capable of providing her safety that she needed and VIKRAM's provided her that comfort and security ? Because when VIKRAM touched her , she was fine and calm , eventually kissed him and then later had sex with him which did bring some calm to her . 

Or is it Any touch from Men , and result of VIKRAM's touch was unknow to her at that time and came as surprise . 

Either way , I hope Hemant massively misunderstood it and her having sex with VIKRAM provided her relief while he failed and He used it to fuel his further development .  

Why cant she just jack off to her Guardian Angel Mystery Man   

I hope Our Mystery Man appears in upcoming Update .

[DeanWinchester00007]

The story is so fire that sometimes I completely forget to write about the One of the best thing about this story is DETAILING . The Name of Helicopters , Cars and their modification, GUNS   and Gadgets , and that BMW vs Rolls Royce, That little Military industrial complex and The involvement of Private Players in military contacts , Connection with  Army and talk with Generals , The Business Talk , Technological talk or whatever you call it , All of it makes the story so much better . To be honest I love this , Maybe its normal thing but Many writers dont do this , but it does add extra credibility and some realism to the story .

For that you Deserve EXTRA CREDIT and PRAISE and APPLAUSE . 

JAHAPANA TUSSI GREAT HO , TOFA ( You can pick any Female Character from your own story for date only  ) KABOOL KARE 

[DeanWinchester00007]

As for the Therapist Neha Bharadwaj , she is just there to provide relief for Sonarika as a person. Her job is also a bit severe as she is one of the rare person who is aware of Sonarika's medical condition. And rather than block her , Neha is doing what she can to make sure Sonarika is comfortable. Also she never stated to go sleep with Vikram. That was Meghna's doing , she was one enticing her and Sonarika suffering from the trauma of kidnapping went to Vikram to get rid of Dilawar's hauntings in her.

Yeah , I kind of wanted to say that , Sona fuckin VIKRAM after that incident was expected irrespective of reason and situation or whatever she was feeling or going through which would have been fine , but Then , that is why the Therapist was there stop her from acting on her impulses . But Sona did it anyway which makes the role of Therapist negligible because There is no progress in her behavior  as matter of fact her condition has become much worse , So what was the THERAPIST was doing . We cant keep on blame Meghna every time . Maybe after this incident we can see the some real work of her THERAPIST , So No complaint      

As for Hemant not reacting to Vikram and Sonarika. I believe him lashing out won't do justice to his character. Because first and foremost , those two are still unaware of Michael King. And at that moment , I wanted Hemant to be liberated with his hope and  bound to Sonarika. He came there days after having amazing sex with Tamanna , so he is already moving ahead. But seeing the pictures and seeing Sonarika happy , this will make him ignore Sonarika wholely in the future. And when it comes to betrayal , nothing hurts more when the person who you betrayed cuts every relation with you beacuse that will haunt them forever. Because in this point , her arc takes a different approach for the future. Because now it will be Sonarika truly seeing her own errors and faults , understanding that she is making erratic decisions and realizing how much she has stumbled from her real identity. All I can say for now is her arc will be something I am definitely looking forward to explore.

No No No No , I was not saying that He should lashed it out , I know he would never . I mean that His reaction was like COW , I did not mean that he should have thrashed VIKRAM , I was expecting him to be more sarcastic and more dialogue was needed , making mean comment or mocking comment just for tease not to  hurt SONA because  he cannot lol . He somewhat already accepted that SONA loves VIKRAM and there was no point of lashing out , Just you know To show GLIMPSE OF MICHAEL in his words . 

Also , I dont know if it right to call it POWER DYNAMICS . The Power Dynamics among the Ex husband wife and Lover , The Hemant is at bottom , VIKRAM has most power and then Sona , and then Hemant . So  I was hoping his presence should create somewhat uneasiness in atmosphere and which make both the Ex wife and Lover uncomfortable , But here VIKRAM was Fine , not even feeling guilty because he knows Hemant does not have any thing , Like Sona isome what in his control and also SONA apart from feeling guilty and all , She was some what fine . So because the MICHAEL IS IN DRIVING SEAT i was expecting to see That POWER SHIFT and You know for Sona and VIKRAM he would be NEW HEMANT who is changed into New person because of their betrayal not Because MICHAEL KING IS BACK . 

I might be thinking little hard lol . It was just a thought popped up while i was reading that section , And To be honest that was very good twist , The sudden encounter bringing them in same room hahahaha . There is long way to go , We will see more of MICHAEL KING dealing with these low life lol   .

Pranitha is to Hemant is what Vikram is to Sonarika. The perfect partner they need. And Pranitha and Hemant's arc is something I am definitely curious about because there is a lot of interesting scenarios I have planned to explore with them.

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo                  

So Hem x Pranitha is going to be that long ? I thought they were gonna be like Friends with Benefit , But after reading this , I am feeling bad for Special Lady lol . 

So this was all i wanted to say Earlier , But after reading the update again and Your comments , I got what you are saying , So no Worries and No complaint   . 

And also 

THANKS FOR THE REPLY, HARRY  . 

Waiting for Next UPDATE .

[Harry Jordan]

So this was all i wanted to say Earlier , But after reading the update again and Your comments , I got what you are saying , So no Worries and No complaint   . 

And also 

THANKS FOR THE REPLY, HARRY  . 

Waiting for Next UPDATE .

What Sonarika did is definitely coping mechanism. In a way she blames herself , and her "icking" out is basically her need to protect Hemant by how spoiled she is right now. In a way , she doesn't want Hemant to be near her when she herself doesn't feel the same Sonarika he loved. But more than that , its Hemant's tenderness which makes her remember Dilawar and makes her think he will come once again to hurt her because even now Sonarika thinks Hemant is that calm and positive person who never pushed against Dilawar. So in a way she is projecting that vulnerable side of Hemant thinking he is still that simple man.


Now for the power dynamics , obviously Sonarika would not even look at Vikram if she ever had the taste of MICHAEL KING. Hell , if Hemant and Sonarika had sex right now , she will walk herself to Vikram's apartment and tell him to his face that there is no future for them and they should move on. Because according to Sonarika , only flaw Hemant has is he "Holds Back" , and when even that flaw is gone , she will become a nypmh for her own husband and probably go full on until she becomes pregnant with him. BUT its also too predictable and I want Sonarika to be explored and have her find her path and become a different Sonarika that will feel confident of herself. And that will eventually make her see where her real future is. 



As for Pranitha , I don't intend to turn them into a conventional relationship. Because just like Hemant , Pranitha too had a rough personal life. Her first love Jai died , her first husband Yash abused her. Which made her not trusting in a man and pushing her to new sexual exploration with her having secret relationships with actresses. Now she has Hemant whom she shares a strange but powerful chemistry , and in a way , both are in the same wavelength , so when they get together , it will not be a conventional relationship. As Pranitha will not be with that fragile Hemant but Hemant Kumar who is fuelled in life by Michael King. So their relationship will be kind of an open one , where both of their sexuality will be explored , as Pranitha is somewhat a kinky chick and she will have some interesting things she wants to explore with Hemant! 

[RCF]

"It makes you human. It makes you someone who deserves love, not scars"

Is this the most bullshit line ever used for all those who cheat with no guilt? How come one can feel guilt that can make them numb yet they can feel alive and have sex with other person at the same time.

Sonarika is coming close to the most worst ever written woman character with no morals on this site "Kavya" from undercover desires.

Who in the sane world will want rough sex after r*pe encounter? What they crave is gentleness and tender love with understanding not rough sex. I do not know it's the other way round. Anyways even if we can argue that it doesn't need to be a fixed solution, each woman is different, How can one succumb to the same person again and again with whom she doesn't know what kind of feelings she has, yet other side she proclaims that she loves Hemanth 100%.

And what is this holding back bullshit again and again, is that the only thing woman care lol

When you love someone with true heart none of that matters, She will adapt, she will make her life better, she will make her partner understand her needs, When you can take a drastic step of dragging everything you hold dear to the edge of destruction why is it difficult to get the lost chemistry back with your husband?
Every time she goes and spreads her legs she comes back more whining that she broke the last thread of her marriage, of course you did bitch, what did you expect?

You want Hemanth to keep looking at you like you would take Vik out of your goddamn head forever? I do not understand this concept of soft touch reminding of Dilawar but hot chemistry with Vik making her forget Dilawar, Not convinced nor will ever make this plot right with this kind of plot armor for Sonarika and it seems more silly.

On one end she confesses to Neha that she can't bear him moving on without her and she wishes his happiness and on other end does exactly what breaks his heart, and the reasoning is cringe as fuck…my head took a hit so if someone pushes me then I will fuck the whoever I want, That's no justification to the sins you do, even people who are crazed drug addicts have control over what they do, this is beyond repair personality. Seems like readers here including me do not give the fuck about how she evolves from here on…that is the sad state of her personality development…If she ever ends up with Hemanth again after a journey then it wouldn't feel like she deserves him, you can break some one's personality to make them better but this arc is beyond repair at this point. 

Need rough sex in bed cannot be purely the reason to cheat someone and if that is your reason then she is unfit to love someone. Hemanth and Karan are better off themselves and Sonarika and Meghana can pull their hair out on the open and both can end up dead bringing ends to their characters.

[RCF]

You allow Vik to post pictures across his hall and enjoy watching them in your private moments but feel bad when Hemanth sees them? Why?

You agree that you have built a second world of your own guilty pleasures and fond of its memories then why can't you take a stand and show what you have done? But no cry like a bitch again and again, beg like you are the sinner when Hemanth is near but spread legs as soon as he is gone.

I feel Meghana doesn't deserve credit for pushing you into this, it's your own doing. Once it’s a mistake, Twice it’s a habit, Thrice it’s a sin.

You fucking do not even deserve an arc on this story, take any character from this story they are better than you and morally so correct. Even Mouni is better than you since she was pushed into her affair and now she is living the life she wants, Meghana though wrong and evil has better plot buildup to the point where she takes these steps.

What do you have to support your sins? A blow to the head lol , that's the most silliest reason I ever read.
Sister dies, no one know how, She takes hit to the head but family doesn't know her condition but only Meghana is aware and can use it to her best abilities. If her father is possessive of her daughters and as strict as we were presented, how come he did not know Sonarika's condition? Again plot armor.

I am sick of writing and discussing her character at this point.

Coming to other plot lines, Other main woman characters are also being used as sex toys at this point. Come one Harry, they deserve better.

Tamanna needs a man who can build a life with her and be a better father for Shradda not someone who comes at night and fucks her like she is a whore. How is Hemanth better than Sandeep if he is just considering her friends with benefits?
Didn't he say earlier that she deserves better than Sandeep? Now he is doing exactly same thing to her what Sandeep attempted. Take her to bed with no commitment.

Pranitha is on route to the same equation, she would spread her legs soon. Celebrity sex is fine and actually what I have expected but Tamanna and Pranitha is bad, they deserve plot buildup with Hemanth alone with romance which eventually one might end up his partner but starting their arcs with sex with Hemanth screws up the total love angle if there is any between them, it feels like these encounters are being used for filling the plot until Sonarika grows a spine and a brain and back again ends up with Hemanth which she doesn't deserve.

[Harry Jordan]

RCF

Sonarika is coming close to the most worst ever written woman character with no morals on this site "Kavya" from undercover desires.

Interesting Observations RCF. 


First and foremost , regarding Sonarika's behavior post Dilawar. It is based on the research I did on hypersexuality. There are cognitive studies that states a person suffering from hypersexuality can often resort to developing a want for rough sex nature. A case similar to be found in women who are assaulted in captivity , where they develop pleasure points with the roughness in the way their aggressor did. Here that part of Sonarika is coming out , she in her state , is getting glued into this rough sex part that she believes she will never get with Hemant which is why she once again moved to Vikram as she is aware of his roughness. Plus this arc was done to set up a friendship arc between Ragini and Sonarika and bring in her as the voice of reason and to make the "reveal" of Sonarika's mental state in the future. Plus there must be some level of separation between Hemant and Sonarika to have the characters evolve in the future.


Sonarika's mind in itself is a war of her conscience. She does want Hemant back but she also knows she doesn't deserve him as every time she has only hurt him. And now that reality has solidified in her , she now knows her reality. By the end of last chapter she has accepted there is no hope for her to find any chance of rebuilding her relationship with Hemant as she herself is a mess. The final part of last chapter was Sonarika accepting her state and putting the reality before her that she cannot be the woman that built Hemant's family in the past. This is her accepting she cannot redeem their relationship.


Also  Sonarika didn't cheat just because of the roughness , but rather during the start of their affair , Hemant was struggling as a person. He didn't give time for her , to spend some family time. And by the time he got back in shape and shaping their future , it was already too late. So its not just rough sex that was the reason for her affair. However , she is also a character that understands her sins , so she accepts what she has done and is willing to face the consequences for it even now.


As for the relationship with Tamanna , I mean it was pretty obvious why it went that route. Tamanna already has her own tragedies , way before Hemant , she has her own problems with feelings and love. Even she confessed her little stunt with Sandeep was just her attempt at a fling and to distance herself from Hemant. And Hemant already has trust issues and his faith in love is broken. So he knows he cannot commit to Tamanna. But one thing Tamanna and Hemant has is desire for each other. And that desire is their bridge to each other. One thing Tamanna appreciates is Hemant doesn't judge her , and Hemant appreciates she being there for him in his rough times bringing some humanity in his life. Which is why their start of the relationship is a full on sexual affair that may or may not pave the way for a more serious relationship. Either way they will be committed in the future , be it friends with benefits or a potential couple. Their bond is formed on faith , not trust. 



As for Pranitha , she even in my mind is what I concieve the perfect woman for Hemant. Because Pranitha's character not only matches Hemant Kumar , it can also have the potential to connect with Michael King as well. She is kind of a blend between Sonarika and Ashnoor , but her attitude and approach is far different from either of these women. Pranitha lived a life in the world of royalty and at times seen the world of espionage and criminal activities. She can be that perfect confidante for Hemant Kumar/Michael King. She is adventurous in life , even her lifestyle is something that can help Hemant eventually connect with her as she likes doing new things in personal space. They have the potential to be an unconventional couple with great chemistry. There will be some interesting angles to explore them for and this will bring an intersting angle that will culminate in the finale of Part 1.


As for Jagjeet's arc , he was obviously posessive of his daughters when they were little , post Samhita's death , he is pretty shaken up. And Sonarika's accident weakened him further , which paved the way for Meghna to control and influence Sonarika's life further. as Sonarika used to trust her as a sister and was a secret keeper of her boyfriend Rocky's existence. Her father even though loved her , he was pretty shaken with Sonarika's accident as he thought he lost her too. In a way he did as he was unaware of Sonarika's change until he found out about her affair with Rocky , which made her come to Mumbai with him. He is pretty protective of her after her breakup but ended up welcoming Hemant because Sonarika wanted him. Even though his character's role is very minimal , he has a key importance in the revenge arc between Meghna and Sonarika.



Not all love angles start with a slow burn. And believe me I tried , but I made the conscious decision with sex because that is the only way there can be justice to a character like Hemant. If I don't do that , Hemant will end up being the same Hemant , and that arc will not suit him. However this new Hemant Kumar forged with the raptures of Michael King approaches life differently. And that life demands his character to go all out, even though his fault is barely minimal. For him the arc gets bigger and the potential of Tamanna and Pranitha also gives a vibrant future ahead. Because now , Hemant is no longer bound to Sonarika , he is liberated from her , free to be his own man , a man with a vibrant identity.

[JohnS112]

Interesting Observations RCF. 


First and foremost , regarding Sonarika's behavior post Dilawar. It is based on the research I did on hypersexuality. There are cognitive studies that states a person suffering from hypersexuality can often resort to developing a want for rough sex nature. A case similar to be found in women who are assaulted in captivity , where they develop pleasure points with the roughness in the way their aggressor did. Here that part of Sonarika is coming out , she in her state , is getting glued into this rough sex part that she believes she will never get with Hemant which is why she once again moved to Vikram as she is aware of his roughness. Plus this arc was done to set up a friendship arc between Ragini and Sonarika and bring in her as the voice of reason and to make the "reveal" of Sonarika's mental state in the future. Plus there must be some level of separation between Hemant and Sonarika to have the characters evolve in the future.


Sonarika's mind in itself is a war of her conscience. She does want Hemant back but she also knows she doesn't deserve him as every time she has only hurt him. And now that reality has solidified in her , she now knows her reality. By the end of last chapter she has accepted there is no hope for her to find any chance of rebuilding her relationship with Hemant as she herself is a mess. The final part of last chapter was Sonarika accepting her state and putting the reality before her that she cannot be the woman that built Hemant's family in the past. This is her accepting she cannot redeem their relationship.


Also  Sonarika didn't cheat just because of the roughness , but rather during the start of their affair , Hemant was struggling as a person. He didn't give time for her , to spend some family time. And by the time he got back in shape and shaping their future , it was already too late. So its not just rough sex that was the reason for her affair. However , she is also a character that understands her sins , so she accepts what she has done and is willing to face the consequences for it even now.


As for the relationship with Tamanna , I mean it was pretty obvious why it went that route. Tamanna already has her own tragedies , way before Hemant , she has her own problems with feelings and love. Even she confessed her little stunt with Sandeep was just her attempt at a fling and to distance herself from Hemant. And Hemant already has trust issues and his faith in love is broken. So he knows he cannot commit to Tamanna. But one thing Tamanna and Hemant has is desire for each other. And that desire is their bridge to each other. One thing Tamanna appreciates is Hemant doesn't judge her , and Hemant appreciates she being there for him in his rough times bringing some humanity in his life. Which is why their start of the relationship is a full on sexual affair that may or may not pave the way for a more serious relationship. Either way they will be committed in the future , be it friends with benefits or a potential couple. Their bond is formed on faith , not trust. 



As for Pranitha , she even in my mind is what I concieve the perfect woman for Hemant. Because Pranitha's character not only matches Hemant Kumar , it can also have the potential to connect with Michael King as well. She is kind of a blend between Sonarika and Ashnoor , but her attitude and approach is far different from either of these women. Pranitha lived a life in the world of royalty and at times seen the world of espionage and criminal activities. She can be that perfect confidante for Hemant Kumar/Michael King. She is adventurous in life , even her lifestyle is something that can help Hemant eventually connect with her as she likes doing new things in personal space. They have the potential to be an unconventional couple with great chemistry. There will be some interesting angles to explore them for and this will bring an intersting angle that will culminate in the finale of Part 1.


As for Jagjeet's arc , he was obviously posessive of his daughters when they were little , post Samhita's death , he is pretty shaken up. And Sonarika's accident weakened him further , which paved the way for Meghna to control and influence Sonarika's life further. as Sonarika used to trust her as a sister and was a secret keeper of her boyfriend Rocky's existence. Her father even though loved her , he was pretty shaken with Sonarika's accident as he thought he lost her too. In a way he did as he was unaware of Sonarika's change until he found out about her affair with Rocky , which made her come to Mumbai with him. He is pretty protective of her after her breakup but ended up welcoming Hemant because Sonarika wanted him. Even though his character's role is very minimal , he has a key importance in the revenge arc between Meghna and Sonarika.



Not all love angles start with a slow burn. And believe me I tried , but I made the conscious decision with sex because that is the only way there can be justice to a character like Hemant. If I don't do that , Hemant will end up being the same Hemant , and that arc will not suit him. However this new Hemant Kumar forged with the raptures of Michael King approaches life differently. And that life demands his character to go all out, even though his fault is barely minimal. For him the arc gets bigger and the potential of Tamanna and Pranitha also gives a vibrant future ahead. Because now , Hemant is no longer bound to Sonarika , he is liberated from her , free to be his own man , a man with a vibrant identity.

Hemant may not be bound to Sonarika…but will will never get liberated. What can one make out of a hero.. if his wife leaves him for another man..,and he doesn’t fight back. To claim what has always been his. More so after the last chapter, when he sees Sonarika with Vikram in the flat. What does this make him….an unwilling cuckold…..who can’t do anything about his wife…soon to be divorced…but still his wife…getting fucked by her lover in his flat….this is not Micheal….nor is he Hemant….he is just a cuckold….may be unwilling.

Hemant always spent some time with his family…since beginning…It was always Sonarika…after she met Vikram, she was busy in lovemaking and didn’t have time for family. Leaving her son and husband(who’s working) for a sexual affair shows her concern for her son…leave apart her husband….and she continues to do it.. hell she wants rough sex when it was how Dilawar treated her…she would’ve wanted comfort…tender sex…to overcome the tragedy..yet she went to Vikram to be dominated. One would not want to repeat the experience of hell..and would want to be loved and cared. That’s what Hemant did, alas she still wanted Vikram…why just because Meghna told her so….what about others…Hemant, her son, her sister..nothing…but Meghna matters much.

Again..she gets everything …loving husband in Vikram…her son…her so called sister….good life….guardian angel….what could have she asked for…as for not accustomed to household chores…Vikram can arrange a maid at least…that’s not punishment for the sins she did…further…what about Vikram…nothing for breaking a loveable and happy family. For what…his in fluctuations…initially…nothing…

And who gets hurt…Hemant…the great Micheal king…who then takes out his frustrations on different women….he still is the biggest loser in the story..whatever he does now….i thought with a strong hero story would be different….however…it is still the same….
Husband loses his wife to someone he feels is better in bed…..no difference apart from fighting sequences.if I think about the overall plot.

I must say in the end…these are just rumblings about the story I liked on this site, thinking it would do justice to the hero. A wonderfully written story by a fantastic writer. Alas, I guess, this is what this site is about. Overall…a fantastic story…which keeps the readers hooked as to what is coming next….

Apologies to the writer if I have stepped the line… you are an absolutely wonderful writer with a great thinking and writing skills. Continue with it. Looking forward to many of great updates…

[JohnS112]

Interesting Observations RCF. 


First and foremost , regarding Sonarika's behavior post Dilawar. It is based on the research I did on hypersexuality. There are cognitive studies that states a person suffering from hypersexuality can often resort to developing a want for rough sex nature. A case similar to be found in women who are assaulted in captivity , where they develop pleasure points with the roughness in the way their aggressor did. Here that part of Sonarika is coming out , she in her state , is getting glued into this rough sex part that she believes she will never get with Hemant which is why she once again moved to Vikram as she is aware of his roughness. Plus this arc was done to set up a friendship arc between Ragini and Sonarika and bring in her as the voice of reason and to make the "reveal" of Sonarika's mental state in the future. Plus there must be some level of separation between Hemant and Sonarika to have the characters evolve in the future.


Sonarika's mind in itself is a war of her conscience. She does want Hemant back but she also knows she doesn't deserve him as every time she has only hurt him. And now that reality has solidified in her , she now knows her reality. By the end of last chapter she has accepted there is no hope for her to find any chance of rebuilding her relationship with Hemant as she herself is a mess. The final part of last chapter was Sonarika accepting her state and putting the reality before her that she cannot be the woman that built Hemant's family in the past. This is her accepting she cannot redeem their relationship.


Also  Sonarika didn't cheat just because of the roughness , but rather during the start of their affair , Hemant was struggling as a person. He didn't give time for her , to spend some family time. And by the time he got back in shape and shaping their future , it was already too late. So its not just rough sex that was the reason for her affair. However , she is also a character that understands her sins , so she accepts what she has done and is willing to face the consequences for it even now.


As for the relationship with Tamanna , I mean it was pretty obvious why it went that route. Tamanna already has her own tragedies , way before Hemant , she has her own problems with feelings and love. Even she confessed her little stunt with Sandeep was just her attempt at a fling and to distance herself from Hemant. And Hemant already has trust issues and his faith in love is broken. So he knows he cannot commit to Tamanna. But one thing Tamanna and Hemant has is desire for each other. And that desire is their bridge to each other. One thing Tamanna appreciates is Hemant doesn't judge her , and Hemant appreciates she being there for him in his rough times bringing some humanity in his life. Which is why their start of the relationship is a full on sexual affair that may or may not pave the way for a more serious relationship. Either way they will be committed in the future , be it friends with benefits or a potential couple. Their bond is formed on faith , not trust. 



As for Pranitha , she even in my mind is what I concieve the perfect woman for Hemant. Because Pranitha's character not only matches Hemant Kumar , it can also have the potential to connect with Michael King as well. She is kind of a blend between Sonarika and Ashnoor , but her attitude and approach is far different from either of these women. Pranitha lived a life in the world of royalty and at times seen the world of espionage and criminal activities. She can be that perfect confidante for Hemant Kumar/Michael King. She is adventurous in life , even her lifestyle is something that can help Hemant eventually connect with her as she likes doing new things in personal space. They have the potential to be an unconventional couple with great chemistry. There will be some interesting angles to explore them for and this will bring an intersting angle that will culminate in the finale of Part 1.


As for Jagjeet's arc , he was obviously posessive of his daughters when they were little , post Samhita's death , he is pretty shaken up. And Sonarika's accident weakened him further , which paved the way for Meghna to control and influence Sonarika's life further. as Sonarika used to trust her as a sister and was a secret keeper of her boyfriend Rocky's existence. Her father even though loved her , he was pretty shaken with Sonarika's accident as he thought he lost her too. In a way he did as he was unaware of Sonarika's change until he found out about her affair with Rocky , which made her come to Mumbai with him. He is pretty protective of her after her breakup but ended up welcoming Hemant because Sonarika wanted him. Even though his character's role is very minimal , he has a key importance in the revenge arc between Meghna and Sonarika.



Not all love angles start with a slow burn. And believe me I tried , but I made the conscious decision with sex because that is the only way there can be justice to a character like Hemant. If I don't do that , Hemant will end up being the same Hemant , and that arc will not suit him. However this new Hemant Kumar forged with the raptures of Michael King approaches life differently. And that life demands his character to go all out, even though his fault is barely minimal. For him the arc gets bigger and the potential of Tamanna and Pranitha also gives a vibrant future ahead. Because now , Hemant is no longer bound to Sonarika , he is liberated from her , free to be his own man , a man with a vibrant identity.

Hemant may not be bound to Sonarika…but will will never get liberated. What can one make out of a hero.. if his wife leaves him for another man..,and he doesn’t fight back. To claim what has always been his. More so after the last chapter, when he sees Sonarika with Vikram in the flat. What does this make him….an unwilling cuckold…..who can’t do anything about his wife…soon to be divorced…but still his wife…getting fucked by her lover in his flat….this is not Micheal….nor is he Hemant….he is just a cuckold….may be unwilling.

Hemant always spent some time with his family…since beginning…It was always Sonarika…after she met Vikram, she was busy in lovemaking and didn’t have time for family. Leaving her son and husband(who’s working) for a sexual affair shows her concern for her son…leave apart her husband….and she continues to do it.. hell she wants rough sex when it was how Dilawar treated her…she would’ve wanted comfort…tender sex…to overcome the tragedy..yet she went to Vikram to be dominated. One would not want to repeat the experience of hell..and would want to be loved and cared. That’s what Hemant did, alas she still wanted Vikram…why just because Meghna told her so….what about others…Hemant, her son, her sister..nothing…but Meghna matters much.

Again..she gets everything …loving husband in Vikram…her son…her so called sister….good life….guardian angel….what could have she asked for…as for not accustomed to household chores…Vikram can arrange a maid at least…that’s not punishment for the sins she did…further…what about Vikram…nothing for breaking a loveable and happy family. For what…his in fluctuations…initially…nothing…

And who gets hurt…Hemant…the great Micheal king…who then takes out his frustrations on different women….he still is the biggest loser in the story..whatever he does now….i thought with a strong hero story would be different….however…it is still the same….
Husband loses his wife to someone he feels is better in bed…..no difference apart from fighting sequences.if I think about the overall plot.

I must say in the end…these are just rumblings about the story I liked on this site, thinking it would do justice to the hero. A wonderfully written story by a fantastic writer. Alas, I guess, this is what this site is about. Overall…a fantastic story…which keeps the readers hooked as to what is coming next….

Apologies to the writer if I have stepped the line… you are an absolutely wonderful writer with a great thinking and writing skills. Continue with it. Looking forward to many of great updates…