Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[Harry Jordan]

You need OG songs now..they are too good

Believe it or not , the first confrontation sequence I was writing of Hemant confronting Rafique and gang in the factory , I had two things in mind. One was already fuelled with the Firestorm song from OG , and the other was the scene from Malayalam Movie Empuraan , where Mohanlal's character confronts bad guys at night in the jungle. The inspiration for that scene came from both those things , but I had to use Vikram's song because the song's lyrics perfectly matched the "Eagle" persona of Hemant's symbolism. I do wanted to use the Firestorm song but the song picturizes the character as a Dragon which is why I couldn't use it. 

To me both those things acted as a fusion when I wrote the scene , to build the drama. It was the hardest to write because I wanted as much dramatic as I could. LOL

[DeanWinchester00007]

Well , this story had adultery , which means its not just a "cheating Wife" story. After all Michael King is back , and just like Kira said , he was a different breed in his prime , a flamboyant hunk. And the list , the list is pretty big for him when it comes to "love" or "Relief". Tamanna , Pranitha , Disha , Kamya , even our evil villain Meghna. And then add the Celebrity Roster of Mrunal , Ananya , Janhvi etc , with more Celebrity Cameo in the future. Michael King is on the verge of creating his own HAREM!!!! 


Well Hemant's current age is somewhere between 35 and 40. And so is Sonarika but just a year younger than him , and Vikram as well. He basically spend just few months in the army after which the Identity of Michael King took over that spanned a couple of years which was around the years 2004-07.

That is too much fucking For MICHAEL KING . lol  but After all Michael King is back   . But Great , i wanna see Sona's reaction to all the fucking MICHAEL's gonna have . lol . Also , I wanna see the Sona's reaction when she is gonna find out truth about Hemant . 

I wanna see how you gonna do it , Letting Sona to find the truth herself or by Hemant's confessing  . For me personally I wanna Sona to investigate and search the truth instead of Hemant's telling her . Her realizing she has spent the 10 years of her life with FUCKING MONSTER and while seeing him innocently playing with Karan and casually chit chatting with Anjali . lol . Its gonna be fun to see . 


So  , Lets just agree that Hemant is 37 years old , He is married for 10 years . So he got married when he was 27 . Right ? So all the stuff Including army and Triad Gangsters Stuff happened between when he was 18 to 27 years ? He left the army to joined the underworld ? Or he was playing double agent kind of stuff ? Why he was building an army , That was crazy ? Too many question . 

So is the Part 1 ENDS ? 2nd Part gonna starts now ? or what ? How many chapters left in Part 1 ?

[DeanWinchester00007]

JUST FYI , I really wanted to do that!

But the Coolie songs's emphasize too much for its movie character to be a Coolie which doesn't connect with a character like Michael King.

I nearly did something similar in the conclusion part of this chapter where Hemant arrives to his company party all dressed up with the modern gangster vibe where I initially planned to have Hemant drink the whiskey MANSION HOUSE to make a subtle connection with Michael King who used to drink that. But that will make it too obvious. 

I ditched it because in my perspective , I wanted a lead character who had no bad habits like drinking or smoking. I kind of like it that way which brings the cool factor to the character. No sipping alcohol or cigarette while killing goons , just a well dressed , precise man who is hygenic but also a brutal executioner.

SPOILER ALER FOR COOLIE BELOW!

Just like how Rajnikanth walks to Mahesh Manjrekar's character where Manjrekar remembers Deva in his prime. I tried to do a similar scene with Hemant when Jackson Shephard sees him , where for a moment he sees Michael King in his prime. But I later ditched it.

But in all honesty , when I was writing the final part of this chapter , my mind was constantly singing the Powerhouse song as my character Hemant stood and looked over the horizon of Mumbai City as his new Kingdom.

And the obvious reason I chose the Vikram song is because it could connect to my character's symbolism as an eagle. And the lyrics matched the dual life of Hemant and Michael. This help me build up the scene even better. 

Yeah , You are right . VIKRAM OST is more APT . Its just while i was reading the MICHEAL's part that BUS SCENE OST was playing in my mind . lol . Last update  was BOMB . I read it thr;;'., . It was wonderful Update . 

[Harry Jordan]

That is too much fucking For MICHAEL KING . lol  but After all Michael King is back   . But Great , i wanna see Sona's reaction to all the fucking MICHAEL's gonna have . lol . Also , I wanna see the Sona's reaction when she is gonna find out truth about Hemant .  

So is the Part 1 ENDS ? 2nd Part gonna starts now ? or what ? How many chapters left in Part 1 ?

When it comes to Hemant and Sonarika , this will be the start of their realization arc where they will eventually see each other for what they are. Their "Together" arc will now be taking a backseat and their individual development will be part of their story. Sonarika's arc will be about finding herself and eventually the beginning of her conflicts with her demons , one of them being an actual person who was hidden in the shadow tormenting her life. And at the same time , Hemant's arc will be embracing his past as Michael King and thus bringing a change in his lifestyle that will also transform his surroundings and his loved ones outlook towards him. Because like I said , Hemant isn't a cuckold in this story , he is not the kind of guy that will just accept Sonarika's "duality". Sonarika questioned his masculinity and she called him out saying he "Holds Back" in sex. Now that the Michael personna has become a part of him , he has embraced a forgotten past of himself now. And the man has been frustrated for long , and now he is free from the duties of a husband. No more loyalty , no more chastity. Its time for him to no longer "hold back" and go full unleashed!!!

The Michael King arc happens during his ripe age of youth so I can definitely say somewhere between 21 and 25. I cannot give away this future arc in a comment but I will just say he was in the army for roughly few months and some of his superiors didn't like his "Methods". Which paves the way for Michael King.

As for Part 1 , there is still a long way to go for Part 1 to conclude. Part 2 will be a different setting and a different scenario , all I can say for Part 2 right now is Kira's character will have more role in it.

[xfirefox]

top notch

[Shiva shiva shiva]

Super??

[Munda007]

When it comes to Hemant and Sonarika , this will be the start of their realization arc where they will eventually see each other for what they are. Their "Together" arc will now be taking a backseat and their individual development will be part of their story. Sonarika's arc will be about finding herself and eventually the beginning of her conflicts with her demons , one of them being an actual person who was hidden in the shadow tormenting her life. And at the same time , Hemant's arc will be embracing his past as Michael King and thus bringing a change in his lifestyle that will also transform his surroundings and his loved ones outlook towards him. Because like I said , Hemant isn't a cuckold in this story , he is not the kind of guy that will just accept Sonarika's "duality". Sonarika questioned his masculinity and she called him out saying he "Holds Back" in sex. Now that the Michael personna has become a part of him , he has embraced a forgotten past of himself now. And the man has been frustrated for long , and now he is free from the duties of a husband. No more loyalty , no more chastity. Its time for him to no longer "hold back" and go full unleashed!!!

The Michael King arc happens during his ripe age of youth so I can definitely say somewhere between 21 and 25. I cannot give away this future arc in a comment but I will just say he was in the army for roughly few months and some of his superiors didn't like his "Methods". Which paves the way for Michael King.

As for Part 1 , there is still a long way to go for Part 1 to conclude. Part 2 will be a different setting and a different scenario , all I can say for Part 2 right now is Kira's character will have more role in it.

You are a Rockstar man.  Eagerly waiting for remaining part of Part 1 and see how Part 2 shapes up.

[DeanWinchester00007]

When it comes to Hemant and Sonarika , this will be the start of their realization arc where they will eventually see each other for what they are. Their "Together" arc will now be taking a backseat and their individual development will be part of their story. Sonarika's arc will be about finding herself and eventually the beginning of her conflicts with her demons , one of them being an actual person who was hidden in the shadow tormenting her life. And at the same time , Hemant's arc will be embracing his past as Michael King and thus bringing a change in his lifestyle that will also transform his surroundings and his loved ones outlook towards him. Because like I said , Hemant isn't a cuckold in this story , he is not the kind of guy that will just accept Sonarika's "duality". Sonarika questioned his masculinity and she called him out saying he "Holds Back" in sex. Now that the Michael personna has become a part of him , he has embraced a forgotten past of himself now. And the man has been frustrated for long , and now he is free from the duties of a husband. No more loyalty , no more chastity. Its time for him to no longer "hold back" and go full unleashed!!!

The Michael King arc happens during his ripe age of youth so I can definitely say somewhere between 21 and 25. I cannot give away this future arc in a comment but I will just say he was in the army for roughly few months and some of his superiors didn't like his "Methods". Which paves the way for Michael King.

As for Part 1 , there is still a long way to go for Part 1 to conclude. Part 2 will be a different setting and a different scenario , all I can say for Part 2 right now is Kira's character will have more role in it.

Thanks for reply and this reply is enough to settle down most of the curiosity for now . lol.  

I am so excited and also anxious . 

To be honest feeling sad for Hemant , He is lost in all of this . That simple family man is no more , MICHAEL cannot go back now , Even Sona is gonna change , There is no way back .Also I wanna see True MICHAEL character I hope he is not some saint or will be little asshole kind of guy , sassy and little bit arrogant . Also  How he is going to treat Sona not like Hemant crying in adjacent side of her or pleading her to re consider her decision  lol . 

MICHEAL has lust for Sona that is for sure , I hope he does not see her as his ex wife but another Woman with nice tits and ass .                 ( His convo with Kira at airport lol )

 At this point, Nobody can predict the story which is why i am more anxious what's the next update gonna be about . TICK TICK TICK .......... NEXT UPDATE loading soon !

 
                                     He Got The Looks

                                     Certified Mobster
                                    He Got The Swag
                                  Moves Like A Rockstar

                        Just Too Much Heat, His Walk Is Godly

                            The Throne Is His, So, Say Sorry
         
                                 *MICHAEL    KING*

[DeanWinchester00007]

MEGHNA , That Bitch , She is so vicious  , with every new update she is becoming more menacing . She is behind all of this fiasco , She caused all of this . She gave Sona to those gangster god knows if Hemant had not been there , They could have bangd and killed her . Is she out of her mind . She wants to take revenge , She has already killed Sona's sister and this is straight on attempt to murder Sona and Now that Poor Ragini is also  on  her hit list . These women cannot fight with Meghna and also  Sona is not capable of even standing in front of Meghna, she will chew up and spit out Sona  . Who is gonna save Ragini and Sona from Meghna ? Is there gonna be new female character ? Or Ye kaam bhi MICHAEL ko hi karna pdega . 

[Blackdick11]

Yeahh,,,meghna has turned into a vengeful psycho BITCH, so consumed by hatred that she’s lost all sense of sanity... she won’t stop until sonarika is ruined... the tragedy is, yet again, she’ll twist things around and shove sona right back into Vikram’s arms...
hope that sona will uncover the truth  that MEGHNA was never her friend but a venomous enemy hiding behind the mask of BFF....
Honestly, what hurt the most was seeing vikram turn into the hero right in front of Sona stealing all the credit that hemant truly deserved....and now meghna’s going to use this against her—making it seem like Vikram is perfect and hemant is a complete loser.... how utterly he failed—not just as a dad, but as a husband too. didn’t even lift a finger to protect his wife or son. HONESTLY, she’s better off with vikram.

[RCF]

Do not underestimate Sonarika here...she is in vulnerable state and Meghana will take advantage at this time for sure but there will be a point where some incident should reveal the secret or Meghana's true face to Sonarika, all the plot needs is some seed of suspicion and once she starts digging truth will automatically surface and that will trigger the character development for Sonarika, the vengeance will bring her back from the abyss and conflict she is in right now, It will also make her realize that her feelings for Vikram are not true...

I think the last mistake Meghana did was throwing Sona to Dilawar, Very soon Sonarika will have a separate war and it would start soon. We have seen how protective and aggressive can Sona can be when her loved one's are in danger. If she knew the truth that entire life is ruined by Meghana, Imagine what she will do to Meghana. She is capable to ruin Meghana to an extent that she prefers death more than life.

Also Meghana hasn't seen Michael yet lol she will pee in her pants if she sees him in action so there is no way she can win this war.

~RCF

[Harry Jordan]

NEXT CHAPTER UPDATE


So I just wanna give my readers some headsup. My schedule is getting a bit rough and I am having a tough time to allot some for this story. So , unexpected delays might happen in the future just like the upcoming Chapter.

Problem is I went a little bit overboard with the sex scenes in the story. LOL.   

And this has affected the story structure. However , I am trying to polish it better to give all of you a better experience so this next chapter might be delayed a bit , maybe mid week , apologies in advance.

Not gonna lie I missed writing sex scenes , so that might be the reason with the overboard LOL. So the sexy times might be delayed but it will come very soon. 


         YOURS TRULY

  HARRY JORDAN 

[DeanWinchester00007]

NEXT CHAPTER UPDATE


So I just wanna give my readers some headsup. My schedule is getting a bit rough and I am having a tough time to allot some for this story. So , unexpected delays might happen in the future just like the upcoming Chapter.

Problem is I went a little bit overboard with the sex scenes in the story. LOL.   

And this has affected the story structure. However , I am trying to polish it better to give all of you a better experience so this next chapter might be delayed a bit , maybe mid week , apologies in advance.

Not gonna lie I missed writing sex scenes , so that might be the reason with the overboard LOL. So the sexy times might be delayed but it will come very soon. 


         YOURS TRULY

  HARRY JORDAN 

No worries , Take your time Buddy.  ( as long as its not VIKRAMxSona everything is okay with me    and Tammana X Hemant  too , Tammana needs to stay away from MICHAEL , As a single mother MICHAEAL king is not good match for her )

Can you please post in on week ends . Hafte ke beech me sax sux acha ni lagta   .

I just hope the sex scenes would not interrupt the overall  flow of the story and should be natural not forced . and

 also dont forget about lesbians  also . Hahaha .

But YOU ARE THE KING HERE , ONLY YOU RULE HERE   . HARRY .

[RCF]

Where is the update? Thought you mentioned it will be ready by Wednesday?

[sudhir2580]

Harry bro ..you told to give update on midweek ..
It's already weekend ..when we will expect for the update ?

[RCF]

Another week with no update with empty promises. I request not to commit please if update not ready, I see many readers waiting since Wednesday.

[SMOD-P]

Waiting for next update...

[RCF]

Hope you are doing fine and healthy..tc

[Harry Jordan]

I AM BACK!

Hello Beloved Readers ,

Sorry for the unexpected sabbatical , like I said in my last update , some delays might happen in future chapter updates because of work schedules. It was a last minute decision so I had to go to a place where there was no Internet!! LOL!

That being said , I know I caused an unexpected delay with Chapter 24 but sometimes it can become a boon. Due to the isolation and much needed reprieve in between I managed to write not just one but two chapters so I will be posting Chapter 24 Tonight. Chapter 25 however I will be saving for the weekend as there is still some polishing to do. 

Fair warning , both these chapters have moderate amount of sex and I guess readers will love it! 

I did a little more world building and some hints for what PART 2 of this saga will bring. Regardless I hope you guys enjoy the chapter tonight. I have a feeling some will like where this goes and some cool moments!

  With Love , Your's Truly

 HARRY JORDAN

[Munda007]

I AM BACK!

Hello Beloved Readers ,

Sorry for the unexpected sabbatical , like I said in my last update , some delays might happen in future chapter updates because of work schedules. It was a last minute decision so I had to go to a place where there was no Internet!! LOL!

That being said , I know I caused an unexpected delay with Chapter 24 but sometimes it can become a boon. Due to the isolation and much needed reprieve in between I managed to write not just one but two chapters so I will be posting Chapter 24 Tonight. Chapter 25 however I will be saving for the weekend as there is still some polishing to do. 

Fair warning , both these chapters have moderate amount of sex and I guess readers will love it! 

I did a little more world building and some hints for what PART 2 of this saga will bring. Regardless I hope you guys enjoy the chapter tonight. I have a feeling some will like where this goes and some cool moments!

  With Love , Your's Truly

 HARRY JORDAN

You are a Rockstar