Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[DeanWinchester00007]

so far, there’s no sign proving whether he has any ulterior motive or not… 

but who knows,  maybe later Meghna might manipulate him too, pull him into her plan, and turn him against Sonarika/Hemant. 
You just can’t trust this psycho woman...

right now, she’s out of town, otherwise no one would be happier about the situation than her.

but who knows,  maybe later Meghna might manipulate him too, pull him into her plan, and turn him against Sonarika/Hemant. 

You just can’t trust this psycho woman...

Yeah, This could happen , after Hemant and Sona , Split . Sure, she is gonna need someone to lean on and she will go back to Meghna , and Meghna will direct her to Vikram again . Either Manipulating Both or Colluding with Vikram to Trap her . There is no reason for Vikram to say NO . He will be getting what he loves .

[DeanWinchester00007]

The story has reached a very critical point. Now, whether Sonarika confesses her infidelity herself or Hemant finds out from someone else, it doesn’t really matter.
In every situation, only Hemant will face loss, sorrow, and pain.

As for Sonarika, nothing much will happen to her. She will happily live her life with Vikram, and I’m sure that after a few days she won’t even remember Hemant.

When this infidelity began the reason was— though Hemant had all the good qualities of a great lover, husband, father, and person—except one: he was not aggressive or passionate enough in bed. That became the initial reason for Sonarika's affair. At that point in the story, Sonarika’s cheating was only about lust, adventure, and enjoying the forbidden fruit.  
But eventually, Hemant improved that flaw in himself. Still, Sonarika continued her infidelity. Who could be more selfish than this?

In the beginning, it was just lust. After the Bali trip, her decision to completely break all ties with Vikram was absolutely right. After leaving Vikram, she realized that Hemant had those same qualities too—he could also be passionate and adventurous in bed.

But over time, Sonarika went down an even darker path—what began as lust slowly turned into feelings and affection for Vikram, which is the greatest betrayal.

Then came the "Love of Voyage" incident. After that incident, hugging Hemant's picture, crying, and saying "nobody can take your place," showed complete guilt. Even at that stage, it felt like maybe she realized her true love was only Hemant.

But what happened later was a total crossing of the line—thinking of Vikram again and again, or giving him a place in her heart equal to Hemant—This is Biggest Sin one could ever make

A husband might forgive his wife for satisfying physical desires once, but giving somebody else that much place in your heart—a place that was only Hemant’s right—is beyond the gravest sin.

Now, Hemant has nothing left. The only thing he can do is let Soni go quietly and move forward in life as if there was never a girl named Soni Exist. This can bring him mental peace. If he tries to take revenge, he will only lower himself.

For him, completely forgetting Soni would be best, and maybe this is the real revenge.

As for Soni, she will cry for a few days and then start a new life with Vikram.

I’ve often seen on this platform that the one who cheats is the one who stays happy. Every story ends with this conclusion.

I’ve never seen a story where a wife cheats and faces any serious consequences. Either the husband keeps his eyes closed and keeps suffering, or he becomes a cuckold.

In this story, Hemant won’t become a cuckold, nor will he silently suffer his wife’s betrayal, because that’s not the way his character is written—this much is clear.

But the same question remains—did Hemant get any justice? —the answer is No, not at all.

And did Soni lose anything? She didn’t lose anything—she'll just be sad for a few days, that’s all. After going to Vikram, she won’t feel any regret, won’t even remember Hemant, and won’t feel any remorse.

I haven’t read a single story where a cheating wife faced sadness, regret, or any serious consequences after separating from her husband, or even missed him in her dreams.

Honestly, I had high hopes for this story—that maybe the wife would deeply regret her actions, face serious consequences, and miss Hemant a lot after leaving him— Rather badly Crave for Hemant
But now, it doesn’t seem like that’s happening. Even in this story, only the husband will remain sad, and he won’t get any justice.

No matter how Hemant’s past was—even if you portray him as a villain— still can’t justify Sonarika’s big betrayal. And even if Sonarika ends up getting hurt because of Hemant’s enemies, that can’t be called repentance for her betrayal. Repentance would only be if she can never be happy without Hemant, misses him so much, values him so much that her life becomes like a zombie—but I don’t see that happening here.

Sorry, but I’d like to mention a story called "My Wife, Why Did She Betray Me."

At least in that story, the wife punished herself a lot. She could never forgive herself, lived like a servant with her husband, and punished herself so much that she never claimed any right over him, didn’t even consider herself worthy of him. She just looked after the kids and prayed for death every single day—because she didn’t want to make her husband more unhappy by committing suicide. In a way, she started seeing her husband as God and lived as his servant.

The husband in that story was probably named Savarna. He was also a very strong man. Since the story was set in a village, he couldn’t divorce her. If he could have, he definitely would have divorced her, and the only reason he suffered her infidelity in silence was that he knew his wife wouldn't be able to bear it and would take her own life. In that story, at least some justice was given to the husband.

But all the other stories on this platform always end with the cheater staying happy, and that makes me really sad.

From your story, I truly hoped the cheating wife would, in the end, regret a lot that she lost a husband like Hemant. But sadly, even in this story, it seems Sonarika will not face true regret, guilt, or any real consequences.

Anyway, I am not criticizing your story, nor am I pressuring you to change it.

I am only expressing my feelings—that when I started reading and saw Hemant’s character, I hoped this story would truly bring justice for the husband and show a different result from all the other stories on this platform. But it seems, once again, in the end, the cheating wife will end up happy because she gets what she wants.

Sorry if I spoke too much. I still respect you as a writer and am a huge fan of your work.

Best Regards

Rocky ❤️?

Fuck , I should not have read this  . This is best observation and Explanation on this thread . Sad and Brutal ,  I was angry now I am sad for Hemant Character .     


A husband might forgive his wife for satisfying physical desires once, but giving somebody else that much place in your heart—a place that was only Hemant’s right—is beyond the gravest sin.

How can anyone let alone Hemant deal with this , No words , Assurance , No amount of love can convince Him , that Sona actually , Ever loved him . 10 years of marriage and 1 kid , all down the drain for some men she met few months ago then there must be something very special about that Man .If that Man worth destroying her family and future and Her reputation , then the idea that She loves her husband is farce , She needs to accept that she loves that Man , It would also be injustice with The Man who loves her dearly too . 

Now, Hemant has nothing left. The only thing he can do is let Soni go quietly and move forward in life as if there was never a girl named Soni Exist. This can bring him mental peace. If he tries to take revenge, he will only lower himself.

Hemant will do exactly this , maybe that's the reason Sona confess to her , because She knew her cuck husband will do nothing. She had dream about this in her dream Hemant was the cuck , Its how she perceived him and (from google) Dreams are seen as a reflection of our subconscious mind, a gateway to accessing hidden emotions, fears, and desires that are not fully accessible during our waking hours . She never thought that Hemant might actually kill Vikram or Harm her Or Hemant will destroy her reputation or Will retaliate . Nope , She knows Hemant too well . She does not know Michael but she does Know Hemant very well . The only thing she was worry about is that Its gonna Break Hemant's Heart not That Hemant might break the spine of her lover, which we know he is very capable of doing something like this. I . lol . She knows , She can handle him well . 

Now, whether Sonarika confesses her infidelity herself or Hemant finds out from someone else, it doesn’t really matter.





Thought the Confession part was already posted , I am late . But your point still stands true . 
If Hemant had found out on his own, he would have reacted differently . That is why Sona told him . I cant shake the thought that she is more guilty of Letting Vikram go than Hemant . She knew the moment she confess this to Hemant her relationship will be over , She could have hide it like she did earlier but this time , Her feelings for VIKRAM were genuine and this time by confessing She is ending her relationship with Hemant , Like a statement . 

She herself said many time , If only she and Vikram had met earlier her life would be different . What if 10 years ago she had the choice between Hemant and VIKRAM , She would definitely choose VIKRAM over Hemant . This is what will haunt Hemant , He was always an option for her . 
So many times she said , She wished if she was never married to Hemant , scheming against Hemant on Wedding anniversary , She felt whole wtih Vikram , alive etc etc . @RCF wrote about this in very detailed manner which dismantle any argument that She ever loved Hemant . Hemant and Sona was accident . Sona and Vikram are destined to be as whole . lol .Yuck .

In every situation, only Hemant will face loss, sorrow, and pain.


He is getting surrounded by the danger from all direction . His past enemies , His present's one , Then his own wife . How he is gonna deal with them alone . Hemant's future is dark , The most frustrating part , There is nothing he can do about it . Maybe something reveal that he also never loved sona in a way that he always believe , which might ease her pain . 

His visit to clubs and meeting Mruanl Thakur , I thought he was gonna bang Mrunal Thakur lol , in that case both Husband and wife cheated on each other which would have balance the equation   .

As for Sonarika, nothing much will happen to her. She will happily live her life with Vikram, and I’m sure that after a few days she won’t even remember Hemant.

Yes . But To be honest I hope she will move in with Vikram . VIKRAM though i hate his character , He deserves a chance if he truly loves Sona , and Sona also , This is what she dreamed of , She paid heavy price For Vikram then why not at least give a chance , this is what she desire then why not move in with VIKRAM . Maybe this is what she needs or maybe this would turn out a disaster which will finally break the fantasies she is having . Going back making amends for whom and for what ? What is done is done . Hemant will move out quietly , He is gonna be very busy with his enemies  , meanwhile she can rebuilt her life with love of her life . I was against this idea but want to see , How they will adjust . Destroying her marriage and then breaking up with her lover , What she wants to achieve . Lets see . 

Sorry, but I’d like to mention a story called "My Wife, Why Did She Betray Me."


yeah , It was really good . The character of SAVARNA was good too . I forgot about this story . One of the few stories where there is balance . 

But all the other stories on this platform always end with the cheater staying happy, and that makes me really sad.

I never understand why do some people get mad over If Husband character was treated with respect and Is not an Idiot . They always just throw insult and says " Dont like it dont read / Write your own story / dont discourage the writer / you are on erotic story stie why do you want it to morally correct . And i was like Bro There should be some logic , or at least explain the character of Husband and reason behind his stupidity . But Leave it . 




I am only expressing my feelings . 

[DeanWinchester00007]

Oh brother ! After reading whole chapters ( I skipped few to focus on Hemant's development ) . The Sona never changed , Earlier i was like Now she had become Saint , But she never changed , Even after ending their affair Bali , SHE NEVER CHANGED . I was so blind . lol . Now I get it . The whole mess of inner turmoil and guilt and whats not , Its all farce and fake . Her accepting that He would have married VIKRAM and Whatever she said to him building life with him, buying building , wishing she had never met hemant , never had child then she would have gladly accepted him  just  pure cringe  ,That Bastard This whole section itself is the Testament of her love for him . Its was mess . 

Also one thing I noticed is that She always praised Hemant as Caregiver , Who takes care of her ,and shows loves , supported her . Nothing wrong but meanwhile for Vikram He is stud, Charming , Praising him as Greek god , Confident  , Complete Man which makes her feel awe and whole, She is weak around him , she cannot help herself around him she totally forgets her family let alone her husband she dearly loves. 
What if Hemant stopped doing all these things taking care of household and taking care of her , Would she still loves him ? For me I think Hemant's worth in her life and his role is simply act of giving and taking as long as he doing husband duties its all fine the moment He stops , She will kicks his ass and she did  .

Her love and affection is simply a reciprocal act , Mutual exchange , Is what Hemant get for his devotion to his family and wife. . There is nothing , nothing like Vikram and Sona . 

But Her love for VIKRAM ? Its just pure act of love , Giving him everything and Giving herself to him for what ? He never had done a single thing for her ? Its just pure attraction ,lust , madness and natural chemistry , That is why Its loves , She clearly is in love with him . The Love of Voyage depicted it very Cleary , the Jabalpur incident was bound to happened . Giving everything without expecting any thing in return , is Cleary an act of love . They both need to accept this , Maybe after Divorce They would get together . They at least deserve a chance to try it out .

Hemant never had and never will , This type relation with her 

  Is it not hinting a cuckold relationship ?
 A cucks take care of house and wife and her mental and physical well being , and VIKRAM takes care of her Sexual Needs . and then in end Wife returns to husband and had petty sex with husband , but the only thing which is different here Hemant is not cuckold , YET    . lol .  

As for KUNAL , I am happy how you treated the character . Great for him , The only thing . I want her to leave her old life , though he destroyed her life himself , He needs to start fresh , He needs separate with Mouni . Not tell her to stop doing and get back their old life . He needs to find A Women who value him and Loves him . He needs fresh start . Either way , Only Happy thing in last few updates . 


  After everything . But then Chapter 16 and 17 thanks to god . These chapters saved me lol 

This whole Sexual Triangle of Lover , wife , and cuck sucked all the attention , While re reading , Both  Chapter 16 and 17 are among the best   . The level of detail in those two chapter is great . Also after re reading , Now I am feeling How insignificant the whole affair thing is when compare with The development that has been happening behind the scenes. There is so much going on . I even forget to feel bad for Hemant . lol . Now I am not even mad on Sona too , She and Hemant are both nothing in compare what is happening outside on the street . lol . Its crazy , Its getting so dense , So many characters . So many development happing parallelly and also somehow connected . Its mind blowing , Man .  

One thing , So Meghna is Step-Sister of Sona , A bastard Child .  Sona's father illegitimate child . Right ?

If I am not wrong There is some kind of Beef Between Hemant and Sona's father Right ? He asked him to call him Sir ?  I was forget to mention this , But 1 more name should be added to list who should get their ass kicked by Hemant ASAP ! . Sir Bulana , Why ?  After learning the affair of Sona , He should get one interaction with Hemant , Sir Phod de Hemant budhe ka . lol

To be honest , I am thrilled , with the revelation that  Meghna's Love for Hemant . It was never hatred , There was always an attraction which she was fighting with and calling hatred, The pull she had towards Hemant it was natural but Its was love but her years of resentment clouded her mind and she thought its hatred  , Now that She got crush on Hemant  and her plan for Hemant is kind of intriguing  . She loves him , Oh Man . She is crazy woman , who is now gonna fight for Him , . Killing two birds with one stone , and also dreaming of life she never had . Is it the reason she hates Sona , Because if Javed had stayed with her , her life would have turned out exactly as Sona's life . Its her life and Her father action's that turned Meghna into the path of vengeance , Now I sympathize with her . With just one paragraph you changed everything . *Slow Claps* , Maan gye guru . 

She is an Interesting character . Now I am kind of want something should happen  Between Hemant and Meghna , Not particularly sexual but anything . A date , Shoulder to cry on , Her manipulating Hemant, Her support for Hemant while Sona and Vikram will get together and Sona looking what she has lost . . The women got fire , and her fire turned into Inferno which can only be cool down by Hemant .  

This is an impressive and very interesting Premise . Now I want Sona to be gone to Hemant . When Hemant wakes up , Meghna expected Hemant, but it is Michael with whom she will be dealing with .
I dont know , How Michael and Meghna , The MM will turn out . One is too Calculative and other is just plain crazy . Brother , Meghna has overshadowed Sona or any Female Character  here .

I apologize for skipping earlier chapters , In hurry of reading the Hemant's part and The whole couple mess , I skipped few chapters , Now I get the whole picture . The earlier comment i made are shit , but I am not deleting them , Let it be there . Mistake should be not erased or hide . I simply Apologize , but Comment on Sona and Hemant relationship that i still think its true She never loved him , The earlier chapter cleared this + comment by other members , Clear  few doubts that  I had .


You are a WIZARD HARRY ! . You just You totally expelliarmused us with this premise . 

HATTS OFF TO YOU .

Again , Thanks buddy for this story . SIMPLY GREAT . TOO GOOD . Your Skills , How you create a plot then changed it completely  and then again twist it , Its too good . You are touching new heights with every updates .

I am taking my words back , please dont take as much time as you need , Just post the Next Update ASAP !

KUDOS TO YOU !!!!!    



                                     

[EPLOVER4U]

I disagree with you . I think good ending is needed . Though in understand your point with AWARAPAN example . But I think this is different story . Though Mature ending would be best and more realistic , I still think good ending will do great justice with the plot of the story and the character   . But we know Harry , He is not gonna disappoint us , and in this matter he will not disappoint you , Your expectation and the way story is going , Both gonna meet soon  .

it is subjective my good friend winch so happy to know your point on it.

But I still believe and have faith in  Harry that he will give us  something like A history of Violence . 

great movie the family mess up was just so good but i am more intoAmerican Psycho 

And as for Third part of Krish's story , I agree with you . To be honest third part felt forcibly written , it was not needed , Part IInd had the great end . The third would have been great if it was standalone , The major mistake that The characters does not feel like anywhere near like the Part 2nd .Krish was not like Krish , Meera was not like Meera . The Essence of Character was missing . I also made many comments regarding the this , also what you said i am guilty of that too . Forcing our opinion on writer   but i believe Krish would never take readers request and interfere in his story , He said that himself . 

 [b][b]hamko  maaloom  hai  jannat  ki  haqeeqat lekin, dil ke khush rakhne ko, ‘Ghalib’ yeh khayaal achcha hai[/b][/b]

And also Disagree with your assessment and analogy of Mother nature , Submission  and Domination . And Vikram is now where Authoritative here . He always kind to her . Sona mean while took every decision whether its fucking or Breaking up while he accepts every decision . 

I think you are confusing the Rough Sex which include one partner consensually engaging and get dominated but only during the sex with Actual  Domination. 

She is just cheater . This what those pseudo feminist write to justify the Adultery in both case of Men and Women . 

i think you just misinterpreted it my friend i think it is my fault that i did not put the way that is in my mind, what i am trying to say here is that the domination that woman see is differ to the domination that man view, for women it always how the person is around with others and how he deal with the situation and how he is with her, and about the sex part yes it was already the well-known fact that the person irrespective of anyone who is straying outside is looking for something that is missing with the partner (in my opinion it would be best to talk to each other with the needs and if this fails then do whatever is best but people just don't talk and end up with the criminal mentality very sad when i read the murder news of spouses now and then)  now about male it is as simple as it read domination that's it

i don't want to put moral compass on any character i am just want to read it in the raw and pure form of the plot line, i am just viewing to harry that don't try to please the readers even like me also just be with the plot. hope to see some action soon 

[DeanWinchester00007]

i don't want to put moral compass on any character i am just want to read it in the raw and pure form of the plot line, i am just viewing to harry that don't try to please the readers even like me also just be with the plot. hope to see some action soon 

I Apologize , I get it now , Your  comment about Domination perfectly , Explained the situation . 



And though I also have watched American Psycho but I did not understand it  .    I have small Brain . 

Also this reminds me , Harry Jordan's story *Love sex and War* is like Paul Allen's Card . Very Impressing . 



i don't want to put moral compass on any character i am just want to read it in the raw and pure form of the plot line, i am just viewing to harry that don't try to please the readers even like me also just be with the plot. hope to see some action soon  

Dont worry , Harry will never compromise with his story . The man with those skills you really think readers like us have any chance to make him change the his story . lol. 

Though I always said that the comments are not for writers to read but for other readers . So we can share our perspective and can have a casual conversation about the story . People sharing their review and their perspective with each other , Its keeps People engaging and keeps thread running . 

[Speedy21]

Nooooooooooo !!!!!   . As much as I hate this and Hate VIKRAM . He Truly Won here . This is something Hemant cannot fight , cannot defeat , cannot Undo this . He can Only accept this . He Cucked Hemant here . 

Let's start hemant arc man enough of (cuck) ...dont drag to much ...

Yup Enough of this Meeky Hubby . Time for some Serious Shit !

Howdy dean.... Long time ..comng........ Fact is one has lose for one to win either vikram r hemant ....

[RCF]

You guys are focusing too much on a housewife and her sins...What about Hemanth? He is not as innocent as you all portray him to be...

He is no saint, Every affair that happened when we put it on a scale, there will be share for both Husband and wife, we only focus on Wife most of the times because they are the one's that cheat here in this site most of the time. I hardly read Husband cheating wife where Wife is on the receiving end apart from Krish's story.

1. Hemanth is a murderer - Lets get this point straight into your brains...He could be Michael King or Monkey King, doesn't matter, he is a murderer, This is not John Wick's world where there is price on some one's head so any one can go ahead and kill any one. One who kills always brings danger to the door step, so he has to ride the tiger and cannot put his foot down.
2. Hemanth has been suffering too many months with his past, He knows his wife Sonarika is his anchor and only with her he can bring peace from his past nightmares, yet she is the one was kept in the darkness.
3. Since he kept her in the darkness, he neglected his life more to shield it from her, He lived a life of no violence code but also masked his real nature portraying as a cow to the world while he is a tiger in real nature, His real nature though total opposite probably would have ignited the fire that Sonarika might have been seeking, who knows?
4. What was the need to stay low, take beating from his boss son, Keep a pot belly for no reason, neglect his wife? If he was such a good father but was he a good husband, Definitely not...He was in his own world, own trauma.

All I say is Hemanth shares the blame here, Maybe majority goes to Sonarika but Hemanth won't fly innocent.

~RCF

[EPLOVER4U]

Thank you soo much my dear friend ❤️

I'm surely going to check out all These stories!  
Once again, I appreciate your efforts!!!❤️

Regards 
Rocky ❤️

rocky if you understand hindi then check out the author name chutiydr stories search name on google

[Blackdick11]

I’m not passing any moral judgment.... just sharing how I see it.
both acts are condemnable, but they exist on different scales and arise from different reasons. neither party can be called innocent, yet the weight and nature of their wrongs are not the same.

[RCF]

I’m not passing any moral judgment.... just sharing how I see it.
both acts are condemnable, but they exist on different scales and arise from different reasons. neither party can be called innocent, yet the weight and nature of their wrongs are not the same.

Yes agreed and we are not merging the scales, but we need to agree on one aspect that their scales though different and nature of their wrongs are not same, The wrongs were interlinked as chain reactions, If they were any other happy couple with no baggage from the past they would have thrived much better than now. Everything is connected. 

I am sure Hemanth might be upset now, heart broken and lost with anger and depression but when the clouds clear he should be able to realize his role in his marriage failure. We already know Sonarika will suffer but I would like to see Hemanth also realize his mistakes. 

~RCF

[DeanWinchester00007]

Howdy dean.... Long time ..comng........ Fact is one has lose for one to win either vikram r hemant ....

Great man , How you doing ? 

Yes , Here VIKRAM is winner . 

[Speedy21]

Great man , How you doing ? 

Yes , Here VIKRAM is winner . 

Wel i agree with you dean he has nothing to lose ..... Wen u have to lose u always wins

[DeanWinchester00007]

Sona's Affair is not result of her unhappy married life, She loves Vikram . There is no one to blame , There was nothing Hemant could have done to prevent this and also He did nothing wrong  that drives Sona in Vikram's Arm . Same for Sona too no matter how many times she tried she always failed to resist herself around Vikram . and As husband and as Father Hemant  , He fulfilled all his duty very religiously . What more he could have  done to prevent this ? He might be not Great Husband , still  He was not the reason For Sona's affair . Sona herself is not an ideal wife too . The only mistake she did is continuing her affair, lying to her husband , ignoring her kid and family which Hemant never did . That is why all the blame falls on her . It's a simple act of Selfishness . Her first affair was mistake ( lets give it to her )  but second time it was her choice .



Hemant is 100% Innocent here .  But He will suffers too , He will also blame himself and When he tries to find the reason , He will blame His past and His PTSD. 


and
The only blunder he made , He thought he could build a life with the past like his but His past , his trauma never stopped him in fulfilling his duty . In some sense both of them has past . They both choose to move forward

The only thing which complicated the whole mess , Is Sona's belief that  he still loves Hemant , If only she had accepted Vikram and divorced Hemant, everything would have been fine. But it was necessary for the Plot , Specially for Hemant's arc and Also for Meghna too  . In the end she end up with the same result but lost her dignity . People right to point it out. . If Hemant had made the same mistake, he would have received the same words . But He has got the PLOT ARMOR . COZ HE IS HERO .

Though I understand that people are trying to point out nuances in their relationships — which is a mature way of thinking — it only complicates things. So, it's better to call a spade a spade.



Even though , Harry said she will pay for her sin, I dont like this and I Hope Harry is not planning any sinister plan to punish her specially anything including those goons.

I hope next updates contains some Entertainment , Enough of This Miya-Biwi ka drama . lol  . *Do  Bloody Violent  Action update lagana , Bhaiya ?*

Can someone please Summaries the Story and The Characters or Just Track of Characters. Who is who and where , Are they Enemy of Hemant or Ally . ? Thank You .

Also  , How is your health ? I hope you are doing fine .

Also I forgot to mention , Your One liners at the end of every chapter is Iconically badass   .

( Note :- Comments are for fun and casual conversation . Not criticism of Story or writer )

*PEACE OUT*

[sudhir2580]

Harry Bro ..Hope you are doing fine ..

When we can expect a new update ?

[RCF]

Sona's Affair is not result of her unhappy married life, She loves Vikram . There is no one to blame , There was nothing Hemant could have done to prevent this and also He did nothing wrong  that drives Sona in Vikram's Arm . Same for Sona too no matter how many times she tried she always failed to resist herself around Vikram . and As husband and as Father Hemant  , He fulfilled all his duty very religiously . What more he could have  done to prevent this ? He might be not Great Husband , still  He was not the reason For Sona's affair . Sona herself is not an ideal wife too . The only mistake she did is continuing her affair, lying to her husband , ignoring her kid and family which Hemant never did . That is why all the blame falls on her . It's a simple act of Selfishness . Her first affair was mistake ( lets give it to her )  but second time it was her choice .



Hemant is 100% Innocent here .  But He will suffers too , He will also blame himself and When he tries to find the reason , He will blame His past and His PTSD. 


and
The only blunder he made , He thought he could build a life with the past like his but His past , his trauma never stopped him in fulfilling his duty . In some sense both of them has past . They both choose to move forward

The only thing which complicated the whole mess , Is Sona's belief that  he still loves Hemant , If only she had accepted Vikram and divorced Hemant, everything would have been fine. But it was necessary for the Plot , Specially for Hemant's arc and Also for Meghna too  . In the end she end up with the same result but lost her dignity . People right to point it out. . If Hemant had made the same mistake, he would have received the same words . But He has got the PLOT ARMOR . COZ HE IS HERO .

Though I understand that people are trying to point out nuances in their relationships — which is a mature way of thinking — it only complicates things. So, it's better to call a spade a spade.



Even though , Harry said she will pay for her sin, I dont like this and I Hope Harry is not planning any sinister plan to punish her specially anything including those goons.

I hope next updates contains some Entertainment , Enough of This Miya-Biwi ka drama . lol  . *Do  Bloody Violent  Action update lagana , Bhaiya ?*

Can someone please Summaries the Story and The Characters or Just Track of Characters. Who is who and where , Are they Enemy of Hemant or Ally . ? Thank You .

Also  , How is your health ? I hope you are doing fine .

Also I forgot to mention , Your One liners at the end of every chapter is Iconically badass   .

( Note :- Comments are for fun and casual conversation . Not criticism of Story or writer )

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Lol then let me call a Spade a Spade...so called 100% innocent Hemanth did not have sex with his wife for months, I remember reading some where Sona telling Meghana that she had last sex few months ago before Jabalpur, He kept her dry. He ignored her needs, He is so involved in his pot belly life that he did not have time for his wife. Once he started spending time with Kunal its even worse. 
Doesn't give right for Sonarika to cheat but its also creates circumstances that could lead one to become weak when right person with chemistry comes across and add the manipulation from Meghana to create those circumstances over and over. 

Not saying she is not a sinner but you need to open eyes and see other side too. 

~RCF

[Harry Jordan]

Very much happy and thrilled to see that a lot of readers are discussing and voicing their opinions about my story. I am very much moved by the perspectives shared by many. Since we have an Independence Weekend coming , I intend to post next chapter that time so that many can truly enjoy the next adventure in this story.


I heard a lot of minds and their understandings of the characters , mostly towards Hemant and Sonarika. And many are trying to find the "innocent" one in it. Truth to be told , I as an author never concieved this story based on innocence. To me everyone is flawed , except for Karan since he is a child. My conception of Hemant and Sonarika was within the narrative to show how two people who met each other in their most vulnerable form and formed a bond of love and support and build a life together not realizing that what they craved actually exist in each other.

Sonarika always notioned that Hemant held back , even in bed. He wasn't a romantic talker , he wasn't into the typical nature of adding chemistry to a relationship. But Sonarika also never knew Michael King , she never saw her husband in her best form. And Hemant buried the good parts of him along with Michael King as he was suffering from the traumas of his past. To be said in simple words , if Michael King still existed , Sonarika wouldn't have even thought about Vikram in her mind. For all things considered , Karan would've already had multiple siblings by now if Sonarika's husband was Michael instead of Hemant. Hemant buried that for a reason , but unknowingly he also buried the best parts of him. And now , Sonarika will become the catalyst to Michael's return , but the question that rises is , will this be her blessing or her greatest undoing. That we will have to wait and Read! LOL!

And similarly , Hemant concieved a simple life for himself. He believed hiding and lowering himself was the best way to lay low and protect his family. Which is why guys like Sandeep harassed him and he didn't react. Even Dilawar and Rafique mocked him for his repressive nature. But Michael King was what Hemant truly is , an Ambitious man who once conquered far away lands and lived a life of adventure and edge of death and enjoyed every second of it. Women like Kira and Ashnoor , they were part of his life , a life filled with untapped passion and wild romance. But when he lost everything , he buried this part of him with it. And he never tried to be that same person again , be satisfied with a wife like Sonarika. But Hemant is not seeing is that Sonarika too has that wildness in her , something that was part of his lifestyle in the past.


This story is about the ultimate test this two characters goes through and how their dynamic and traits change and evolve in the future. Because lets be real , Hemant and Sonarika can never be separate , as long as Karan exist , they will always have that one constant that keeps them together. But the current conflicts and hidden enemies are putting the couple to their ultimate test. This will change their characters , revealing their real selves. And thus the future awaits for them , either they will live separate as evolved individuals taking care of their son along with the new lives they build or they will unite again , this time forming a bond so merged and robust with each other that even the force of nature cannot separate them.

This story is their test of life. To see whether they can have a happily ever after or salvage what is left and build a new peace. What will be the outcome? Only time will tell. But Hemant and Sonarika both have no idea that their lives are actually intertwined years before they even met.

This is their story , the story of their survival. Whether this will be their survival as individuals or as an inseparable couples , that only time will tell. For now , The Age Of Darkness will commence its maximum threshold as enemies converge around them. This will be the time of an awakening , to stand and fight , to survive and in someone's case , to become the best of both worlds!



          YOURS TRULY 

  HARRY JORDAN   

[Speedy21]

Update???

[SMOD-P]

Update

[DeanWinchester00007]

Very much happy and thrilled to see that a lot of readers are discussing and voicing their opinions about my story. I am very much moved by the perspectives shared by many. Since we have an Independence Weekend coming , I intend to post next chapter that time so that many can truly enjoy the next adventure in this story.


I heard a lot of minds and their understandings of the characters , mostly towards Hemant and Sonarika. And many are trying to find the "innocent" one in it. Truth to be told , I as an author never concieved this story based on innocence. To me everyone is flawed , except for Karan since he is a child. My conception of Hemant and Sonarika was within the narrative to show how two people who met each other in their most vulnerable form and formed a bond of love and support and build a life together not realizing that what they craved actually exist in each other.

Sonarika always notioned that Hemant held back , even in bed. He wasn't a romantic talker , he wasn't into the typical nature of adding chemistry to a relationship. But Sonarika also never knew Michael King , she never saw her husband in her best form. And Hemant buried the good parts of him along with Michael King as he was suffering from the traumas of his past. To be said in simple words , if Michael King still existed , Sonarika wouldn't have even thought about Vikram in her mind. For all things considered , Karan would've already had multiple siblings by now if Sonarika's husband was Michael instead of Hemant. Hemant buried that for a reason , but unknowingly he also buried the best parts of him. And now , Sonarika will become the catalyst to Michael's return , but the question that rises is , will this be her blessing or her greatest undoing. That we will have to wait and Read! LOL!

And similarly , Hemant concieved a simple life for himself. He believed hiding and lowering himself was the best way to lay low and protect his family. Which is why guys like Sandeep harassed him and he didn't react. Even Dilawar and Rafique mocked him for his repressive nature. But Michael King was what Hemant truly is , an Ambitious man who once conquered far away lands and lived a life of adventure and edge of death and enjoyed every second of it. Women like Kira and Ashnoor , they were part of his life , a life filled with untapped passion and wild romance. But when he lost everything , he buried this part of him with it. And he never tried to be that same person again , be satisfied with a wife like Sonarika. But Hemant is not seeing is that Sonarika too has that wildness in her , something that was part of his lifestyle in the past.


This story is about the ultimate test this two characters goes through and how their dynamic and traits change and evolve in the future. Because lets be real , Hemant and Sonarika can never be separate , as long as Karan exist , they will always have that one constant that keeps them together. But the current conflicts and hidden enemies are putting the couple to their ultimate test. This will change their characters , revealing their real selves. And thus the future awaits for them , either they will live separate as evolved individuals taking care of their son along with the new lives they build or they will unite again , this time forming a bond so merged and robust with each other that even the force of nature cannot separate them.

This story is their test of life. To see whether they can have a happily ever after or salvage what is left and build a new peace. What will be the outcome? Only time will tell. But Hemant and Sonarika both have no idea that their lives are actually intertwined years before they even met.

This is their story , the story of their survival. Whether this will be their survival as individuals or as an inseparable couples , that only time will tell. For now , The Age Of Darkness will commence its maximum threshold as enemies converge around them. This will be the time of an awakening , to stand and fight , to survive and in someone's case , to become the best of both worlds!



          YOURS TRULY 

  HARRY JORDAN   

Awesome ! Made me excited for The Update .   and Nicely put , I get it , The Story  . But also Michael King would never Marry someone like Sona  but He would definitely marry MRUNAL   


Is Stroke gonna have any effect on him ? How Michael will awake ? Also we dont know Michael's real character , He is deadliest assassin but what his Personality like, Yes he had multiple Relationship in past , But Was he cunning ? 

I hope he is not an Ideal guy .

I want him to be little Machiavellian . 

 Since He was soldier so we can assume He has integrity and honor , But Is it true? Will update reveal that he is not what we all thinking  ? As of I think Michael is Calm and calculative , Not someone who make mistake or loose control  . Like If we take example Sandeep , If he faces him , unlike Hemant who ignores his trash talk , Mostly He will do Just shut him down and walk away with grin on his face , Not something like Breaking his teeth with his fist . Michael will always be in control . 

So whats gonna change ? One is Loser cuck and Another is an Elephant , Strong, Big , Very Dangerous but Calm , Only retaliate when  feels threatened . But Yeah , Michael is Real and Hemant is Mask , So Sona married to Michael or Hemant ? And if Hemant is not gonna be anymore , will the marriage Survive or they will ever be unite ? But again Transformation gonna fuse both of them together ? So its gonna be Hemant - who can dance , romance , adventurous, Simply just accepting and not hiding . 

The excitement generating lots of question , Only Updates will give answers . I hope that the term TRANSFORMATION you used do something to him not like character switch . Rebirth Or Reawakening . Maybe I am overthinking about this .  

But again , Thank you for explaining it so clearly. This cleared up a lot of things 

Bro , Bas wo ek Meeting to banti hai Michael and Vikram ki .   Uska dekh lo thoda . 

Ek date Michael or Megha ki bhi Banti hai . Megha's backstory changes a lot of things . 

Hey also  COOLIE is gonna release tomorrow ,  if I am not wrong earlier you mentioned that you follows the director's work . 

Thanks again , Harry and Take Care . 

 towards 15th August . 

[DeanWinchester00007]

Michael is  Listening to Sona say How much she loves him  after getting fucked by Vikram again and again and again  .  


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