Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[SMOD-P]

Omg! Omg! What just happened... It flew over my head... I couldn't breathe for a moment... That was totally hard and terrible... Sonarika how could she think that straight that explaining her betrayal deeds to Hemant will turn into be a scenario like a child asking for punishment to his teacher that she broke someone's tiffin box and the teacher will scold and sought to him and that's the end of that fault. She can't be real is it ? A long relationship was just fucked up by her for nothing, like where was Hemant bed ? She just fall for wild intense sex of Vikram , that's it ? I am saying she belongs to cuckold culture not to a healthy married life.

[ricah43165]

If not today, then tomorrow,
someday, this bitter truth had to come out.
if not by sonarika, meghna would’ve exposed it. but what devastated hemant wasn’t just the betrayal, it was who betrayed him. she didn’t just break his heart..she shattered his trust..his pride.. and the soul that saw her as home. and now, no apology can mend what may never fit the same again.

[DeanWinchester00007]

Hello , Harry , How are you doing man ? The story is going great . You know this story has potential to be Manga , The sex in the story feels like filler lol . I still dont understand why did you choose to make it sex story .
the Quality is keep on going up and up . 
As always great work man . 

[DeanWinchester00007]

Continuing to follow this story , is worst mistake i have committed in last month , I was happy . Sona ended her affair and reconcile with Hemant ( which is very poorly , you ruined their THE NIGHT) . Everything was fine , I should have taken my exit from there , But To see THE BEAST DRINKING BLOOD OF ENEMY kept me here .

Man , you Matlb You had to do it , you cant help yourself . Everything was going fine . Nope Lets start the affair again . I have not read the confrontation part yet . But Nope .

Okay its fine , But the thing that bothers me is forcing the idea of THAT SONA LOVES HEMANT . Why it is so hard to accept that she never loved Hemant .

WHY ?

Why after having nasty sex with affair partner , There is always line or two about how much she felt guilty and how much she loves Hemant , and then again she fucked Vikram ?

Is it no possible that she never loved hemant , Yes the circumstances brought them together , Hemant was dealing with his issue , sona was dealing with hers , They met and supported each other , Now they both are fine . So they dont need each other . Now they should live their own life how they imagine.

NO SHE LOVES HEMANT . FUCK VIKRAM . LOVES HEMANT . FUCK VIKRAM . LOVES HEMANT .

Then again after fucking She again broke up with VIKRAM . He loves her and she loves him . Why them being together is such a terrible idea . If she is gonna confess to Hemant and Hemant is not cuck , they will surely get divorce , So why after live alone , Reconcile with VIKRAM and leads the life she always wanted to . Is it so terrible .

Hemant will find someone else .

As for me I think you went little overboard with Sona character . The extra debauchery adds nothing the earlier affair and then confrontation would have been great , but going back and restarting her affair , had destroyed little integrity that she had .

I dont know how many she said I LOVE HEMANT , NOBODY CAN TAKE PLACE HIS PLACE , Yet she let VIKRAM you take place inside her . Its so funny . Total 304 character , Its That internet meme character . SEX is not love , She loves him but can fuck VIKRAM because Addiction , thrill , etc etc . NOPE She loves VIKRAM and she never Loved Hemant . Hemant needs this truth or he will blamed himself . He needs to know that she never loved him , it will help him to move faster .

And as For SONA , She needs to accept this That SHE NEVER LOVED HEMANT , And She loves VIKRAM . She needs to go to him , and start her new life with the love of her life . Its the truth . She is just blaming her self , The guilt she is feeling because she is the position which demands sacrifice . People sacrifice for love.

She sacrifice her family not once but twice For Vikram the Man whom she had known only for months .

10 years of marriage , 1 kid vs Man she knew only for few months .

And she loves Hemant ? No way , She never loved him . Its painful and its truth . I believe Hemant take this positively . He got betrayed the person who never loved him .

Please let this be the Breaking point of HEMANT. Let his beast take over .

I wish He just fucked VIKRAM up so bad , VIKRAM needs to know Who is Hemant . Hemant will never do it , but The beast in him will do it , without any reason and logic .

I am still waiting to get the thrill of Beast inside hemant to come out . As of he is calm and composed . But once i want to see him go Berserk .

Also Is there something like this ? Hemant going crazy , Berserk . Or i am having wrong expectation , I will change it , Because I see Hemant character as someone who is holding his demon , as the story also has lot of Christian symbolism and theme . The Dark Hemant not the Michael Hemant that character is too calculative , not the raw predator , Someone like Jake Lockley ?

I can draw parallel , From Marvel's Moon Knight .
Steven Grant = Loving husband and father Hemant .
Marc Spector = The Angel himself Michael .
and Then Jake Lockley = The beast , The devil inside of Hemant .

I hope this betrayal fucked him so bad . So he loose his insanity . For once Just want him to butcher the VIKRAM . He needs to know Who he really is . Whats the point of Having the character like Hemant and dont beat up the guy who is knocking his wife . I know its not VIKRAM fault if Sona is jumping on his dick but that is the point Character like Hemant , Calm and composed , Silent guy , Good guy for once loosing his insanity and doing stupid things , which i think make his character more humane and grounded .

Well , again . You really fucked up the readers with this episode , which is testament of your skills .

Again , Kudos to you . And thanks for not leaving the story incomplete . lol .

also , One fear of mine , Regarding Sona character Why i am feeling that something gonna terribly happens to her . Dont wanna ruin the fun . But i feel i mean i have few ideas , what you are setting up .

Thanks again , Harry .

Kudos to you . As always wonderful update . You should post the story in Literotica Contest lol .

( Note :- Comment is for fun and casual conversation , Not Criticism of the story )

[DeanWinchester00007]

I didn’t expect to have my thoughts change, My thoughts now align with none of the readers not author here, I feel the characters arc just took a turn, I now see Sonarika in new light not because she is thinking about sacrificing herself as Harry is mentioning but because now I see her in different light who has found new life and found new partner, Her realization that she should confess to Hemanth and not ruin him in future when he finds the truth from some one is only half of her realization, I feel she should realize that she fell in love with Vikram, though Author doesn’t agree to this and keeps saying it as an addiction I refuse to agree to it. 


I feel now that if Sonarika ever reconciles with Hemanth then it will be wrong, her destiny is with Vikram, and she has already paved the path for it.  

Lets see few instances where we see true love between the lovers….

Yeah , completely Agree with this . 

I dont know if harry went little overboard with their affair , But they are in the position where they can only move forward . There is absolutely nothing in breaking up and moving on . 

Yes even if Author disagree , but i am making my decision on what is written , I cannot peak in writers mind , I only rely on written material , The words are clear . She loves VIKRAM . Yes , she is guilty but still not because She loves Hemant but because She is married and Mother . 

Earlier i was kind of okay with their reconciliation , but after the second affair , NOPE . She lost the little much respect and integrity she had left in her . No way . They went to far and then ended their affair again. Because She loves Hemant , Then fuck Vikram . 

Its better that she give Hemant divorce and share custody of their child and Marry with Vikram . Two thing will happen , either she will be happy , finally living the dream or The realization that the affair  and marriage , There is vast difference between . The realization can give her some closure . But Breaking with Vikram and Then confessing to Hemant . I dont know what she is trying to achieve  .

[RCF]

"Vikram ruined me Hemanth.....he claims he brought out my true side but I know the deep dark truth.......he ruined me and brought me back to the same pit you picked me from"

What the hell..Harry is purposefully degrading Sonarika more and more? Why would she says that...she knows she chose to burn and she chose to sleep with Vikram, She is the one who kicked Vik out when he expressed that Hemanth is not fulfilling her needs and by going back to him she proved his point and then she slept with him again, knowing its his hotel where wedding is going to take place and now she is blaming him saying he ruined her lol

Can she stoop any lower than that , I think she doesn't even deserve Vikram at this point, he is much better guy than Hemanth.

~RCF

[DeanWinchester00007]

"Vikram ruined me Hemanth.....he claims he brought out my true side but I know the deep dark truth.......he ruined me and brought me back to the same pit you picked me from"

What the hell..Harry is purposefully degrading Sonarika more and more? Why would she says that...she knows she chose to burn and she chose to sleep with Vikram, She is the one who kicked Vik out when he expressed that Hemanth is not fulfilling her needs and by going back to him she proved his point and then she slept with him again, knowing its his hotel where wedding is going to take place and now she is blaming him saying he ruined her lol

Can she stoop any lower than that , I think she doesn't even deserve Vikram at this point, he is much better guy than Hemanth.

~RCF

Hahahaha , Its hard to imagine that she is grown women , all i can see a young promiscuous woman .

"Vikram ruined me Hemanth.....he claims he brought out my true side but I know the deep dark truth.......he ruined me and brought me back to the same pit you picked me from"


This is so funny . 

Her character arc was ruined , I do think that Jabalpur incident could have been great part for her character arc , Her not indulging with Vikram again and finally ending the little much feeling she had for Vikram or even talking her feeling to Vikram would have been fine but the sex part ruined her character . Talking with Vikram and accepting her mistake , Even for Vikram to realize that He has destroyed The life of someone who he claimed to be in love with would have add an extra points for Vikram too . But nope . 


 

[DeanWinchester00007]

Harry , How do you do it ?

You again surprised me , with That shanghai part , The world building is crazy . I dont know if Choosing the Name RICKY TAN was random or You did it on purpose . The name  Ricky tan was sound familiar , Then I Remember it from RUSH HOUR 2 , The Villain . Oh man , It was so funny . I love that . You should kept that name for Villain . 

That whole Shanghai Part was brilliantly written . Every line itself paint the picture so beautifully . 

and that confrontation scene , Honestly I am disappointed  . This is the second time . First with their Anniversary Night, It was complete let down, The built up was complete waste . and then this . 

Is it me , Or I think the Carpet is not matching with dbangs . Every part of Vikram and Sona is brilliantly written , Even the length , The emotion , Everything is perfect , but With Hemant and Sona it feels so bland  , felt like filler written in hurry . But She loves Hemant 

Stop making her saying SHE LOVES HEMANT , SHE LOVES HEMANT . I SWEAR its feels so cringy .

Hahahaha , Sona is crying and acting like  teenage kid , I love Hemant . Meanwhile Khatana Bhai :- Chi chi chi badi halki aurat hai tu , Pyar me logo ke halak se nivala ni utarta , Aur sona halak me roj Vikram ka leri hai ( i know cringe hai but likh diya aise , Its so irritating every time she says she loves Hemant . )

But I get it . I think i know what you wanna do here with her . 



The words are not doing enough justice in portraying the love between sona and hemant , I mean that is the reason the Confrontation is not felt that hard , Its was okay . I dont know . I am writing what i felt . ( Again i a understand VIKRAM was her affair partner who supposed to spice things up for her , so logically their affair should have more erotism as compare to Husband and wife relationship which perceives as Vanila , But At least If eroticism is not there Intimacy should match up the Affairs Eroticism ) , Its just personal thought not criticism .

There is too much focus on HEMANT's Michael part , Every word , Every praise is just gold . But when it comes Hemant and Sona relationship Hemant part was okay okay . 

But over all nice update . 

Hemant had stroke . Hey do you know Stroke also causes Short term memory loss . Maybe someone needs to forget the whole episode which cause the Stroke and can have little more good family time . 


Some one please write the summary and character track . My single brain cell cannot remember all these vast details and character and also i dont want to scroll old post just to keep track of all character .     


Vikram with sona 

and Hemant with enemy  


 

( Comments are for fun and for casual conversation  , Not criticism for the story )

[EPLOVER4U]

g8t harry finally the drop, personally ignore everyone even me also carry on with your plot don't change it please, truly I'm waiting for the Hemant the true Hemant that go in the shadow for his love but now it is interesting to see how he deals with the betrayal that he hates more than anything


AND ALWAYS REMEMBER MY GOOD FRIEND AUTHOR HARRY EVERY FILMY GOOD ENDING IS NOT THE BEST ENDING PLEASE STICK TO THE PLOT NEVER CHANGE EVEN THERE IS NO VIEWS BE LIKE AWAARAPAN.

let me confess why i did not criticise krish on the ending because the amount of mess he did between the character (if we image it been true life incident then it seems true on every turn) the only end possible in the K3 was same that krish gave us where he fulfil both the leaving and reconciliation of Krish Meera, why i am telling this here because i don't want you to do the pleasing towards the readers like me, i am 100%% sure your story will be the masterpiece.

why? is it really the masterpiece?
the answer to this is the plot that i encounter here it is no different than any thriller novel but what i find different here is the characters sona hemant, sona wants to dominate the world but got dominated by the vikram because it the nature mother instinct that is engraved in us where we follow it unconciously, means man always search for the woman who is motherly in nature and submissive, where woman search for the man who is bold and authoritative, so it happens same here.

i told krish that if he pulled the ending the it will be the masterpiece but he disappointed in the end it was not his fault because the story in the dead end and it needed more characters and chapters to get concluded but he rused it but anyway please do not repeat the mistake that krish did in k3, bring the true hemant to it fullest because it will be the character hemant that change the path of the story and make it the thriller masterpiece of Xossipy (not xossip - it was a different era i truly miss xossip there are so many good stories and all are lost even i try to search some are here and there but max are lost) but happy to see the change (i personally believe you are the old monster in the new shell  )

[DeanWinchester00007]

g8t harry finally the drop, personally ignore everyone even me also carry on with your plot don't change it please, truly I'm waiting for the Hemant the true Hemant that go in the shadow for his love but now it is interesting to see how he deals with the betrayal that he hates more than anything


AND ALWAYS REMEMBER MY GOOD FRIEND AUTHOR HARRY EVERY FILMY GOOD ENDING IS NOT THE BEST ENDING PLEASE STICK TO THE PLOT NEVER CHANGE EVEN THERE IS NO VIEWS BE LIKE AWAARAPAN.

let me confess why i did not criticise krish on the ending because the amount of mess he did between the character (if we image it been true life incident then it seems true on every turn) the only end possible in the K3 was same that krish gave us where he fulfil both the leaving and reconciliation of Krish Meera, why i am telling this here because i don't want you to do the pleasing towards the readers like me, i am 100%% sure your story will be the masterpiece.

why? is it really the masterpiece?
the answer to this is the plot that i encounter here it is no different than any thriller novel but what i find different here is the characters sona hemant, sona wants to dominate the world but got dominated by the vikram because it the nature mother instinct that is engraved in us where we follow it unconciously, means man always search for the woman who is motherly in nature and submissive, where woman search for the man who is bold and authoritative, so it happens same here.

i told krish that if he pulled the ending the it will be the masterpiece but he disappointed in the end it was not his fault because the story in the dead end and it needed more characters and chapters to get concluded but he rused it but anyway please do not repeat the mistake that krish did in k3, bring the true hemant to it fullest because it will be the character hemant that change the path of the story and make it the thriller masterpiece of Xossipy (not xossip - it was a different era i truly miss xossip there are so many good stories and all are lost even i try to search some are here and there but max are lost) but happy to see the change (i personally believe you are the old monster in the new shell  )

I disagree with you . I think good ending is needed . Though in understand your point with AWARAPAN example . But I think this is different story . Though Mature ending would be best and more realistic , I still think good ending will do great justice with the plot of the story and the character   . But we know Harry , He is not gonna disappoint us , and in this matter he will not disappoint you , Your expectation and the way story is going , Both gonna meet soon  .

But I still believe and have faith in  Harry that he will give us  something like A history of Violence . 

And as for Third part of Krish's story , I agree with you . To be honest third part felt forcibly written , it was not needed , Part IInd had the great end . The third would have been great if it was standalone , The major mistake that The characters does not feel like anywhere near like the Part 2nd .Krish was not like Krish , Meera was not like Meera . The Essence of Character was missing . I also made many comments regarding the this , also what you said i am guilty of that too . Forcing our opinion on writer   but i believe Krish would never take readers request and interfere in his story , He said that himself . 

And also Disagree with your assessment and analogy of Mother nature , Submission  and Domination . And Vikram is now where Authoritative here . He always kind to her . Sona mean while took every decision whether its fucking or Breaking up while he accepts every decision . 

I think you are confusing the Rough Sex which include one partner consensually engaging and get dominated but only during the sex with Actual  Domination. 

She is just cheater . This what those pseudo feminist write to justify the Adultery in both case of Men and Women . 

[Harry Jordan]

I am honestly very honored and really appreciate the comments and perspectives readers have shared regarding my story. Really happy that many of you liked it. As for the sex part yes , many of the sex scenes are inserted as the original script I wrote leaned more on action. But then again , half the reason I am putting this story in this site of all places is because of the Infidelity theme in the story. Many of the celebrity cameos are also inserted as the original script only has brief scenes with them , but here I feel I can explore the celebrity fantasy that can be included here to spice up the story further.

Also a quick insider scoop , I actually changed many of the characters from the original story here as I wanted to keep it distinct. And many characters named here are inspired from my own personal celebrity and film/show character fantasies which I did just for the sake of it. 

The core dynamic of Hemant and Sonarika's relationship and arc was to show how they both desire something for their ideal partner and they didn't realize it was there in each other all this time. All I can say for now is there will be a lot of twists and turns , some really interesting dynamics and also definitely lots of sex.

Now Sonarika and Hemant will change through their characters , whether its for the better of for worse. Both will truly see each other for what they truly are. And that will be the deciding point , whether they will find their way back together or accept their mistakes and move on , only time will tell. 

[DeanWinchester00007]

I am honestly very honored and really appreciate the comments and perspectives readers have shared regarding my story. Really happy that many of you liked it. As for the sex part yes , many of the sex scenes are inserted as the original script I wrote leaned more on action. But then again , half the reason I am putting this story in this site of all places is because of the Infidelity theme in the story. Many of the celebrity cameos are also inserted as the original script only has brief scenes with them , but here I feel I can explore the celebrity fantasy that can be included here to spice up the story further.

Also a quick insider scoop , I actually changed many of the characters from the original story here as I wanted to keep it distinct. And many characters named here are inspired from my own personal celebrity and film/show character fantasies which I did just for the sake of it. 

The core dynamic of Hemant and Sonarika's relationship and arc was to show how they both desire something for their ideal partner and they didn't realize it was there in each other all this time. All I can say for now is there will be a lot of twists and turns , some really interesting dynamics and also definitely lots of sex.

Now Sonarika and Hemant will change through their characters , whether its for the better of for worse. Both will truly see each other for what they truly are. And that will be the deciding point , whether they will find their way back together or accept their mistakes and move on , only time will tell. 

Man , The addition of Mrunal Thakur is GOLD !  Always add fun in story. Bring Sanju Baba in one scene meeting Hemant . lol . 

Your comment makes me feel more apprehensive 

[DeanWinchester00007]

Omg! Omg! What just happened... It flew over my head... I couldn't breathe for a moment... That was totally hard and terrible... Sonarika how could she think that straight that explaining her betrayal deeds to Hemant will turn into be a scenario like a child asking for punishment to his teacher that she broke someone's tiffin box and the teacher will scold and sought to him and that's the end of that fault. She can't be real is it ? A long relationship was just fucked up by her for nothing, like where was Hemant bed ? She just fall for wild intense sex of Vikram , that's it ? I am saying she belongs to cuckold culture not to a healthy married life.

Hahaha same here Brother , I was searching the last part where i left , But when I stumbled upon the paragraph on Sona cheating again ,  I had the same reaction . lol . 

[RCF]

I am honestly very honored and really appreciate the comments and perspectives readers have shared regarding my story. Really happy that many of you liked it. As for the sex part yes , many of the sex scenes are inserted as the original script I wrote leaned more on action. But then again , half the reason I am putting this story in this site of all places is because of the Infidelity theme in the story. Many of the celebrity cameos are also inserted as the original script only has brief scenes with them , but here I feel I can explore the celebrity fantasy that can be included here to spice up the story further.

Also a quick insider scoop , I actually changed many of the characters from the original story here as I wanted to keep it distinct. And many characters named here are inspired from my own personal celebrity and film/show character fantasies which I did just for the sake of it. 

The core dynamic of Hemant and Sonarika's relationship and arc was to show how they both desire something for their ideal partner and they didn't realize it was there in each other all this time. All I can say for now is there will be a lot of twists and turns , some really interesting dynamics and also definitely lots of sex.

Now Sonarika and Hemant will change through their characters , whether its for the better of for worse. Both will truly see each other for what they truly are. And that will be the deciding point , whether they will find their way back together or accept their mistakes and move on , only time will tell. 

Lol enough of insider scoops, post next update :P

[DeanWinchester00007]

 I get your point Rocky , I am in the same boat as you regarding this site. But you don't need to worry on whether the cheater gets rewarded here. Because I am not writing this story with that purpose.

As for Sonarika , like I said , she will have to pay for her sins. The Next Chapter will mark the beginning of the consequence phase of her character , and there is two factors I am doing it this way. One , to take Sonarika's character in a different territory of exploration , because her consequences will also shatter her , she is going to loose everything , not just Hemant , but even respect in Anjali's eyes and most importantly separation from her son Karan which is always traumatising for her mother. And unlike other stories where women often tends to hang on the mother-son emotion , Sonarika will be willing to let go Karan simply for the acceptance of her mistakes , from this point on , Sonarika's character growth will be kickstarted , her consequences will mould her , change her , for better or for worse. Her actual war is only about to begin. And Two , another major factor for this story dynamic is to make the conflict between Sonarik and Meghna to heighten. Meghna will be pissed when Sonarika reveals the truth about her , thus spoiling her plans to destroy her life. This will make Meghna to go to drastic steps to make Sonarika suffer. This approach will help Sonarika and Meghna's war go to a different stage because Sonarika will end up spoiling Meghna's plans to enslave Hemant. 

And the most important aspect is Hemant , the reason for this approach is for the TRANSFORMATION of Hemant , like Harper his best friend said. He has to mould the best parts of his past and present together. And Sonarika breaking his heart will pave the way for Michael King to influence Hemant yet again , and thus the Transformation will begin. This will also change Hemant's approach to things , moulding the best parts of Hemant and King together forging a force that will be a terrifying individual. And like I said in the past , Hemant is not the kind of character to be the "forgiving" type. We will see his true ruthless form now.

Most importantly , Sonarika will basically break Hemant's arc , killing the man she loves. And Michael King will take over his psyche and body , turning him into her nightmare she wished she never had!! 

Meghna ko to bhul hi gya tha . I just once want to see her suffer not physically but Internally and mentally that would be better . 

the Transformation will begin

This is what I am talking about . But the transformation should not be Hemant Becoming Michael or mix of both because then There always be some part of Hemant will be there which hinder the Action of New Hemant though that is also interesting having Hemant decency , But i wish something new emerged from him . which is not expected and completely unrecognizable  by Sona or By Michael colleagues . My understanding of Michael , Yes he is dangerous but He is too calculative . His enemy knows him , They know who he is How dangerous He is . So they will prepare for him , But The New One , which no one knows , Unknown to  everyone like "a force to be reckoned with" .  Though , Will Sona betrayal , Alter his character , Will he turn into Flamboyant Man , Casanova . Only Further Updates will tell .
 
Not Transformation but METAMORPHOSIS .

[Harry Jordan]

I know a lot of people think that I purposefully created more intimacy in the Vikram and Sonarika segments in the story which is honestly untrue. Matter of fact I take more time with Hemant and Sonarika segments because as a writer I wanted their segments to be safe and wholesome and not much intense like Vikram and Sonarika as that is the dynamic difference of their relationship. Vikram and Sonarika's sexual relationship has elements of submissive traits while Hemant and Sonarika's is a balance of power play between genders. And that is on par to the characters in that point of the story. Both Sonarika and Hemant began their relationship at a low point in their lives , and they held onto each other and build what they have today. Also an important factor is that Sonarika is the woman she is today because of Hemant's support , while at the same time Vikram develops feelings for her because she bares resemblance to his lost love and the similarity she has with her.

Vikram brings out the submissive side of Sonarika. The once she tried to escape and somewhat ruined her past relationship with Rocky. Even though on storyline Vikram is showcased as a perfect blend of Rocky and Hemant , the relationship is definitely different as you can see in their non sexual encounters. Sonarika does all the work while Vikram is always touchy and flirty with her. Like I said before , Vikram treats her like a queen , but Hemant actually shows her what a queen is. That is the core of her character. And another factor is her oblivious approach to things not realizing she has always been a pawn on someone else's game of revenge.

Also need to add , I have only touched the extent of Meghna's revenge. Very soon you will see how diabolical she has been with Sonarika and how much this manipulation was built in her.

 

Another aspect I loved making is that Sonarika is both healing and advancing for Hemant in his life. She gave him a life to heal and at the same time her betrayal will mould him to something far more deadlier and ruthless. Like Harper's best friend said , best of both worlds. For Hemant , Michael King was a dark past he wanted to forget , but that is something built into him. And Anjali's gift of the Garuda Ring was Hemant's current mindset , a man wanting to rise up from his past and bring closure. But now both this personalities will merge and ironically its once again Sonarika that becomes the catalyst to Hemant's development. And in the same way , this separation will bring changes in Sonarika as well as she will see the importance of life and what flaws she made as she will push for her own redemption. Because as Hemant moves away and the guilt twinges her , Sonarika will find where it went wrong and try to piece together the crumbled parts of her. She will truly understand what Hemant's definition of a Queen really means.

Because they cannot truly separate , never can as long as Karan exist. Even if there will be no more married couple , Karan will always be there as a bridge for them because he is both of their responsibility. At the end of the day , Sonarika and Hemant's path are forever forged with each other. It only depends where their future lies. Will it be as co-parents? Or is there a dream of spring for them after this age of darkness? Only time will tell. Only thing I can say for now is you will see a lot of Hemant from now on as a few chapters later I will reveal his backstory. 

For now I am working on two major chapters in this story, because this will be the TRANSFORMATION phase of a certain character. Things are only going to get intense from now on as dangerous elements will enter the narrative and a war will commence in the chasm of darkness!

I'll try to post the next chapter this weekend but no promises as my health is still not 100% , but never say never.

                        Yours Truly

              HARRY JORDAN   

[SMOD-P]

I support you brother, the sex between Sonarika and Vikram was needed and it was so damn hot , i enjoyed a lot. Don't worry about opinions just do as your mind says because you already are a great writer. No matter what the readers will support you.

[DeanWinchester00007]

I know a lot of people think that I purposefully created more intimacy in the Vikram and Sonarika segments in the story which is honestly untrue. Matter of fact I take more time with Hemant and Sonarika segments because as a writer I wanted their segments to be safe and wholesome and not much intense like Vikram and Sonarika as that is the dynamic difference of their relationship. Vikram and Sonarika's sexual relationship has elements of submissive traits while Hemant and Sonarika's is a balance of power play between genders. And that is on par to the characters in that point of the story. Both Sonarika and Hemant began their relationship at a low point in their lives , and they held onto each other and build what they have today. Also an important factor is that Sonarika is the woman she is today because of Hemant's support , while at the same time Vikram develops feelings for her because she bares resemblance to his lost love and the similarity she has with her.

Vikram brings out the submissive side of Sonarika. The once she tried to escape and somewhat ruined her past relationship with Rocky. Even though on storyline Vikram is showcased as a perfect blend of Rocky and Hemant , the relationship is definitely different as you can see in their non sexual encounters. Sonarika does all the work while Vikram is always touchy and flirty with her. Like I said before , Vikram treats her like a queen , but Hemant actually shows her what a queen is. That is the core of her character. And another factor is her oblivious approach to things not realizing she has always been a pawn on someone else's game of revenge.

Also need to add , I have only touched the extent of Meghna's revenge. Very soon you will see how diabolical she has been with Sonarika and how much this manipulation was built in her.

 

Another aspect I loved making is that Sonarika is both healing and advancing for Hemant in his life. She gave him a life to heal and at the same time her betrayal will mould him to something far more deadlier and ruthless. Like Harper's best friend said , best of both worlds. For Hemant , Michael King was a dark past he wanted to forget , but that is something built into him. And Anjali's gift of the Garuda Ring was Hemant's current mindset , a man wanting to rise up from his past and bring closure. But now both this personalities will merge and ironically its once again Sonarika that becomes the catalyst to Hemant's development. And in the same way , this separation will bring changes in Sonarika as well as she will see the importance of life and what flaws she made as she will push for her own redemption. Because as Hemant moves away and the guilt twinges her , Sonarika will find where it went wrong and try to piece together the crumbled parts of her. She will truly understand what Hemant's definition of a Queen really means.

Because they cannot truly separate , never can as long as Karan exist. Even if there will be no more married couple , Karan will always be there as a bridge for them because he is both of their responsibility. At the end of the day , Sonarika and Hemant's path are forever forged with each other. It only depends where their future lies. Will it be as co-parents? Or is there a dream of spring for them after this age of darkness? Only time will tell. Only thing I can say for now is you will see a lot of Hemant from now on as a few chapters later I will reveal his backstory. 

For now I am working on two major chapters in this story, because this will be the TRANSFORMATION phase of a certain character. Things are only going to get intense from now on as dangerous elements will enter the narrative and a war will commence in the chasm of darkness!

I'll try to post the next chapter this weekend but no promises as my health is still not 100% , but never say never.

                        Yours Truly

              HARRY JORDAN   

Only thing I can say for now is you will see a lot of Hemant from now on as a few chapters later I will reveal his backstory. 


Finally , This is what i am waiting for . So excited for this . Please take as much time as you need for this .  

Now , out of all Villains , Its Meghna i am most afraid of   . I am still wondering if Vikram also has an ulterior motive . 

Now , My Favorite Part , This TRANSFORMATION part . Even earlier i was hoping something like this will happened . 

This TRANSFORMATION , Is it gonna be like Normal Transformation ,like a switch and Hemant will be in total Control . Or  is this gonna be like Total change in Overall Personality . Will this transform him Mentally too . His nature , His Character , Extrovert too or this is him simple just accepting his part and accepting who he really is . I am just too excited for this . Earlier i was thinking that attack on his family will be the breaking point of Hemant but this is perfect . Also using Stroke is too good . Once he wakes up Would it be like Rebirth for him . One thing I am hoping that The Transformation should happen Naturally Not something Hemant choose to be , It should be without his will or knowing . Even he does not realize that he has change , Something like this  . Enough of my wants . hahahaha .

Let's see , Let see whats arsenal you gonna bring . 


( And one more thing , Please dont take comments literally , It was not criticism , I said it many times . It was just a casual comment , But i will be more careful with my words from now on ) 

Also , Get well soon . Take care of yourself . This is long Journey , This is just Part 1 , There is gonna be Part 2   , You need to be TRANSFORM too  so we can get updates faster   . 

        

REMEBER THE NAME , THE HARRY JORDAN . One more thing as some one who has lots of knowledge of Pop culture , From where this Name came From Harry Jordan , Random name or character of any Famous Novel or Movie ? 


Again Thanks for creating this masterpiece . Kudos to you  

[Kamuk Insaan]

Now , out of all Villains , Its Meghna i am most afraid of Big Grin . I am still wondering if Vikram also has an ulterior motive . 

so far, there’s no sign proving whether he has any ulterior motive or not… 

but who knows,  maybe later Meghna might manipulate him too, pull him into her plan, and turn him against Sonarika/Hemant. 
You just can’t trust this psycho woman...

right now, she’s out of town, otherwise no one would be happier about the situation than her.

[DeanWinchester00007]

Harry I dnt know y this chapter reminds me of facilitator a lot .....how many time  she hook up and feel guilty man.... Every time same old story in her world (guilty) is just a road block but she spreads her legs every time she see vik  is the  victor her..... Let's start hemant arc man enough of (cuck) ...dont drag to much ...

Nooooooooooo !!!!!  . As much as I hate this and Hate VIKRAM . He Truly Won here . This is something Hemant cannot fight , cannot defeat , cannot Undo this . He can Only accept this . He Cucked Hemant here . 

Let's start hemant arc man enough of (cuck) ...dont drag to much ...

Yup Enough of this Meeky Hubby . Time for some Serious Shit !